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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:04 pm
Add more history to what he is a teenager, so he isn't a adult plus he isn't in a mafia family yet so its hard to add more to that. and what more do you want to the weapon description?
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:05 pm
that is why it is Mafia History /or Adult Hood
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Diablo en Musica 92 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:12 pm
that still doesn't make any sense since he doesn't work for a Mafia, nor is he a adult.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:25 pm
I added more History and fixed the ring ^^
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Azzurro Skyde Vice Captain
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Azzurro Skyde Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:52 pm
So am I good to post now?
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:15 pm
Volk than put "No Info As of Now" and add more Bio to the other areas in your history, I want ALAP = As Literate As Possible.
The Weapons attacks need to be more described please
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Diablo en Musica 92 Vice Captain
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Azzurro Skyde Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:35 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:02 pm
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Diablo en Musica 92 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:18 pm
Indigo - sorry Approved
Volk - Approved, thank you for your updating
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Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:19 pm
Appearance:

_________PERSONAL INFO._________________________________________
Username: | 4 W i s h |
Character name: Murasaki Chou (紫蝶子)
Aliase/Nickname: N/A
Age: 19
Height: 5'9
Weight: 160 lbs.
Sexual Interest: Bisexual
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Japanese + Vietnamese
Personality: Quiet and calm, he gets things done though a bit slower than others due to his procrastination. When it comes to work, if it's not done perfectly, then he gets a bit scary.
Occupation: Pro Go Player [ 2 Dan ]
Likes: Art Sweets Hot bowl of soup Relaxing Tea Procrastinating
Dislikes: Noise Annoying People (In general) Sports Working when he does not feel like it
__________BIO/ HISTORY_______________________________________
Bio/ History: Biography Of Birth: What an odd couple indeed. Murasaki's father, Duy Quang Dang, had traveled from Vietnam due to his company and his job to Japan. While on a little sight seeing trip to a local shrine, his father had a brief encounter with his mother, Haruko Watanabe. Only partialy skilled with the language, his father asked for a picture of Haruko in from of the shine's Torii gate. Meekly did she accept. At that point both were smittened for each other. Duy came to the shrine often to visit Haruko-- her family happened to be the care takers of the shrine. They went on dates, traveled throught Japan. This went on for a year or so until they finally decided to settle down and marry, possibly make a family. Another year after the two were happily married, Haruko got pregnant with Murasaki.
He was just a normal child when conceived at birth. Though his father by accident gave him a feminine name, due to the fact that when he was born his father was only half fluent in Japanese. Sadly his mother had passed out at the point of delivery so she could not correct his father. In the end he got stuck with a girly name and he some what resents his father for it, as it causes him a bit of trouble/redicule. Biography Of Childhood: Other than the day to day teasing of his name, his childhood was a normal fun one. Amusement parks from time to time. Playing with water in the backyard during the heat waves in the summer. Building snowmen in the winter, and having warm cocoa by the fireside and a steaming bowl of homemade soup (Phở) courtecy of his father. He had a couple of friends but not as much as he would have liked.
Biography Of Teenager: Nothing in particular happened in his teenage years, with the exception of his rebelious stage, and studying different forms of martial arts in which he became very skilled at. He entered in quite a few tournaments. There were a couple of times times that he would reach the finals but somewhere along those lines he would be defeated by someone better than him.
After a year or two of martial arts, he decided to take a break and follow a more subtle path. He thus began taking classes in 'Go' , a japanese strategy game. He soon became hooked to the game and visited Go salons frequently. It was a while but he eventually made it to becoming an insei, one (Mostly a student) on the way to becoming a professional player. Juggling back and forth between school work and Go, he struggled. Though not the best, he was fairly good. Taking the pro examinations, he was able to pass in third place.
Biography Of Mafia and/ or Adult: At his eighteenth birth day his father gave him a ring, saying it was a good luck charm. The rest is yet to be unfolded.
__________MAFIA & MAFIA FAMILY INFO.________________________________________
Family Name: Stella Di Mare
Status Rank In Family: Stella Di Mare Rain Guardian
Current Individual Mafia Rank F-Rank
Current Mafia Family Rank [Pending]
__________RING, FLAME & WEAPON INFO.________________________________________
Dying Will Ring Appearance:
Stelle Di Mare Rain Gaurdian Ring Dying Will Flame: Rain
Weapon of Choice: A Sliver Metal Tobacco Pipe
Weapon Description: It's form is like any other tobacco pipe.The pipe is Murasaki's number one weapon, and by for his favorite. Some what long and thin, a hole at each end. One where the smoke exsudes from and the other which is the mouth piece. Being with such small stature, about seven inches, it allows Murasaki to easily focus his Dying Will through it and use his energy more efficiently. Harmless by itself, but combined with Dying Will Flames, it becomes something to be reconed with.
Box Weapon Name & Type :
Stella Di Mare --- Graziose Farfalle di Azure || Graceful Butterflies of Azure
Box Weapon Description: When his Dying Will Flame is inspired/instigated, he is able to open his box weapon. As it's name obviously states, it is graceful. Whether in it's lusturious wings to it's smooth flight pattern. They glow with a dull blue, an effect of the Dying Will Flames on it's wings, enhancing their color and beauty. However the real beauty of the butterflies lie in their attacks. They casually flutter about like any normal butterfly. From their wings a shimmering power is released, falling down onto the enemy like rain. The powder, covered/containing Rain Flames, will calm and soothe the flames of other enemies as well as any projectile in the surrounding area. It is best to stay away from them--this pertains to allie and enemy alike. At points they can cluster together to form a shield in order to protect their master.
__________ATTACKS & STATUS POINT CHARTS________________________________________ Quote: Status/ Skill Points: 25
Speed/Agility: 6 Strength/Endurance: 4 Dying Will: 5 Stamina: 5 Intelligence: 5 Quote: Weapon Attack/ Skills: Risarcimento -- Compensation Utilizing and harnessing the flame within, he is able to focus his energy at the tip of his pipe. From the tip a long and dense "sword" like creation sprouts from it. With so much power focused at one point, it allows Murasaki to extend the sword at will and it is capable of slicing through metal. He can also spread out the blade in order to create a thin , yet spacious (4 feet), fan in which he can blow around the powder of his butterflies any way he chooses. Quote: Box Weapon Attack/ Skills: Gocce Calmanti -- Calming Raindrops The butterflies emmit a large quantity of powder from their wings as they fly about the area. The powder falls swiftly like rain itself. All the flames that come in contact with the powder weakens, also rendering projectiles (Missles,Rockets,Guns) coated with Dying Will Flames useless. Quote: Battle Count Chart: Total # of Battles
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Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 4:58 pm
Appearance:

_________PERSONAL INFO._________________________________________
Username: inutori
Character name: Kasumi Ikeda
Aliase/Nickname: Death Angel
Age: 17
Height: 5'3
Weight: 135
Sexual Interest: straight
Gender: female
Ethnicity: Japanese - Italian
Personality: Kasumi has a happy go lucky type of attitude. But although she seems like a nice person, she's simply hiding the dark personality inside her. She loves to annoy people.
Occupation: Song remixing (Remixes songs and sells them)
Likes: Music fighting arguments art cold beverages
Dislikes: Cowards Working (i.e cleaning, dishes etc) Traitors
__________BIO/ HISTORY_______________________________________
Bio/ History: Biography Of Birth: Her mother, Ai, was a low ranking member of the Sopravvivere family. She was strong, but also blind leaving her unable to fight. Her father, Kazuo, was normal japanese man. When her mother was in japan for vacation she was attacked. Unable to fight because of her vision Ai was brutally beaten and left on the street to die. Kazuo was walking home from work when he spotted Ai. He quickly rushed her to his home. When Ai awoke she tried to leave, but Kazuo didn't let her. She was in no condition to leave. Ai agreed to stay until she was better but ended up never leaving. She did, of course, tell her family that she was leaving. In about a year they got married and had their first and only child, Kasumi.
Biography Of Childhood: Kasumi had a normal childhood. But once she showed signs of being able to fight, her parents immediately pulled her out of school. Her mother Ai had decided that to apologize to her family for leaving she would send her daughter. After a few years of training Kasumi was finally sent to the Sopravvivere base. There, she worked even harder.
Biography Of Teenager: After a few years Kasumi finally achieved the rank of mist guardian. Finally completing her main goal she decided to find something to entertain herself. Discovering her love of music Kasumi began remixing songs and selling them. This is what she does when she has nothing else to do. Now, both her parents are dead. Her mother died from sickness and her father died in a car accident.
Biography Of Mafia and/ or Adult: When Kasumi permanently came to live at the Sopravvivere family base she found what she expected. Some welcomed her with open arms and helped her settle in. Those were her mothers old friends. Some didn't help her at all and even ignored her. Those were of course the people that hated her mother. Because she was blind they thought she was useless. Now they figured that Kasumi was the same. It wasn't until she reached the mist guardian rank that she was fully respected. But even now, she knows people still don't accept her. Kasumi on the other hand, respects everyone no matter how they treat her. She was inspired by the family boss, Saunder. He respected everyone in the family no matter what rank, age, etc. That's the kind of person she now strives to be in the family.
__________MAFIA & MAFIA FAMILY INFO.________________________________________
Family Name: The Sopravvivere Family
Status Rank In Family: Mist Guardian
Current Individual Mafia Rank F-Rank
Current Mafia Family Rank ((Boss Will Tell You))
__________RING, FLAME & WEAPON INFO.________________________________________
Dying Will Ring Appearance:

Dying Will Flame: Mist
Weapon of Choice: Extending chain sword
Weapon Description: A weapon her mother had given Kasumi. It's made of extremely strong material, even the chains in between are extremely sharp. The chain can extend up to 9 feet.
Box Weapon Name & Type : Taka Hayai ll Swift hawk
Box Weapon Description: The swift hawk is as it's name suggests. A large hawk spirit emerges from mist. It's battle abilities aren't as great as it's speed, so it tends to attach itself to the back of it's user giving them the ability to move quickly.
__________ATTACKS & STATUS POINT CHARTS________________________________________
Quote: Status/ Skill Points:Speed/Agility: 5 Strength/Endurance: 4 Dying Will: 6 Stamina: 5 Intelligence: 5
Quote: Weapon Attack/ Skills:Deadly strikeAn attack usually used when the box weapon is in use, deadly strike focuses the users dying will flame into her sword making it larger. Although this attack is very useful, the blade gets duller the larger it is made. WhirlwindThe blade is extended and swung around at a rapid rate. The range of the attack depends on how the user would like it to go. Hard to dodge depending on how close and quick you are. But if you dodge it successfully, it's easy to reach the user because the only part defended is where she is swinging. Usually means head area is open for attack.
Quote: Box Weapon Attack/ Skills:Devils wingsThe hawk dissolves most of itself, leaving only the wings. It then attaches itself to the back of the user allowing them to fly around with extreme speed. The user of course has less time to think. So basically, speed/agility increases and intelligence decreases.
Quote: Battle Count Chart:Total # of Battles 0 Battles Won0 Battles lost0
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:38 pm
Appearance:  _________PERSONAL INFO._________________________________________ Username:Trueblade Edward Character name: Tatsuya Matsumoto Aliase/Nickname: Tatsu Age: 16 Height: 6' Weight: 160 Sexual Interest: Women Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Personality: Tatsuya is trusts people that are close to him, he doesn't talk to very many people and is very dangerous in battle. Occupation: High School Student Likes: Ice Cream Music Fighting Books Dogs Dislikes: Traitors Messy People __________BIO/ HISTORY_______________________________________ Bio/ History: Biography Of Birth: Tatsuya was born in Tokyo. His father was a store owner in Tokyo and a former member of the Takahashi Family. His mother died shortly after he was born and his father took care of him. But shortly after Tatsuya's birth, his father was killed by mafia members of a rivaling family. Alone, in the wreckage of the attack, a family found him and took him to an orphanage. Biography Of Childhood: Orphaned and alone, Tatsuya grew up in the orphanage until he found a family. A family adopted him but they really didn't have much love for him and the older children of their family made fun of him and beat him. In his rage he ran away and bumped into a traveling man. He was kind, and offered to take Tatsu with him. Evan Rondine, that was the name of them man that took care of Tatsuya and taught him everything he knew. Biography Of Teenager: Now as a teenager, he leads a pretty normal life, accept for the fact that Evan is an ex member of the Mafia. A former gurdian for a family that has ceased to exist. But his swordsmanship was passed on to Tatsu. Happy, Evan enrolled Tatsu into a high school and told him to enjoy his life. Evan left Tatsu his house and a large amount of money for him. Biography Of Mafia and/ or Adult: Not there yet. __________MAFIA & MAFIA FAMILY INFO.________________________________________ Family Name: Takahashi Family Status Rank In Family: Rain Guardian Current Individual Mafia Rank F-Rank Current Mafia Family Rank __________RING, FLAME & WEAPON INFO.________________________________________ Dying Will Ring Appearance:  Dying Will Flame: Rain  Weapon of Choice: Katanas Weapon Description:  These two special katana's act as Tatsu's strength amplifiers. When unleashing his dying will flames, it amplifies and seems to stop time around wherever he slashes. Box Weapon Name & Type : Ploggia Bianco Divorare Box Weapon Description:  Tatsu's companion during battle, she assists him by running around opponents and creating clones of her self to attack. She also can create boots that help Tatsu become faster. __________ATTACKS & STATUS POINT CHARTS________________________________________ Quote: Status/ Skill Points: 25 (You start out with 25 points and can divide them amongst your skills however you choose.) Speed/Agility: 5 Strength/Endurance: 5 Dying Will: 5 Stamina: 4 Intelligence: 6 Quote: Weapon Attack/ Skills: Echo Slash Tatsu attacks with both his blades. Amplified with Rain Flames, it can be fatal if it hits the opponent's body. It'll freeze them and then Tatsu finishes his opponents off with a double slash to the throat. Attack Here -(Info here) Quote: Box Weapon Attack/ Skills: Fenir Tempest Bianco and her clones rush around the opponent and unleashes ramming, biting, and slashing attacks. Quote: Battle Count Chart: Total # of Battles Battles Won - Battles lost -
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:56 pm
@Wish - Approved
@Inutori - Please fill out the Biography of mafia
@Trueblade - First use , the skeleton correctly.
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:25 pm
Wait so I didn't use the skeleton properly? Kinda confused on how I did it wrong.
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Diablo en Musica 92 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:45 pm
had to keep it size=9 and align=center
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