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Kill Nicholas?
Yes
33%
 33%  [ 3 ]
No
66%
 66%  [ 6 ]
Total Votes : 9


Nikorasu-Kun

PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 7:04 am


Hoho, doodles of Nick mid way through a few serums, just for fun.

Linky

twisted
PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 3:54 pm


This is really somewhere between critique and general feedback, there are a few things about your character i was interested or confused by:

Fear of "dying alone' - Well, i think this is an interesting fear to just casually state the way you did. It's a fear that you can expect all people have to some extent, is it necessary to list amongst his other fears/phobias of bugs and things? Is this linked to his depression somehow? Some event in his life? How is this related to his tendency to keep to himself?
I just wondered how much particular thought you put into, since it sort of jumped out at me as something that should carry more signifigance if it's going to be noted like that.

His depression - which was mentioned briefly in his personality blurb. I tend to think of depression as a serious clinical condition, and less of personality trait. There's a difference in my mind between having depression as a condition, and simply feeling depressed form time to time (everyone has their downs). I would advise that you to give this one some thought, since depression in characters border on a cliche. I mean, Depression seems to pop up in an awful lot of character bios so i don't know if people just think of it as a convenient plot device or what...but maybe you should think about how necessary it is for you to have it, or what makes such an important part of his character anyway.

Nationality - Why Gibraltar and what influence does this culture/identity have on his personality or upbringing? If it doesn't have an impact at all, why is it there?

Nick seems like a nice character, but in terms of the island, i'm not sure i have the impression that he will bring anything particularly new or unique.

Your character Cole on the other hand, strikes me as having a lot potential. It's a simple, but strong concept. So why not go with that.

Page Boy


Nikorasu-Kun

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 7:37 am


The dying alone fear mainly stems from that fact he has thus far in his life, had no love life whatsoever, and being at boarding school for a lot of his life. Too bad he's just introverted and socialy inept.

I suppose the depressed part of his personalty section was more the wording ^^;, I don't mean to say that he's always depressed, or regularly feels that way. That part was meant to refer to just how he gets when he gets depressed.

Okay, there i not reason for his nationality, only simply that I am Gibraltian myself, and it seemed a interesting alternative amongst other English speaking countries.

Ironic that after questing for so long, I end up leaning towards a completely different character. Admittedly he was a idea from the start I neglected, it was only til recently I randomly wrote him partly up.Perhaps I should work on him some more. >.>

So as not to unfair to other fictional persons, here such much needed Cole arts:

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(That's a gap been his two front teeth by the way)
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 3:48 am


Quest-aversary! =O This doesn't really proof anything, 'cept that I'm stubborn. whee

Nikorasu-Kun


Bobbovski

PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 12:40 am


Nikorasu-Kun
Quest-aversary! =O This doesn't really proof anything, 'cept that I'm stubborn. whee


Coingrats xd Going to have my own one year Quest-aversary in two days 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 3:13 am


Alrightly then gents. Niko's interest in Mr.Heathwood has been waxing and waning seeing as he's over a year old now. So, anyone feel I should kill him off and replace him with my other concept Cole?

Nikorasu-Kun


Bobbovski

PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:39 am


I think you should decide this for yourself, but if I were you I probably would have kept your old character. ninja
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 5:54 am


R.I.P Nicholas Heathwood.

Nicholas Heathwood


Physik

PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:24 am


Hello! smile
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