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 Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 12:34 pm
Fenrir Graveheart DSW: You need to be at least expert rank to have this summon. Also, ten posts is a long time to be enraged in a fight so lower the enraged mode to 5 posts. And how does Flames from Below work? The other attacks I can kinda see happening just because they all come from the monster itself (though I'm kinda lost on how a summoning can have fire breath, acid breath, and wind breath all at the same time I mean how many breaths are there), but this attack doesn't really explain what he needs to do to just summoning giant flaming pillars out of...nothing. lol darion: I'm also assuming this doesn't need approval anymore since your character is 6ft under. Using his own fire element he could dig his claws into the ground and send forth large amounts of fire which would come up onto his enemies. Would that be better? Also, he can't breath out acid, his spit is. xp and His wind tunnel attack is more like sucking up a vast amount of air and letting it all out at once, his lungs are quiet huge. Should I edit that as well and give it more charging up posts? Ah, so Expert rank, I can wait until I'm Expert to attain this summon, if thats alright with you.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 2:56 pm
tinymini7 Username: tinymini7 Rpc Name: Lyethery Rpc Rank: Adept Class: Berserker Summon's Name: Aiolos Summon's Rank: B Pic: Description of Summon: Strength/Speed: 9/6 (13/6 in dragon form) Aiolos' a dragon who was raised by the army of Yuran at birth to become their weapon against the other of his race. He doesn't come into contact with his own kind until he was old enough to fight them, and his first contact resulted in him becoming an enemy of the race. For many years Aiolos doesn't know anything but fighting and killing his kind. He came to believe that he is a human given the power to transform into a dragon so that he can exterminate the dragon race. His belief led him to killing his own mother. He gone crazy after learning the truth and fled. He now reside in the Volcano Alley, the only home in which he knows of, waiting for something. His human form is a white knight. As a dragon he have his dragon breath and claws. As a human he have his white spear, spear's skills, and knight's skills. Rp Sample: The moment that he reached the top, Lyethery knews that his day will either end really really good, or really really bad. He gulped and stood up straight, trying his best not to show fear. "Hello there," He forced out the cheerful greeting. "I-I'm Lyethery. I've heard much about you. How are you today Aiolos?" The dragon let out a fierce roar that shook the very earth in which he stood. He expand his wings and stared at Lyethery, wondering whether to just eat him up or throw him into the lava. He didn't go with either decision, instead he transformed himself into his human form, the form in which he was once so proud of. The spear in his hand shined brightly when the sun hit it, blinding Lyethery. He used the moment of blindness to charge at Lyethery and thrust his spear at the boy chest. The spear pierced Lyethery's chest and killed the boy, or so Aiolos believed. When Lyethery looked down at his chest and smiled at the dragon, Aiolos knew what the boy is. He jumped backward and transform back into his true form. With three flaps of his wings, he was 40 foot above Lyethery when he let out his blast of black fire. The fire burned the rock where Lyethery stood, but when he saw the boy try to run away he switch to his acid and began the hunt. Do you like Pie?: Key Lime Pie Not sure of what else to do. He's the typical black dragon with a weird past.
Quoting this just to be a nice guy, seems like he was missed.
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 1:16 pm
Demonic Slayer Wasuken Username: DSW Rpc Name: Katsuro Tachibana Rpc Rank: Adept Class: Swordmaster Summon's Name: Hakai the Inferno One. Nickname Akantor. Summon's Rank: A Strength: 20, Enraged 25 Speed: 4, Enraged 2 Pic:  Description of Summon: Akantor is a giant creature that is said could level a city with it's powerful wind tunnel attack. It is said that it's skin has a rather blackish red color and it's eyes are that of a demon, it's two tusk which is it's under bite could crush through rock like peanut butter. The size of this creature is about 30x the size of a normal human being and could crush one with ease as it weighs over 15 tons. It's tail has a rather long hook that he could climb onto walls and mountains to hang off from but with it's rather huge size could pretty much bring down a small mountain. It's back is made up of rather long sharp spikes o it's carapace as everyone of them could is deadly to the touch This creature has rarely been scene by the human eye as it lives mostly in extremely hot temperatures such as a volcano or a desert. People have rumored that the Akantor has been passed down by myth and had only been herd by stories. Fire is it's main attribute as not even lava can damage it's rather hard scales, some may say that making weapons out of Akantor's body could change the very flames of the earth but sadly not ever a single weapon has been forged of this powerful creature. Akantor could also burrow itself underground which he could hide for days on end if he finds someone or something threatening to him or to ambush a curtain prey. Akantor's claws are rather sharp and could pierce through most things with a single slash but should be warned if you try to block it's attacks. It's weakness really is almost any time of water, whenever it rains the Akantor would hide until the sun is out once more. Another one of it's weakness is it's underbelly as it is the only real place that hasn't been covered by it's scales or carapace. Akantor's speed is something that is rather very slow and can make him a huge target if he tries to escape but most people would die before even getting close to kill this huge creature. Skills
Roar
Rank: D
Description: A rather useful skill, Hakai would stand onto it's hind legs and without warning would send out a ground shaking, ear splitting roar. The roar is so bad that near by volcanos may or may not erupt from the sound. The sound is so bad that most people would have to cover their ears from the deadly sound. 1 post people are stunned, 3 for lycans.
Burrow
Rank; C
Description: Akantor can burrow itself underground and wait for a right time to come out to attack it's opponent with it's rather nasty looking claws. Can only hide underground for a good 6 post until it focus itself back onto the surface.
Tail Sweep
Rank: C
Description: Akantor's massive tail can also be used as a weapon as it would sweep across the land, leaving behind a rather nasty looking trail. The tail sweep is only a 160o turn and it is a rather slow attack to preform which can leave Akantor with a wide opening.
Charging Tusk
Rank: B
Description: A rather slow attack but could still hit with enough force of a raging train. The attack would have a 1 post charge until it dashes out to whoever it is that Akantor is charging at. It's tusk sharpen at this point and could run through buildings and mountain sides with ease, digging it's way into the wall and to whoever its in it's way. The charge is a full two post to finish and after that it takes a 1 post rest until it can attack again.
Flamethrower
Rank: B
Description: Akantor can shoot out a rather deadly flamethrower out of it mouth, it's temperature a good 800 F and could burn most things down and set a forest on fire. The range of the attack is a good 20 to 30 feet long. People that have the ability to use water can protect themselves from this attack but most people would get 3rd degree burns if hit. The attack is rather slow when sweeping but can still leave a nasty burn.
Enraged Mode
Rank: A
Description: Akantor would anger too much would explode into a rather enraged and inferno look. It's armor would harden up which would bounce most weapons, it's eyes would turn bloodshot and it's underbelly would turn to a rather reddish color. It's armor would turn reddish as well and the spikes on it's back would look more feral. Akantor would first stand on it's hind legs and scream out in a ear splitting roar that would stun people for 1 post. The everything else would happen, Its power would increase but his speed would decrease a little. This creature would look more like an inferno god than everything else and attacking it head on would be curtain death. His weakness for water would double, hitting him harder as Akantor's body temperature would sky rocket. His underbelly would still work as a weakness as well. This skill only last for a good 5 post
Flames From Below
Rank: A
Description: A rather deadly attack from below. Akantor would send giant flaming pillars from underground and come up under it's prey or foes. It would dig it's front claws into the ground, sending forth it's own element of fire as it forms into deadly pillars of death above it's foes. The fire is so intense that even being near it would give you 2nd degree burns as the temperature is at a high 1500o. The flaming pillars of death come up at random spots near Akantor and has a good 50 feet radius around the creature. Getting hit by this attack can lead to 3rd degree burns or curtain death. the unsuspected attack has led many great heroes and warriors to their death by this move. Akantor cannot move while this attack happens, it's tail and head is it's only defense.
Wind Tunnel Attack
Rank: S
Description: A rather power and deadly attack from this creature as it would send out a huge burst of wind out of it's mouth. Akantor would suck up a considerable amount of air which is a 1 post charge and then lets it all out, sending forth a massive wind tunnel of death. The attack was said to bring down cities at ease and could send people flying at great distances. This attack can also turn the tide of battle as most people wouldn't survive from an attack, some were said that they were torn in half just as how strong the wind was. The Wind Tunnel has a outstanding 60 feet length but such an attack would leave everything else open, the attack would continue for a good 3 post until it has to rest for a little bit, another 3 post. Take caution when this attack happens. Rp Sample: Katsuro was now almost at death's doors now, the huge group of people which were assassins now were laughing at the now weaken Lycan. Katsuro's back was laying onto the wall as he lost the power in his legs to move for now, most of his body parts were rather sore and a rather large gash was on his chest. Blood was coughing up from his mouth as his hair covered his eyes but he still had a ace up his sleeve. his hands reach for the ground as a small reddish flame entered, one of the assassins notice it but he didn't care much as they were ready to kill and collect their prize. Soon as they rose their blades the ground started to shake and tremble as the men didn't know what was going on As they started to panic and hoped it would vanish soon. It didn't. Soon as they thought it was a gone a rather large monster dug it's way out of the ground and right behind the men that attacked it's master. With a rather loud ear splitting roar, the men were paralyzed, some out of the fear and the rest from the ear splitting roar. It was also enraged as well as with one great sweep of it's tail killed half of the men already. The other only had a dozen left as that half ran for their lives. The Creature knew that they would run as giant flaming pillars shot up from the ground, engulfing all the men that would run and leaving nothing behind but burnt skeletons. One man was brave enough to fight the huge monster as it went underneath it's belly, stabbing it from where it's chest was. A rather loud scream came from the monster as it felt the pain but body slammed the fool, crushing it as he left a rather bloody mess. At the end of it's attack the Akantor started to built up something in it's mouth and a good minuet passed as the men cowered behind rubble that they thought would protect them, led out a huge wind tunnel. The wind was so bad that it blew everything away as well as the remaining men, leaving nothing behind but a clearing. Katsuro laugh softly as he couldn't believe that something like this saved his life and passed out from the pain he felt. The creature walked over to it's master, noggin it a little with it rather large head as to hope he was still alive. Without hesitation he lifted Katsuro up with it's tusk and carried him off to find a place or a settlement that could help him Do you like Pie?: Yes! whee (Tell me if I need to change anything. XD) The ones in bold I edited. I took out the acid spit since you were right about that part and replaced it with another skill. XD
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:23 pm
tinymini7 Username: tinymini7 Rpc Name: Lyethery Rpc Rank: Adept Class: Berserker Summon's Name: Aiolos Summon's Rank: B Pic: Description of Summon: Strength/Speed: 9/6 (13/6 in dragon form) Aiolos' a dragon who was raised by the army of Yuran at birth to become their weapon against the other of his race. He doesn't come into contact with his own kind until he was old enough to fight them, and his first contact resulted in him becoming an enemy of the race. For many years Aiolos doesn't know anything but fighting and killing his kind. He came to believe that he is a human given the power to transform into a dragon so that he can exterminate the dragon race. His belief led him to killing his own mother. He gone crazy after learning the truth and fled. He now reside in the Volcano Alley, the only home in which he knows of, waiting for something. His human form is a white knight. As a dragon he have his dragon breath and claws. As a human he have his white spear, spear's skills, and knight's skills. Rp Sample: The moment that he reached the top, Lyethery knews that his day will either end really really good, or really really bad. He gulped and stood up straight, trying his best not to show fear. "Hello there," He forced out the cheerful greeting. "I-I'm Lyethery. I've heard much about you. How are you today Aiolos?" The dragon let out a fierce roar that shook the very earth in which he stood. He expand his wings and stared at Lyethery, wondering whether to just eat him up or throw him into the lava. He didn't go with either decision, instead he transformed himself into his human form, the form in which he was once so proud of. The spear in his hand shined brightly when the sun hit it, blinding Lyethery. He used the moment of blindness to charge at Lyethery and thrust his spear at the boy chest. The spear pierced Lyethery's chest and killed the boy, or so Aiolos believed. When Lyethery looked down at his chest and smiled at the dragon, Aiolos knew what the boy is. He jumped backward and transform back into his true form. With three flaps of his wings, he was 40 foot above Lyethery when he let out his blast of black fire. The fire burned the rock where Lyethery stood, but when he saw the boy try to run away he switch to his acid and began the hunt. Do you like Pie?: Key Lime Pie Not sure of what else to do. He's the typical black dragon with a weird past. Hmm... not much of a black dragon when he can turn into a white knight. XD What's up with the sample? You just show up and than the dragon just hunted you down? That's not really a good sample, even though that's you you two met. XD
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:31 pm
Chilling2 tinymini7 Username: tinymini7 Rpc Name: Lyethery Rpc Rank: Adept Class: Berserker Summon's Name: Aiolos Summon's Rank: B Pic: Description of Summon: Strength/Speed: 9/6 (13/6 in dragon form) Aiolos' a dragon who was raised by the army of Yuran at birth to become their weapon against the other of his race. He doesn't come into contact with his own kind until he was old enough to fight them, and his first contact resulted in him becoming an enemy of the race. For many years Aiolos doesn't know anything but fighting and killing his kind. He came to believe that he is a human given the power to transform into a dragon so that he can exterminate the dragon race. His belief led him to killing his own mother. He gone crazy after learning the truth and fled. He now reside in the Volcano Alley, the only home in which he knows of, waiting for something. His human form is a white knight. As a dragon he have his dragon breath and claws. As a human he have his white spear, spear's skills, and knight's skills. Rp Sample: The moment that he reached the top, Lyethery knews that his day will either end really really good, or really really bad. He gulped and stood up straight, trying his best not to show fear. "Hello there," He forced out the cheerful greeting. "I-I'm Lyethery. I've heard much about you. How are you today Aiolos?" The dragon let out a fierce roar that shook the very earth in which he stood. He expand his wings and stared at Lyethery, wondering whether to just eat him up or throw him into the lava. He didn't go with either decision, instead he transformed himself into his human form, the form in which he was once so proud of. The spear in his hand shined brightly when the sun hit it, blinding Lyethery. He used the moment of blindness to charge at Lyethery and thrust his spear at the boy chest. The spear pierced Lyethery's chest and killed the boy, or so Aiolos believed. When Lyethery looked down at his chest and smiled at the dragon, Aiolos knew what the boy is. He jumped backward and transform back into his true form. With three flaps of his wings, he was 40 foot above Lyethery when he let out his blast of black fire. The fire burned the rock where Lyethery stood, but when he saw the boy try to run away he switch to his acid and began the hunt. Do you like Pie?: Key Lime Pie Not sure of what else to do. He's the typical black dragon with a weird past. Hmm... not much of a black dragon when he can turn into a white knight. XD What's up with the sample? You just show up and than the dragon just hunted you down? That's not really a good sample, even though that's you you two met. XD Well it could be a black armor piece if you want, but white make him look more holy and what not. I was just messing with that part. The sample is really what would happen if my guy go and talk to him first. He come to hate human in general so that is what would happen if Lyethery just climb up the mountain and speak to him. So do I have to redo the sample or the whole thing? And common, black dragon that turn into a white knight, oxymoron.
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:38 pm
tinymini7 Chilling2 Hmm... not much of a black dragon when he can turn into a white knight. XD What's up with the sample? You just show up and than the dragon just hunted you down? That's not really a good sample, even though that's you you two met. XD Well it could be a black armor piece if you want, but white make him look more holy and what not. I was just messing with that part. The sample is really what would happen if my guy go and talk to him first. He come to hate human in general so that is what would happen if Lyethery just climb up the mountain and speak to him. So do I have to redo the sample or the whole thing? And common, black dragon that turn into a white knight, oxymoron. Yes, you must redo the sample. Show a little more of what the guy can do; possible later on when the dragon and your character are already together. You still can save your previous sample once you head out to get the dragon. XD
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:47 pm
Chilling2 tinymini7 Chilling2 Hmm... not much of a black dragon when he can turn into a white knight. XD What's up with the sample? You just show up and than the dragon just hunted you down? That's not really a good sample, even though that's you you two met. XD Well it could be a black armor piece if you want, but white make him look more holy and what not. I was just messing with that part. The sample is really what would happen if my guy go and talk to him first. He come to hate human in general so that is what would happen if Lyethery just climb up the mountain and speak to him. So do I have to redo the sample or the whole thing? And common, black dragon that turn into a white knight, oxymoron. Yes, you must redo the sample. Show a little more of what the guy can do; possible later on when the dragon and your character are already together. You still can save your previous sample once you head out to get the dragon. XD stick around,. I'll be done real quick.
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:02 pm
Username: tinymini7
Rpc Name: Lyethery
Rpc Rank: Adept
Class: Berserker
Summon's Name: Aiolos
Summon's Rank: B
Pic:
Description of Summon:
Strength/Speed: 9/6 (13/6 in dragon form)
Aiolos' a dragon who was raised by the army of Yuran at birth to become their weapon against the other of his race. He doesn't come into contact with his own kind until he was old enough to fight them, and his first contact resulted in him becoming an enemy of the race. For many years Aiolos doesn't know anything but fighting and killing his kind. He came to believe that he is a human given the power to transform into a dragon so that he can exterminate the dragon race. His belief led him to killing his own mother. He gone crazy after learning the truth and fled. He now reside in the Volcano Alley, the only home in which he knows of, waiting for something. His human form is a black knight with a silver spear and sword. As a dragon he have his dragon breath and claws. As a human he have his white spear, spear's skills, and knight's skills. He also have the power of telepathy, but can only speak to one person at a time.
Rp Sample:
"I really don't think this will work out." The undead feral boy said as he tightened his grip on the metal staff. "I mean, do you think we could take on that ... blargh?" He pointed at the ginormous beast like ice creature slowly walking toward them. He looked at his friend, and sighed tiredly. The dragon since birth have shows no fear, and he ain't about to show it here. Aiolos unstrapped his silver spear and began walking toward the building sized monster. Lyethery could do no less but follow.
When the partners got within yelling distance of the monster, Aiolos burst into action and took a running leap onto the monster's leg. He stabbed his spear into its hard leather hide and began scaling upward. Lyethery followed after his friend by jumping from one spike sticking out of its leg after another. They both got up to the monster's back at the same time, and at the same time faced the monster wrath. Aiolos raised his spear to deflect the many spikes that shot at him from the creature's neck. One got through his defend, but was also deflected by his shining black armor. He pushed Lyethery out of the way as the tail come slamming down on their position and leaped at the monster's neck at the last moment, saving himself from a crushing death. He landed in a roll and got right back up and without a moment of hesitation charged at the creature's neck and thrust his speak at it. Lyethery on the other hand was trying his best to do damage to its back, failing most of the time.
The spear pierced the hide as though it is butter and sunk several feet into the flesh. Blood showered the dragon as he pulled the spear out and ran to his partner. From the roar that it let out as Aiolos pulled out the spear, he presumed that the creature is really mad. As he ran he continued to do damage to the creature by stabbing his spear into its back and ripping the flesh apart as he pulled it with him. With all of his power he slash the spear upward at the tail and watched as it sail of in an arc and landed on the ground 30 foot away. He then continued with the momentum and grabbed Lyethery and leap off the creature right before all the spikes on its body shot outward, piercing anything unfortunate enough to be in its way.
'Now would be a good time.' Lyethery sent his thought to the dragon as he clung onto Aiolos while failing through the air. The dragon chuckled before letting out a ground shaking roar and let its wings out. His changed rapidly, going from one moment being a knight to another being a full fledged 6 stories dragon. He landed on the ground with a thud and took to the air right away with three flaps of his mighty wings. They have done a large damage to the creature, but it's still on its path to the city. 'Let finish this.' Aiolos sent the message to his friend and dove for the head. He let out his fire breath on the creature face as he began circling around it. Seeing as though the fire is not penetrating the ice covering the creature's head, Aiolos switch to his acid and spat on its legs. The acid ate through the hide, flesh, and bones, stopping the creature on its track. He landed on its back and calmly walked toward its neck, where with one quick, strong swipe of his claw he decapitated the monster.
Do you like Pie?: Key Lime Pie
How about now?
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:25 pm
Okay, i see you have added that he can do mind communicate and spit acid. I understand that that most dragon can do that plus breath fire, but I would like to actually see that on the file. There are many different dragon that may or can't do those. The mind reading with out use of energy I'm okay with, but I would very much like the acid/fire to be a skill.
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:28 pm
But doesn't the black dragon can spit acid naturally?
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:33 pm
tinymini7 But doesn't the black dragon can spit acid naturally?
It's still considered a skill.
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:39 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:44 pm
dsw: Accepted
tiny: If this guy can use all spear and knight skills then that automatically makes him an A-rank summoning just because its like having a whole other draconian knight rpc fighting alongside yours. Now, can this guy use ALL of the spear and knight skills, or only up to a certain rank which I feel would be more appropriate to a B-ranked summoning.
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:50 pm
Fenrir Graveheart dsw: Accepted tiny: If this guy can use all spear and knight skills then that automatically makes him an A-rank summoning just because its like having a whole other draconian knight rpc fighting alongside yours. Now, can this guy use ALL of the spear and knight skills, or only up to a certain rank which I feel would be more appropriate to a B-ranked summoning. Well it never said in the codex what rank it can get to, but how about B rank, since its a B rank summoning? Or would C rank be the max?
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:53 pm
tinymini7 Fenrir Graveheart dsw: Accepted tiny: If this guy can use all spear and knight skills then that automatically makes him an A-rank summoning just because its like having a whole other draconian knight rpc fighting alongside yours. Now, can this guy use ALL of the spear and knight skills, or only up to a certain rank which I feel would be more appropriate to a B-ranked summoning. Well it never said in the codex what rank it can get to, but how about B rank, since its a B rank summoning? Or would C rank be the max? B-rank is fair enough I suppose.
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