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The Chuunin Exams should be on a...
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Manafai

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 1:29 pm


Convinsing this girl was rather hopeless up untill now "Rather than Sakura she's more persistant like Naruto... I can't even tell anymore..." He sighed, trying to make his point clear "Kagome... Before I can start missions I actually have to meet your teammates first, ever considered of that? Without them I can't take on any mission.

Jiraiya who noticed Haikaze trying out the rasengan laughed at his attemp, though he sliced through the trees he was a complete failure. he stepped to him in a bit of a sarcastic tone "Trying to use my students move, eh? It's not that easy, even if you pierced the trees in half, your rasengan was a failure. If you were to do it correctly your chakra was suppose to stay in a sphere shape and cut through the tree in an orb shape and leave the inner parts of the tree smooth, and not pierce through the tree in half after you lost retain of the chakra with chips flying all over, let me demostrate." Jiraiya found a nearby thick tree and created a rasengan in his right hand "Look carefully..." He started pushing the rasengan againts the tree, as it was getting cut in a round hole shape til the middle of the tree, no chips were flying away and inside of the tree was smooth. At that point he let go of the chakras retain "That's how you do it, you didn't even get the first stage right, nor do you have the chakra level to even try and use such a move."

((sorry, but having you learning rasengan so easily seemed unfair to Minato who took 3 years and Naruto who took a week, and besides, trying to figure out a way to make ur use seem wrong was really hard 3nodding ))
PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 1:45 pm


"You need to check you eyes old man." Heikaze said after watching Jiraiya. "The tree that was tore to shreds wasn't byt he rasengan, it was with my own technique. The one that was split it two and ossed was my attempt at the rasengan. Also, don't tell me how much chakra I can use. You haven't the slightest clue."

He took up the same stance as he tried the rasengan again. He couldn't copy a jutsu like the Uchihas, but he could mimic chakra movement with his own genius. "I know nothing of stages, so that means nothing to me." Forming a rasengan in his left palm again, this time he mimiced Jiraiya's, the third version he saw.

Whether they realized it or not, each of their rasengan's were different, ever so slightly, but he could see it. He didn't know the reason, but it was probably because of the level of their mastery.

After forming the rasengan again he approached another tree and tried it again, he got about halfway through before he released it again. The tree was blown into two and the top half sent flying again. "Hmm, I think I got it now." Heikaze said looking to the old white haired man who was obviously Jiraiya of the sannin.

This time, his third try, his movements were slightly different and the final appearance of his rasengan was diferent. The charka rotated quicker and was more violent, the sphere was smaller, but had even more chakra packed into it. He picked another tree, behind him and to his left, he spun and thrust his left hand forward. The blue orb of chakra ate straight through the tree, a perfect circular cutout, his arm through the tree, his hand on the other side still holding the rasengan. "Umm, when am I supposed to release it?" he asked.

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Manafai

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:29 pm


Jiraiya was impressed with this boys control, but there was still a certain lack of something "You're a fast learner, I'll give you that, buy my eyes aren't as old as you say they are, both trees you pierced we different techiniques, but rasengan isn't just any technique, you don't just compress a bit of a chakra and retain it's rotation, and about the stages, let me explain what I mean."
Another rasengan orb was formed in his hand, he pushed it through a tree and a spiral cut was made in perfect round shape "That would be after completing the first and second part of training... But when you finish the third, you get the results as the one I did before, but you still lack something, first of all, surely you noticed the speed of the rotation increase it's power, but the amound of chakra you can compress and retain in rotation counts as well, and the more you use, the harder it is to rotate, so using the right amount while still having enough to fight is crutial. Also, to use rasengan means also means physically your moves will become heavier and slower because you must focus yourself to retain it. In other words it is the worst double edged sword for a Genin such as yourself, prevent yourself from using it unless it's a final resort in battle, and if you're wise, you'll notice no matter how much you train, rasengan will always lack something." This was a test of wisdom to see how much this boy understands the use of jutsus.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:40 pm


(I agree with Manafai, it took Naruto over three weeks if i remember correctly to get past stage 2. Then another week to master the technique itself. And that was only because the Kyubbi fully restored his stamina every night. There is no way in hell you'd be able to make even a knockoff of the rasengan in ten minutes. I don't care who you are.)

Naruto lay on the ground a moment. Getting to his knees he sputtered, "Wha..What was that?" He could harldy move from the blast, but he had to, he couldn't just give up. Not with all these people watching him.

He'd show them. He'd make them all acknowledge him. Shakily he stood, facing Minato on the other side of the field. He yelled over to his opponent.

"I won't lose to you. I said I'd win, and I never take back my word. I'm going to be the next Hokage, no matter who tries to stop me!" He gathered what little strength he had left and waited for his opponent to get to his feet.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:43 pm


Ok, well Heikaze is over there and I dunno where Raven is said Kagome as she looked around wearily. It's just really boring with no missions and concidering you need to finish missions to get into the chunnin exams.

(Um, was it Sakura's turn to post Luminatus?)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:44 pm


"You didn't answer my question, but this works, and it'll save me some chakra." Heikaze moved so he could his hand, bending his elbow he wrapped around the tree using the rasengan he held from his last attempt. "If I have to add more chakra and rotate it faster, I can still increase both of those." As he spoke, he increased them greatly, the overall chakra he seemed to possess also rose. 'More' he said to himself as he continued to increase the chakra density and rotation speed. "How's this?" he asked, the rasengan in his palm was solid like stone, yet its rotation speed was something unbelievable. This time the rasengan was actually correct as it became self sustained.

Heikaze stared down at it, it was missing something. But what could he add to it? Unfortunately he didn't have the answer just yet, but give him time (and me.). He watched Jiraiya waiting for the man to say something, he didn't know what, but he wanted something. Of course, even though he was watching the sannin, it wasn't actually with his eyes, but teh vision of the byakugan.

RoaringBunny


RoaringBunny

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:57 pm


<(Okay, well he hasn't yet mastered the rasengan. Also, he in on a completely different level than Naruto was. Also, the first two stages would be a walk int eh park for a shinobi with chakra control as good as Heikaze's. Finally, by watching how they performed the jutsu with his byakugan he can see how they manipulated their chakra to perform it. All these things give him a tremendous advantage over Naruto.)>
PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:04 pm


((i know wut advantage it gives u, but as u see, i showed u a few mistake u made, and it'll take a while till u realize wuts missing no matter how hard u train))
Once again, this boys advancement was faster than expected "Hhhooooo... much better than last time, but there are still more elements to make the rasengan so powerful. The density of the chakra determains how strongly it can pierces through objects and effect the opponet once he's hit, like the Hyuugas Jyuuken, Rasengan will flow a massive amount of chakra into the opponents body, the denser it is the more chakra you can compress and release onto your opponent.
He took a look at the boys new attempt, the rotation was fine, but the rasengan was missing it's 'aura' "You still lack something... When you compress the chakra enough and match the rotation to the density and amount of chakra you used, the rasengan should have like a type of aura around it, it takes a pinpoint accuracy to do that, but even without that detail, the rasengan will be powerful enough."


Listening to Kagome, Kakashi looked at Heikaze, which seemed like was being trained by Jiraiya to use rasengan "Those eyes... He's a Hyuuga, no doubt about it, his training afterthe rasengan will go much faster with the Byakugan, he's already at such an advanced level." He knew this because he still didn't take down his forehead protector, though he moved it backdown after watching this boys advancement.
He made his way to him grabbing Kagomes wrist practiclly takingher by force with him "Yoh! You must be Heikaze, right? I'll be your team leader, Hatake Kakashi, Ihear you and Kagome don't get along so well" At this point he made a frightening face with a scary voice "You better start getting along or you'll regret it... That goes for you too Kagome." He quickly shifted backto his cheerful face you could never see under his mask "I think you got the point."

Manafai


Luminatus

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:11 pm


(No, its mine, sorry Sakura)

As the smoke began to clear Gurenke stood on the field Kunai twirling around his fingers, Sakuras, Kunai.

"Very good, you have potential. Perhaps you're getting a bit hungry? Lets go get some Ramen."

He turned to leave and looked over at Crys. "You could learn something from this young girl, Crys. Perhaps if you gained some initiative and tried to work a bit harder you might get as far as Sakura here." He continued to walk towards a nearby Ramen shop.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:18 pm


Kagome looked away as Kakashi shoved her near Heikaze. She stayed quiet the whole time, not saying a single word.

(OK^^)

Sakura nodded as she followed Gurenke-sensei. Yeah, I am a little hungry. Will all the thinking I had to do! =D

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RoaringBunny

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:20 pm


Unable to pump anymore chakra into what was now a solid stone he realized his only choice was to rotate it faster. "Thanks, Jiraiya-sama." Heikaze said actually showing respect, such a think was nearly as rare as the excitement that had been in his tone. "But, I like my version better. Its much cooler, and original." he said before Kakashi arrived with Kogame.

Turning to teh silver haired man, Heikaze visibly looked him up and down. The movement of his head was recognizeable even though unnecesary. "No thanks." he said casually, "...I quit." With a smirk he pulled his arm out of the tree, still holding the rasengan in his left palm.

He glanced down at it, the rotation speed increasing slightly but not quite enough to produce the 'aura.' With his right hand he pulled down his cloak, the wind put of by the rasengan caused it flap wildly. Thrusting downward he shoved the swirling sphere of chakra into the ground at his feet. The explosion and impact that resulted kicked up dust, dirt and chunks of earth, in which he disapeared. When it all settled down, there a sizeable crater left where he stood.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:23 pm


Pssssh, knew he'd say that said Kagome angrily. Told you Kakashi, I knew he would say something like that.

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some bowman

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:24 pm


Fayt got up in the morning and grabbed breakfast. Afterwards he grabbed his bag and headed outside of the village. He started towrd his spot and saw some ninja inspecting it. they dont look like Konoha's ninja to me! he thought to himself. Then a Kunai flu past his head and he jumped into a tree and tried to escape. Dang they sensed me!
PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:37 pm


Just when he thought things couldn't get any worse, now one of his teammates quit his team "So I did all that story telling just to find out he isn't even on my team anymore...? Life really knows how to give you a nice surprise sometimes... Hey Kagome, why don't you watch Naruto fight? I need to have a word with Jiraiya for a moment, Jiriaya, come with me please."

Jiraiya followed Kakashi bit of away from everyone, not understand what Kakash is trying to pull. "Jiraiya... do you really think it was a wise move to teach him the rasengan? That was a bit careless, andhe just quit my team, he could be a missing nin soon." "He's not like that at all, though true i met him merely today, but he learnt the rasengan by himself, and you can see it in his eyes... He's not evil, he's nothing close t othat, I can trust him."
((feels weird talkin to myself sweatdrop ))

Manafai


RoaringBunny

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:45 pm


<(Can't wait to see Jiraiya's face when Heikaze goes missing-nin. Lol. Though he is correct about him not being evil...)>
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