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 Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:45 pm
Hehe...>.>' yeah...I'm...very demanding ^_^ But it's worth it, you'll see.
Great creativity Pamuchi ^_^
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:57 pm
Within the massive dome of ice Kusari panted heavily as he faced the menacing and cruel looking older man on the other side. The dome was a hundred feet high and outside it the hunter nins were trying to get past the mist dragons that kept them from breaking through. Inside there was a foot deep of water for them to stand in and a thin mist…it was bone chilling to normal humans but neither seemed to feel it. In fact from the older man there was steam rising from his body from the heat it was giving off because of the physical exertion that had gone into this fight.
Kusari’s body was half converted to ice and quickly changing…he had been doing this to match against the heavy attacks of the Mizukage. Kusari knew that the time was drawing near…one of them was going to die soon… Kusari focused and the rest of his body converted into the ice…he was committed now… he had time in this form but only so much. Kusari’s voice rang out to the Mizukage. “Your evil will end here… your long reign of malice has come to an end, I will not allow you to cause many more to suffer like you made me suffer.”
“Fool Momochi, just like the rest of your clan, you are all bloody fighters and a danger to those around you it was my judgment that we end this threat before it endangered all the lives around it.” The old man snarled, he was larger than one expected for one so old and wore ceremonial armor of the mist village to show his rank and power. “Now I will finally have this last thorn crushed after so long.”
“Isn’t it funny that you claim to have tried to kill us to end the threat from coming after you and causing great pain and anguish for many; because of your actions, your “fears” were made true, and I will be the death of you.” Kusari spoke in a calm voice that seemed to reverberate all around the icy cavern.
“Enough of This!” the man snapped angrily “Kirigakure no jutsu” he spoke his withered old hands flying through the seals and the thin mist instsatnly thickening so greatly that it was nigh impossible to see through.
“Must we go through this again?” kusari’s voice stated flatly. The Mizukage made no reply and Kusari’s arms tightened around his sword and his chain. Suddenly he dodged to the right to avoid the attack he had felt coming despite the mizukage’s best efforts to hide it.
“Damn, where are you!?” the man suddenly growled angrily as he lost track of Kusari’s location he sensed carefully; but he could not place him… suddenlyhe flet something coming from his right and dodged to the left just to collide into the icy form of kusari’s arm. He used the body flicker just in time to avoid the chain or a worse attack from Kusari himself. kusari didn’t pause it seemed no mater where the man went within the mist he knew where he was.Kusari threw his sword and it spun like a propeller blade straight for the man moveing the mist out of it’s path as it flew towards him.
The man was struck and the water clone exploded at the very same second a hand burst from the water and grabbed the handle of the massive sword stopping it in mid air. The Mizukage rose from the water and suddenly so did the water dragon jutsu.
Kusari raised his hands in defense and a shield of ice stopped the water made dragon from hurting him. It collided against the shield and was stopped.
But suddenly from behind the man came arcing down with the massive sword. The mightly blade struck his icy back and suddenly everything seemed to stop.
Ice erupted from Kusari’s back and wrapped around the sword
At the same time his hands were in the seal of the tiger, he called out “Ice Chains jutsu!” and the icy barbed chains burst from the water beneath the Mizukage. They immediately bound him and they dug deep into his flesh. Blood began to pour down and this time the old man was unable to escape from this.
Kusari’s sword fell from his back still encase d in ice and he lifted it up his body seemingly unscathed… the ice fell from him and his physical form reverted to normal…
“How…how could you…” the Mizukage could not believe that this was the end for him as kusari raised his sword high above his head… the metal chian could be seen intertwined with the ice ones that bound the kage he had had the icy chains move it with them as a bit of ceremony. Tribute to his deceased family…
“Because I am a Momochi… and I have learned the right path is not within my anger.” Kusari spoke solemnly before bringing down his sword with a mighty heave and ending the old man’s life. The icy chains wrenched the remains apart. And the steel chain lay glistening in the dark red water…Kusari left it laying in the bloody water having no more need for it.
Mizu and Fogu passed through the ice wall and said nothing Kusari was exhausted he let his body fall forwards and the massive creatures caught him before he hit the water. The now tangible dragons rose to the top of the dome and Fogu melted an opening which Mizu shot through with Kusari on her back the two escaped amidst a flood of steam and mist that blocked their forms and roses too high to be seen by the hunter nins before taking off at incredible speeds towards the hidden snow village.
It felt like an eternity before arriving…kusari could still vividly see the memento he had left and in his mind all he could think was…it’s finally over… The dragons landed at the frozen lake and he slipped off thudding hard on the ice and just laying there too tired to move any. Mizu and Fogu turned into their smaller forms and were ready for anyone attempting to approach their weakened companion.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:35 pm
Plenty of spelling errors, such as not capitalising the names of characters... but I think that this is passable by the sheer size of it all. razz
Any objections? *lol*
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 11:25 pm
Do...I see some god modding? Hm...The size is great, but then again, anyone can make a great and long post if they use two characters. This place is to see how creative you can get with ONE character. Yes, hate me for my evilness even to such a large post XD
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 10:13 am
My previous post was from a very developed version of kusari and i had been given the rpmods permission on that site to kill the mizukage who was an npc that is why it seemed like god modding. also on that site he had a different power than the one that i am bringing here. that last fact is also true for this post which is a sample from some of my earlier posting.
Kusari had seen the light and had not heard anything Sorta said as he was already off bolting through the forest with his full speed not looking back or waiting for any orders.
Form above Mizu was able to ,ore accurately pinpoint The direction and guide Kusari towards it...Kusari had instructed Mizu not to approach it without him as he didn't want to risk injuring his summon.
Kusari continued moving for what must have been a mile or two... He knew he was drawing close and so began to slow not wanting to rush in like a complete fool...he had already begun to dodge traps and other things to continue on his way undetected...
The thoughts were racing through his mind... not another...not another that i could have saved...not like my mother....let them be alive...I can save them if there is just enough time to get me there.... but the sickening feeling that he was too late to save the woman began to enter his mind ....Kusari refused to accept this fact he would not! His blood began to boil with his anger as eh refused to accept the possibility that another one like his own mother had died...sadness was not his style if he could avoid it...anger was his emotion...it did not make you as weak! ANd because of this his thought process quickly changed... I will descend upon them like death itself... no one will stand in my way! I will save them! Kusari was already developing strategies calling on his knowledge of the art of silent killing and many other things as he readied himself to destroy anything that got in his way to save the woman...it couldn't be to late he refused to believe that fact.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:44 pm
Overlord9611 My previous post was from a very developed version o fkusari and i had been given the rpmods permission on that site to kill the mizukage who was an npc that is why it seemed like god modding. also on that site he had a different power than the one that i am bringing here. that last fact is also true for this post which is a sample from some of my earlier posting. What's going on in this sentence? Was someone speaking or was there just a mix up?-> Kusari had seen the light nad had not heard anything Sorta said as he was already off bolting through the forest with his full speed not looking back or waiting for any orders.
Form above Mizu was able to ,ore accurately pinpoint The direction and guide Kusari towards it...Kusari had instructed Mizu not to approach it without him as he didn't want to risk injuring his summon.
Kusari continued moving for what must have been a mile or two... He knew he was drawing close and so began to slow not wanting to rush in like a complete fool...he had already begun to dodge traps and other things to continue on his way undetected...
The thoughts were racing through his mind... not another...not another that i could have saved...not like my mother....let them be alive...I can save them if there is just enough time to get me there.... but the sickening feeling that he was too late to save the woman began to enter his mind ....Kusari refused to accept this fact he would not! His blood began to boil with his anger as eh refused to accept the possibility that another one like his own mother had died...sadness was not his style if he could avoid it...anger was his emotion...it did not make you as weak! ANd because of this his thought process quickly changed... I will descend upon them like death itself... no one will stand in my way! I will save them! Kusari was already developing strategies calling on his knowledge of the art of silent killing and many other things as he readied himself to destroy anything that got in his way to save the woman...it couldn't be to late he refused to believe that fact.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:02 pm
yeah someone had been talking in the previous post he had been warned not to rush in... yeah i type fast which causes spelling errors but i will work on that so thanks and cant wait to get rping once i get kusari finished with this crazy template :p
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:05 pm
lol Well, if you need anything don't be afraid to ask~ I'd be glad to help ^_^ And if this is how well you RP here, I can't wait to see how well you do in the villages.
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:06 pm
Right, lets give it a try.
The entire class stared as, in a swirl of leaves, Fuji Inukage appeared, late as usual.
"Hot damn!" he cried out "I love this jutsu"
He proceeded to bow over and over again to the confused teacher, before disappearing in another swirl of leaves.
No-one so much batted an eye when, in another swirl of leaves (this was starting to get annoying though), Fuji appeared in his chair, looking like a 6 year old in a candy store.
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:43 pm
Hi I am new to the guild and it is my understanding that I must post a sample rp here in order to find out if I am literate enough to move on to the villages. The sample I am about to give you isn't necessarily about the character I will be making here, but of a another character I have in another guild where he is the Mizukage. If however, you would like me to write up a new sample about a student (which is pretty much what I will be aiming for) then please just ask and I will make sure to get right on it. Any way without further ado here is my sample post:
Katsu’s grin widened dramatically as he heard the student state that he wouldn’t mind to be trained by the Mizukage. If Katsu noticed the boy’s annoyed look he gave no impression that he did. Instead Katsu moved over to one of the lone trees that stood upon the grounds and sat down deep in thought. Katsu looked perplexed as he attempted to think of what to do next. It wasn’t that Katsu had never taught a young one before, but that he was just the type of guy to put on such a show when he was before someone no matter what age.
Katsu was shook out of his personal thoughts as he heard the boy give the question of when they would begin. Katsu gave a confident smile to the student as he said, “Well how about right now?” Katsu then moved his head left and right as if looking for someone. When he apparently didn’t find what he was looking for he shouted, “Ray!!!! Ray where are you? Get out here you big furball!” Katsu then went quite as if knowing exactly what would occur next.
Barely a few seconds passed by after Katsu’s little outburst that a sudden growl broke through the silence. Katsu smiled to himself as Ray, a giant polar bear companion of Katsu’s, walked out of a nearby brush. If one could even tell a bear’s expression they would have been clearly able to notice the grumpy one on Ray. Ray looked at Katsu angrily as he suddenly spoke and said, “What do you want Katsu I was sleeping?” Katsu laughed heartily as he turned to his companion and said, “We have a new student Ray look lively. I was just thinking on what we should teach him have any ideas?” Ray growled apparently still not happy that he was woken up before saying, “Well how about I get the boy’s name first and then we figure out what he knows in terms of basics.” Katsu nodded his head happy for the suggestion and apparently thinking it a good idea.
Katsu turned back to the student suddenly a smile still on his face. Katsu looked him up and down a bit and then said, “Well boy, give your name to my friend Ray so that you may be properly introduced. Then after that you can answer some very basic information necessary to be a shinobi. First off what are some very basic weapons that ninja use? After that you can explain to me how chakra works…” Katsu kept a stupid grin on his face as he waited for an answer from his new student, ecstatic that he could teach again.
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:55 pm
KidMental Right, lets give it a try. The entire class stared as, in a swirl of leaves, Fuji Inukage appeared, late as usual. "Hot damn!" he cried out "I love this jutsu" He proceeded to bow over and over again to the confused teacher, before disappearing in another swirl of leaves. No-one so much batted an eye when, in another swirl of leaves (this was starting to get annoying though), Fuji appeared in his chair, looking like a 6 year old in a candy store. It's a little short but the only real problem is that it's a little hard to follow what's going on. See if you can make it a little clearer.
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:56 pm
god2005 Hi I am new to the guild and it is my understanding that I must post a sample rp here in order to find out if I am literate enough to move on to the villages. The sample I am about to give you isn't necessarily about the character I will be making here, but of a another character I have in another guild where he is the Mizukage. If however, you would like me to write up a new sample about a student (which is pretty much what I will be aiming for) then please just ask and I will make sure to get right on it. Any way without further ado here is my sample post: Katsu’s grin widened dramatically as he heard the student state that he wouldn’t mind to be trained by the Mizukage. If Katsu noticed the boy’s annoyed look he gave no impression that he did. Instead Katsu moved over to one of the lone trees that stood upon the grounds and sat down deep in thought. Katsu looked perplexed as he attempted to think of what to do next. It wasn’t that Katsu had never taught a young one before, but that he was just the type of guy to put on such a show when he was before someone no matter what age. Katsu was shook out of his personal thoughts as he heard the boy give the question of when they would begin. Katsu gave a confident smile to the student as he said, “Well how about right now?” Katsu then moved his head left and right as if looking for someone. When he apparently didn’t find what he was looking for he shouted, “Ray!!!! Ray where are you? Get out here you big furball!” Katsu then went quite as if knowing exactly what would occur next. Barely a few seconds passed by after Katsu’s little outburst that a sudden growl broke through the silence. Katsu smiled to himself as Ray, a giant polar bear companion of Katsu’s, walked out of a nearby brush. If one could even tell a bear’s expression they would have been clearly able to notice the grumpy one on Ray. Ray looked at Katsu angrily as he suddenly spoke and said, “What do you want Katsu I was sleeping?” Katsu laughed heartily as he turned to his companion and said, “We have a new student Ray look lively. I was just thinking on what we should teach him have any ideas?” Ray growled apparently still not happy that he was woken up before saying, “Well how about I get the boy’s name first and then we figure out what he knows in terms of basics.” Katsu nodded his head happy for the suggestion and apparently thinking it a good idea. Katsu turned back to the student suddenly a smile still on his face. Katsu looked him up and down a bit and then said, “Well boy, give your name to my friend Ray so that you may be properly introduced. Then after that you can answer some very basic information necessary to be a shinobi. First off what are some very basic weapons that ninja use? After that you can explain to me how chakra works…” Katsu kept a stupid grin on his face as he waited for an answer from his new student, ecstatic that he could teach again. I'm going to go ahead and pass ya. Pass!
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 11:04 pm
Thank you very much for the pass I assume that is it for the roleplay academy? I guess the next thing to do is get permission to join a village, become acquainted with the d20 rules, and eventually make my character.
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 11:10 pm
Ah, very well...I was just exampling an average day for Fuji but whatever.
Fuji began before his instructor had even pointed to him. Standing up, a large grin forming on his face, he bowed low once towards his new teacher before turning and bowing towards his 2 team mates.
"My name!" he called out "Is Fuji Inukage. I'm insane and one of the funniest and most annoying guys to be around! I like...many things, involving reading, writing, blowing up stuff, fire and so on! I dislike random violence and waiting.
I am currently repressing the urge to go on a mindless rampage and kill you all. I know such behavior is frowned upon, but when I get REALLY crazy, I just sometimes...forget."
A creepy smile appeared on his face before he took his seat.
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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 12:16 am
KidMental Ah, very well...I was just exampling an average day for Fuji but whatever. Fuji began before his instructor had even pointed to him. Standing up, a large grin forming on his face, he bowed low once towards his new teacher before turning and bowing towards his 2 team mates. "My name!" he called out "Is Fuji Inukage. I'm insane and one of the funniest and most annoying guys to be around! I like...many things, involving reading, writing, blowing up stuff, fire and so on! I dislike random violence and waiting. I am currently repressing the urge to go on a mindless rampage and kill you all. I know such behavior is frowned upon, but when I get REALLY crazy, I just sometimes...forget." A creepy smile appeared on his face before he took his seat.
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