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 Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:45 am
"Hmm... The symbol for transmuting earth I see... This will be interesting. But, while we tone our bodies for it, why don't we practice the other two styles of alchemy then?" Asked Jason to Bone who had finished making the symbol. Bone stood up and nodded to Jason and smiled. "Alright then. Lets see how many trees we can take down." Said Bone as he and Jason turned in opposite directions. They then dashed forwards, snapping their wooden fingers and causing large explosions while destroying trees.
4/6
Bone slide behind on tree and then snapped his fingers, causing a large explosion behind him but wasn't even half it's true potential. Jason jumped into a tree while blowing the bottom portion of it and felt the tree start to fall over. Jason then started running to the top of the tree, jumping off and snapping his fingers once again to destroy the tree top of which he just jumped off of. Jason and Bone smiled as they were perfectly tone with their techniques. Then, the met together once more and lifted their arms.
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Snapping their fingers once more, there was a huge explosion above their heads and a large gust of wind flew past them, causing the trees to almost uproot themselves. Bone and Jason then looked at their plams as the new symbol appeared on them and then looked at each other with a smile. They then jumped into the air, going ever higher and higher by using the impossible leap. When they got to their desired hight, they then bent their bodies so that they would be falling to the ground with great speed. Upon impact, they shot a fist into the ground and earth spikes shot up in every direction, missing the statue but destroying everything around.
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:39 am
Naomi and Kazuki finally arrived in Hidden Alchemy and yawned awake. They left the docks and headed into town when she noticed a boy laughing and joking with some towns people. Naomi watched them a while before attempting to walk towards a diner across the street. Suddenly a rock wall blocked her path as the boy laughed loudly. “What’s the matter? I thought I told you ANBU you’re not needed here.” laughed the boy as Naomi turned to face them and Kazuki ran and hid. Naomi took a kunai from her hair as half of it fell down her back and the rest stayed in her bun. She pointed it at the boy to show she was in no playing mood but he continued on.
Inner Circle (beginning) 1/6
“You think you scare me? Some tid bit ANBU thinks they can beat me?” said the boy waking over to Naomi as she lowered her kunai to target his throat. “The names Edward Howard and you made a big mistake coming here. And alone too? Tsck, tsck, tsck.” continued Ed as he clapped his hands together. Naomi quickly threw the kunai as Ed’s right arm turned into a blade and he knocked it away. Naomi quickly performed Brain Nanjuu and vanished. Ed sensed her beside him and swung at her but she vanished again and put a kunai to his throat. His friends gasped as the two disappeared. They then reappeared somewhere on the outskirts of town. Naomi released him and they stood and stared at one another a good minute before Naomi spoke.
Inner Circle 2/6
“Edward Howard huh? Might I request something of you?” “Hell no you can’t! I ain’t helping no filthy stinkin ANBU!” yelled Ed as Naomi took her mask off as Ed looked at her surprised. “I’m not an ANBU-” “I noticed. You’re that girl aren’t you? The killer?” “Killer? Why am I called the killer?” “Because you’ve killed over thirty people in the last month-” “I have not-” “Right and those sightings of you were all a mistake.” “They must have been because I haven’t been a missing-nin for a month yet.” “My facts must be false then. You are a killer.” “Fight me here and now. If I win then I am not a killer and you have to teach me all about this alchemy stuff I’ve heard so little about. But if you win then I leave and am labeled a killer and get what comes to me. Deal?” “Hm, I could just kill you now but I love bets because I always win em. You’re on.”
Inner Circle 3/6
Naomi and Ed faced each other as Ed made the first move. He quickly clapped his hands together as Naomi vanished. He knew she would appear on either side of him so he created rock spikes on either side. Instead of coming up on his side Naomi came up in front of him. He tried to cut her with her arm blade but Naomi was too fast. She performed Strong Fist and punched him right in the face. He hit the ground as Naomi performed some hand signs. Edward hit the ground but stopped from falling by twirling on the ground with his left arm. By the time he stood though, Naomi had finally finished her hand signs.
Inner Circle 4/6
“Demonic Ice Mirrors!” exclaimed Naomi as the mirrors formed all around Ed. He tried to break them but they were far too hard and he didn’t make a scratch. Naomi laughed as Ed tried and tried to break through the mirrors. Naomi left no space in between them and trapped him inside. After finally convincing Ed he lost Naomi set him free and he started Naomi’s alchemy lesson. “Firs of, alchemy has no real logic except for equivalent exchange. There’s no actual scientific reason of why we are able to do what we do… as of yet. Now, in order to activate a transmutation you need to make a circle.” “Like this?” “Not a real circle you idiot, an alchemy circle!” “Then say that next time!” “You wanna learn or not?!?” yelled Ed as Kazuki ran up and bit him on the hand. Ed sat a while before noticing and starting to wail about.
Inner Circle 5/6
After calming down Ed showed Naomi what circle he meant. Naomi tried and tried before finally making a pretty good alchemy circle. “Now once the circle is made then you just place your hands onto the circle and go.” “Go?” “Yeah, transmute.” “Like summoning except within the blood signature?” “What? Just drop all that ninja crap and think like an alchemist. Transmutation not summoning.” replied Ed as Naomi frowned a bit then shook it off. “Okay, now what?” “You need to transmute something.” “How? I have my hands on the circle.” “You need to visualize what you want to create. Think of something simple like a flower or something.” replied Ed as Naomi looked at him confused then shrugged and focused.
Inner Circle (completion) 6/6
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:40 am
As Naomi focused she felt something whack against her head. “Why’d you hit me?!?” “Because that ain’t an alchemy circle. That’s why it ain’t working.” “You drew it like that though.” “Yeah but you have to make it perfect and yours is just a big old piece of artistic crap!” “Then teach me how Ed!” “Fine. Okay, you have the circle thing down. Now you need to just start with that.” replied Ed as Naomi drew a circle onto the ground next to her old one. “Good. Now you need to draw a circle inside that circle.” continued Ed as Naomi did as he said. “Okay, now draw a small circle here, here, and there.” Naomi did as he said and he pondered a bit. “Right. Draw small circles here and there then a triangle upright through here and an upside down triangle through there.” as Naomi did so Ed noticed it was getting dark and stood up.
Symbols (beginning) 1/6
“Hey where do you think you’re going?!?” “Home, it’s late.” “And what am I supposed to do?” “I dunno. Don’t you have someplace to be?” “No, I’m a missing-nin. I have no home anymore.” “Well that’s too bad because you can’t come with me.” “What?!? Fine then… I’ll sleep out here… alone.” “No wait… there’s an inn down the street. Here’s a buck, go wild.” joked Ed as he walked off and Naomi frowned angrily. Naomi practiced a while longer before growing too tired. She then laid down on the ground as Kazuki walked over. Naomi grabbed him and hugged him tight. It was quite cold and all the two had were each other to stay warm. They drifted off into sleep as Naomi dreamed of circles and triangles.
Symbols 2/6
After dreaming about a circle with triangles for teeth that tried to eat her Naomi snapped awake. She noticed she was in a spacious room and couldn’t see Kazuki anywhere. She motioned out of bed in the same attire she wore when she came. She left the room and came to a huge hallway. Naomi could see alchemy circles in frames on the walls. Some had circles, others had triangles, and some even had an oval or two. Naomi then noticed one that had a square on it. As she looked at it a while she heard someone come up behind her. “Are those the same clothes you wore yesterday? There are some clean ones in the bathroom in the room you were just in. Put them on and come downstairs.” said Ed as he looked at Naomi then headed back downstairs.
Symbols 3/6
Naomi quickly took a shower and washed her hair. She noticed Ed had placed some formal clothes out for her and a fan. She knew it was a disguise and decided to just go along with it. “So this is Lady Niroma? She’s beautiful.” said a boy as Naomi motioned downstairs. Her hair had big fat curls throughout it that covered her face a bit. Her fan was cold and white, which matched her dress. It was long and foofy and went down past her feet. She nearly tripped a few times but no one noticed but he because she kept a straight face. As Naomi approached Ed and the boy he bowed. “My name is Jeremiah Suddleton.” said Jeremiah kissing Naomi’s hand as he smirked at her. Naomi looked at him wide-eyed as he bid both Ed and Naomi adieu then left. “He’s that guy… from before.” said Naomi as Ed tapped her shoulder.
Symbols 4/6
“Who?” “I was in a battle with this guy named Devan Jones when I got stuck in a Genjutsu. He released me and told me not to get trapped again then left.” “………………” “Well Ed?” “………I don’t know what the heck you’re talking about.” blinks Ed as Naomi sighs. “You studied the symbols upstairs well didn’t you?” “As much as I could. I just don’t see how all this is possible. Everyone always says that everything we do has no explanation on how it is possible to do. I’m done with that now. This here makes no sense. You draw some shapes and get an item from nowhere to appear? That doesn’t add up-” “Neither does the ability to perform hand signs and make fire or summon a creature or to even heal wounds! Nothing makes sense but that’s just how things are.”
Symbols 5/6
“I’m done just believing that what I’m doing is actually possible. Explain to me how this is possible and I won’t speak another word of it from here on out.” “Fine I will… after breakfast though. I’m starved.” replied Ed rushing into the kitchen. As the two sat at the dinner table and servants brought them their food Naomi began to wonder. ”How did you get rich like this? Did you inherit money from your parents?” asked Naomi noticing Kazuki across the room eating a doggy waffle. “Nope.” “Life insurance?” “Of who?” “I dunno… your parents or a family member. You can’t have a job because you’re just a kid like me-” “Correction. I’m an adult nearly-” “Even then you couldn’t have made such money just working.” “Well I did. State Alchemist Edward Elric is what they called me.” “Called?” “Yeah, that was before you ninja type convinced us to change our now to a clan oriented name.”
Symbols 6/6
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:41 am
“And what is that?” “Edward Howard… my fathers name.” “Do you have a thing against your father?” “Doesn’t really matter. He’s been gone for years now.” “What about your mother?” asked Naomi as the room grew quiet and Ed stopped. “Oh, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to… same here though. Except she was trying to get away from me.” continued Naomi as Ed looked at her. “It’s cool. I’m sorry about your mother as well. But it’s best to speak about it. After all… it’s how I became who I am today.” replied Ed as the servants picked up Ed, Naomi, and Kazuki’s dishes. The three then walked outside as Naomi and Ed continued to talk. “You became who you are today from your mothers death?” “Somewhat… my brother and I wanted her back and so… we sacrificed a lot in order to do so. Eventually I realized I had to focus on Alphonse, my brother, instead of our belated mother.”
Knowledge (beginning) 1/6
“Was that your brother that kissed my hand?” “No, just a guy from the village. I haven’t really seen him around much. I think he just moved here from somewhere, I dunno. My brother is off somewhere, I forget where. He’s supposed to be training or something like that.” “Hmm, strange.” “That my brothers training?” “No dopey, what you said about that guy. Jeremiah was his name… if it’s actually his. I’m going to figure out who he really is and what he wants-” “Oh no you’re not. You’re going to finish training. I’m not going to sit around and wait for you to train when you feel good and ready. It’s now or never.” replied Ed standing up as did Naomi and Kazuki. The servants took their dishes as Ed walked toward to living room. Naomi quickly followed as Kazuki stretched then laid down where he was. When Naomi entered the room Ed took a book from one of his bookshelves.
Knowledge 2/6
Naomi walked up beside him as all the doors leading into the room shut. Naomi looked around frightened then at Ed. She kept a straight face although her fear was quite overwhelming. Ed smirked and tossed the book onto the floor. It opened and began to flicker through it’s pages before coming to a page with an odd alchemy circle on it. Naomi crouched to the ground and looked at the book a bit before taking a seat. As Ed sat down Naomi looked at the footer that lined every page. “Journal of Edward Elric” it read in medium bold letters. “Don’t ask. You already know the answer. This is my journal. I never really put sentimental things in here… that is if it didn’t hold crucial information. The first rule of alchemy is Equivalent Exchange.” “Equivalent Exchange?” “Yes. This basically means if you want something you have to give up something of equal value in return.” “Like an amount of chakra to perform a jutsu.” “I don’t know what you’re talking about but it seems about right.” replied Ed scratching his head as he continued.
Knowledge 3/6
After teaching Naomi the basics he laid on the floor and drifted into sleep. Meanwhile Naomi read through his notebook. “My Plan: My mother has been dead a while now and I know she’s never coming back but… I heard about this forbidden transmutation that just might bring my mom back. Al and I are going to do it tonight. So Al and I have to clean up for when she gets here. I’m so excited I-” “Speaking of no sentimental stuff. He wrote some sentimental stuff in here.” smiled Naomi flipping to the page. “The Biggest Mistake: I know I’m writing a few days late but this can’t be forgotten. That night Al and I tried to bring our mother back was a huge mistake. Although we sacrificed so much she didn’t come back. Just that weird homunculus thing. I lost both my right arm and left leg while Al lost his entire body. I guess that’s why it was forbidden… I guess that’s why everyone’s so mad at me… I guess that’s why I have to do this. I don’t really want to become one but I must to restore my body as well as Al’s back to normal. I have to become a State Alchemist-” as Naomi read she looked at Ed who slept contently and then flipped through the pages more.
Knowledge 4/6
Naomi read about everything that happened to Ed up to when he realized how to revive Al. Naomi then noticed the other pages were fading and she couldn’t see what became of Ed or any of the others. Suddenly Ed awoke and stretched a bit as Naomi stared at him. “What cha starin at? Never seen a guy stretch after waking up before?” asked Ed as Naomi stood then outstretched his journal to him. “Your not sad for me are you? Don’t be because I’m fine. My brothers fine and so are the others.” “But what happened? How did you bring Al back to life? And how did you get back here?” asked Naomi as Ed placed his index finger to Naomi’s mouth. “You talk too much and you ask too many questions too. Why not keep quiet a while?” “Please Ed tell me.” “No. That’s the end of it alright? If I hear anymore about it then your training ends here. And without my schooling you won’t be able to perform any alchemy.” replied Ed as Naomi pushed his hand from her face. She then stared at the wall behind them, trying not to look at him as he opened the doors and left.
Knowledge 5/6
Naomi noticed Ed hadn’t taken the book from her which made her ponder a bit. She then grew tired of being angry and exited the room. She approached Ed and looked at him apologetically but he ignored her. He merely continued to play with Kazuki in the dining room. “I’m really sorry Ed… how about that training?” “I dunno, I don’t really feel like it-” “What do you mean you don’t feel like it?!?” “The way I said it. I don’t feel like it!” “Well you’d bettered start to because I haven’t learned squat-” “What?!? You didn’t learn squat?!? Did you have wax in your ears and an eyelash in your eye the past day?!? The images in the hall, the books, the shape lesson, heck even your dress is made of alchemy circles! And you learned nothing?!?” “Easy easy! I was just saying I haven’t learned anything about the actual transmuting of objects. That’s what all that other stuff is for right?” “I guess. Fine, lets train.” replied Ed as he stood and Naomi rolled her eyes. “Tooooooooooouchy!” she thought as all three of them headed outside.
Knowledge (completion) 6/6
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 11:11 am
The three traveled a distance away from Ed’s mansion towards a small riverbank. There were little trees and areas of barren land. Naomi looked around as Ed stopped and she bumped into him. He then sighed and turned to her. “Transmutation is quite simple really. Just visualize something you want and make it appear. Unlike me you can only do so by placing your hands onto your transmutation circle.” “Unlike you?” “Yeah, I’m such a boy genius. I know how to transmute without using any circle.” “How’s that possible?” “I dunno, my father can do it too.” “That’s a clan technique then.” “Don’t talk that blasted ninja talk to me!” “You don’t have to yell. What’s with you and your deposition for ninja?” “They forced me to change my name. Something I never wished to do.” “And why is that?” “Because they took my mothers name from me and gave me my fathers.” replied Ed.
Transmutation (beginning) 1/6
Silence befell the two as Kazuki watched them contently. “Forget about it. All this sentimental craps gonna give me an ulcer.” concluded Ed pointing to a place on the ground. “Say you want to transmute a metal blade… could you make your transmutation circle there?” “Uh um… no. I need to place the circle on something metallic right?” “Right. What could you make from that over there?” “Something rock based?” “Like what?” “I dunno.” “A rock spike attack can be made. You could also transmute a rock wall. How about the water? Can you transmute something there?” “No-” “Wrong! You can’t place a transmutation circle on it but you could make one on ground and turn the water into ice.” “Then could I make a circle on there?” “Yeah but it will be hard to.” replied Ed as Naomi looked around a bit.
Transmutation 2/6
Naomi then pointed to a tree not too far from them. “I could transmute paper from that tree correct?” “Yup.” “How about a scroll.” “Depends really on how skilled you are.” “Skilled?” “You have to practice transmuting just like you practice ninja stuff. It’s the fundamental of any and everything.” “True. So what can I transmute now?” “I don’t really know. Based on your understanding a flower or two. Maybe a ninja blade… I can’t really tell.” “Who can?” “I-” started Ed when he heard commotion not too far away. He walked away from Naomi and Kazuki as they watched him. Suddenly Ed ran so Naomi picked up Kazuki and gave chase. “Ed… where are you going?!?” exclaimed Naomi chasing him but she began to trail behind. Before she knew it she was lost in the forest without a map or anything to show her the way out.
Transmutation 3/6
“I should have really marked my terrain… I sure do wish Ed would come back. It’s getting kind of late.” said Naomi holding Kazuki tighter and tighter before he barked and squirmed out of her arms. “Oh sorry Zuki. I didn’t mean to squash you.” continued Naomi as he panted then stopped then patted again and tilted his head left to right. “Hey pup… you think you could take me back? I know you remember where the house is. Come on then. Show me the way Kazuki!” yelled Naomi in a heroic tone but Kazuki just stared at her. Naomi then stared at him a while before he grew tired and trotted off a ways then laid on the ground and fell asleep. Naomi sighed heavily and slumped to the ground. “Maybe I can transmute a map or something… but where would I get the information? Do I really need information in order to transmute a map? Or maybe I need the remains of one and then I could transmute it back to normal.” pondered Naomi fiddling with a stick.
Transmutation 4/6
After pondering herself into a headache Naomi figured she’d wing it and try to retrace her steps. She picked up Kazuki and held him close to her then started off when she heard rustling in the brush behind her. She turned and began to scream when a boy covers her mouth. “Shhhh.” he said as he released Naomi and they looked at one another. “You don’t want to awaken the pup do you?” “Who are you?” “Why… I’m Jeremiah… don’t you remember?” “No you’re not. You’re the guy who helped me out before aren’t you? What do you want and why are you following me?” “Information.” “Information? For what?” “Answers shall soon follow. Just follow the mushrooms.” “Mushrooms? Hey wait what am I following mushrooms for?!? Eh, he’s gone already.” replied Naomi noticing a mushroom pop up out of the ground. “Nana nana nana nana.” it said as more popped up and said the same thing.
Transmutation 5/6
Naomi noticed they led off farther into the forest and grew uncertain that she could trust ‘Jeremiah’. She finally figured he helped her before so why wouldn’t he now and headed deeper into the forest. As she walked the mushrooms quieted and merely popped from the ground and swayed side to side. As Naomi grew closer to the talking she began to here she could see broken tree branches and transmuted weapons lying on the ground. She knew then that Ed must be talking with the person who snatched his attention from her to him… the one who he chased and fought… the one he spoke of often. She figured it had to be his father. Naomi finally reached her designation to see that she was correct. The two seemed tired and close to keeling over. Naomi watched as Ed collapsed and his father knelt down then fell over and they both lat motionless.
Transmutation (completion) 6/6
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 11:13 am
“Ow my head. Where the hell am I?” “What the?!? What are you doing in my house?!?” exclaimed Ed staring at his father. The two were in the guest room which had five beds and two bathrooms. Naomi entered from the side entrance noticing the two glaring at one another from either side of the room. “What a lovely father son relationship. Anyway… it’s time to bury the hatchet you two.” said Naomi as she put down a big bowl of water onto the table at the center of the room. The two didn’t even notice and continued to glare at one another. Naomi ignored them as Kazuki entered from the front. Naomi whistled and Kazuki ran to her. “What’s up you pup you? What do you want?” she asked but Kazuki seemed quite content and ignored her and watched Ed and his father argue.
Alchemy Training One (beginning) 1/3
“I don’t even know why Naomi brought you here Rox.” mumbled Ed as Naomi frowned. She restrained from replying and began to fiddle in a alchemy circle book she found on the floor. “Quick and easy alchemic circles… circle to transmute items thirty pounds or less.” she read as Ed continued to rave and rant. Naomi walked over to the dresser near the front entrance across the room. She seeped through all four small drawers before finding a pack of chalk. “Man these look old.” thought Naomi as smoke arose from the box. Naomi took out a piece of chalk then put it back into the drawer. She then drew a weird looking alchemy circle onto the table and pressed her hand against it. Suddenly static-like light emitted from her hands and a huge towel formed. “A dry towel? I wanted a rag.” moaned Naomi as the others stared at her.
Alchemy Training One 2/3
“H-h-how did you do that? I didn’t show you that.” blinked Ed as Rox stared at her astounded and intrigued. “Who are you?” “My names Naomi Yoshitaru of Konoha Leaf. I’m sorry but I read this book and wanted to try it out. “That there is my old cheat book. I use that nowadays to teach young up and coming alchemists to learn to transmute items quicker than most novice. You are quite remarkable to have picked that up so quickly.” “Well it’s all thanks to Ed. He taught me the basics which is a ton more difficult than transmuting I’d say.” “Yes but I’d love to train you. Are you free?” “Yes. Later on today.” “It’s settled. I’ll leave your abode Ed and train Naomi… deal?” “Whatever.” shrugged Ed as Rox sighed as did Naomi while Kazuki yipped happily.
Alchemy Training One (completion) 3/3
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XXX-[C]hidori[K]night-XXX
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 12:32 pm
This village is a rip off of Full Metal Alchemist..... crying I like that show crying
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 1:06 pm
XXX-[C]hidori[K]night-XXX This village is a rip off of Full Metal Alchemist..... crying I like that show crying ((lol yup yup. and i'm making one that is based on the movie 300 ^_^))
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:26 am
Naomi had trained with Rox quite a while after leaving Ed’s lovely abode. She had learned as much as Rox could teach her and returned to Ed’s house when she noticed a man standing at the door. She hadn’t been wearing her disguise because no one really cared that she was a missig-nin after she saved the village twice from Alliance officials. Naomi hid behind a tree not too far from the mansion entrance and attempted top listen in. She couldn’t hear anything and started towards the mansion when two military goons grabbed her, covering her mouth in the process. They dragged her off as Ed looked toward where she was and saw nothing. “See you next mission time then Roy.” “You too Edward.” replied Roy as he walked from the mansion porch and disappeared into the forest.
Armstrong Beautiful Earth Blast (beginning) 1/6
Naomi had blacked out a while back due to some substance one of the guards had on his militant gloves. Naomi tried to stand and look around the pitch black room she was in when something snagged and forced her back down. “Chains? Where am I?” said Naomi to herself as she heard a door open and light filled the room slightly from behind her. “You’re in prison. You little missing-nin you. You probably thought you weren’t going to get caught didn’t you? Thought no one knew your location or cared. Well then you were wrong. I the honorable sir, doctor, mr., militant man Armstrong brought you down with an elaborate plan might I say so myself.” “But I didn’t do anything.” “You do have the likeness of someone who hasn’t killed… with pleasure that is. But as a missing-nin there are many things that must be done in order to remain alive.” “Yes but I honestly haven’t killed anyone. I’ve only killed three people and I had no choice. I had no choice.”
Armstrong Beautiful Earth Blast 2/6
“It was when I first entered into the Chunin Exams…” started Naomi as Armstrong sat and diamonds gleamed around him. He seemed happy to hear a good story and remained contently in tuned. “I had to win the exams or risk being killed in the process.” “An innocent kill.” “Yes. I was in the final round and haven’t killed a soul when suddenly something came over me. This ninja was cowering on a street corner with tons of ninja coming after him. He whispered that he wanted to be rid of this place and so I did as he wished. He was quite happy when I did so. He even thanked me. He was glad.” “Oh I see. If I teach you a skill will you inform me about your other many kills? I am a man of my word I can assure you.” “Really? Thank you.” replied Naomi as Armstrong breathed in deep.
Armstrong Beautiful Earth Blast 3/6
“It’s called the Armstrong Beautiful Earth Blast. It enables an alchemist to punch earthen rock and propel them forward while transmuting them into spikes. It’s a more advanced rock spike attack really.” “How can I do that?” “You can have this glove so you can keep track of the symbol you need. You don’t even need to draw the circle with this. But might I add it is heavy and you may prefer to draw a circle instead.” replied Armstrong as he handed Naomi the glove, which was made of heavy metal, and she struggled to hold it. “I think I just might take up your offer on drawing the circle.” “Do keep it though. As a souvenir and a gift for you telling me those stories. Usually I have to be the one to tell stories around here.” smiled Armstrong as Naomi put down the glove and took a piece pf chalk from his pocket. She then traced the transmutation circle off the glove onto the ground over and over until she memorized it.
Armstrong Beautiful Earth Blast 4/6
While she practiced drawing it without the glove she continued her story. “ Another time I killed was not too long ago. I was fighting a puppet ninja. His name escapes me but he put up quite a fight. He was really easy to beat since he was made of wood and I had determined he could be destroyed with a fire attack. And so I did. After a few days I was told that that puppet was a human from the Akasun clan and that was why he was a puppet. I couldn’t believe my ear and it wasn’t the end of that either.” “What do you mean? What happened?!?” “Easy, easy… well unlike some he had family. He had a daughter as a matter of fact. Not too long after I killed him and found out what he was she came after me.”
Armstrong Beautiful Earth Blast 5/6
“She was quite the challenge and still is.” “Still is?” “Yes. She didn’t die. I think she was immortal… anywhat. The story goers like this. She came and talked some mess. We began to fight and I figured out she had a pendant that protected her against light attacks. I tricked her out of the pendant and destroyed her with the very move she was impervious to. She then regenerates and doesn’t know a thing. So I tell her her parents were acrobats and send her off to be free.” “Did she believe you?” “Yes she did.” replied Naomi nodding as Armstrong’s eyes gleamed with diamonds. “What a simply marvelous story. Mustang should hear them. I’ll be back momentarily.” replied Armstrong leaving the door wide open. Usually someone would run out happily but not Naomi. She stayed and waited intrigued by the possible occurring events.
Armstrong Beautiful Earth Blast (completion) 6/6
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:22 am
XXX-[C]hidori[K]night-XXX Komenusai XXX-[C]hidori[K]night-XXX This village is a rip off of Full Metal Alchemist..... crying I like that show crying ((lol yup yup. and i'm making one that is based on the movie 300 ^_^)) gay....Stop ripping stuff off....I understand the naruto stuff becuase its a naruto guild but ripping off FMA and a even lamer movie? come on...gonna make one based on barbie, and ghost rider next? that kinda lame man... I mean no offense but you should keep it naruto based with a few made up but ORIGINAL ideas man... [ Well, actually we already have Ghost Rider. xDD But barbie is a little out of the way. But we can do as we please, and so far, your the only member who has a problem with getting more techniques, more powers, and making the guild more fun.]
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:29 am
*~ I believe Sailor Moon could make for a good theme for weapons. And possibly even a village. Barbie would be good for a clan relative to the Akasun clan. Haha! We could use anything for village ideas. Hahaha! *chokes* Okeys, done. ~*
Before long Naomi grew bored with awaiting Armstrong to return and fiddled around her cell a bit. After inspecting it to her liking she began to trace the groves on the wall beside her with her middle and forefinger. Suddenly her fingers were blocked by a lose brick. Naomi, being her usual nosy self, messed with the brick until bits of cement began to flake off. She then took both her hands and grabbed the brick then pulled it outward. Slowly, the brick began to slip out as the bricks hard texture scraped the palm of her hand. Blood began to drip from them as she continued to pull. Finally the brick was lose and she tossed it aside. She then looked into the hole but saw nothing. She then stuck her hand inside and felt something. She quickly pulled it out and dusted it off.
Cutting Winds (beginning) 1/7
“A book?” wondered Naomi as she read the cover. ‘How to Learn to Cut Wind’ it read. Naomi flipped open the book to the first page. “Sure don’t waste time huh? I wonder who made the book anyway.” thought Naomi noticing that the first page was the first instruction page. She read and read before growing bored and closing it. She looked at the door, which Armstrong had left wide open, and wondered what had happened to him. She figured he must have had something better to do with his time and placed the book onto the floor beside her. She then looked over the chains that bound her and noticed they were old and raggedy. “Hmmm.” thought Naomi smirking at the chains.
Cutting Winds 2/7
Naomi seeped through her pockets and tried to find a piece of chalk but couldn’t. She figured before locking her up they took any and everything from her that she could use for her escape. She looked around the room and noticed the brick she had tossed aside. She reached over to get it when her chains snagged. She sighed and reached for it again but couldn’t get close enough. She looked around for something else to use but couldn’t and started to give up. She then thought about how boring it would be locked up and that she’d have to tell Armstrong more stories so she summed up her strength. She again reached for the brick and grabbed it. “Finally, now to just cut these chains.” she whispered doing so.
Cutting Winds 3/7
After a few hours she had nearly finished and wiped some sweat from her forehead. Suddenly she hears barking and assumes its Kazuki. She tucks the brick behind her and awaits the barking to grow louder. It grew louder and louder and louder until Naomi could see the dogs shadow. She held her breath, as the shadow grew large then disappeared. “Kazuki?!? Hear boy. I missed you bud.” says Naomi as Kazuki runs over to her and licks her. When she grabbed him though the chains yanked then stopped and sagged. “Huh? I’m free… I’m free, hurray!” yelled Naomi getting up. The chains were so heavy Naomi could hardly move but didn’t care. She and Kazuki ran from the cell and upstairs to the meeting hall. People yelled and fussed as Naomi flew past and headed outside. A loud horn sounded as Naomi and Kazuki began to run faster.
Cutting Winds 4/7
Naomi ran a while longer then collapsed to the ground. Kazuki stopped and ran to her as she pet him. “I’m fine boy. Don’t worry about me. Go on ahead to the docks and sneak me a ticket. I think it’s time for us to go.” “Oh, more than you know.” replied a voice as Naomi turned behind her. Kazuki ran off as a man approached Naomi. Naomi watched him a while before performing Leaf Rising Wind, a dire hit. But when Naomi strikes the man she hears a clink and flinches. He laughs as Naomi awkwardly recoils her leg and gets to her feet. She motioned fro him slowly, limping as she did so. “What is he?” wondered Naomi as the man laughed harder. He then ran towards Naomi and attempted to kick her. Naomi stammered out of his attack path as he smiles widely. He then swings his fist and strikes Naomi in the jaw. She flew a distance away and lay motionless. The man quickly got back into proper posture and looked at Naomi. Naomi struggled to stand as blood dripped from her face.
Cutting Winds 5/7
“Why are you standing? That blow should have knocked you unconscious. I- Oh I see. The Sleep Fighting Skill aye? You should have just stayed down because now you must die. I will kill you for what you did to my son!” yelled the man as Naomi stared at him. Wind slowly began to twirl the leaves around Naomi as blood continued to run from her busted cheek. “You numbskull, can’t you see he’s made of glass?!?” “I know that now. I’m about to end it.” “And how, per say, do you plan to accomplish that darn near impossible feet?” “With the Cutting Wind Skill I learned from reading that book. Sure I stopped before actually finishing it but I think I’ve got it-” “You idiot! What if something goes wrong?!? What if Cutting Wind backfires?!? You’ll be shredded into nothing! You’ll kill us both!” “I’m so sick of you downing me! If we die then we die! Get over yourself and stay out of my affairs! I don’t need you criticizing my every move!” yelled Naomi as she sat in the black abyss with beastly Naomi right behind her.
Cutting Winds 6/7
Back to the man and Naomi’s fight the man continues to approach, slowing down a bit, as the winds picked up. He looked around the area and noticed leaves tearing to shreds. After a few moments a few twigs began to shred, then, pebbles began to disintegrate, and then scratches could be seen on surrounding trees. Suddenly the trees began to shred into big pieces then shredded to bits. Small cuts could be seen on Naomi’s body but not deep enough to make her bleed. Naomi figured it was time she stopped the Cutting Winds before she was also shredded into pieces. As the winds died down the debris lingered in the air. Naomi stood still asleep and began to perform a few hand signs. Suddenly the man leaped into Naomi’s path and attempted to attack when he suddenly became engulfed in flames. His glassy armor began to melt away as the man turned towards is attacker.
Cutting Winds (completion) 7/7
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:31 am
“I knew you’d meddle into my affairs again Onimoxu… now I’ll have to finish you off.” “Try as you might but I’ve more tricks up my sleeve this time around, Roy Mustang.” replied Onimoxu as Roy held his hand high up in the air and then lowered it while extending it towards Onimoxu. “That guy there with his hand out must be the Roy Mustang from Ed’s journal.” “And?” “Must I spell it out? While he fights you can learn the full extent of his Gigantic Explosion. Then once they are both fatigued then you can rob Mustang of his precious glove. The one that allows him to make this attack from nothing.” “I dunno.” “I know, that’s why I’m telling you. If you want to learn one last trick before you leave then take the glove.” replied Beastly Naomi as the real Naomi ponders. Back to the fight, Roy had launched three Gigantic Explosion attacks and missed. Naomi sensed a change in the air around them and leapt into a tree. She nearly slipped out of the tree from the chains weight but balanced herself before she could fall.
Gigantic Explosion (beginning) 1/6
Naomi continued to watch, slowing Mustangs movements in her mind. She could see small reactions in the air. Sparks in a way but couldn’t figure out why. She figured that something had to be in the air in order to cause small sparks like that. She fumbled the thought around in her mind but couldn’t figure anything. She then remembered that he frequently used glass attacks. When Roy tried to kick him he generated a glass sword and tried to strike him with it. When Roy tried to run at him and perform Gigantic Explosion then Onimoxu would turn the ground under Roy into glass. He then made the glass ground burst outward and strike Roy numerous times. Naomi figured that Onimoxu was gathering glass into the air… but for what?
Gigantic Explosion 2/6
As Roy and Onimoxu fought Naomi began to focus in on Roy’s hand. He seemed to be right handed because he used his right hand often. On that hand was a glove with a small transmutation circle on it. Naomi had also noticed Roy scarcely used his left hand but for maybe a split second then places it into his pocket. Roy began to get the upper hand as Onimoxu smiled. As Roy charged towards him he turned the ground into glass. Roy then stopped so he wouldn’t slip on the glass as Onimoxu performed another set of hand signs. Roy balanced himself enough to begin charging again but couldn’t seem to move. Naomi watched as the glass on the ground wrapped around Roy’s legs and began to slink upward. Naomi then remembered when she saw Gaara performed Sand Coffin he did something similar to that but not so slowly. Roy frowned at Onimoxu as he laughed loudly.
Gigantic Explosion 3/6
The glass finally incased Roy as Onimoxu readied for a good rant. “I Onimoxu Kimrubi have succeeded in taking down one of the best in the military. And to think with these same skills I lost to you. Ha! What a riot. It’s still so hard to believe Roy. But not this… not this right here. I have done it and now I shall take down one of the most heard about shinobi in my village. Naomi Yoshitaru of Konoha. You will share his same fate when we battle. You won’t last as long as Roy due to your gullibility. I mean, it’s to be expected of a girl let alone a child your age.” laughed Onimoxu as Naomi frowned then stood up in the tree. Roy watched as Naomi leapt to the ground. She had been slowly healing herself in the tree and wasn’t quite finished but had the will to fight in her fingertips. She began to perform hand signs as Onimoxu ran towards her. He outstretched his hand as Naomi finished her hand signs. “Elemental Clone Jutsu: Clone Compounding!”
Gigantic Explosion 4/6
Naomi could feel her chakra diminishing as a glass clone grabbed Onimoxu’s foot. Naomi had lured him onto one of his own glass fields and entrapped him with a glass clone. Before Naomi could react Onimoxu performed a few hand signs. Her clone squeezed his legs hard but he didn’t care. Finally he finished his hand signs trapping Naomi within a shroud of mirrors. Naomi’s glass clone had been factor in and was also lost in the maze of mirrors. Naomi tried to find a way out but couldn’t. Her only hope was for her clone to absorb all of the mirrors. Instead the clone found Roy and combined with the glass that incased him. The clone then defused from Roy as he stood and pointed both his hands into the air.
Gigantic Explosion 5/6
Naomi watched as a bright red electric light illuminated the sky blinding Naomi a moment or two. Naomi’s eyes then refocused as Naomi noticed the glass maze had gone. Naomi saw Roy and ran over to him. “So you’re Naomi Yoshitaru… Edward told me a little about you. He says you’re trying to learn alchemy.” “Yes I am. I’m sorry I fled but I really couldn’t sit around that cell that long. I have far too much to do and-” “Okay, okay. I find it hard to believe I was nearly defeated so I will not capture you due to the shock. Make sure you leave Alchemy and don’t return until you’ve either got a clean slate, returned to be captured once again, or you’ve found that Onimoxu Kimrubi guy.” replied Roy turning around and walking off. Naomi started off when she noticed Roy had dropped his glove. She started to return it but remembered how he hinted this to Ed, or so it said in his journal. Naomi placed the glove into her ninja belt and then headed over to the docks.
Gigantic Explosion (completion) 6/6
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 3:04 pm
The long and laborious process had taken nearly 24 hours and the medical ninjas of the Alchemy village had made very little headway in releasing the first person to ever be a prisoner in this jail, he was strangely enough one of their own. The three medical nins could faintly discern the features of the frozen alchemist through the thousands upon thousands of pounds of ice keeping him frozen in time. They of course had all heard rumors about the insane Ninja alchemist who had wiped out every single missing nin on the continent a century previous, but none of the asembled had ever imagined
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that they might ever see this shadowy over lord, much less release the rougue ninja from his tomb of ice. "Did you here this guy once took out a whole batalan of our own when they were chasing him?" one nin remarked to the one in the middle. "No way!? A whole batallion? By himself? Impossible." the third medical specialist just shook his head "It's true my grandfather's third cousin was in that battalion, he got blown up so bad they couldn't barely even identify him. they say This ShiroKarasu not only destroyed the whole batallion, but he did it with just one hand!" now it was
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the first medical ninjas turn to sound surprised. "No way! That not even possible to do!" the middle looked thoughtful as he continued to remove the seals keeping the demon of a man bound. "But wait... how could your grandfather's third cousin have been there if they couldn't identify the body." the thid medical nin actually stopped for a moment pondering the mystery of it. "Well all I know is that he went to report in and his unit went on patrol and cousin Gesuke was never seen again." they all mulled over the facts as they continued to remove the paper seals that kept the ice
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frozen down here below the earth. "So if this guy is so dangerous.... Why in all that is good in this earth are we unfreezing him...." the middle nin querried the others. "I don't know, seems crazy to me to" replied the first. "There unfreezing for the simple fact that he is a hunter... the best.... he has a 0% survival rate once he's chosen his target. After he wiped out all teh missing nins a century ago there was no need for his services so after he continued to hunt powerful opponents the elders decided to lock him away. Now that there are more missing nins out there they feel that there
is enough to keep him occupied. They refer to him as project 0 in secret, because he was the first nin ever to be locked in this jail and now they're hoping he has survived being frozen for so long." The third nin nodded knowingly. "How the hell do you know all that!" shouted the other two clearly not believing a single word. "Well if I told you secrets like that I'd have to kill you," the third nin laughingly joked as his comrades grumbled and continue the process of nearin the completion of the first stage of releasing the horror buried deep under hidden Alchemy.
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"And the first stage is complete," The first medic nin sighed in relief removing the last extremely dangerous from the surface of the ice. "Are you guys ready for the next stage? the middle and leader of nins looked to his comrades. "Lets get this over and hope we don't killed for just doing our job," The three nins approached the wall of ice sliding their hands in the grooves created a century ago by the hands of some by now dead nins and activated the three huge transmutation circles keeping Shiro bound. Ever so slowly pound by pound the ice began to melt quickly swamping the medical nins feet and draining out through a drain in the ground.
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Half an hour later the ice level had barely moved down any, as they continued to focus their combined chakra the top of the man's long ponytail became visible. Another half an hour later they could just make out the legendary nins forehead poking out of the ice. After another hour they took a rest trying to recover their chakra, at this point Shiro's head had finally been freed from it's icy prison. One of the nins screamed pointing back toward the frozen man. When they had sat down Shiro's eyes had been closed, but now, now his visible eye was open and staring right at him.
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"He... he's.... he's awake!" one of them managed to stammer. Then the whole compound was rocked as the huge man managed to flex his frozen muscles shattering the ice encasing. The huge beast of a man stumbled forward taking support from the wall. The medical ninja only backed up scared of the mist shrouded nin. Shiro had no clothes on from the waist up and to say the least his muscles were a bit intimidating. "Shirokarasu-sama... you shouldn't be moving yet, you've been asleep for quite some time. " the medic nin was lifted off his feet by a powerful blow.
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"Body seems just fine to me," the man exited his breath still visible in the cold. Shiro knew just where to go to get out, he had helped build the complex that housed the missing nins. He ascended the stairs blood slowly returning to his limbs. The huge half closed nin made his way to exit room. "My things.... now..." he quietly requested of the bookish man running the property return service. "Name?" the man was obviously confused by the half dressed man. "Shirokarasu, Howard family." "Oh! I am sorry I didn't recognize you... wait are you sure that's really you? Wait what am I saying,
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it has to be the legendary alchemist ShiroKarasu! I shall retrieve your personal effects immediately sir." 5 minutes back in the world of the living and people were already calling him sir again. 5 minutes later the man returned carrying a large box. "Here you go sir, I have also been instructed to give you this," along with the box came a scroll detailing the terms of his release. He signed it not planning to keep the terms anyway. He tossed the scroll back to the old bald man and removed his personal effects. The top half of his uniform was first. Somehow Shiro already knew that his uniform
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was now a century out of date, but it didn't matter, it would do for now. Next came the gloves, except they weren't his... "New ones... thanks old man" the old man just bowed. Shiro slipped on the ignition gloves with ease. And lastly his rifle. "Another thanks old man... I thought I was going to have kill someone, because they let the termites get to my gun," Shiro was moving through the different checks on his rifle making sure everything was still in working order. 'Of course sir. your weapon is legend it is a treasure beyond compare... do you need anything else sir?" Shiro
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shook his head that insane grin splitting his face. "Nope thank you my good man... I'm off now, things to learn... people to kill you know, normal stuff. Shiro exited the prison and headed for the docks. Shiro took in the sights and smells of his village for the first time in a century. "Things never change here do they?" Shiro watched peoples awed stares as they looked upon a man who seemed to have stepped out of some sort of time portal. Shiro made his way instead of the docks to the headquarters to see who was the head alchemist in this day and age. "Better not be some weakling,"
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Shiro Knocked on the gates of the main headquarters only to have it fall forward. "Hmmmm.... I need to learn to regulate that..." suddenly a young alchemist nin stepped forward trying to halt his advance. "Halt! I don't know who you think you are, but no one just knocks our gate down!" from the other side of the gate came a similarly dressed guard who promptly knocked to younger nin to the ground. "Don't you know who that is? It's the famous killer ShiroKarasu!" he whispered to his comrade as they both kept their heads bent and allowed Shiro to pass. Finding that the head alchemist wasn't even here at the moment Shiro decided to really head to the docks now.
6/6
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 7:02 pm
Zakun arrived in the hidden alchemy looking at the area where all alchemists reside and noticed some circles along certain areas of the ground. "hmmm, i wonder" Zakun walking into the town said as he neared one of the circles and looked at it strangely wondering how it is made and why there were some lying along roads and other things. Zakun stared and stared curiously at them and then rubbed one of them with his thumb and found it to be made of chalk then saw a store and worked on finding some chalk to use bartering it from the salesman. as Zakun left the store he looked at the packs of chalk he bought, "hmm........ chalk.... circles and strange markings.... i should practice these it seems to be a popular thing to do.."
(1/6 Inner circle)
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