Fanfic-Everybody come in!!

[WingMirror]

I am baaackkk!!! I finally had some time, and so I have come back. *Yay Yay!*

Anywho you've waited long enough-Here it is Chapter 5.
It's pretty long. ^ ^ 3nodding 3nodding

Chapter 5: What am I Feeling Now?

Riku stared at Sora, hope shining in his brilliant sea-green eyes. His heart was beating fast, and he was begining to get nervous.

'Does Sora love me?'

He had confessed, not seconds before. He wished he hadn't, but maybe it was for his won good.

"Sora?"

Sora thought about it, but he didn't love Riku, at least not the way he thought love was. Love is loving everythign about them, right? Love is being head-over-heels right? Like no one else exits?
It's not this feeling I feel...or is it?

It was a feeling he enjoyed, actually. It made him happy, and feel all goofy. Whenever Riku did something his heart raced, and beat fast. He actually liked it when Riku touched hima round the waist, or pinned him down, but he'd never admit it. The feelign gave him butterflies, and worms in his stomach. But was this feeling love?

"Riku...I dunno...what is love?" he asked, feeling stupid.
Besides wasn't it too early to say he loved Riku.

Riku was taken back by the question, and he seemed to be thinking hard. "It's like wanting to be with that person....Like if they died you would too. Whenever they're around you forget everything, and only see, think, and breathe that person. Your dreams are riddled with them, and your heart screams that name too. It's a wonderful feeling.."

Sora stared at Riku, noticing his eyes were full of sad happiness. He looked at his yellow shoes, thinking.

'Is what i feel love for you Riku.....'

Riku couldn't take it anymore, he tunred around to walk back. "See you later."

"Riku wait! re you mad at me?"

"No....but I feel strange right now.."

"So do you still want to swim in the lake tonight?" Sora asked, lightly.

Riku turned to him with his sweet smile, and nodded. And without another word he left, leaving a poor confused Sora watching him.
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"I see. You want to know if Sora loves you?" Yukita asked, taking out her pipe.

Riku nodded, looking away.

"Riku..give Sora time. Love is an emotion not to be rushed, otherwise the rushed love will just bring complication, and hurt."

"But Yukita-san I ....think he does..but confused."

"If you think that, then must likely it is true." She gave him a smile, her eyes sparkling with mystery.

"I guess."

"Riku..," she hugged him, " I want you to be happy, and want my Sora to be happy too. I trust you with my heart, and I know you will always take care of Sora once he returns your love, but please be patient."

" Okay. Thanks Yukita-san." He hugged her back, and began walking out.

"Riku?"

"Yes?"

"Try not to seduce my Sora either."

Riku laughed, and smirked. "Fine.....only 'cause your so nice."

"I mean it! If Sora loses his virginity tonight, you'll DIE!!! And I mean it!!!"

"Fine. Fine. Ruining a guy's fun..."

"Oh, and Riku?"

"Yes?"

"Hide your manhood..it can be quite obvious.."

It was impossible to beat Riku's face right at the moment; redder than blood, and a look of surprise as if he saw another him. And it definately didn't help that Yukita was laughing aloud.
Without another word, he walked out.

Ding-Ding.

"Hello? Oh Sora come in! Come in!" said Amora, smiling down at him.

"Thanks ma'am."

"You are so.cute." She kissed his cheek in a silly manner, causing Sora to giggle.

Riku had been waiting for the longest hour. He had never felt an hour go slower than a turtle, but it had. At hearing Sora's giggle he rushed out of his room, and in seconds stood in front of Sora, inches away from that desired mouth.

"Sora..." He licked his lips. 'Oh gosh no..I can't get hard...'

"Riku? Oh hi...." Sora replied, blushing at Riku's antics.

"Okay boys, unless you plan to kiss each other I suggest you leave now, and enjoy the night. Yukita says there might be a storm later so make sure to come here before midnight. And if you don't I'll come there myself, and embarass you both! Got it?"

Sora nd Riku nodded in unison. Sora began walkign out the door, but Riku stayed for a few seconds. "Mom..you realize I wanted to stay longer than midnight..."

Amora piched his nose. "I know silly. But if I let you stay longer I know what you will do, and Sora's still not ready you. So you better come back before, or I'll get Axel to date your precious Sora.."

Riku glared at her. "Okay! I promise! Bye!"

Amora sat down in the sofa, watching from the window the two teens. They did look cute together. She couldn't help worry though.
Yukita had called her earlier that evening, and said,

"If he doesn't Sora will be lost forever..."

She didn't know what exactly, but she knew if Yukita gave her a warning, then it was to be thought. She decided to get some rest, and headed to her chamber-Riku's chamber, just to see what the boy had.

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10 minutes later both boys arrived at the beach, the moon glowing brightly, and beautifully ahead.

Riku began taking off his shirt, and pants, revealing khaki coloured swin trunks with interestign designs at the back. He smirked, knowing all to well Sora was watching.

"Now now Sora it's not polite to stare at cute bums..."

Sora blushed, and looked away.

"Well aren't you gonna take your clothes off to swim?"

"I-I can't.."

"Why?" asked a dissappointed Riku.

"Because my mom told me I couldn't wear my swim trunks so...if i do I'll be-"

"Naked." Riku finished, breathelessly.
'Oh gosh Sora please! Please take them off, and reveal that curvy, smexy, tan body i've dreamed of...' That did it. he felt something harden.

"I'm not going to do it Riku." Sora said, staring at him in a annoyed way. ( stare )

Riku groaned inwardly. "But why?"

"No."

"Well then at least swin with me. It's not fun by yourself you know...."

"But how can I-"

"-Just like that," Riku replied, pointting To Sora in his collar shirt, and jeans.

Sora nodded, and beagn walkign into the water, but as soon as felt his clothes stick to him, he rushed out.

"What now?"

"I don't want to swim with clothes..I'll just wait here, okay?"

Riku sighed, and thought about it. He couldn't just let Sora stay, and so he came to a conclusion.

"You can wear my swim turnks Sora, and I'll wear your clothes"

Sora blushed slightly. "Oh no, it's okay Riku.."

"Sora please..Please..."

Sora gave in, as soon as he saw that look he had seen earlier in Riku's eyes.

Riku made Sora turn around, unvoluntarily, and took off his shorts. He smirked, knowing that Sora was indeed blushing. He then got an idea, and quietly tiptoed behind Sora, naked.

He wrapped his strong, muscular arms the bruneete, making Sora squirm a bit. "Riku wha-"

"Oh Sora..Sora..." he moaned, feeling Sora's waist.

"Riku..Riku.." Sora moaned shakily, liking the touches.
Riku couldn't take it, he just had to relive his need right now. He pinned Sora down, and began biting his neck.

"RikuRiku.."

Sora felt tingles go through his body. He knew very well Riku was exposing himself, but he didn't care. It was maddenign pleasure, and Sora felt like dying. Riku was biting, sucking, and blowing over his nexk, and it felt too good. He reached his hand and intertwined them with Riku's hand, lying on his side.
Sora began moaning, and shut his eyes closed at the sensation going through him.

"Oh."

Riku woke up from his daze, and looked dow at Sora, shocked. What was he doing?
He got off quickly, not saying anything, and tossed his shorts to Sora quickly. He ran back to the water.

Surprised Sora got up, and took his own clothes off, tosse them away, and put on Riku's shorts. He felt like crying.
'Maybe I'm just bad in lovemaking'

Not only that, but Riku seemed mad now. He watched Riku, splashing water around, and he felt his body shiver. "Riku?"

Riku's eyes were full of shame, and he turned to Sora but adverted his gaze elsewhere. "Yes?"

"Riku why did you-"

"I'm sorry Sora. I didn't mean to. I'm sorry."

Sora tunred around, waiting for Riku to dress in his clothes.

Riku sniffed his clothes. They smelled like Sora-sweet and innocent. Right now he was happy that at least he could get close to Sora this way. Sure the clothes were a bit tight, but that wasn't a real problem...he was use to tight clothes.
Suddenly he felt slender hands around him, and a face rub his back. "Sora?"

"Riku I'm sorry...I didn't want you mad or anything...Please don't hate me...I really care about you!" Sora cried.

Riku faced Sora, and cupped his chin so Sora could look at him directly. "Sora.."

Sora didn't know why, but he began lifting himself up. Within each second their faces got closer. Closer. Closer.

SPLASH

A wave knocked them down, and parted them violently. Sora was now under water, and he tried to reach up, but he the wave only crashed down on him.
He twirled around, seeing everything blurry and watery. His view was all dirty see green, and it hurt his eyes. He closed them, and just as soon he felt the need to breathe.

He began panicking, but he was still under water.

'It can't end here! I don't wanna die yet!'

He was crying now, but no one would notice in the ocean.

'If I die...Mom! Riku!'

His thoughts began drifting, and soon he felt at ease.

Riku being in the same position, got out, breathelessly. He looked around, but saw no Sora. His heart froze.

"SORA! SORA! ANSWER ME!"

Without any thinking he dived back into the ocean, and just a bit away he saw Sora, sinking.
He swam towards him, at an inhuman speed.

'Sora if you die I'll never forgive myself!' Sora...

He grabbed Sora around the waist, and suddenly he learned he couldn't raise both of them above. He too was crying now.

He had to make a choice; save yourself, or die with him.

Riku was selfish, and everyone didn't truely know this, but he was. He wanted the best for himself, and nothing more, or less.
He wanted to complete his dreams, and life. He wanted to see new horizons, and wnated to learn what the world could offer. He wasn't going to die yet.

But for the first time, his selfishness was swept away. He hand't planned to ever die before, but he couldn't live without Sora. He hugged the boy, and he felt himself began to ease too. They were both drifting deeper, but he didn't care. At least they'd be together now-no Axel, no mothers, just them.

he watched the moon's shine fade. The last thing he saw was a shadowy figure watching them.
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Well there you ahve it. Please cooment, and tell me what you thought.
My writing skills, lack when I write at the moment, but I hope it's still good.

So what will happen? Well you ahve to stay tuned, now I'm not sure who's writing the next chappy, but I must say

I have to write a before-Chapter 6, so you guys get what happend, and there isn't any confusion, okay? ^ ^

So anyways hope you enjoyed. heart heart heart heart heart heart heart  

[WingMirror]

Scathach13 wrote:

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Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 3:45 pm

Ah... ah crap.

Did you mean it was bad, or....? *confused and feels insulted*  

[WingMirror]

I feel insulted, but I WILL write the Chapter before Chapter 6-Or Chapter 5.5 soon. Tomorrow maybe?

I hope you guys do like how it's going. heart heart  

[WingMirror]

Alright!!! ^__^

I don't feel insulted anymore, but only because people like it and want me to update it. I'm sorry it does go slow, but at least I haven't given up on it or anything. I will try to leave it at a good part so the next author can have a good start.

Here it is Chapter 5.5- Yukita Is More Than Just A Good Mother

Riku was selfish, and everyone didn't truely know this, but he was. He wanted the best for himself, and nothing more, or less.
He wanted to complete his dreams, and life. He wanted to see new horizons, and wanted to learn what the world could offer. He wasn't going to die yet.

But for the first time, his selfishness was swept away. He hand't planned to ever die before, but he couldn't live without Sora. He hugged the boy, and he felt himself began to ease too. They were both drifting deeper, but he didn't care. At least they'd be together now-no Axel, no mothers, just them.

He watched the moon's shine fade. The last thing he saw was a shadowy figure watching them.

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The waves were terribly cold, and rough that evening. Splashing violently against the dock, and sending thousands of sea animals and shells out, either to leave or die.

Such a beauty the ocean was, yet such a danger. Nights like these one could only hate the sea, and it's cruel ways.

However knowing that maybe she'd die in the process, Yukita accompanied by Amora, were heading to the Play Island.

"Are they all right Yukita?!"

Yukita was in no mood to answer. She simply gave her friend a smile, but continued rowing against the thick waves. It was a hard row, but somehow she mangaged, and both women were now on the dock, searching.

"I can't find them!"

"Amora please calm down! Your panic is only maing things worst!" Yukita yelled, panic sounding in her voice.
Amora calmed down,a nd was slightly surprised. Yukita never got worried, which meant if she was then....

"YUKITA!"

Yukita was now in the water, swimming rapdly. The waves kncked her a few times, but it didn't make her lose her foucs.

"Yukita!"

"Stay back!"

And Amora did just that, crying as she watched her dear friend swim farther ahead.

Yukita could see Riku and Sora, and as she watched them, her heart pounded and leapt all at once. She felt horrible, but she'd have to deal with that later.

She dived in, and placed her arms around Riku's waist. To her surprise Riku reacted, and helped her pull themselves up. Riku couldn't have been more happier, and understand immediately Yukita was the shadow he had seen.

They panted when they got out, and Yukita held Riku's waist tightly. "I can help...." he offered, noticing Yukita was tired. She nodded quietly, and both started kicking and swimming until finally....they layed on the beach.

"Sora! Riku!" Amora ran to them, and threw herself on top, crying. Her heart ached with relief at the wonderful sight. "I was so worried..."

"Mom I'm fine, but...", Riku turned to Sora, "but Sora mom...."

Amora gazed at Sora, and gasped. He looked very pale, and dead-like.
Maybe he was....

"Sora?" came Yukita's voice, sounding hopeful. She shook him, and tears swelled in her eyes. Her cold wet hair wasn't helping either, as it clung to her skin. "Sora! Sora! You won't die on me!"

After a few seconds, Amora embraced Yukita, comforting her. She looked at Sora,a nd felt tears roll down her own cheeks. She regretted ever letting the boys go. Now Sora was....

"SORA!" Both women were startled when Riku got up, and began giving Sora CPR. He looked so determined, and concentrated that both women didn't think nor speak, just watch.

Yukita knew it won't work, yet her hopes didn't die. She closed her eyes, and told Amora to let go. With her remaining strength she walked to Riku, and her son Sora. "Let me give you this..."

Riku gazed at the item she had given him. It was a small orb glowing beautifully, and his eyes shined with amzement. "W-what is this..?"

"Just give that to him...." Yukita said, and smiled.

Riku drank from it, and placed his lips on Sora's soft ones. He closed his eyes, and listened to Yukita's words:

Let all your love flow into that
And think about Why you love him
-Prove he is special to you.

Riku gave it all he had, and more. He thought about his love for Sora, and the need he had for him. He agve his soul, and for the first time he even revealed weakness that only he knew.
A tear rolled down his cheek, and landed on Sora.

Amora watched Yukita, not understanding what was going on.
Yukita sensed her friend's confusion, and explained.

"That is my life.....It needs to hear Riku loves him, and when it does Sora will awaken and I....I will fade....."
"A life for a life."

"Yukita, you can't-" Yukita wrapped her arms around Amora, and told her to keep quiet. Amora cried yet again, but softly, and hugged Yukita tightly. No words would come out, and so she only sobbed for her dear friend.

I understand now. It is clear you love him.

Riku opened his eyes slowly, surprised. Who was that?
His afce was close to Sora, and his heart ripped out his chest when Sora-his beautiful Sora began opening his eyes.
"Sora...."
"Riku..." Sora gave him a smile, and cleary he didn't understand what had happend. He was even more confused when Riku began crying, and hugged him. He didn't mind though, and hugged Riku back.

"Sora....I love you..." came his mother's voice, and then she diassappeared.

"Mom!?" Sora managed, and looked over at the palce she had been.

"Yukita exchanged her life so you can have yours again Sora...." Amora explained, before weeping, and hugging him. "I'm so glad your all right, but..."

"Mom...." Sora began crying, and he inwardly wished he could ahve her back. Even though she had always fooled around with Riku and him, he loved her. And now.....

"Mom......."

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Two months passed quickly, and everyday had been the same until....

Riku visited Sora's house.

"Sora.." he called out, heading up the stairs when no one replied.
As he had expected Sora was lying on his bed, alone to himself.

"Sora I have good news..."

"I'm not going anywhere with you" Sora hissed, and Riku bit his lip. That was harsh.

"That wans't it. Your mom...she's back."

"What?!" Sora jumped off the bed, and clung to Riku. "You serious, right?! Your not being mean to me?!"

Riku shook his head. "Nope. Remember when I said I was going to talk to my older brother Sephiroth, and see what he could do since he's all magic and stuff. Well he told me, and now....she's back. She'll be at my house, so we better-"

"But how? What did you ahve to do?!" Sora asked, happiness in his tone.

"Nothing Sora. Let's just go." Riku took Sora's arm and began walkign out until Amora appeared in front of the door, with her arms folded.

"Now Sora I know your happy! As I am! But you should know what my good-boy Riku did for you! he gave a bit of his own blood, as i did, and because we gave blood it was enough to prove to the Far Shore goddesses we wanted Yukita back!" She explained, hyperly.

Sora blinked in confusion. "What?"

"I gave some blood, and so did my mom. We acre about you, and we wanted her back....so..."

"Riku, can I see your arm?" Sora asked, already lifting up the long sleeves. Long sleeves on Riku was almost impossible, especially during summer.
When Sora lifted the sleeve he saw a long deep scar, and his blue eyes sparkled with much emotions.

"Sora..I..." Riku began, but trailed off. he ahdn't wanted Sora to see what he had done to get his mom back.

"And you Amora?" Sora asked, eyes staring at Riku's.

"I didn't give sooo much. Half of Riku's cut I'd say."

Sora still didn't get how gving blood had worked, and why they hadn't told him too give some too. Riku didn't have to give so much.

But it was for you Sora dear. So you better reward him or else!

Sora's eyes widened at the sound of his mother's voice. And even more when he saw her standing there with her brightest smile. He quickly ran to her, and both goofy peoples landed on the floor laughing yet crying.

"I love you mom..."
"Me too Sora," she kissed his cheek, "Me too."

Amora rejoiced loudly, and Riku smiled at seeing Sora so happy.
Yukita winked at Sora, and Sora got up, and walked to Riku.

He looked into his sea green eyes, and the look became so intense and close. Too intense, but both boys liked it.
Then both boys lips were parted, and soon they were lost in their own
world of all emotiocions, and riddiculous happiness.

If they weren't so lost in their own worlds, they might have even cared more that their mothers were squeeling and jumping with joy for them, and Yukita's return.

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"The Valentine's Dance will be on Friday so be ready, and pick your oh so special person or else I will!" said an over-cheery voice on the PA.
That voice was too familiar, too known, and too...bouncy.

" Okay class anyways let's begin with our topic for today: The Life of A Cell..."

Riku began tunning out since he had beter things to do. Like watch a certain bruneete try to understand the material. He groaned at the sight. So cute, so innocnet, so...lost. It had been merely two weeks since their first kiss, and nothing had happend. Those soft lips.....
'Sora you like killing me...'

He couldn't help melt at the sight of him, and soon the idea popped to mind: tha dance. He would invite Sora to the dance, make sure it was romantic, and lastly they'd kiss again. That had to get them to be a couple, right?

BANG

He jumped up, startled and scared at the sound near him. He looked up, and gulped as he saw Mrs. Heart watching him.

"Riku what is so interesting that you must tune out my lesson....Is it Sora now?" She asked, smiling when both boys went red.

No one really listened to her, except her words perked eager ears belonging to Axel. He opened his eyes, and listened.

"I was just ..umm....--"

"--yes staring at him. As cute as he may be, my lesson comes first, understand?" He nodded.

He slumped down his chair, and ignored all the eyes watching him and laughing. 'Stupid Mrs.Hear....How does she even know...'

He looked again in Sora's direction, and his heart fluttered when he saw blue sparkling eyes. Sora was looking at him, red and embarrased.
'oh please don't be mad...'

Sora just smiled at him, giggling a bit, and stared back at Mrs.Heart.
Riku melted, in awe, and for the rest of the class watched his love, and occasioanlly the evil Mrs.Heart.

And who was glaring at him? Axel. He knew exactly what he'd do. He had to get to Sora, and invite him to the dance before Riku did.
'Riku you haven't won yet....'

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Oh i so hope that was good enough. I know it was bit confusing, but I hope you do get it. Whenever I write this story again i'll explain how the blood worked, and all.
Sorry for any spelling mistakes. See, I didn't take so long. 3nodding

Well there you have it Chapter 5.5.

Good luck at the person writing Chapter 6!! ^__^

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