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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 12:17 am
god2005 Thank you very much for the pass I assume that is it for the roleplay academy? I guess the next thing to do is get permission to join a village, become acquainted with the d20 rules, and eventually make my character. Yep. Don't worry. You're done with the hard part. Now it's all sunshine and lollipops.
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:12 am
The clash of metal roared and flashed in the dark of a moment, the two blades fighting fiercely over the warm flesh, it was their only hope, their only chance. The winner of that duel would be remembered for ages and glory would certainly fall upon their names, but they only cared for that moment, nothing else weighted on their minds for they were focused at every precise movement.
"Hear my plead vile foe, you shall not bestow upon me the disgrace of loosing this duel. I will be forever unmatched!" shouted one of the fierce warriors. His opponent, unchangeable and insistent much like the strong river, wasn't stopped by his attacker's words and remained centered on his objective.
Suddenly there was a winner! The red piece of raw flesh struck in the air, pierced by the metal, then was quickly stuck into the winner's mouth by it's eager hands. The last sushi was gone.
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:50 am
Adelais Carole The clash of metal roared and flashed in the dark of a moment, the two blades fighting fiercely over the warm flesh, it was their only hope, their only chance. The winner of that duel would be remembered for ages and glory would certainly fall upon their names, but they only cared for that moment, nothing else weighted on their minds for they were focused at every precise movement.
"Hear my plead vile foe, you shall not bestow upon me the disgrace of loosing this duel. I will be forever unmatched!" shouted one of the fierce warriors. His opponent, unchangeable and insistent much like the strong river, wasn't stopped by his attacker's words and remained centered on his objective.
Suddenly there was a winner! The red piece of raw flesh struck in the air, pierced by the metal, then was quickly stuck into the winner's mouth by it's eager hands. The last sushi was gone. rofl Nice! I liked it. <(^.^)> Pass! Great job and good use of words!
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 12:17 pm
Rp Sample Suiji sprinted in the moon's dim light, gripping his broadsword on his back. His mission was to assassinate some missing ninja who had left his village not to long ago. He was running through the mist in this forest he called home. He knew every nook and cranny of it and planned on using that to his advantage. He had already devised a plan before he even left the Mizukage's office. These men were his former comrades but he pushed all of this out of his mind as he came to their camp. He fell silently from a tree towering above were they slept. They were all asleep except for one of the men who was sitting on a hollow log. He looked about thirty or so, wearing nothing but some old battle garments and a kunai pouch.The man fell silently to the ground with a soft thud. Suiji stepped over his body and quietly set up his trap. When is trap was set, he stood atop of a nearby tree and quietly said," Water Style: Hidden Mist Jutsu." He was soon swallowed by the heavy mist and silently stood there as the other men awoke. Before any of them could utter a word several broadswords sliced them to ribbons. Several Suiji's stepped out of the mist. All of them turned to water and splashed down except for one. The remaining one chuckled a little as he said." Water Style: Multiple Water Clone Jutsu."
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:08 pm
RudeFan21 Rp Sample Suiji sprinted in the moon's dim light, gripping his broadsword on his back. His mission was to assassinate some missing ninja who had left his village not to long ago. He was running through the mist in this forest he called home. He knew every nook and cranny of it and planned on using that to his advantage. He had already devised a plan before he even left the Mizukage's office. These men were his former comrades but he pushed all of this out of his mind as he came to their camp. He fell silently from a tree towering above were they slept. They were all asleep except for one of the men who was sitting on a hollow log. He looked about thirty or so, wearing nothing but some old battle garments and a kunai pouch.The man fell silently to the ground with a soft thud. Suiji stepped over his body and quietly set up his trap. When is trap was set, he stood atop of a nearby tree and quietly said," Water Style: Hidden Mist Jutsu." He was soon swallowed by the heavy mist and silently stood there as the other men awoke. Before any of them could utter a word several broadswords sliced them to ribbons. Several Suiji's stepped out of the mist. All of them turned to water and splashed down except for one. The remaining one chuckled a little as he said." Water Style: Multiple Water Clone Jutsu." Nice~ ^_^ Pass
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:15 pm
sasuke is my boyfriend Adelais Carole The clash of metal roared and flashed in the dark of a moment, the two blades fighting fiercely over the warm flesh, it was their only hope, their only chance. The winner of that duel would be remembered for ages and glory would certainly fall upon their names, but they only cared for that moment, nothing else weighted on their minds for they were focused at every precise movement.
"Hear my plead vile foe, you shall not bestow upon me the disgrace of loosing this duel. I will be forever unmatched!" shouted one of the fierce warriors. His opponent, unchangeable and insistent much like the strong river, wasn't stopped by his attacker's words and remained centered on his objective.
Suddenly there was a winner! The red piece of raw flesh struck in the air, pierced by the metal, then was quickly stuck into the winner's mouth by it's eager hands. The last sushi was gone. rofl Nice! I liked it. <(^.^)> Pass! Great job and good use of words!hehe, thanks ^^ shall the last sushi be with you my friend! rofl
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:15 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 8:24 pm
RP sample Akiko woke up to the sound of her father leaving to work. She never talked to her father much any more due to his hectic work schedule If she wanted to visit she would have to visit his work. She sighed heavily and looked to her mother with a sad expression. She thought of her parents as she stood and dressed in her full kimono. Afterwards begun to clean the house ritually. They had a fight last night and didn't seem to be too happy these days. She finished up mopping the kitchen floor of her small apartment. Her mother raced out of the bedroom right on cue. Akiko smiled, joyful as her mother ate the breakfast she prepared. Although she was not a cook, Akiko had set up cereal and milk for her mother. She skipped to the window and took her mothers work clothes off the line. "Here mother, I washed them last night." Her mother kissed her on the forehead, thanked her, and got ready for work. She walked out the door with not another word to little Akiko. The little girls sad expression reappeared as the front door click and locked. The dead bolt was too tall for her to reach, even with a chair. So Akiko push the chair to the sink and climbed out the window. There was a slanted roof by the window that she let herself slide down and fell into the bushes bellow. When she wanted to go back in the apartment she would climb the vine fence right next to the bushes to get back into the same window. She climbed out of the bushes and ran down the dirt streets. She came to the play ground and watched as the children played. She stayed there and watched them as they played roles of ninja and dreamed to be great ninja one day. She sighed and turned to head home. "So," she heard a familiar voice. "this is how you spend your days before we return home." Her eyes widened and she looked to her father. "Father forgive me!" she pleaded as she ran to him. He held his hand up high. "Akiko, is this your dream? To become a ninja?" she nodded politely. He sighed and placed his hand on her shoulder. "Then I'll just have to talk to your mother tonight about it." She beamed up and him and jumped on him. "Oh thank you father." she couldn't be happier.
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 8:51 pm
Surr Knife RP sample Akiko woke up to the sound of her father leaving to work. She never talked to her father much any more due to his hectic work schedule If she wanted to visit she would have to visit his work. She sighed heavily and looked to her mother with a sad expression. She thought of her parents as she stood and dressed in her full kimono. Afterwards begun to clean the house ritually. They had a fight last night and didn't seem to be too happy these days. She finished up mopping the kitchen floor of her small apartment. Her mother raced out of the bedroom right on cue. Akiko smiled, joyful as her mother ate the breakfast she prepared. Although she was not a cook, Akiko had set up cereal and milk for her mother. She skipped to the window and took her mothers work clothes off the line. "Here mother, I washed them last night." Her mother kissed her on the forehead, thanked her, and got ready for work. She walked out the door with not another word to little Akiko. The little girls sad expression reappeared as the front door click and locked. The dead bolt was too tall for her to reach, even with a chair. So Akiko push the chair to the sink and climbed out the window. There was a slanted roof by the window that she let herself slide down and fell into the bushes bellow. When she wanted to go back in the apartment she would climb the vine fence right next to the bushes to get back into the same window. She climbed out of the bushes and ran down the dirt streets. She came to the play ground and watched as the children played. She stayed there and watched them as they played roles of ninja and dreamed to be great ninja one day. She sighed and turned to head home. "So," she heard a familiar voice. "this is how you spend your days before we return home." Her eyes widened and she looked to her father. "Father forgive me!" she pleaded as she ran to him. He held his hand up high. "Akiko, is this your dream? To become a ninja?" she nodded politely. He sighed and placed his hand on her shoulder. "Then I'll just have to talk to your mother tonight about it." She beamed up and him and jumped on him. "Oh thank you father." she couldn't be happier. Nice! I really like it! Though the father and mother make it a bit of a god mode thing >.>' I'll cut some slack for once and Pass ya ^_^ Just make sure you don't make a habit of it.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:01 am
RP SAMPLE
okay well ill get started ^^ (btw thanks for helping me out with my q's in my post ^^) kk well here it goes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kayl walked through the forest aimlessly with thoughts rushing through her head.(why does this always happen....why cant i control my powers..i cant believe i killed that woman...i didnt mean too it just...happened) she thought. Her head was hung low and her katana dragged behind her leaving gashes in thedirt and tree roots. She heard the silent plops and swooshing of a river. Her ears perked silently and she ran to the source of cold air which was, just as she suspected, the river bed. She layed down her katana next to her and kneeled down taking water into her palms and washing the blood away, and merley hoping the spring would take away the guilt and the screaming she still heard as people shouted and screamed, calling her a monster.....again. Her face and eyes became emotionless once again as she was forced to leave another village. She bathed, washed her hair and then washed her clothes. She let them dry before putting them back on, she walked back into the forest and tried o think of nearby villages she could find shelter in for the time being. (i think the leaf village is close by here, somewhere over the mountains i presume...)she thought to herself. She got onto a tree branch and leaped from tree branch to tree branch searching for the mountains eastward. Right now the only objectives she had were to find the village and not find any wanted posters of herself.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 10:42 am
sasuke is my boyfriend Surr Knife RP sample Akiko woke up to the sound of her father leaving to work. She never talked to her father much any more due to his hectic work schedule If she wanted to visit she would have to visit his work. She sighed heavily and looked to her mother with a sad expression. She thought of her parents as she stood and dressed in her full kimono. Afterwards begun to clean the house ritually. They had a fight last night and didn't seem to be too happy these days. She finished up mopping the kitchen floor of her small apartment. Her mother raced out of the bedroom right on cue. Akiko smiled, joyful as her mother ate the breakfast she prepared. Although she was not a cook, Akiko had set up cereal and milk for her mother. She skipped to the window and took her mothers work clothes off the line. "Here mother, I washed them last night." Her mother kissed her on the forehead, thanked her, and got ready for work. She walked out the door with not another word to little Akiko. The little girls sad expression reappeared as the front door click and locked. The dead bolt was too tall for her to reach, even with a chair. So Akiko push the chair to the sink and climbed out the window. There was a slanted roof by the window that she let herself slide down and fell into the bushes bellow. When she wanted to go back in the apartment she would climb the vine fence right next to the bushes to get back into the same window. She climbed out of the bushes and ran down the dirt streets. She came to the play ground and watched as the children played. She stayed there and watched them as they played roles of ninja and dreamed to be great ninja one day. She sighed and turned to head home. "So," she heard a familiar voice. "this is how you spend your days before we return home." Her eyes widened and she looked to her father. "Father forgive me!" she pleaded as she ran to him. He held his hand up high. "Akiko, is this your dream? To become a ninja?" she nodded politely. He sighed and placed his hand on her shoulder. "Then I'll just have to talk to your mother tonight about it." She beamed up and him and jumped on him. "Oh thank you father." she couldn't be happier. Nice! I really like it! Though the father and mother make it a bit of a god mode thing >.>' I'll cut some slack for once and Pass ya ^_^ Just make sure you don't make a habit of it.Technically the father and the mother are NPC's. Their like the butler in a novel. No one pays attention to them but they help the story along. The mother and father are not characters that belong to someone else. Not to be cross, but I believe that you also have the terms mixed up. Godmoding is making your character all powerful and undefeatable. Twinking is manipulating YOUR characters actions and the circumstances in a scene to benefit only ONESELF. Powerplaying is actually taking control of another PLAYERS character to do what you want them to do. Like I said that the mother and father are npc's. It would be like if you had your character interact with a random cat. Does the cat have a player that plays it? Most likely not. Does it require a player to play it? No, its just there for fluff and prettiness, and to explain why your character's personality and actions are what they are. At least that's how I was taught.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:53 pm
RP SAMPLE
okay well ill get started ^^ (btw thanks for helping me out with my q's in my post ^^) kk well here it goes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kayl walked through the forest aimlessly with thoughts rushing through her head.(why does this always happen....why cant i control my powers..i cant believe i killed that woman...i didnt mean too it just...happened) she thought. Her head was hung low and her katana dragged behind her leaving gashes in thedirt and tree roots. She heard the silent plops and swooshing of a river. Her ears perked silently and she ran to the source of cold air which was, just as she suspected, the river bed. She layed down her katana next to her and kneeled down taking water into her palms and washing the blood away, and merley hoping the spring would take away the guilt and the screaming she still heard as people shouted and screamed, calling her a monster.....again. Her face and eyes became emotionless once again as she was forced to leave another village. She bathed, washed her hair and then washed her clothes. She let them dry before putting them back on, she walked back into the forest and tried o think of nearby villages she could find shelter in for the time being. (i think the leaf village is close by here, somewhere over the mountains i presume...)she thought to herself. She got onto a tree branch and leaped from tree branch to tree branch searching for the mountains eastward. Right now the only objectives she had were to find the village and not find any wanted posters of herself.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:47 pm
Surr Knife sasuke is my boyfriend Surr Knife RP sample Akiko woke up to the sound of her father leaving to work. She never talked to her father much any more due to his hectic work schedule If she wanted to visit she would have to visit his work. She sighed heavily and looked to her mother with a sad expression. She thought of her parents as she stood and dressed in her full kimono. Afterwards begun to clean the house ritually. They had a fight last night and didn't seem to be too happy these days. She finished up mopping the kitchen floor of her small apartment. Her mother raced out of the bedroom right on cue. Akiko smiled, joyful as her mother ate the breakfast she prepared. Although she was not a cook, Akiko had set up cereal and milk for her mother. She skipped to the window and took her mothers work clothes off the line. "Here mother, I washed them last night." Her mother kissed her on the forehead, thanked her, and got ready for work. She walked out the door with not another word to little Akiko. The little girls sad expression reappeared as the front door click and locked. The dead bolt was too tall for her to reach, even with a chair. So Akiko push the chair to the sink and climbed out the window. There was a slanted roof by the window that she let herself slide down and fell into the bushes bellow. When she wanted to go back in the apartment she would climb the vine fence right next to the bushes to get back into the same window. She climbed out of the bushes and ran down the dirt streets. She came to the play ground and watched as the children played. She stayed there and watched them as they played roles of ninja and dreamed to be great ninja one day. She sighed and turned to head home. "So," she heard a familiar voice. "this is how you spend your days before we return home." Her eyes widened and she looked to her father. "Father forgive me!" she pleaded as she ran to him. He held his hand up high. "Akiko, is this your dream? To become a ninja?" she nodded politely. He sighed and placed his hand on her shoulder. "Then I'll just have to talk to your mother tonight about it." She beamed up and him and jumped on him. "Oh thank you father." she couldn't be happier. Nice! I really like it! Though the father and mother make it a bit of a god mode thing >.>' I'll cut some slack for once and Pass ya ^_^ Just make sure you don't make a habit of it.Technically the father and the mother are NPC's. Their like the butler in a novel. No one pays attention to them but they help the story along. The mother and father are not characters that belong to someone else. Not to be cross, but I believe that you also have the terms mixed up. Godmoding is making your character all powerful and undefeatable. Twinking is manipulating YOUR characters actions and the circumstances in a scene to benefit only ONESELF. Powerplaying is actually taking control of another PLAYERS character to do what you want them to do. Like I said that the mother and father are npc's. It would be like if you had your character interact with a random cat. Does the cat have a player that plays it? Most likely not. Does it require a player to play it? No, its just there for fluff and prettiness, and to explain why your character's personality and actions are what they are. At least that's how I was taught. Nice knowledge ^_~ but I'm different. In here I want to see how much creativity you have on your own, WITHOUT the help of NPCs. If everyone used them, then everyone would be able to make a good rp example. I want to see how much they can think of without the assistance. ^_^
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:55 pm
Kunoichi_Rae_Uchiha RP SAMPLE okay well ill get started ^^ (btw thanks for helping me out with my q's in my post ^^) kk well here it goes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kayl walked through the forest aimlessly with thoughts rushing through her head.(why does this always happen....why cant i control my powers..i cant believe i killed that woman...i didnt mean too it just...happened) she thought. Her head was hung low and her katana dragged behind her leaving gashes in thedirt and tree roots. She heard the silent plops and swooshing of a river. Her ears perked silently and she ran to the source of cold air which was, just as she suspected, the river bed. She layed down her katana next to her and kneeled down taking water into her palms and washing the blood away, and merley hoping the spring would take away the guilt and the screaming she still heard as people shouted and screamed, calling her a monster.....again. Her face and eyes became emotionless once again as she was forced to leave another village. She bathed, washed her hair and then washed her clothes. She let them dry before putting them back on, she walked back into the forest and tried o think of nearby villages she could find shelter in for the time being. (i think the leaf village is close by here, somewhere over the mountains i presume...)she thought to herself. She got onto a tree branch and leaped from tree branch to tree branch searching for the mountains eastward. Right now the only objectives she had were to find the village and not find any wanted posters of herself. Things bolded were misspelled in some way, italisized were things that could have been substituted with a better word. Instead of using kneeled, knelt would have been easier on the eyes ^_^ You need to try and remember that all 'I's are capatalized XD Other than that I think it's a pass...Oh, and for when she thinks...often the ( ) are used for when you are speaking OOC. Using the Italisize button for when she's thinking will let everyone know what is going on without being confusing ^_^ Keep that in mind alright? Pass
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