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[CRIT] Please critique my character!

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Magician Arcana

Eco-friendly Shapeshifter

21,915 Points

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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2013 12:22 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Inu-gami - Ghost
Looking For: Crit on everything please!
Quest Link: Takeshi

Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 9:35 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Nekomata - Demon
Looking For: Crit!
Quest Link: Yori

Bronze Coffee

Stubborn Senshi

13,275 Points

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Doc Goth

Feral Fatcat

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Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:33 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Gorgon- Monster
Looking For: General crit to make sure I applied correctly to all the rules, and also that my character makes sense especially her Fear ability. I love feedback!
Quest Link: My Quest

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:04 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Mage - Reaper
Looking For: General Critique, any advice to make the character better please~
Quest Link: Kari

Myoukin

Dedicated Mage

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Seussi

Ice-Cold Hunter

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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 4:22 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Wolpertingerrrrr (Monster)
Looking For: Any crits on his personality or on the racial structure (making sure it makes sense for TiH, really) would be most loved <3
Quest Link: Mathias

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 5:09 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Leprechaun (Demon/Fae)
Looking For: I have an image in my head but I just ... cannot seem to get it on paper, maybe help me with the personality?
Quest Link: Cearney

Seiana_ZI

Codebreaking Conversationalist

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E t e r n a l x Melody

Timid Detective

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Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:13 am

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Subspecies - Monster/ Jade Moon Rabbit
Looking For: Crit on anything at all, just need some help.
Quest Link: Young-Soo

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 10:09 am

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Revenant -Ghost
Looking For: Anything that needs clarity or adding too.
Quest Link: Link

frozen_flames06

Feisty Buddy

18,025 Points

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kippy_sneeze

Tipsy Inquisitor

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Posted: Thu Mar 21, 2013 8:17 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Monster - Arctic Owlbear
Looking For: General crit, as well as some help with ideas for Natural/FEAR abilities
Quest Link: Here!

Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2013 11:53 am

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Demon - Flame Essence
Looking For: Crit on the species (I'm a newbie to the shop, and while I have read everything, I may still need some shaping <3) as well as the entire concept!
Quest Link: Right here! <3

[.Silvr-Moon.]

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Ryuthulhu

Golden Knight

15,750 Points

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Posted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 9:29 am

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Shadowhound - Monster
Looking For: Crit on everything? I think she's looking decent but I want to make it as clear as possible and I know I miss stuff.
Quest Link: link

Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 6:24 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Werewolf -- Monster
Looking For: Crit on everything, but especially FEAR. I always have the worst time with that. > neutral
Quest Link: Here

Duke of Donut

Liberal Lunatic

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littledevils freakzoid

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Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2013 1:36 pm

Crit Please!
Character's Race: Subspecie - Ghost
Looking For: Crit on everything, and FEAR. I had a hard time coming up with one and want to make sure it works. Just want to make sure I have the basics covered and she'll be able to continue on.
Quest Link: Nessa