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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:47 pm

((It might. I’m not sure. I’ve never tried. I like things being well thought out and very clear. My RPC’s always have long, complicated backgrounds, because they make for an interesting character. Plus, her background is essential to her character. Without it, she’s just a murderous beast. With it, she’s a justified murderous beast. And technically, it is only one paragraph. It’s just a really long paragraph. It adds dynamics to her. As for my Lord [Lady] of Hell application, in Ragnarok, I had to show just how black Valkyria Fierce's heart is.))

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:05 pm

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Username:luthercross
Character Name:Shizuma Sagara
Age:20
Gender:male
Species: human
Sexuality:straight
Faction: Dark empire
Element: dark
Height:6'2
Weight:186
Condition: alive
Equipment:
Right Hand-
Left Hand-
Body-
Right Leg-
Left Leg-
Appearance: http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q259/kuorusan/fighter_getting_back_by_stan522.jpg
Class Orientation: peasant

Character Stats:
Strength: 25/100
Defense: 5/100
Agility: 5/100
Dexterity: 10/100
Endurance: 5/100
Magic: /100

Obtained Skills/Abilities:

[Empty Slot: You get more slots as you increase stat pools.]

Obtained Spells:

Mana Abilites:
Type: ((Light, Dark, Pure, or Nature))
Capacity: ((Very Low, Low, Medium, High, Very High, or Ultimate))
Level: ((Look at the Level Scale in the Mana Help/FAQs Guide))
Skills: ((What mana skills do you have?))

Inventory:
Shillings: 500
Properties Owned:
Items Owned:

Missions, Quest & Tasks:
Current Quest/Mission/Task:

Tasks Completed:
Quests Completed:

Level 1 Missions Completed:
Level 2 Missions Completed:
Level 3 Missions Completed:
Level 4 Missions Completed:

Values:
Morality: 50/100
Happiness: 50/100
Spirituality: 50/100

Personality:

- high-spirited
- calm
- loaner

Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jAU97sgNsYM&feature=related

Battle Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zUkLrVKTk8Y&feature=related
Relationship Status: single

Fayth:
Meditation Points: ((Number of words written while meditating.))

Bio:
His townspeople killed by a madman who uses a spear Shizuma spent his life training his body to be able to kill that man. Zuma travels and lives off then land and others kindness. He takes most any jobs not really caring who they are for.

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Lord Jiminy

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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:14 pm

Username: Lord Jiminy
Character Name: Vincet de Channing
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Species: Assassin
Sexuality: Straight
Faction: Wind
Element: Wind
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 124 lbs
Condition: Alive
Equipment:
Right Hand-
Left Hand-
Body-
Right Leg-
Left Leg-
Appearance:

User Image

Class Orientation:
Peasant

Character Stats:

Strength: 10/100
Defense: 5/100
Agility: 20/100
Dexterity: 10/100
Endurance: 5/100
Magic: 0/100

Obtained Skills/Abilities:
•Pickpocket
•Counter
•Free Run
•Vision
•Good to Perfect Precision

PS- They are all links to the same page.

Obtained Spells:
N/A

Mana Abilites:
Type: Nature
Capacity: Very Low
Level: 0
Skills: N/A

Inventory:
Shillings: 500

Properties Owned: 0
Items Owned: 0

Missions, Quest & Tasks:
Current Quest/Mission/Task: N/A

Tasks Completed: 0
Quests Completed: 0

Level 1 Missions Completed: 0
Level 2 Missions Completed: 0
Level 3 Missions Completed: 0
Level 4 Missions Completed: 0

Values:
Morality: 50/100
Happiness: 50/100
Spirituality: 50/100

Personality:

- Curious
- Thoughtful
- Dark

Theme Song: My Sanctuary

Battle Song: Raining Blood

Relationship Status: Single

Fayth: Credo
Meditation Points: 0

Bio:
Vincet was born as an assassin, but his father hid it from him, trying to shield him from the violent life as an assassin. As hard as he tried however, his dad could not lie to his son's face when the twelve year old Vincet asked about the hidden blade that was laying on his fathers bed one night. That was when Vincet became an assassin. He was immediatly trained to hunt down and kill anybody needed.
Tragically, his father was killed in an assassination attempt against the old ruler of the ice kingdom. Vincet has been trying to find away to control his anger against people ever since.

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:59 pm

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(( Just a note Shay, would it kill you to paragraph it? ))

agreed. That is re-dam-diculous...but you did everything right. If you have any questions...pm me.

iShayera APPROVED!

Luther the mini kingdoms are closed. You must join an empire. Your class is 'Peasent' not fighter. fix these things and tell me when you've done so.

Jimmy Your moves are correct, but you have to copy and paste (or link) The description of the moves on your profile. Everything else i right. APPROVED

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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:24 pm

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Username: Vexin-Dono
Character Name: Vexin Kensin
Age: 14
Gender: male
Species: Assassins
Sexuality: very active (any woman is his toy)
Faction: the dark empire
Element: dark
Height: 5'6''
Weight: 145lbs
Condition: Alive
Equipment: ((Leave empty for now))
Right Hand-
Left Hand-
Body-
Right Leg-
Left Leg-
Appearance: User Image

Class Orientation: Peasant

Character Stats: ((You will be given 50 experience points to spend on these six categories. Please look over the stat system for instructions. Choose wisely.))

Strength: 5/100
Defense: 5/100
Agility: 15/100
Dexterity:15 /100
Endurance:10 /100
Magic: 0/100

Obtained Skills/Abilities:

[Free Running]

This helps the assassin get around area's faster, from going to rooftop to rooftop, to helping them climb faster.

[Counter]

The assassins wait for his enemy to attacks only to dodge and strike back quickly. This is followed up by a disarm if the enemy has a weapon. If the target is 10 points lower in Dexterity, they will be disarmed. If 30 points, the assassin may take the weapon away. And 50 points, the assassin may use the weapon against them.

[Pickpocket]

The assassins takes what ever they can from a target without the target knowing, this is from money to documents, and if the target is a bandit they can steal knives or money from them. If the assassin has 10-20 Dexterity they can pickpocket money. 30-50 to pickpocket documents and any other type of information. And 60-90 to pickpocket rare items. (Rare jewels, etc.)

[Good to Perfect Precision]

The assassins have the most precise projectile skill with throwing knives, and bows in the kingdom. They would always hit the target no matter what, if not killing them but weakening them a little bit.

["Vision"]

This helps the assassin tell the difference between friend, foe, civilians, and targets (Blue for friend, Red for foe, White, for civilian, and Yellow for target). Also gives them the ability to see hidden messages that nobody else can see.

[Empty Slot: You get more slots as you increase stat pools.]

Obtained Spells:
n/a

Mana Abilites:
Type: Dark
Capacity: very low
Level: 1
Skills: none

Inventory:
Shillings: 500

Properties Owned: none

Items Owned:none

Missions, Quest & Tasks:
Current Quest/Mission/Task:

Tasks Completed:
Quests Completed:

Level 1 Missions Completed:
Level 2 Missions Completed:
Level 3 Missions Completed:
Level 4 Missions Completed:

Values:
Morality: 50/100

Happiness: 50/100

Spirituality: 50/100

Personality:
((Put words to describe this persons personality))
- deadly
- destructive
- cruel

Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tV1-MA_xyx8

Battle Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tV1-MA_xyx8

Relationship Status: single

Fayth:
Meditation Points:

Bio:
raised by a family of assassins being constantly shocked with very high voltage transformers he lives to kill at age 3 he killed his play mate in there sand box his parents were so happy cause there baby boy had made his first kill and they couldn't find the body now he wants to have more fun in his killing.

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:51 pm

Username:keishi_rin
Character Name: Naiteki Kasai
Age: 18
Gender: female
Species: Amanojaku
Sexuality: Straight
Faction: fire
Element: fire
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 125lbs
Condition: alive?
Equipment:
Right Hand-
Left Hand-
Body-
Right Leg-
Left Leg-
Appearance: Cross-dressing Normal--->
Class Orientation: peasant

Character Stats:

Strength: 5/100
Defense: 5/100
Agility: 15/100
Dexterity:5/100
Endurance: 10/100
Magic: 10/100

Obtained Skills/Abilities:
Ikimono Sacchi(animal sense): With this ability all five of the creature's senses grow stronger. They are able to observe any and every detail of the things around him. Their sight improves and becomes very sharp, everything he see has heightened detail. They can hear even the slightest of noises. The sound of a small ant's footsteps can be heard loud and clear. Their sense of smell also sharpens, so much that he can even smell reaitsu. Their taste becomes keen, they are able to taste small trace particles of DNA in the air(hair, sweat, blood, etc.) and use it to hunt down their prey

Savage Flame: This is a skill of fire manipulation. With this ability they are able to shoot, control, and conjure the flames that circulate around their bodies. The fire can be controlled with the use of their hands to guide the flames like a tidal wave. They can conjure the fire and manipulate it's shape into that of a sword, whip, etc.

[Empty Slot: You get more slots as you increase stat pools.]

Obtained Spells:

Mana Abilites:
Type: nature
Capacity: low
Level: 10
Skills: 0

Inventory:
Shillings: 500

Properties Owned:

Items Owned:

Missions, Quest & Tasks:
Current Quest/Mission/Task:

Tasks Completed:
Quests Completed:

Level 1 Missions Completed:
Level 2 Missions Completed:
Level 3 Missions Completed:
Level 4 Missions Completed:

Values:
Morality: 50/100

Happiness: 50/100

Spirituality: 50/100

Personality:
- quiet
- serene
- anti-social

Theme Song: Super Mario World Ghost Remix by Devastus

Battle Song: Teenagers - MCR

Relationship Status: single

Fayth: none currently
Meditation Points:

Bio:
Naiteki was born as a pure Amanojaku female.... Her father, was very proud of the situation, and she would be treated like royalty....But her mother had other ideas. Her mother decided that she, Her daughter Naiteki, was going to grow up, thinking she was a boy. She looked like a boy, dressed like a boy, and acted like one, not really knowing the difference between the two.... She moved to the Fire Empire when she was 13, because of the fact her....erm... female features started to kick in, and her mother truly didnt want her daughter to have the spotlight She used to own....But it didnt really mean that she was completely hidden... It was a fact a her father did brag how he had a daughter, but only few actually saw her dress like a girl... because she felt more comfortable that way...And the fact they were in the fire empire didnt help much really...

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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:30 pm

Kuroteisei

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(( Just a note Shay, would it kill you to paragraph it? ))

agreed. That is re-dam-diculous...but you did everything right. If you have any questions...pm me.

iShayera APPROVED!

Luther the mini kingdoms are closed. You must join an empire. Your class is 'Peasent' not fighter. fix these things and tell me when you've done so.

Jimmy Your moves are correct, but you have to copy and paste (or link) The description of the moves on your profile. Everything else i right. APPROVED

Do you mean the assassin skills?? I'm confused

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:57 pm

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(( Just a note Shay, would it kill you to paragraph it? ))

agreed. That is re-dam-diculous...but you did everything right. If you have any questions...pm me.

iShayera APPROVED!

Luther the mini kingdoms are closed. You must join an empire. Your class is 'Peasent' not fighter. fix these things and tell me when you've done so.

Jimmy Your moves are correct, but you have to copy and paste (or link) The description of the moves on your profile. Everything else i right. APPROVED

Do you mean the assassin skills?? I'm confused

that is indeed what i meant. You have to link or copy and paste the skill description for each skill.

Vixin last I heard, 'Lightning' wasn't an element on here. we gave the Light empire all lightning based attacks. If you want those...join the light. make your changes (including the ones I just told jimmy about) then you're approved. Also, meditation points are only for people that choose a religion. You get bonuses based on how often you mediate in a temple or other holy place for your religion.

Keishi
You must choose a faction. Because You're amanojaku...I'd go with the Fire Empire. You've given yourself too many stat points. You get 50. also, your bio doesn't work...at all. If you'd read up on Amanojaku, you'd see that they highly revere their women...almost like royalty. So you're DENIED. You've got a bit to change. let me know when you've done so..

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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:05 pm

it is done

Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:14 pm

approved

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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:19 am

so I'm good to start too right?

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:12 am

you're good, you're good, get a move on, bub 3nodding

just make sure you spell things correctly. I'm worried for L&L if people don't know the difference between strait and straight

Tavares because you actually pm'd me and 'told' me you fixed it, I'm reviewing yours now. Had you not, I'd have forgotten about it. let this be a lesson to future rpers. People forget. anyway, you don't actually 'need' to keep those words in parenthesis. They're only there to show you what you're supposed to write in each section. APPROVED

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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:32 am

lol thanks and no don't worry I was just lacking sleep for 3 days there.

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:10 am

fixed >.<

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