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Hinote Tosatsu
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Eloquent Lunatic

PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2014 11:59 am


BluewolfofMibu
Z
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Character Name: Z
Nicknames: Z
Age: 17
Birth Date: Unknown
Gender: Male
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Blue
Height: 5'8
Body Type: Athletic
Distinguishing Features: N/A
Personality: Z is a cold blooded assassin through and through. He will put the mission at hand first and refuses to work with others. His loner demeanor comes from the years of training that he underwent as a hunter nin. Those who meet Z for the first time see him as a sadistic and ruthless assassin, an evil and tyrannical leader, and practically suicidal, which for the most part he is. However, he has a strong and burning desire to protect his village by any means necessary. This includes ensuring that the new generation is stronger than the old. If they aren't strong, he disposes of them.

Background

His first memories were that of waking up to complete darkness. Codenamed "Z", Z doesn't remember his real name, his family, or even how old he truly is. When he was barely able to walk, Z was taken to be part of a very special and elite program to train hunter ninjas to be the perfect spy. However, Z showed more of an affinity to Genjutsu and therefore was used as a support for the hunter nins to incapacitate enemies and retrieve information. Thus, Z became an interrogator for the hunter nins and probably the most effective due to the potency of his ability to enter a person's mind through Genjutsu.

Finally surfacing for the first time out of the shadows, Z has been given the rank of Chuunin and is now tasked with ensuring that the new genin of the village are raised to be strong. His other objective is to weed out any weakness, either by training them or exterminating them.


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Village: Hidden Shinobi Village
Organization: Hunter Nin
Rank: C-Rank
Titles: n/A
Insignia Style: N/A
Insignia Location: N/A

Chakra Color: Midnight Blue
Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Points: 40
Chakra Elements: Suiton/Katon

Chakra Control:

Improved Chakra Control: Genjutsu require a fine control of chakra to infect a target's mind without being immediately detected. These specialists, focus on that control.
(-1 Chakra point cost to all genjutsu. Bonus stacks with all other control bonuses.)

Chakra Control: These ninja have focused their training on chakra control, fine tuning their control such that they waste less chakra when using any jutsu.
[-1 chakra point cost for Genin techniques, -2 for Chuunin, -3 for Jounin, and -5 for S Rank]

:These ninja have focused their training on chakra control, fine tuning their control such that they waste less chakra when using any jutsu.
[-1 chakra point cost for Genin techniques, -2 for Chuunin, -3 for Jounin, and -5 for S Rank]

: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently.
[+1 Reaction Speed]

Weaker Ninjutsu: This shinobi has spent significantly less time than average on their ninjutsu skills, and as a result has become much weaker in their usage than the average shinobi.
[-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]

Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.

Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/A
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/A
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: N/A
Transplant Stage: N/A


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Shinobi Profession: Genjutsu Specialist
Profession Base Benefits
: Because of their specialization, the genjutsu specialists genjutsu are treated as one rank higher in regards to potency and the ability to break them. They also have the ability to learn more complicated genjutsu than the average shinobi.
(+1 Rank to Genjutsu power, can learn from Genjutsu Specialist restricted list.)

: Genjutsu specialists have a higher understanding of how genjutsu work allowing them to learn higher level Genjutsu than other shinobi.
(Can learn one additional Genjutsu up to three ranks above the user.)

Rank Benefits

Genin
: Genjutsu require a fine control of chakra to infect a target's mind without being immediately detected. These specialists, focus on that control.
(-1 Chakra point cost to all genjutsu. Bonus stacks with all other control bonuses.)

Chuunin
: The genjutsu specialist has discovered how enhance the effects of their genjutsu, particularly against multiple targets. They can now use Genjutsu on multiple opponents at once. Does not apply to S rank or Mirage type Genjutsu.
(At regular chakra cost the genjutsu can affect up to two people, at 1.5x regular chakra cost for the genjutsu this can be increased to a maximum of 4 people.)

Jounin
: (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)


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Ninjutsu

Universal
    E Rank



  • D Rank



  • First Element: (Suiton)
    E Rank


  • D Rank



Genjutsu

Universal
E Rank
  • Killing Intent (Autorank Jutsu)
  • Ikamono Chishio (Fake blood) (Autorank Jutsu)
  • Bunshin (Clone) (Autorank Jutsu)
  • Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) (Autorank Jutsu)

    D Rank
  • Kai (Release) (Autorank Jutsu)
  • Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu (Sly Fellow Mind Skill) (Autorank Jutsu)
  • Magen: Kokuni Arazu No Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique) (Autorank Jutsu)

    C Rank
  • Magen: Narakumi No Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Vision of Hell Technique) (Autorank Jutsu)
  • Magai Bunshin no (Imitation Clone) (Autorank Jutsu)
  • Nemuri (Sleep) (Autorank Jutsu)



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    (Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Stances:
    E Rank

  • D Rank


  • Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Mission Statement

    Number of Missions Completed: [4]

    Number of Mission Points Accumulated: [18]

    Mission Record

    E-rank - [0]



  • D-rank - [6]
  • Watching from the Shadows (Autorank Mission)
  • Deliver the Message (Autorank Mission)

    C-rank - [12]
  • Death of a Traitor (Autorank Mission)
  • Protect the Village Gates (Autorank Mission)

    B-rank - [0]



  • A-rank - [0]



  • S-rank - [0]



  • Teaching Statement

    Number of Teaching Credits Accumulated: [0]
    MP From Teaching Credits - [0]

    Teaching Log

  • [] [] {Include Links}
  • [-] [-]

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    Inventory
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      Money
      Gold: 2
      Silver: 24
      Copper: 0

      Kunai: [4] - [Right Thigh Holster]

      Shuriken: [8] - [Right Thigh Holster]

      Senbon: [20] - [Hip Pouch]

      Makibishi [10] - [Hip Pouch]

      Smoke Bomb [1] - [Bomb Holster]

      Kunai Holster - [Right Thigh]
    • Kunai: [4]

      Shuriken Holser - [Right Thigh]
    • Shuriken: [8]

      Bomb Holster - [Left Thigh]
    • Smoke Bomb: [1]

      Hip Holser - [Back Hip]
    • Senbon: [20]
    • Makibishi: [10]
    • Bandages: [10 feet]



  • Starting from the top, please include your birth date. It doesn't matter if you or anyone else knows it. If not, you can just mark it as such so nobody metas information even you don't know. That information is there mainly so that you can age your character appropriately over time.

    I'm gonna go ahead and assume the secret hunter nin organization wasn't affiliated with the village, cause we don't have one of those that I know of, and if we did, it hasn't been around since he was a kid. Not an issue, just a note. (Please don't kill any students. Unless they really really suck.)

    All characters besides council members are required to have an insignia. The insignia is basically just the village symbol, and can come in whatever form you like. It doesn't even have to be clearly visible, just somewhere on you, even if it's in your pocket or something.

    Suiton/Katon is an odd mix. XD

    You should probably swap out that protect the village gates mission for something else. One, the village has never really been attacked yet, which leaves you acting as a gate guard, which leads to two, most of the guards are there on punishment detail for wrongs committed in the past. And most are there permanently.

    And finally on to Inventory. Having found the various things that give you money, I have ascertained that you should be starting with a total of 2,58,00. This is your autorank funds, plus starting bonus, plus the bonus pay for MP that I completely forgot existed.

    As with Luo, items in containers only need to be listed under the container. The space above containers is reserved for items attached to your body or in your pockets.

    Money is considered an inventory item now, so you'll need to mark it's location in your inventory. I reccommend the use of a Money Pouch item.

    Kunai holsters can only hold one kunai at a time. You'll need to move your others to another container.

    Chuunin Autorank - 1g 80S [1,80,00]
    Starter Bonus - 60s [60,00]
    Bonus Pay - 18s [18,00]
    Total Starter - 2g 58s [2,58,00]

    4 E Rank Jutsu - 32s [32,00]
    3 D Rank Jutsu - 60s [60,00]
    3 C Rank Jutsu - 1g 50s [1,50,00]

    1 Kunai Holster - 10c [10]
    1 Shuriken Holster - 10c [10]
    1 Bomb Holster - 5c [5]
    1 Hip Pouch - 1s [1,00]
    4 Kunai - 2s [2,00]
    8 Shuriken - 2s [2,00]
    1 Smoke Bomb - 5s [5,00]
    20 Senbon - 2s [2,00]
    10 Makibishi - 50c [50]
    10 Bandages - 2s 50c [2,50]

    Total - 2g 57s 25c [2,57,25]
    Remainder - 75c [75]

    As you can see, you have very little left to work with, so you'll need to fiddle with it a tiny bit if you want some spending cash later before you get to missions.
    PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2014 12:59 pm


    Hinote Tosatsu
    Starting from the top, please include your birth date. It doesn't matter if you or anyone else knows it. If not, you can just mark it as such so nobody metas information even you don't know. That information is there mainly so that you can age your character appropriately over time.

    I'm gonna go ahead and assume the secret hunter nin organization wasn't affiliated with the village, cause we don't have one of those that I know of, and if we did, it hasn't been around since he was a kid. Not an issue, just a note. (Please don't kill any students. Unless they really really suck.)

    All characters besides council members are required to have an insignia. The insignia is basically just the village symbol, and can come in whatever form you like. It doesn't even have to be clearly visible, just somewhere on you, even if it's in your pocket or something.

    Suiton/Katon is an odd mix. XD

    You should probably swap out that protect the village gates mission for something else. One, the village has never really been attacked yet, which leaves you acting as a gate guard, which leads to two, most of the guards are there on punishment detail for wrongs committed in the past. And most are there permanently.

    And finally on to Inventory. Having found the various things that give you money, I have ascertained that you should be starting with a total of 2,58,00. This is your autorank funds, plus starting bonus, plus the bonus pay for MP that I completely forgot existed.

    As with Luo, items in containers only need to be listed under the container. The space above containers is reserved for items attached to your body or in your pockets.

    Money is considered an inventory item now, so you'll need to mark it's location in your inventory. I reccommend the use of a Money Pouch item.

    Kunai holsters can only hold one kunai at a time. You'll need to move your others to another container.

    Chuunin Autorank - 1g 80S [1,80,00]
    Starter Bonus - 60s [60,00]
    Bonus Pay - 18s [18,00]
    Total Starter - 2g 58s [2,58,00]

    4 E Rank Jutsu - 32s [32,00]
    3 D Rank Jutsu - 60s [60,00]
    3 C Rank Jutsu - 1g 50s [1,50,00]

    1 Kunai Holster - 10c [10]
    1 Shuriken Holster - 10c [10]
    1 Bomb Holster - 5c [5]
    1 Hip Pouch - 1s [1,00]
    4 Kunai - 2s [2,00]
    8 Shuriken - 2s [2,00]
    1 Smoke Bomb - 5s [5,00]
    20 Senbon - 2s [2,00]
    10 Makibishi - 50c [50]
    10 Bandages - 2s 50c [2,50]

    Total - 2g 57s 25c [2,57,25]
    Remainder - 75c [75]

    As you can see, you have very little left to work with, so you'll need to fiddle with it a tiny bit if you want some spending cash later before you get to missions.


    Birthday is included

    Edited background insinuating that the hunter nin was an outside organization and after it disbanded Z joined the village. On a side note...I won't kill them I promise...maybe break their minds...but not kills them blaugh

    I know of a lot of good genjutsus to make with Suiton and Katon

    Switched out the mission to a "Slaver's demise"

    Deleted the items and put them in the containers.

    I believe I still have some space in the Hip pouch. I placed my money there. If that's wrong please let me know.

    Deleted the kunai holsters and the kunais, won't be using them for now.

    I should have the right amount of money left now mrgreen

    BluewolfofMibu


    Hinote Tosatsu
    Vice Captain

    Eloquent Lunatic

    PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2014 1:15 pm


    Since you mentioned it, I should note that genjutsu no longer require elements at all. That said, using genjutsu in tandem with actual jutsu is still an amazing strategy.

    Slaver's Demise sounds so much cooler than Slaver's End. You should go with that one.

    You've used six of nine slots in your hip pouch, so yeah, you still have some space.

    You misspelled Holster a couple times, and labeled your pouch as a holster as well. Should fix that, just because.

    You do indeed have correct math now. Well done. XD

    Since the only errors left are aesthetic and can be fixed later,

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    Please make a post in the banking thread as soon as you've posted your profile, just so we can track your starting point.  
    PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 9:23 am


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    Character Name: Tomoki Haru
    Nicknames: N/a
    Age: 18
    Birth Date: 06/27
    Gender: Male
    Hair Color: Black
    Eye Color: Maroon
    Height: 5' 7''
    Body Type: Toned
    Distinguishing Features: He wears a samurai's shoulder armor on his left shoulder.
    Personality:
    Tomoki is fairly normal, but extremely competitive. If someone mentions competition, he goes for it without holding back anything. He is often bored with long drawn out conversations if he can tell someone wants something and is dancing around the subject.

    Background
    Tomoki was orphaned during a terrible storm on the eastern coast of his home country, and taken in by an old master and his pupil. Tomoki was treated as a second pupil, and raised by the master. Tomoki's skills quickly surpassed the first pupil's, though lack of knowledge kept the first pupil at a higher level than Tomoki himself was able to reach.

    After their master's death, The first pupil led Tomoki to the village and told Tomoki to join the village. Tomoki begged the first pupil to stay. The first pupil agreed, on the condition that as soon as Tomoki was strong enough to be on his own he would leave. Tomoki agreed, even though it would hurt to see the person who had basically become his brother leave the village.

    Family Information
    Name: Gagot
    Gender: Male
    Relation: Friend
    Species: N/a
    Description: Gadot wears glasses, and wears traditional clothes from their home country. He is often reading when he isn't practicing his martial arts.
    {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:

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    Village: ???
    Organization: N/a
    Rank: Academy
    Titles: N/a
    Insignia Style: Etching
    Insignia Location: Shoulder Guard

    Chakra Color: Maroon
    Chakra Level: Low
    Chakra Points: 15
    Chakra Elements: Katon
    Extra Chakra Elements: N/a
    Chakra Control: N/a

    Strength: [+1 Rank Strength]

    Speed: [+1 Rank Speed]

    Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.

    Weaker Ninjutsu: [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]

    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/a
    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/a

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: N/a
    Transplant Stage: N/a


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    Shinobi Profession: Taijutsu Specialist
    Profession Base Benefits
    Increased Number of Taijutsu Styles: (Can learn one extra Taijustu style per rank. Students can only learn 1 style, Genin can learn two, Chuunin 3 and finally being able to learn 4 styles as a Jounin. Extra styles cannot be used to learn Weapon Styles)

    Strong Bodied: (Physical strength of the Taijutsu Specialist is increased by half a rank [+.5 boost])

    Muscle Memory: (Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Taijutsu style.)
    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    :

    Chuunin
    : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)

    Jounin
    : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)


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    Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank



    • D Rank



    • Katon:
      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank



  • D Rank



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    (Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Stances:
    E Rank

  • D Rank


  • Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Mission Statement

    Number of Missions Completed: []

    Number of Mission Points Accumulated: []

    Mission Record

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank MP in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Teaching Statement

    Number of Teaching Credits Accumulated: [-]
    MP From Teaching Credits - [-]

    Teaching Log

  • [] [] {Include Links}
  • [-] [-]

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      Money
      Gold: 00
      Silver: 39
      Copper: 95

      Knife: [1] - [Right Shoulder in a sheath strapped to his arm]

      Samurai Shoulder Armor: [1] - [Left shoulder, Strapped to his arm]

      Money Pouch - [Right Pocket]
    • Silver Coins: [19]
    • Item Name: [95]
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    TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

    Dangerous Loiterer


    Hinote Tosatsu
    Vice Captain

    Eloquent Lunatic

    PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 10:25 am


    TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
    Tomoki HaruUser Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

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    Character Name: Tomoki Haru
    Nicknames: N/a
    Age: 18
    Birth Date: 06/27
    Gender: Male
    Hair Color: Black
    Eye Color: Maroon
    Height: 5' 7''
    Body Type: Toned
    Distinguishing Features: He wears a samurai's shoulder armor on his left shoulder.
    Personality:
    Tomoki is fairly normal, but extremely competitive. If someone mentions competition, he goes for it without holding back anything. He is often bored with long drawn out conversations if he can tell someone wants something and is dancing around the subject.

    Background
    Tomoki was orphaned during a terrible storm on the eastern coast of his home country, and taken in by an old master and his pupil. Tomoki was treated as a second pupil, and raised by the master. Tomoki's skills quickly surpassed the first pupil's, though lack of knowledge kept the first pupil at a higher level than Tomoki himself was able to reach.

    After their master's death, The first pupil led Tomoki to the village and told Tomoki to join the village. Tomoki begged the first pupil to stay, and teach him the master's style, since before the master died he finished teaching the first pupil. The first pupil agreed, on the condition that as soon as Tomoki learned the style of their master, that he would leave. Tomoki agreed, even though it would hurt to see the person who had basically become his brother leave the village.

    Family Information
    Name: Gagot
    Gender: Male
    Relation: Friend
    Species: N/a
    Description: Gadot wears glasses, and wears traditional clothes from their home country. He is often reading when he isn't practicing his martial arts.
    {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:

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    Village: ???
    Organization: N/a
    Rank: Academy
    Titles: N/a
    Insignia Style: Stitching
    Insignia Location: Under shoulder guard

    Chakra Color: Maroon
    Chakra Level: Low
    Chakra Points: 15
    Chakra Elements: Katon
    Extra Chakra Elements: N/a
    Chakra Control: N/a

    Strength: [+1 Rank Strength]

    Speed: [+1 Rank Speed]

    Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.

    Weaker Ninjutsu: [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]

    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/a
    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/a

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: N/a
    Transplant Stage: N/a


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    Shinobi Profession: Taijutsu Specialist
    Profession Base Benefits
    Increased Number of Taijutsu Styles: (Can learn one extra Taijustu style per rank. Students can only learn 1 style, Genin can learn two, Chuunin 3 and finally being able to learn 4 styles as a Jounin. Extra styles cannot be used to learn Weapon Styles)

    Strong Bodied: (Physical strength of the Taijutsu Specialist is increased by half a rank [+.5 boost])

    Muscle Memory: (Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Taijutsu style.)
    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    :

    Chuunin
    : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)

    Jounin
    : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)


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    Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank



    • D Rank



    • Katon:
      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank



  • D Rank



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    (Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Stances:
    E Rank

  • D Rank


  • Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Mission Statement

    Number of Missions Completed: []

    Number of Mission Points Accumulated: []

    Mission Record

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank MP in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Teaching Statement

    Number of Teaching Credits Accumulated: [-]
    MP From Teaching Credits - [-]

    Teaching Log

  • [] [] {Include Links}
  • [-] [-]

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      Money
      Gold: 00
      Silver: 39
      Copper: 95

      Knife: [1] - [Left Shoulder]

      Money Pouch - [Right Hip]
    • Silver Coins: [39]
    • Item Name: [95]


  • The armor is going to need to be made as a tech and paid for if you want it. Personally I'd recommend making a full set of vaguely defined armor as universal and then make yours a slightly customized version of that, as we already allow with most stuff on the tech list.

    As previously mentioned, you can't have a built in NPC teacher as you've described in your background and Family NPCs.

    Normally I don't worry overly much about the insignia so long as people have one, but, it really should be somewhere or something that can be easily produced on request, if not visible at all time. Under your strapped on shoulder pad doesn't really qualify for either of those things. Especially when your inventory implies you have a knife in the shoulder pad as well, which would lead guards to assume you're drawing a weapon, lol.

    On that note, "Left Shoulder" doesn't really tell me much about where the knife is. If I didn't assume it was attached to the armor somehow I would assume you just stabbed yourself whenever you store the thing. May want to define that a bit better.

    Just so you know, you can put your money pouch in a pocket or something. Everyone is allowed two slots of pocket space on their clothing. Actually having your pouch outside of another container (Or pocket) is just begging someone to take it from you. And never forget the universal rule, "If you don't get caught taking it, it's yours.".
    PostPosted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:13 am


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    Character Name: Tomoki Haru
    Nicknames: N/a
    Age: 18
    Birth Date: 06/27
    Gender: Male
    Hair Color: Black
    Eye Color: Maroon
    Height: 5' 7''
    Body Type: Toned
    Distinguishing Features: N/a
    Personality:
    Tomoki is fairly normal, but extremely competitive. If someone mentions competition, he goes for it without holding back anything. He is often bored with long drawn out conversations if he can tell someone wants something and is dancing around the subject.

    Background
    Tomoki was orphaned during a terrible storm on the eastern coast of his home country, and taken in by an old master and his pupil, Gadot. Tomoki was treated as a second pupil, and raised by the master. Tomoki's skills quickly surpassed the Gadot's, though lack of knowledge kept the Gadot at a higher level than Tomoki himself was able to reach.

    After their master's death, Gadot introduced Tomoki to an old friend and told him they'd follow him to a village where they were gathering strong people to make a village of united clans and fighters. Once they arrived, Gadot attempted to leave before entering the village, but Tomoki convinced him to stay. Gadot agreed to join the village, but not as a combatant, and he'd leave once Tomoki got to a decent level of power.

    Family Information
    Name: Gadot
    Gender: Male
    Relation: Friend
    Species: N/a
    Description: Gadot wears glasses, and wears traditional clothes from their home country. He is often reading when he isn't practicing his martial arts.
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    Village: ???
    Organization: N/a
    Rank: Academy
    Titles: N/a
    Insignia Style: Stitching
    Insignia Location: Knife Sheath

    Chakra Color: Maroon
    Chakra Level: Low
    Chakra Points: 15
    Chakra Elements: Katon
    Extra Chakra Elements: N/a
    Chakra Control: N/a

    Strength: [+1 Rank Strength]

    Speed: [+1 Rank Speed]

    Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.

    Weaker Ninjutsu: [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]

    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/a
    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/a

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: N/a
    Transplant Stage: N/a


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    Shinobi Profession: Taijutsu Specialist
    Profession Base Benefits
    Increased Number of Taijutsu Styles: (Can learn one extra Taijustu style per rank. Students can only learn 1 style, Genin can learn two, Chuunin 3 and finally being able to learn 4 styles as a Jounin. Extra styles cannot be used to learn Weapon Styles)

    Strong Bodied: (Physical strength of the Taijutsu Specialist is increased by half a rank [+.5 boost])

    Muscle Memory: (Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Taijutsu style.)
    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    :

    Chuunin
    : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)

    Jounin
    : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)


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    Universal
      E Rank



    • D Rank



    • Katon:
      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank



  • D Rank



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    (Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Stances:
    E Rank

  • D Rank


  • Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Mission Statement

    Number of Missions Completed: []

    Number of Mission Points Accumulated: []

    Mission Record

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank MP in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Teaching Statement

    Number of Teaching Credits Accumulated: [-]
    MP From Teaching Credits - [-]

    Teaching Log

  • [] [] {Include Links}
  • [-] [-]

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      Money
      Gold: 00
      Silver: 39
      Copper: 95

      Knife: [1] - [Right Shoulder in a sheath strapped to his arm]

      Money Pouch - [Right Pocket]
    • Silver Coins: [39]
    • Item Name: [95]

  • TvIaMsOqTuHeYz

    Dangerous Loiterer


    Hinote Tosatsu
    Vice Captain

    Eloquent Lunatic

    PostPosted: Thu Aug 14, 2014 7:43 am


    TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
    Tomoki Haru
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    Character Name: Tomoki Haru
    Nicknames: N/a
    Age: 18
    Birth Date: 06/27
    Gender: Male
    Hair Color: Black
    Eye Color: Maroon
    Height: 5' 7''
    Body Type: Toned
    Distinguishing Features: N/a
    Personality:
    Tomoki is fairly normal, but extremely competitive. If someone mentions competition, he goes for it without holding back anything. He is often bored with long drawn out conversations if he can tell someone wants something and is dancing around the subject.

    Background
    Tomoki was orphaned during a terrible storm on the eastern coast of his home country, and taken in by an old master and his pupil, Gadot. Tomoki was treated as a second pupil, and raised by the master. Tomoki's skills quickly surpassed the Gadot's, though lack of knowledge kept the Gadot at a higher level than Tomoki himself was able to reach.

    After their master's death, Gadot introduced Tomoki to an old friend and told him they'd follow him to a village where they were gathering strong people to make a village of united clans and fighters. Once they arrived, Gadot attempted to leave before entering the village, but Tomoki convinced him to stay. Gadot agreed to join the village, but not as a combatant, and he'd leave once Tomoki got to a decent level of power.

    Family Information
    Name: Gadot
    Gender: Male
    Relation: Friend
    Species: N/a
    Description: Gadot wears glasses, and wears traditional clothes from their home country. He is often reading when he isn't practicing his martial arts.
    {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:

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    Village: ???
    Organization: N/a
    Rank: Academy
    Titles: N/a
    Insignia Style: Stitching
    Insignia Location: Knife Sheath

    Chakra Color: Maroon
    Chakra Level: Low
    Chakra Points: 15
    Chakra Elements: Katon
    Extra Chakra Elements: N/a
    Chakra Control: N/a

    Strength: [+1 Rank Strength]

    Speed: [+1 Rank Speed]

    Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.

    Weaker Ninjutsu: [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]

    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/a
    Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/a

    Bloodline/Clan Transplant: N/a
    Transplant Stage: N/a


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    Shinobi Profession: Taijutsu Specialist
    Profession Base Benefits
    Increased Number of Taijutsu Styles: (Can learn one extra Taijustu style per rank. Students can only learn 1 style, Genin can learn two, Chuunin 3 and finally being able to learn 4 styles as a Jounin. Extra styles cannot be used to learn Weapon Styles)

    Strong Bodied: (Physical strength of the Taijutsu Specialist is increased by half a rank [+.5 boost])

    Muscle Memory: (Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Taijutsu style.)
    Rank Benefits

    Genin
    :

    Chuunin
    : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)

    Jounin
    : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)


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    Ninjutsu

    Universal
      E Rank



    • D Rank



    • Katon:
      E Rank


    • D Rank



    Genjutsu

    Universal
    E Rank



  • D Rank



  • Taijutsu

    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu

    (Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
    Ninjutsu
    E Rank


  • D Rank



  • Genjutsu
    E Rank


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    Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)

    Summons Known:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Stages Known: (List all stages your RPC has learned, and link to learning them.

    Stances:
    E Rank

  • D Rank


  • Maneuvers:
    E Rank


  • D Rank



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    Mission Statement

    Number of Missions Completed: []

    Number of Mission Points Accumulated: []

    Mission Record

    E-rank - [{Place Total Rank MP in Brackets}]



  • D-rank - [-]



  • C-rank - [-]



  • B-rank - [-]



  • A-rank - [-]



  • S-rank - [-]



  • Teaching Statement

    Number of Teaching Credits Accumulated: [-]
    MP From Teaching Credits - [-]

    Teaching Log

  • [] [] {Include Links}
  • [-] [-]

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    Inventory
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      Money
      Gold: 00
      Silver: 39
      Copper: 95

      Knife: [1] - [Right Shoulder in a sheath strapped to his arm]

      Money Pouch - [Right Pocket]
    • Silver Coins: [39]
    • Item Name: [95]


  • "The Gadot"?

    Just keep in mind that Gadot still can't really act as anything beyond a background character. He can't really fight or teach or learn anything of consequence.

    I feel I should not that while the Tai spec bonus says +.5, that modifier type is no longer in use and just hasn't been updated yet. I believe the plan at some point (I can't find the post right now.) was to call it a full +1 instead. That places your actual strength at +2, so following the current system, if you gain any other boosts somehow you will only gain increment boosts.

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    And isn't it strange that Timmy of all people is one of the first to get their cash right on the first try?


    [Edit: As with other recent academy profiles, if you get your first post in before the next class starts, you can have the time skip bonus of either two E rank Bukijutsu Basics, or one D rank of the same, and you may learn the Meditation technique, but should spend at least a portion of one of your first posts practicing it.]  
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