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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:16 pm
heart heart Definate pass heart heart
Come be my lover boy in Kusagakure, now!
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 11:29 pm
ivory_vamp heart heart Definate pass heart heart
Come be my lover boy in Kusagakure, now! chuu~
I'd love too! <3 that would make character #3 xD and no more after that till I finish them all up!
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:55 am
Truffles Unwrapped ivory_vamp heart heart Definate pass heart heart
Come be my lover boy in Kusagakure, now! chuu~
I'd love too! <3 that would make character #3 xD and no more after that till I finish them all up!sorry ivory, he joined my village, you can't take every promising student you know wink and truffles, i have to admit, that was pretty freaking awesome xd you don't see posts like that every day
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 7:11 am
Aww now your gonna go make me blush again guys! I always have to be careful with intro posts like that. I tend to go on and on and on...
I'm glad you liked it though! ^^ *flies off to work on the student character*
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 8:28 am
legaspernum Akira Rukouichi ruffled his hair and looked impatiently at the clock on the wall. He had been waiting for his sister Michiko for twenty minutes by now and still she had not appeared at the top of the stairs. "Michiko!" He called out, looking at the clock once again. When there was no answer he started up the stairs. "Michiko!!" A small reply came from a room two doors down from the stairs. It could barely be heard over the rock music blaring from the speakers. Akira reached the top of the stairs and made his way to a room two doors away from the stairs. He pushed open the door flinching when his sister's music became louder. "Oh for Kami's sake Michi. Turn down that music! Do you honestly need to have it so loud? If Okaa-san was home she would scold you."
Michi shrugged. "It doesn't really matter. Besides I'm almost ready to go."
Akira sighed, walking into the room and turning of Michi's cd player. "That's what you said twenty minutes ago and we still haven't left. Crecencio is waiting for us and you are making us late!"
"Okay okay! Geez Akira-neesan," She grabbed her purse off of her dresser and walked past Akira in a huff. "Let's go then. We're already late!"
Shaking his head, Akira watched his sister for a moment before he too left the room.
Okay so that was my sample. I used two characters that I had been roleplaying with before in a different guild. I hope this is okay.
I passed? =D
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 1:56 pm
yeah...ummm...not sure if this is the right place for this but, here goes! My character's name is Akai Ohisama by the way!
Akai woke up this morning with an odd feeling in his head. He tried to get up but he couldn't seem to manage it. By the time he had lost his usual morning confusion, he realized he was still tied to the his bedroom ceiling from his training the night before. "Well isn't this just wonderful..." he muttered to himself. He took out a kunai knife from his holster and cut himself down. He put the kunai knife back into his holster and proceeded downstairs. "I'm going out okay dad?" he yelled through out the house. His dad popped out from the bathroom " Okay then." Akai looked at his dad with a convicting look in his eyes, " You knew I was tied to my ceiling all night didn't you?" His dad laughed and replied, " Hey, you said you wanted to train hard!" Akai laughed too, " Yeah, well I've gotta go now...Bye!" He walked out the front door waving goodbye.
I hope that wasn't too long! I hope you approve!
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 5:31 pm
I'd like to skip the academy. Character Name: Ryushin Jei
Jei was in the forest, laying on the floor, staring up at the sky, twirling a Aian Nakkuru around on his right hand. He was thinking about how insignifficant humans are compared to the sky, when suddenly he heard a rustle in the leaves behind him. He sprung up onto his feet, slid his Nakkuru into his pocket, fliped out a kunai and threw it at the bush. Apparently he missed because he heard the "thud" of an object hitting a tree, and saw a squirrell jump out, shaking like a leaf on a warm summer's day when there's a little breeze.
Jei walked over to it and picked it up, which for some reason it let him. Jei examined it, then pulled off his headband (just tape as of now), and used it to wrap up the little squirrels body, making him warm. Jei then let the squirrel go, pulls out a Nakkuru and runs towards a tree, then up it to see how high he could get until he fell.
Bingo.
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:53 pm
-c4-cyberlink sorry ivory, he joined my village, you can't take every promising student you know wink I can try!
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 7:50 pm
Well, my first time. Please don't blame me for incorrect spellings. My keyboard is messed up.
My charater's name is Cahera Rorah.
Rorah had dozed off in the middle of his mothers speech about how he shouldn't train so much and live his life playing with his friends. His mother woke him up by screaming in his ear. He woke up startled not aware of anything that had happened in the last five minutes.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 6:26 am
True RedJay yeah...ummm...not sure if this is the right place for this but, here goes! My character's name is Akai Ohisama by the way! Akai woke up this morning with an odd feeling in his head. He tried to get up but he couldn't seem to manage it. By the time he had lost his usual morning confusion, he realized he was still tied to the his bedroom ceiling from his training the night before. "Well isn't this just wonderful..." he muttered to himself. He took out a kunai knife from his holster and cut himself down. He put the kunai knife back into his holster and proceeded downstairs. "I'm going out okay dad?" he yelled through out the house. His dad popped out from the bathroom " Okay then." Akai looked at his dad with a convicting look in his eyes, " You knew I was tied to my ceiling all night didn't you?" His dad laughed and replied, " Hey, you said you wanted to train hard!" Akai laughed too, " Yeah, well I've gotta go now...Bye!" He walked out the front door waving goodbye. I hope that wasn't too long! I hope you approve! Good use of NPCs ^-^. Pass!
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 6:32 am
Scythe 81 I'd like to skip the academy. Character Name: Hyuuga JeiJei is in the forest, laying on the floor, staring up at the sky, twirling a Aian Nakkuru around on his right hand. He is thinking about how insignifficant humans are compared to the sky, when suddenly he hears a rustle in the leaves behind him. He springs up onto his feet, slides his Nakkuru into his pocket, flips out a kunai and throws it at the bush. Apparently he missed because he heard the "thud" of an object hitting a tree, and saw a squirrell jump out, shaking like a leaf on a warm summer's day when there's a little breeze.
Jei walks over to it and picks it up, which for some reason it let him. Jei examined it, then pulled off his headband (just tape as of now), and uses it to wrap up the little squirrels body, making him warm. Jei then lets him go, pulls out a Nakkuru and runs towards a tree, then up it to see how high he could get until he fell. When roleplaying in third person you should use was instead of is. So, Jei was in the forest, laying on the floor, staring up at the sky, twirling...etc.
I know this may bum you out, but Hyuuga characters are only allowed in Konoha, which is closed right now. >_< If you just want to edit the entry or submit a new one, either is cool. You don't have to change your character right now.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 6:33 am
neji_aka_itachi Well, my first time. Please don't blame me for incorrect spellings. My keyboard is messed up. My charater's name is Cahera Rorah. Rorah had dozed off in the middle of his mothers speech about how he shouldn't train so much and live his life playing with his friends. His mother woke him up by screaming in his ear. He woke up startled not aware of anything that had happened in the last five minutes... Give me a little more with some dialouge.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 11:15 am
ivory_vamp Scythe 81 I'd like to skip the academy. Character Name: Hyuuga JeiJei is in the forest, laying on the floor, staring up at the sky, twirling a Aian Nakkuru around on his right hand. He is thinking about how insignifficant humans are compared to the sky, when suddenly he hears a rustle in the leaves behind him. He springs up onto his feet, slides his Nakkuru into his pocket, flips out a kunai and throws it at the bush. Apparently he missed because he heard the "thud" of an object hitting a tree, and saw a squirrell jump out, shaking like a leaf on a warm summer's day when there's a little breeze.
Jei walks over to it and picks it up, which for some reason it let him. Jei examined it, then pulled off his headband (just tape as of now), and uses it to wrap up the little squirrels body, making him warm. Jei then lets him go, pulls out a Nakkuru and runs towards a tree, then up it to see how high he could get until he fell. When roleplaying in third person you should use was instead of is. So, Jei was in the forest, laying on the floor, staring up at the sky, twirling...etc.
I know this may bum you out, but Hyuuga characters are only allowed in Konoha, which is closed right now. >_< If you just want to edit the entry or submit a new one, either is cool. You don't have to change your character right now.Edited to perfection.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 1:17 pm
sweatdrop You didn't change it at all. Oh, wait! Are you saying that you WILL eventually edit it? Ahh...I see, I see....
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