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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:10 pm
I think shin meant things with ranks in general. Besides, all Hyuton techniques recieving a rank down in chakra cost, especially on the class with the most chakra? Nah bro.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:23 pm
Alright. Can you talk to the person then? I have to get off soon.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:28 pm
I'll change it but just sayin', the Konin of Mist has his chakra for his Bloodline Jutsu halved and he is Ninjutsu class.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:33 pm
Yes, but he's a bukijutsu sensor. He will never have as much chakra as a person with ninjutsu and bloodline as classes. I think that's what Anon's issue with it was.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:33 pm
He has two attributes that he really, really shouldn't have that other members are denied. Don't know what's actually being done about it.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:34 pm
iOath Yes, but he's a bukijutsu sensor. He will never have as much chakra as a person with ninjutsu and bloodline as classes. I think that's what Anon's issue with it was. S/he's talking about Ed.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:37 pm
Oooh. I thought Mana would be a Konin, too. *derp*
Yeah, what Anon said was correct. Those attributes weren't approved, so I don't know why he has them. They would have probably been denied had he actually asked for approval.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:49 pm
Approved, Pulse. Go have fun.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:55 am
Re posting the edited version~ ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Asami Hanaye Nickname: The Blue Devil
Age: Seventeen Birthdate: July Twenty-Seventh Gender: Female
Height: Sixty-Four Inches Weight: One Hundred Twenty-Six pounds
Nindo: "Have fun and don't let people who don't matter bring you down!" Personality: Asami is one little ball of sunshine. Normally a charming and happy girl, she's always smiling and loves being around people. She's generally a kind person and never puts down the opportunity to improve herself. The only time Asami shows any hint of anger is if someone's being mean to her. She's rather childish in that matter. She's ironically nicknamed 'The Blue Devil' for her switch up of deadly and strong attacks, aside from her cute and bubbly look and personality.
Village: Yukigakure Rank: Genin Main Class: Genjutsu Subclass: Brawler ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Chakra Pool: 225 [+ 25] Chakra Color: Light Blue Chakra Element: Water Chakra materialization: Chakra appears as a thick, teardrop shape around Asami's body.
Strengths: • Close contact • Elemental advantage (e.g stormy/rainy climate) Weaknesses: • Elemental disadvantage (e.g dry/hot climate) • No contact. Fears: • Bugs and Spiders • Being alone
Class Attribute: • Perceiving Mind • Willowy Reductions: • learns genjutsu [1] point faster Personal Attributes: • Rather fast and flexible in movements (in addition to class attribute) ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 4 • Genjutsu : : 8 • Taijutsu Styles : : 0 • Bukijutsu Styles : : 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Hair accessories. (e.g. Each item Asami has in her hair is tipped with poison senbon) Weapon Range: Ten foot radius. Weapon Weight: Each item ranges from 5-10 ounces. Weapon Location: Usually in her bun. • Kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Senbon x 10 • Kunai x 10 • Shuriken x 5 • Candy x 5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Living a simple life, Asami really has no reason to act cruelly or treat others with disrespect. Originally from Kirigakure, Asami's parents were both sent to Yukigakure on official business and decided to take their baby girl with them. The family spent many years inYuki, allowing Asami to grow up there, learn in the academy and train her water based techniques on the training field. Asami was smart, but she wasn't so intelligent as to surpass anyone in the class. She had a keen talent for genjutsu, which was surprising to her parents and teachers. When Asami was eleven, her parents were called back to Kirigakure, leaving the small family in a fight. Asami refused to return to her home village and sent her parents home, heart broken. That was the first time Asami ever did something relatively 'mean' and she refuses to do it again. She has no connection with her parents now, scared they would treat her cruelly like she had done to them when she left. Therefore, Asami has no idea if her parents are dead or alive.
Nowadays, as a seventeen year old, Asami lives by herself and it isn't uncommon to find her at the academy training or anywhere else she has space to fool around.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:01 am
Um...I think you forgot to add the chakra bonus and attribute from the Brawler subclass. xD
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:00 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kuro Ame Nickname: None
Age: 14 Birthdate: May Sixth [ 5/6 ] Gender: Male
Height: Six Foot Even [ 6'0" ] Weight: One Hundred Sixty Pounds [ 160lbs ]
Nindo: "People who brake the rules are trash but people who betray their friends are worse then trash" Personality: Kuro was very loyal toward anyone who is above his own rank plus his friends. Anyone he comes in contact with him will see his kindness toward everyone. Kuro would help anyone out that need help even if he or she is evil. To him they are human beings that should be treated like friends by everyone. That is the main reason he does not like to kill anyone.
Village: Mist Rank: Genin Main Class: Bukijutsu Subclass: Samurai ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Ranton
Chakra Pool: 200 [+20] chakra. Chakra Element: Raiton + Suiton Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization: It is normal
Strengths: • Bukijutsu • Bloodline Weaknesses: • Fuiton • Genjutsu Fears: • Friends Death
Class Attributes: • Meager Muscles: Physical endurance slightly increased • Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu one [1] post faster Personal Attributes: • Fast Feet: His speed slightly increased due to his lightning enhanced body • Perfect Hands: Able to weild almost any weapons ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03[/Per Element] • Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Name: Kanji Weapon Type: Katana Weapon Range: 23.6in Weapon Weight: 3 pounds Weapon Location: left side of his waist
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Ten shuriken • Ten kunai • Ten tag bombs ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Raiton •
Bloodline •
Tetsu no Ryo ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ U/C
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 5:41 pm
Looks good but you still need clearance for the bloodline before you can move forward.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:28 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kenji Kaguya Nickname:
Age: 21 Birthdate: January 9 Gender: Male
Height: 6’ 5” Weight: 175lbs
Nindo: "If you are defeated and live, luck was with you. Don’t dwell upon defeat, and only accept it when you are dead. Survive and kill the one who couldn‘t kill you."
Personality: Kenji is always calm and emotionless even in the face of his most certain death. He almost acts as if he has no soul at all living just to exist in this world. Very few people will get to hear his voice, while even fewer will get to become his friend. He tends to stick to the higher up ninja for advise and rarely calls upon them even when it is need. He is also a ninja with a death wish for he only does a spar when he is ordered too.
Village: Mist Rank: Genin Main Class: Bukijutsu Subclass: Bloodline ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Kaguya
Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Element: Water and Lightning Chakra Color: Blood Red Chakra Materialization: Is always seen as and aura shining off my body.
Strengths: • Weapons Combat • Ninjutsu Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Pretty Smiles Fears: • Energetic People • Moms
Class Attributes: • Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess • Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased Reductions: • Learns Bukijutsu [ 2 ] posts faster • Learn Bloodline [ 1 ] post faster Personal Attributes: • Learn Bukijutsu [ 1 ] post faster • At the cost of all his genjutsu is able to learn one more bukijutsu style ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 04 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Dual Katanas Weapon Range: 5 feet each Weapon Weight: 2 lbs Weapon Location: On my hips •
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x10 • Pills of Increasing speed x5 • Smoke Pellets x5 • Pills of increasing endurance x10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Raiton •
Bloodline • ▬▬┤|Custom Jutsu‘s • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Kenji has always been a strong ninja and yet also a wonderful artist. He had always found the time to draw write and still practice his weapons training all at the same time. Most other ninja seem to give him his space while he hates everyone who thinks they are better than everyone else. When Kenji first became a ninja he was made fun of due to him loving to draw and write but that all ended after his first fight. He showed everyone there his strength.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:59 pm
Make sure you correct what we talked about. Other than that, accepted.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:43 pm
Genin • • • Ninja of the Mist Villlage. ══════════════ :: Deadlock117 :: ══════════════ ══════════════ :: Kamishiro Yuu :: ══════════════ ►P e r s o n a l D a t a___▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬--↪ Name :: Kamishiro Yuu--↪ Nickname :: None Yet--↪ Age :: 14--↪ Birthday :: January 17th--↪ Gender :: Male--↪ Height :: 5'0--↪ Weight :: 104lbs--↪ Nindo :: "Some people deserve more than others."--↪ Personality :: Unknown--↪ Village :: Kirigakure--↪ Rank :: Genin--↪ Main Class :: Genjutsu--↪ Subclass :: Samurai►C o m b a t D a t a___▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬--↪ Bloodline :: Sakkakugan--↪ Chakra Pool :: 225 [ +20 ]--↪ Chakra Element :: Raiton--↪ Chakra Color :: Gold--↪ Chakra Materialization :: Flares like fire--↪ Strengths :: --↪ • Genjutsu--↪ • Close Combat--↪ Weaknesses :: --↪ • Fuuton--↪ • Long Range Combat--↪ Fears :: --↪ • Running out of people--↪ • Losing his creativity--↪ Class Attributes :: --↪ • Perceiving Mind: Effect of genjutsu rank D and below slightly increased--↪ • Meager Muscles: Physical endurance slightly increased--↪ Reductions :: --↪ • Learn genjutsu two [2] posts faster--↪ • Genjutsu rank D - C cost [5] less chakra to perform--↪ • Genjutsu rank B - A cost [10] less chakra to perform--↪ • Genjutsu rank S cost [20] less chakra to perform--↪ • Kai costs [10] less chakra to perform--↪ Personal Attributes :: --↪ • Otherwordly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means.--↪ • Genius: Kamishiro can learn Bukijutsu one post fater.--↪ • Extremist: Kamishiro can learn an extra Bukijutsu Style.►C a r e e r D a t a___▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬--↪ Ryo :: 両0--↪ AC :: 0--↪ Missions Completed :: --↪ • D Rank :: 0--↪ • C Rank :: 0--↪ • B Rank :: 0--↪ • A Rank :: 0--↪ • S Rank :: 0--↪ Limitations :: --↪ • Ninjutsu :: 6--↪ • Genjutsu :: 8--↪ • Taijutsu Styles :: 0--↪ • Bukijutsu Styles :: 2►W e a p o n D a t a___▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬--↪ Weapon Type :: Katana--↪ Weapon Range :: 20"--↪ Weapon Weight :: 2.6lbs--↪ Summoning Type :: -------↪ Summon Sage :: -------↪ Pact :: -----►I n v e n t o r y ___▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬--↪ Shiruken :: 10--↪ Kunai :: 10--↪ Explosive Tags :: 10►T e c h n i q u e s___▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬--↪ Maruton :: --↪ • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]--↪ • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]--↪ • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]--↪ • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]--↪ • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]--↪ • Kai [ Release ]--↪ • --↪ • --↪ Raiton :: --↪ • --↪ • --↪ Kakkakugan :: --↪ • --↪ • --↪ Genjutsu :: --↪ • --↪ • --↪ Bukijutsu Style 1 :: --↪ • --↪ • --↪ Bukijutsu Style 2 :: --↪ • --↪ • ►H i s t o r y___▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬--↪ The Prologue :: Condemned to a family full of hatred, Kamishiro was subjected to a very horrible childhood. His father and mother despised him in every way. His looks, his thoughts, his personality, his movements, and his words. They hated all of them. Even his sister and brother had come to an understanding with their parents. Every morning, he awoke to some knew kind of punishment. Mock punishments; he liked to called them. They took any and every reason to cause him harm. If he slept too early or too late, they would burn him until he awoke. If he ate too much or too little, they would whip him until he passed out. Sometimes they would hold him under water while he took a bath or lock him outside of the house at night. He took blame for everything, even if he was not around. His brother would drug woman and girls alike, rape them, only to haul Kamishiro in and lock him there until they awoke. His sister would would go out and return with bruises and scars, claiming he was not there to protect her. Miraculously, she would return to normal the next day. Regardless of the matter, Kamishiro's life was never anything anyone would ever want.
Kamishiro's tragic story came to an end very harshly. The child found himself locked out of his home after being forced to wash in a nearby river.He was left to wander the wilds in search of both food and shelter. That was by far the roughest night he had within the woods surrounding his small home. He was constantly attacked by animals, which he later used for both food and clothing. Upon his return in the morning, he stepped up to his front door. A single tap hit the door, and he waited to see who would come to beat him. Yet this time, there was no one. The door slowly moved open after another tap, and he watched as glass shattered on the floor. The entire household was destroyed and all he could think about was how he would pay for every inch of it. His form slowly moved through the house. He saw blood, but thought nothing of it. That was normal, and yet another thing he would take blame for. But then, he saw the body of his father. Lifeless, the man laid on the ground. Around him, there was others. Ninja of a village he did not know of. They too were dead.. "Kamishiro!" It was the first time his family had ever used his name. Their screams came from a room he had a clear view into. All three sat naked and tied to chairs. The ropes tight enough where you could see the coloring of their skin change. His brother battered and beaten, while his female family members sat tired and scared. Tears ran from their eyes as they scream for him to help. He only stared at each of their forms. His brother never spoke, probably too weak to do anything. As he stared at them, he had many different thoughts. He was scared to death. They would beat him for this, he knew it. They would put all the blame on him, he knew that too. "Help us!" He snapped out of his own thoughts and began to move closer to them. Entering the room cause his brother to stir. His head lifted weakly. "Hey bro.." He coughed blood upon the floor. "Hurry up and untie me so I can hit you one last time." Kamishiro froze. There is was. The final statement he needed for confirmation. His mind went blank as he thought to himself.
His mother and sister's mouths moved in what seemed to be screams both towards him and his brother, yet he could not tell. In his mind, all he could hear was himself. The sadness and sorrows which spoke to him. His emotions letting loose, causing him to think about a difference course of action. "Don't listen to him! We won't hurt you anymore! We only did it because of your father!" His mother's words snapped him out of it. He felt sympathy, for the man was the worst of the bunch. They probably only helped out of fear. Looking around, he picked up a piece of glass. He moved behind his mother first, motioning to cut her ropes with the sharpest part of his weapon. "Hurry up!" The words were followed by a thick liquid splattering across his face. Kamishiro's eyes grew and his body froze, his hands falling inactive at the same time. He could not take it anymore. No.. no.. no.. no more! His hands came back up, and he took hold of his mother's ropes. A pull and her chair fell backwards with a loud thud. She winced in pain, turning to meet her son's crazed gaze. "No.." He said aloud to his family. That was the last word they would ever hear. A couple hours later, and the boy left his house. Looking back, he felt he repaid them for every amount of pain they gave him.
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