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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 11:47 pm
Rpc Name: Axius Freidirt Level: 1 Style applied for: Lunar Dance What you know about the style: I know that the user becomes more fond of the moon and has to meditate under its light. I know that the style can be used in conjunction with a weapon most often it’s a scythe but it’s no specific. I know that you don’t get any lethal skills until stage 3. I know that it can be used to heal others and can be used in combination with other lunar dance users. I also know that know that your ki changes to either white or black and some attacks cause it to change for a bit. It also doesn’t have an elemental opposite giving it no real weakness against another kind of ki or attack. Rp Sample: Axius trained under the moonlight as he often enjoyed doing. Since he had taken the chemical known as Gene- x his ki had changed and now was bright white like the light of the moon and seemed to make him feel at ease under the moon. As he punched and kicked at the air turning in his body with his momentum he felt free and almost happy. After training his body for a while he sat down and decided to meditate. He took a deep breath and relaxed his muscles. He let his ki flow out of his body and up toward the moon. As he relaxed and let his mine go blank he felt that he was being watch.
Axius stood up slowly not seeming too worried even though he didn’t know where he was being watch from. He focused his ki into his hand and clapped them together. A shockwave of lunar ki emanated over the surrounding area coming from Axius. As it swept over the land scape Axius was able to sense his opponent. “You might as well come out now I know your there.” Axius said this while looking right in the direction the person was. Axius waited staring to the spot waiting for the person to emerge. As he started to hear the rustling of leaves he readied himself. “Well I’m not surprised you found me. Actually I would have been disappointed if you hadn’t.” The man was taller than Axius muscular and looked hungry for battle. “Well you not hiding what you want so bring it on let’s get it over with.” Axius took up an open stance inviting a midsection attack from this stranger now turned opponent.
Axius was right his opponent was nothing more than a brainless brute. He rushed right at the opening Axius had presented. As he closed in Axius changed his stance turning sideways and lifting his back knee. Axius waited till his opponent was about three feet away and put out his palm focusing his ki down into it. The ki jolted out in the form of a spike and trusted into his opponent’s leg. Axius spun out of the way and watch as his opponent came crashing down and rolled through where Axius had just been standing. “Can you call it quit now? You’re not worth my effort.” The man got back to his feet keeping weight off of his now bruised leg. “That was just a lucky shot! I’ll tear you to pieces kid!” The man was more careful now creeping till he was about three feet away then dove in with a huge right hook. Axius quickly jumped backwards and made and arcing motion with his hand where the attack was coming from. For a spilt second his ki followed suit blocking the incoming hook.
As the man hit nothing but ki he followed up with another attack this time from the left. Axius attempted to avoid it but it cam faster than he expected and he was nailed in the jaw. As he started to stagger a hard kick hit him in his stomach jutting him backwards into the air. As Axius hit the ground he started to cough. “See you’re not so tough with all your fancy tricks and such a real man uses his body.” Axius stood up slowly feeling the blows. He was irritated now he hated actually getting hit. “You moron your ki is part of your body. Your just too dumb to use it.” Axius was fully up now planning the outcome of the rest of the fight. “I hope you enjoyed those attacks because that’s all you’re going to get.” Axius rushed him this time Axius threw a quick from the his right then on impact spun the opposite direction with his back now to his opponent he through a strike from his right then left going back and forth like true drunken fist style then he ducked down for a quick spinning sweep.
The man managed to jump over his leg and back and now Axius smiled. He quickly jumped with a knee but the knee was too far away to hit its mark ki formed on the ground about a foot in front of Axius and with his jumping knee a spike of white ki shot out of the ground hitting his opponent in the gut before he could even land. His opponent was on the floor curled in pain as Axius walked up to him. Axius kicked his side putting him on his back. Axius realized his opponent was still conscious and spoke. “You durable but you made two big mistakes tonight. Do you know what they were? The first was interrupting my training to challenge me. That is what that beating was for. The second was hitting me. That I take personally and this is payback for that.” Axius balled his fist then focused his ki to the front of it. Then he jumped as hi as he could over his opponent and drove his ki and his sift into the man’s abdomen right where his last attack had hit. Driving the ball of ki into his opponent left the man screaming and then unconscious.
Axius had left him drooling all over himself passed out in the middle of nowhere. He felt almost bad. He wanted to just leave but couldn’t do it. He placed his hand on the man’s stomach and it began to glow with moon light. “I know I’m going to regret this especially if he attacks me again. O well if he does I’ll just beat him again and the next time I’ll leave him here.” Axius smiled to himself as he healed continued to heal his opponent.
Skills used: Clap Lunar Basics: Low Thrust Lunar Basics: Swipe Lunar Basics: Rise Lunar Basics: Strike Lunar Healing
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:02 am
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 2:39 pm
Rpc Name: Angel Stone Level: 2 Style applied for: Absolute Zero What you know about the style: (If you put "everything" it will be denied on the spot) I know that it's cold. It uses ice and snow. Oh! And the ones who use it like cold weather and like eating and drinking cold things. Also it's weakness is heat. Skills take two posts longer to learn and are one rank weaker in hot areas. But it is resistant to lightning. Rp Sample: (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL)
Angel was staring across a lake. She was on a small island in the middle. She had swam over to it but didn't feel like swimming back and she was the only one at the lake. She'd gone off alone and everyone else was in class. Then she got an idea. She'd just use a move from the Absolute Zero style. Why not? Wasn't like it was out of her power. And she could use the practice so that she knew she could do it when it really counted. She hadn't tried using the move for such a large body of water yet after all.
The move was frozen touch. With it she could freeze the entire lake. Then she could just use the Ice Slide skill and slide across the ice to the other side. Simple, easy, and good practice at the move. Decided she walked to the edge of the shore and touched the water. Then she began molding her ki into the water and freezing it. The ice spread across the water. But because it was hot it only went out a hundred feet. Close enough. She didn't mind swimming the rest of the way. So she stepped onto the ice and used Ice Slide to sip across it and plunge into the cold water. Then she swam to shore. She was wet again, but she had brought a towel. The girl wrapped it around herself before slipping on a pair of flip flops and heading for her dorm room to change out of her wet swim suit.
Used: Frozen Touch Ice Slide
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 4:56 pm
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:41 am
Rpc Name: Nexus Tatsuka Level: 1 Style applied for: Hell's Grasp What you know about the style: The user starts by training in meditation and using will power to access their real power. Once the user has obtained their power, fire will no longer burn their skin. Rp Sample: Nexus and his loud mouth ways had gotten him in trouble once again. He pissed off someone and now they're gonna have to fight out this issue. If Nexus only knew when to keep his mouth shut, he wouldn't have to fight an opponent that's way stronger than he is. However, Nexus didn't care. A challenge is a challenge to him and that's what he loved more than anything.
The two stood face-to-face outside in a place made for large battles. As the opponent dashed in at Nexus, it became obvious that this man was trained much more than Nexus was. His speed was incredible! The man threw a ferocious punch at Nexus, that was barely avoided. Nexus quickly slipped behind the man and put him in the Full Nelson grapple. Nexus then bent over backward and performed a suplex, smashing his head into the ground. Suddenly, the opponent broke the grapple and just rolled out of the attack, almost unscathed. He only had a small scratch on his face.The opponent came once again and caught Nexus with a full-power lariat, slamming him into the ground. Nexus was stunned. He didn't know that this guy was so strong.
Nexus quickly got up and recovered from this hit. It was time to really try. Even though he wasn't trained as well as this guy, Nexus had a few tricks that this guy wouldn't know. Nexus quickly got close to his opponent and entered the Muay-Thai clinch like an MMA fighter did. Nexus leaped off his left foot and threw the right knee at the man's face. As it came at him with bullet-like speed, flames covered Nexus's knee and increased the damage dealt when it made contact. This was a strong attack, but it wouldn't take down the opponent. Nexus knew this.
After this strike made contact, Nexus jumped away from the man he was fighting. He then charged in landed a powerful, flaming elbow strike into the man's chest, followed by another flaming punch, and then followed by a spinning, flaming, reverse roundhouse to the face. Nexus then jumped back a few meters and gave himself room to think up his next attack. The man was stunned for a second because he didn't think Nexus could do this much damage. He turned his to the side and cracked his neck, doing the same to the other side. He then looked at Nexus. "Good hits, kid. Now I'm gonna kill you!" he shouted as he charge in once again, but Nexus charge at him too. When the opponent went in for another lariat, Nexus dove below it and kicked at the man's right knee. The strike landed and the man's knee snapped backwards. Nexus then kicked off of the ground with flaming knee strike to the stomach. Nexus's opponent was now finished and could not continue.
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:54 am
gray: Denied. You need to show that you understand the weaknesses/drawbacks of the style before I approve it.
iharky: Approved
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 4:31 am
Rpc Name:Gray Wolf Level:1 Style applied for:carbon death
What you know about the style:The user of this skill have tougher skin the normal people it slightly resembles leather in texture they must meditate daily in order form them to manipulate there ki to harden the carbon in there bodies to form armor or even weapons that they may use depending on rank of skill they can only use each ability for a set time, tho this hardened form can still be broken by a strong enough impact.
Rp Sample Gray sat alone in the center of the graveyard he was in deep meditation attempting to manipulate his ki to push the carbon in his blood throughout his whole body little by little his skin started to grow hard while the pigmentation shifted darker with each second, he slowly opens his eyes only to rise to his feet a bright light envelopes his left arm where he suddenly steps forward throwing a powerful punch into a nearby tombstone shattering the thick block with ease, he looks down at his carbon filled arm.'' with this im one step closer to growing stronger.''
He plants both his feet firmly on the ground only to raise his arms in a X shape above his chest, a bright light envelopes his full body he throws his arms into the air at his sides and roars out loudly he had used his ki to harden the carbon in his blood turning his full body hard as metal while altering his skin pigmentation turning his full body black, he takes one step forward gritting his teeth against the weight of his own body soon he fell to his knees panting from the strain being put on his body.'' damn it this is not the end.'' he digs his carbon like claws into the ground only to push himself to his feet, his body reverts to normal as maintaining that form drained his ki to quickly at his current level.
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Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 7:25 am
gray: Denied. I want to see more techniques of the style, its weaknesses, and just more effort in general. I mean c'mon man we don't ask too much as far as literacy goes but...c'mon at least form coherent sentences.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 7:30 am
Fenrir Graveheart gray: Denied. I want to see more techniques of the style, its weaknesses, and just more effort in general. I mean c'mon man we don't ask too much as far as literacy goes but...c'mon at least form coherent sentences. lol screw it i give up trying to get any of this anymore ;p to me its not worth the effort just to get some supernatural like power so im not editing it or trying again.
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Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 9:45 am
Rpc Name: Raven Adrasa Level: 1 Style applied for: Blue Crush What you know about the style: The style gives the user control over water, which can be used from almost anywhere since water is also in the air. The style is centered around offense and defense, and has a lack of supporting skills to use so it isn't very helpful to others. Those who seclude themselves from others can learn this style, or those that simply love water in general. Training is apparently taxing on the body however, so extreme caution must be taken, like with all Gene-X injections. Rp Sample: Raven stood before his opponent, it was a fight of water versus fire now. Raven didn't even move, he just stood there and a waterball fprmed in the air and put out a little bit of the fire in the area, people were here, they might get hurt if they were burned. Raven and his enemy ran toward each other, but he looked at the ground and they slipped on a puddle of water. He quickly jumped over his opponent and water needles flew at his opponent, the enemy dodged it though, and tried to burn Raven to a crisp now. He put his arm in front of himself like he had a shield, soon after a water shield was formed, it shattered as the fire hit it and he backed away, this was getting intense. A wall of flame was thrown his way and he quickly stomped on the ground, a wall of water raised above him and deflected the flames, he had to be more careful about things like that.
The water fell slowly and revealed Raven behind it obviously, but he was in a combat position. He punched out with his hand and a deadly almost drill like water attack flew at his enemy, they were too far away and the water died out just before reaching them though. Raven pointed up and his opponent gasped, another water arrow, but this one was different. Raven brought it down and just barely missed his enemy again, this fight was going to drag if he kept up like this. Soon after Raven noticed how much he was missing it started to rain, the rain was almost seeming to hold down Raven's foe, but Raven was unaffected. Raven raised his right hand and a dragon made of water that looked like it reached up to the sky stared his opponent down before rushing toward the ground and drowning the flame user once and for all. And after all of that...Raven was thirsty.
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Valentine Valtieri Vice Captain
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 10:24 am
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:35 am
Rpc Name:Alma Mori Level:1 Style applied for: Hells grasp What you know about the style: the styles bases is on ones inner fire which represents ones will power. Rp Sample: Alma stood her ground as she lead the three men into a arena like dome, as they entered they began to scan the room as if there was some trap set up but there wasn't, after scanning the room they looked back down to Alma and question why she would run to a dead end, but then shrugged it off as they felt it was just a child's ignorance. "well are you guys gonna just stand there or are you gonna fight?!" Alma yells questioning the guys starting to annoy them "tsk damn that brat lets take her out! " one of them yell as they charge right toward her as he came close alma pulled her cocked back her arm under her chest, building up heat energy in said arm. when the man came of range she released a devastating gut punch nearly lifting the man off his feet right before the heat energy in her arm release causing a slight explosion causing the man to get blown off her hand and landing on his back. a few feet away.(Exploding Fist) apon close examination the man suffered 5 broken ribs and a fire began to build up on his gut. immediately the other two man attempted to put the fire out. succeeding to put the fire out the man that was ablaze was still alive but was knocked out cold. [/b]"oh...man...you should probably take him to the nurse a burn like that could be fatal..." she said again to aggravate them again "you...you B*tch!!"the one of them yelled as he picked up a rather large boulder and began to turn his body to pick up momentum before releasing the boulder tossing it right for Alma "taaake this!!"the man yelled as the boulder was heading right toward her. alma just began to gather burning energy in her hand again before swinging it right at the boulder hitting it dead center causing it to explode and break into pieces (Exploding Fist) "aww is that the best you got, maybe you guys should go home..." Alma said mocking them as she stuck her tongue out at them " ahh you little B*tch!!!" the same man yelled as he began to charge at Alma just like the first one, while the third man could be heard yelling at him not to fall for her trap. as the man came of range, alma lifted her foot and to prepare a stomp as she was doing this the man saw her movement to attempt a stomp and quickly jumped back as alma stomped fire began to rise from the ground around her but it didn't reach the man "ha! I'm not falling for that!" the man yelled as he got ready to attack again, alma didn't say anything she just smirked as she brought her palms together and placed it behind her back as she began to build up energy in them. the man was ignorant of her intents and continued his charge as she build enough to immediately thrusted her arms forward revealing a white ball in her open palms that then extended hitting the man dead on causing him to flay back at high speed before hitting the wall and passing out( Nitro Cannon) "two, down...one to go..."she said as she turned to face the last man. the man shook his head frantically and grabbed his friends and began to run away "...okay, then...I guess not..." she said before walking toward the exit
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:00 pm
blackscar: I see a lot of skill usage which is nice but no understanding of the styles' weaknesses.
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:32 pm
Fenrir Graveheart blackscar: I see a lot of skill usage which is nice but no understanding of the styles' weaknesses. oh really?...what is the styles weakness? you may be right in saying that I don't understand it. if its range I definitely explained that, but your dis approval tells me its not that...I don't really see much weakness in other submissions...what is the weakness? seeing as the goal is for me to understand it I don't see why you won't be able to inform me....because all I see as a weakness is its need for close range, which I explained. confused (not directly of course )
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