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Gaia Name: Willion
Character Name: Willion Jenta
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Race: human
Character Description: Blue hair, blue eyes, 5'9" tall, 167 lbs



Home Planet: naboo
Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: none
Character History: Willion was born on Naboo, but when he was around three he and his family were sent to tatooine, and became slaves for some shop owner then the imperial alliance came and killed his family and most people in the town. After the death of his family he started to learn how to fight he wanted revenge but then he told himself revenge isn't the way so he refused revenge only to seek justice. when he was 6 he was sent to coruscant and went to the jedi temple they accepted him with pride as they knew he would be a good jedi, and he was trained in the jedi way.

Alignment: Republic
Occupation: Jedi
Skills: willion is a pilot and he is skilled in electronic use

Weapons: single blue lightsaber, vibro sword
Ship: naboo starfighter
Personal Belongings: astromech droid

Roleplay Sample

As he sits there he listens to the sounds of nature, wondering, seeing if he can picture the sounds of nature with out looking. First he hears a hum, he pictures a bee which travels to the flower he hears the flower wisping as the bee moves it. Then footsteps come from the distance, he can picture by the sound he is limping one foot is heavier then the other. but who is the person he heres the person breathing heavy, so the person is tired he hears the person cursing in wispers of his breath. He is mad? Is he coming this way? The only way he could tell is by opening his eyes, he opens them. He sees that the person has his blade out. The person is his brother...

Gaia Name: Davie_Diamond
Character Name: Diamond
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Race: Human
Character Description: Diamond is over 6 feet tall with a muscular athletic build. He has piercing baby blue eyes. He also has long blue hair which he lets hang free and only wears in a ponytail or such during ceremonies. He wears the traditional robes of the Jedi Knight, brown cloak with white robes underneath.

Home Planet: Vjun
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: None that he knows of
Character History: Born on the planet of Vjun, Diamond was born into a very upper Vjunian family. His father was one of the major exporter and importer to Vjun, his mother was one of the main socialites and had a lot of influence on the planet.

Diamond was always different from other children as when he was 3 he threw a temper tantrum that nearly destroyed his house! It was then his parents realised that he was a child who was Force Sensitive and tried to exploit their son's powers. But like all children he wasn't so easily manipulated and accidentally killed his parents when, still unaware of his special powers, he used a Force Push that resulted in both his parents plunging to their death through the window of his nursery.

After this tragedy he was sent off planet by his parents' executor and soon found himself on some of the most remote planets in the galaxy. On these planets he soon learned how to survive and eventually how to control his powers.

On one of the trips to Coruscant he was encountered a Jedi who realised he was Force Sensitive and took him to be trained as a Jedi. The Jedi council allowed his training and he has never looked back since.

At the age of 14 he discovered his true identity and what he did when he was a baby, engulfed in his grief he forced himself to study harder than he had ever studied to become a better jedi.

Alignment: Republic
Occupation Jedi
Skills: Is a skilled negoiator and a skilled pilot.

Weapons: single bladed lightsaber with a green blade
Ship: A modified Jedi Starfighter with a hyperdrive unit, its not capable of going long distances in hyperspace but is capable of entering Hyperspace.
Personal Belongings: nothing except a necklace with his family's crest attached to it.

Roleplay Sample

This is a sample from an RP I was involved in

The sun beamed down over Dantooine and slowly brightened up the Jedi academy. The white walls of the academy gleamed in the sunlight so much that you could not focus on the walls.

Even with this beautiful sight outside, one room was still filled with darkness with speckiles of light pouring through the shutters. The room was rather large and filled with many beds in it, each bed filled with an occupant...this room was the Jedi apprentice living area, except this morning of the beds was empty.

The bed was that of Diamond, one of the most promising students of the Academy. This young jedi had a future ahead of him except he sometimes spent too much time getting involved in affairs that were none of his concern. But his favourite room in the entire academy was the Meditation Chamber....

The meditation chamber was unlike any other room in the Academy. It was a circular room with no windows and only artifical lighting. There were no light switches nor any means of switching on and off the lights, but there was a small force activated mechanism in the wall nearest the door. This was so that the Jedi would need to practice their force skills to activate the door.

In the middle of the room sat a lone Jedi. The jedi was very young and had shoulder length blue hair which seemed to shine in the room. His robes were very loose fitting and he sat there his eyes were closed almost if he was focusing on some object which did not exist within the room itself.

"The Force is my ally and what a powerful it is", the young jedi kept repeating inside to himself. These words seemed so far from his, almost as if he was saying it but couldn't believe it was true. This young Jedi was Diamond.


Not a bad roleplay character or sample. Might help to put font in a different color when it's dialogue. Otherwise not bad. Though you're only at the rank of initiate so you can't know "all forms of lightsaber combat" you don't even have a lightsaber yet. Otherwise... Accepted!~~~~ Merissa

Thanks for the tips and I have amended my profile

Gaia Name: Leon Zephon
Character Name: Leon
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Race:Human
Character Description: I am six four average build with blue eyes and brown hair. Wares basic clothing usually the color blue, with a belt and a long coat (brown). Face is clean shaven with a small scare on the right cheek also a robotic left arm.

Home Planet: Kyshack
Starting Planet: tantooine
Relations:none
Character History I was born on the Wooky home planet because my parent where trying to help with the growing slave trade. I lived there until I was five then a group of slavers attacked everyone was ether captured or killed except for me. It was lucky that a traveling Jedi was in the area he came and rescued me. He took me to a Jedi conclave where I was trained until I was 11. Then the same Jedi who saved me came back and took me as his padowon. Most Jedi did not trust me thought I was too angry to close to the dark side and at the age of sixteen I proved them right. Me and my master where sparing on the planet Korriban an there was a quake it caused my master to cut my arm off. He tried to help me but in a fit of rage I killed him the man who saved and trained me. After that the counsel took my light saber and banned me from the order. Then I became a bounty hunter this allowed me to elude the Jedi hunting that was started by the Imperial it also allowed me to become mor proficient with blasters and other weapons.

Alignment: Neutral.
Occupation: Bounty Hunter
Skills: piloting, electronics and a speaker of many languages

Weapons: Blaster pistol, light saber
Ship Talon ( a fighter similar at a Nabo star fighter)
Personal Belongings: A battle droid that often acts as ships pilot and a ring left by his mother.


It was as stormy night on Korriban I had just arrived after accepting a bounty. This is no ordinary bounty this particular bounty was a Jedi. I purchased a vibroblade after hearing that they could even hold up against light sabers I hope that what I herd is true. As soon as I arrived I sensed him he was close meaning he was more than likely looking for a ship to get off the planet. I began my search I found him negotiating with a Twi?lek who brushed him off, guess he didn?t have enough money. I could see the frustration on his face I could use this. I walk up to him with a smile on my face and I grab his hand.**Hay buddy couldn?t help over hearing your predicament! And I think I can help ya!**He look like he could rip my head of from frustration and anger but he couldn?t be picky.(jedi)** you can that would be great. I need transport to Tantooine.**(me) Wow! That?s just where I was heading. Now lets talk price how does 500 credits grab ya?**(jedi) I only have 400 **(me) hum I guess that?s good enough but first lets head over to the cantina I?m starving**(jedi) shore. We both leave the stare port the streets where farley empty and the rain was stopping. After about twenty minutes I turn into an ally it was empty except for some dumpsters.**(jedi) What?s going on? **(me) Well your wont be going to Tantooine unless its in a box.** I turn and pull out my vibroblade.**(jedi) A bounty hunter. He removes his light saber. To my self Time to see if this thing works. I run and come down with a vertical slash aimed at his head, he blocked and countered with a quick stab. I parried it causing him lose his footing. I seeked to use this opportunity to end the match but he used the force to send me flying I land on my back with a thud. The jedi regains his footing and runs towards me with his saber above his head. I look at the dumpster on the left wall I raise my hand and using the force send it to the right crashing into the jedi and pinning him into the wall. He dropped his saber and I quickly pull out my pistol with my other hand and I shot the Jedi between the eyes. I stand throw down the Vibroblade and pick up the light saber.** A bonus time to go collect my credits.** I walk out of the ally and return to my ship.

Ok... umm I don't know. you need to separate out that roleplay sample into something readable. Make the dialogue different colors, use more than one paragraph, etc etc. Now also, this is a hundred years since the empire hunted jedi's. You were not alive during that time. You need to fix your history as well
Do it again, but do it better. ~~~~ Merissa

i am sorry but that my best.. i only 11 fter all... so if u won't accept it i am sorry but i can't join your giuld....

I think you can; try taking a look at some other RP samples and extend it a bit. doesn't have to be perfect, you can always better while playing.
On the history, should be a bit more detailed... it's not original or anything, but I don't really care about that...c'mon, you can always try

Gaia Name: Teh Halo
Character Name: Niade Kiik
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Race: Twi'lek
Character Description: They did not lie when they said that Twi'lek females were beautiful. Some would even go as far to say they were made in the likeness of the Goddess herself. Regardless, it was difficult not to be attracted to the lone Twi'lek that danced gracefully across the stage. Her skin was a brilliant orange that reflected the lighting in the room well. With every turn of her body a glimpse could be caught of the purple freckles that lined her elegant curves. If imagined, she almost looked like a sun in a nearby star system, save the bright blue eyes that peaked out from beneath her thin brows. And how graceful she was! Even as she danced the headdress that adorned her brow and lekku refused to move. She was tall, at least 5'9", and even at this height she looked like a flower, blown in the wind. Indeed, they were right, and extra payment was due this one tonight.

Home Planet: Ryloth
Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: Mother and Father.
Character History: Niade's tale is not one that holds mysteries and excitement. The slave trade on Ryloth was thriving when her mother was sold into the hands of a greedy Corellian. Rycrit meat was not in high supply, so both of her parents agreed that the slave trade would be the only way to ensure their child could eat enough.

Niade lost her mother to slavery when she was only five. She was raised, alone, by her father on Ryloth and, as a result, failed to receive any quality time with her mother. She was left with a longing to know more about her maternal figure, a longing to see her again and ask her why.

At sixteen, the Twi'lek left Ryloth in an effort to track down her mother. Like most female Twi'leks, she was offered a job at a cantina in Mos Eisley and eagerly took it, excited about the opportunity to work. Deep down she hoped this job might be the opportunity she needed to find her mother. Yet, as each day passes, she grew more and more disappointed as the cantina grew rowdier and her hopes of finding her mother dwindled.

Alignment: Nuetral
Occupation: Cantina singer and dancer.
Skills: Mechanics, Healing, Piloting.

Weapons: Electrostaff, sporting blaster
Ship: None for now.
Personal Belongings: Bandages, ointments, various tools and some clothes.

Roleplay Sample: Before long Niade had completely unpacked her bag and arranged her room in a way that suited her. She sat on her bed, staring around the room in a daze. How boring this was. Perhaps I can do a bit of exploring on my own, she thought as she stood and exited the room.

She walked through the hallways, examining rooms whose doors remained open. Most of the rooms seemed much like hers. They were plain, yet comfortable. She was pleased that her quarters were like the others.

Before long she made her way into the Main Room. She had heard low voices and been attracted to them, but as she rounded the corner and saw the Sith Lord and a Knight, she felt frightened. Perhaps she had stumbled in on the wrong part of a conversation. She hoped that she would not be punished and quickly stepped back out of the room, her back pressed hard against the wall that opened up into the room.

I'm done now.

I love the application hun! You're going to be a great welcome here in the guild! ^_^ You're DEFINITELY Accepted! ~~~~ Merissa

Quick note: If you find anything not ok with my bio feel free to change it.

Gaia Name: The Traveler
Character Name: Odin
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Race: Human
Character Description: Like Avi

Home Planet: None
Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: None
Character History Parents where pirates and smugglers who gave birth to me on their ship. Ship was destroyed when I was 16, I along with a crewman escaped in an escape pod. He died in the crash and I had to fend for myself on the planet we landed on the time which I would later figure out to be Endor. I caught transport to Tatooine where I became one of the youngest bounty hunters in the galaxy. By the age of 20 I had already more then 1,000 succesfull bounty's under my belt.

Alignment: Neutral, so that it wont get in the way of job
Occupation: Bounty Hunter
Skills: Piloting, repairs, agility

Weapons: Blasters of many types
Ship: The Orion Star
Personal Belongings: 3 lighsabers from bounty's which are trophies. A custom R2 unit named R2-T6, nickname is Tooty. Trophies and medals from succesfull bounties

Roleplay Sample: I walks into the empty cantina, my footsteps make an echo. "Horin, are you hear?" I asks. A small man from behind the bar steps out, "Meh, what do you want Odin?" He asks. I pull out my blaster, "What...what are you...ARRGGHHH..." Silence. I step to the body, press a few buttons on my wrist communicator, and R2-T6 rolls in. Two large clamps rise from its sides and lift up the body. "Cmon Tooty, lets get out payment." I say as we walk out of the cantina.

Finally a bounty hunter, we can always use those... on the other hand, your rp sample is on the short side, but it doesn't look bad.
I'll accept you, but you could try to lenghten it in the future; I think that'll come by rp experience ((I started with one-liners too ^^))
little note: People do like spaces in longer rp posts, and different text color for quotation; these are just tips we give everyone to make rp go smooth smile
Ow yeah, 1000 kills is a lot... or did you do a lot of easy targets? Well, have fun.
~Mr. M

Gaia Name: Sapphire Halfdragon
Character Name: Rayn Quartoth
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Race: Tatooine Human
Character Description: Rayn is slightly shorter than the average human. His face is pale and his eyes are a deep green. His short blonde hair is the only thing that remains unchanged from his homeworld.

Home Planet: Tatooine
Starting Planet: Korriban
Relations: None known to him.
Character History Rayn was born into slavery in the hut space. His mother had been a native of tatooine. Rayn was abused and traded for most of his life. He was forced by most of his masters to learn to read and write and fight. So that he could operate their shops for them. On Rayn's tenth birthday, a Sith Lord had been on the ship in search of some merchandise. The hut in order to show off some of his more skilled warriors arranged a games. Rayn one by fighting with a vibroblade against a youngling Rodian. Rayn was traded to the Sith almost immediately. Before he left the ship Rayn had seen his mother be beaten and killed and battered for not cooperating with Gongon the Hut's orders. Rayn became so enrgaged that he focused all his might on killing the hut. Before he realized what as going on soldiers had attacked and killed the hut. Rayn thought it was a lucky break unaware that he had forced so many the soldiers into this behavior using the force at his young age.

Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Occupation Sith Assassain
Skills: Persuasion, Stealth, Sleight of Hand

Weapons: Sith Lightsaber (to be built) Vibro-Blade
Ship None yet
Personal Belongings: None

Roleplay Sample
Rayn walked out of the dark musty cargobay of the Cartillious. The sliding doors hissed apart and a group of droids stood up immediately noticing the sith. The pulled out their blasters and fired upon him, to no avail. Rayn was too skilled to be harmed by this and he reflected the blasts back killing the ship's crew. The politician in front of him looked terrified. Rayn moved his saber ever more closely to the man, he had been able to lunge at any moment, but he enjoyed the terror of others. It made his feel less. The politician was screaming, pleading with the sith. Phrases like "I'll do whatever you want!" And "Please don't kill me!" Bellowed from his lips. Rayn halted to give the man a false sense of security. Rayn instead sliced his head off without a second glance, then he turned away to flee the ship.


Ok, you need to be careful about spelling. You had several mispelled words in there. When you're roleplaying I recommend that you separate out things a bit better instead of having it as one big long paragraph. You get the rank of initiate. You're Accepted!~~~~ Merissa.

Gaia Name: Zimena
Character Name: Casia Equin
Gender: Female
Age: 32
Race: Human
Character Description: No one ever said intelligence cancels out looks or if they did, they never met Casia. Standing around 5'10 and weighing 132 lbs and covered in light tan skin, two bright green marbles of eyes, though usless, stand out from a thin face, slightly obscured by dark brown hair with bright red-orange streaks. Her ouffit, light brown robes with a black belt and boots, is traditional but with a relaxed feel, dressed up by a purple crystal hanging around her neck and usually tucked in her robes.

Home Planet: Bakura
Starting Planet: Corruscant
Relations: Scattered Jedi, some presumed dead.
Character History: Born on Bakura to low class aristocrats, Casia was blind since birth. Though her parents thought her disability would keep her from doing anything with her life, they were proved wrong when she was selected to be trained as a Jedi. By the time she was six, she had almost mastered a technique called Force Sight that was created by the Miraluka, allowing her to see. With her newfound sight, she improved in body and mind. A little after she turned nine, Casia was selected by a Master to become a Padawan. Exibiting skill with the Force and a hunger for knowledge, her path was diverted from Jedi Knight to Consular. A number of years passed and she finally became a Consular when she was 24. After reciving her rank, Casia left Corruscant for a while to travel around the universe, helping and teaching others. She came back to Corruscant eventually for a rest.

Alignment: Old Republic
Occupation Jedi Consular
Skills: Fluent in over 23 languages; minor healing; deep understanding of animal behaviors; Piloting

Weapons: Green Lightstaff and Stunsaber (Knocks victim out for 10 minutes; person wakes up with a planet-shattering headache)
Ship: TIE Fighter with Hyperdrive upgrade.
Personal Belongings: Weapons and ship, datapad, necklace with first lightsaber crystal hanging from it.

Roleplay Sample: (This sample is taken from my Jedi Academy Role Play. If you want more of my Rping, you can look there.)
Casia walked around a room full of Younglings sitting on the floor. They were all focused on blocks in front of them, trying to learn how to use the Force to move them. "Allow your energy to flow into the block. Be aware of how it looks and feels and become part of-" She was cut off in mid-sentance by a block hurtling her way. Reaching up, she grabbed it and gave it back to the child. Noticing how tense the little boy seemed, she stopped and knelt down beside him. "Why are you so tense?" She asked him quietly. "Be... Because I'm not sure it will move. I don't want to fail..." He said in barely more than a whisper. She smiled slightly and moved her hand, making the block float up and around in a circle. The Youngling watched her, wide-eyed. Placing it back in front of him, she gave him a little advice. "Don't worry about anything. Let the only things in this room be you and the block. See it moving in your mind, know how it looks and acts. Then try, but don't force it. Flow naturally." She got up and glanced back at him before resuming her walk around the room.


Sorry for missing this one! O_O I would suggest in your roleplaying that you space things out a bit. And make dialogue stand out by changing the color. Those are just suggestions however, not demands. Your applications is fine! You get the rank of initiate. Accepted!~~~~ Merissa