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 Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:28 pm
I'm still experimenting with how to write Athena. One was the glorious angle, but then came off as too halty and pompous writing wise. I thought of using the similar hype approach I use for Yusuke, but Athena isn't a punk or a rebellious young guy. It's easy to fall into the technical serious Athena feel, which I'm trying to avoid.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:30 pm
Yeah, put it in his butt-hole! Yeah! scream
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:31 pm
As for the scorpion quip...control/manipulation over direction and speed would an could indeed change scorpion into Mr. Fantastic. Tell a apprehended they can on shoot water when indeed they can make it move to the left right up or down.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:33 pm
stressed scream stupid ******** autocorrect! Waterbender* not apprehended......I quite til I get home
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:36 pm
Outlaw....made my call.
The difference between Mr. Fantastic and Scorpion is that Scorpion has a more limited version of control.
It works on more levels than you think.
EDIT: If you wanted more control, then you needed to go into more detail like we asked for in your revision.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:37 pm
Glorious Athena I'm still experimenting with how to write Athena. One was the glorious angle, but then came off as too halty and pompous writing wise. I thought of using the similar hype approach I use for Yusuke, but Athena isn't a punk or a rebellious young guy. It's easy to fall into the technical serious Athena feel, which I'm trying to avoid. I personally enjoyed the Glorious angle. And was kinda what I was expecting. But hey man, your character, your writting style. My problem for assuming.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:37 pm
Glorious Athena count_zantara Athena grabbed the chain when she should have smacked it aside so she came away with a chain wrapped around her wirst. Your stuck with five feet of chain behind you. No more...no less. Until you go and unwrap it, that is. Just to comment on this, let's be real. If my opponent can control the chain however he wants, it would be futile to smack it aside when it'll just come back around. Better to rope it than to leave it out of your control. futile indeed but wrapping it would be an even dumber idea..... as would grabbing it as you did. With it wrapped.....just imagine a sand coffin style arm crushing if he is indeed still controlling/linked to it. But
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:38 pm
I do like the Glorious style, too. I just need to refine it. Thankfully, one inspiration is going to help me.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:38 pm
Colonel Iyam A Heita d**k move on my part but...I felt it was necessary to convey a message. ..... >.>
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:42 pm
Alright boys and girls.
Yummy is still around and Hero will be around sometime in the near future.
As for this Judge, I have something to go do.
Any problems, direct their way in Pm's as I won't be back on until about 2 PM Easter Standard Time.
Have fun and be safe.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:43 pm
Frustrated... and justified I think.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:47 pm
Colonel Iyam A Heita Frustrated... and justified I think. At first I thought you were referring to putting a ring on Jay's finger lol. But yes, read your post. sad
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:49 pm
Darkest Silver At first I thought you were referring to putting a ring on Jay's finger lol. But yes, read your post. sad Not everything I talk relates to you dear lol
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:50 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 7:01 pm
Colonel Iyam A Heita Not everything I talk relates to you dear lol  edit: Aww, breakin' my links.
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