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 Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:41 pm
Well actually the maximum was 10 Souls that someone could have.
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:47 pm
Sakoyoshi Daianohara Well actually the maximum was 10 Souls that someone could have.
the whole separateness of the Levels of mastery Souls coupled with the number of souls consumed was confusing...and 10 alternate souls is A LOT of flexibility. 6 should be enough... we don't want to dwarf the weapon Master class.
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:48 pm
Demoness:
Is this taken directly from the Anime? (if it is directly from the anime, odds are it has a near-guaranteed approval)
...if so, what was your source for the information?
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:49 pm
I guess that's okay. And you aren't changing the techniques, right?
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:56 pm
I may be, I have yet to look at them all in detail. Im just taking it in steps...
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:58 pm
Well okay then. Now that the whole Rules and stuff were settled, is my profile approved? Cuz I wan't have any of the abilities except for Consume Soul. That is like....mandatory.
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:08 pm
Weakness :
-The Alternate Soul is indestructible, but it can take damge still. If the Alternate Soul take too much damage, it becomes unable to continue fighting and requires another Soul before being able to continue.
Change to this:
- An Alternate Soul cannot be destroyed, but it can still take damage. If an Alternate Soul takes too much damage, it becomes unable to fight and requires another soul before being able to continue.
-You take damage if your Alternate Soul is incapacitated and takes more damage.
Slightly confused here...can you reword this?
Strengths :
-Consuming Souls makes you stronger and your abilities increase.
- Consuming Souls heals all of your wounds.
Change to this:
- Consuming a soul heals all current wounds.
-Alternate Souls can use their Weapon Form all on their own. The master does not need to control it. (but they do need to activate it?)
-Can obtain multiple Alternate Souls. Must consume a total of 15 Souls to form a new Alternate Soul.
(Do you want to go with what I wrote and say that every 3 souls eaten = an alternate soul?)
Stages and Techniques :
[ Stage One - One-Star Master ]
The Master cannot do much at this Stage. They cannot even call upon their Alternate Soul unless they have Consumed a Soul. Once they have done that, their Alternate Soul will emerge from their body. It is a bit painful, but is over quick. The Alternate Soul is not very powerful in Weapon Form. They must consume more Souls to become more powerful. The Master can have only one Alternate Soul at this time.
Jutsu Name : Consume Soul
Rank : E
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Master consumes the Soul of another RPC. The only way to consume a Soul is to defeat an enemy in combat and remove their soul on the brink of death. To consume the souls, the Master will reach into the enemy's body, but will not harm them physically. They rip the Soul from the body after then will devour it. The Alternate Soul will be the one who consumes the Soul after it has been formed. When a soul is stolen, then that soul's owner dies.
Jutsu Name : Activate Weapon Form
Rank : E
Elemental Ethnicity : N/A
Description : The Master converts his/her Alternate Soul into their Alternate Form.
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:13 pm
Sakoyoshi Daianohara Well okay then. Now that the whole Rules and stuff were settled, is my profile approved? Cuz I wan't have any of the abilities except for Consume Soul. That is like....mandatory.
...you can start with the 'E' rank techniques (as you need them to use your alternate soul, but remember you need to submit your alternate soul first.)
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:19 pm
1st Edit - That's fine.
2nd Edit - If an Alternate Souls take too much damage and becomes incapacitated, any further damage that Soul receives shall also be received by the Master.
3rd Edit - Okay. That'll work.
4th Edit - Let's change it to this..... "An Alternate Soul can use another Alternate Soul's Weapon Form if the Master is unable to fight."
5th Edit - That's good. I like that.
6th Edit - Oops! I forgot to put that part in there.
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:31 pm
4th edit - I don't know, I think that may be too strong. Why don't we just allow autonomous control to activate alternate soul's own form if the user is incapacitated...(although once the user is downed, any two souls can be awakened, but must stay out and cannot be swapped.)
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:41 pm
Well who will actually wield the Weapon that the Soul turns into. This goes with the rule that says three Souls may defend the Master if the Master is incapacitated. If one Soul can turn into a gun, then it can't fire without someone to pull the trigger.
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:53 pm
Ahhhh.. I get it. I guess I envisioned the "weapon" as forming on the alternate Soul... kind of like, having the alternate soul's arm morph into a sword... or a shield, or something like that...
Hmmmm, well yes then, if that is the case, how about we have 4 souls rise up... 1 which will hold one alternate soul's weapon form, and another which will hold another alternate soul's defense form?
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:55 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 9:15 pm
Alright, well make those edits and we'll provisionally approve this Bloodline for now and work on it. this however should allow you to RP with it for at least a little while. Just repost it for now and then we'll link it to your profile and you'll be all set.
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Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 8:47 am
Cobra_X Demoness:
Is this taken directly from the Anime? (if it is directly from the anime, odds are it has a near-guaranteed approval)
...if so, what was your source for the information? Narutopedia but some of the techniques I made up
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