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 Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:38 pm
nice prologue Seaphron, I look forward to reading more of it
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:51 pm
@All - Thanks, don't feel like writing that out four times
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:03 am
biggrin huh. well, you do know how to get the curiosity peaked at the beginning of a story. 'tis good. and I'm definitely curious about that green stone now.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:20 am
This looks good ,~Sits on edge of sit. So many questions already . Looking forward to next chapter.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:59 am
-Chapter Two Added-
@Koosei - XD Thank you. I am glad I have gotten good at it. Who knows when you will find out about the stone?
@Godstone - Thanks, many more questions will be coming to you soon.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:12 am
hmmm. still no answers about what the stones are. but, surprised we know there's four of them! hmmmmm. this is getting interesting.
xd nice. Draken and Godstone just made a cameo!
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:16 am
3 Actually, object number four is the tablet mentioned earlier. You won't know what the stones are for awhile.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:27 am
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:52 am
Nice, it's clear why I'm the main character. ninja
It reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist, so much. I'm like Ed, and Davids like Al.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 3:44 pm
@Koosei - Yup
@Skull - XD I love that show, probably where some of that is coming from, espiecially cause I was watching it when I wrote both chapters. Well glad that you liked it so far.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 3:47 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:03 pm
I read the chapters with SS earlier today, but I haven't had chance to comment till now. I agree with Skull about it being a little like FMA, but it's nicely written and I'm looking foward to seeing how it works out.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:09 pm
@LF - Thanks.
@FS - Glad you liked it, I love how you two noticed the similarity to FMA, kinda of a subconcious thing when I am writing I guess.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:33 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:37 pm
THE PLOT THICKENS
Had too say it.
Great story, Seaphers.
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