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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:10 pm
Lothar is being taken out.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:11 pm
wtf? i could've sworn i'd pressed....oh nevermind. thanks
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:12 pm
if i fix it, can i keep it? i like the idea behind it
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:37 pm
The clan itself is overpowered, poorly described, has too many abilities, makes no sense, and so forth. I was certain it had already been taken out. Sorry, but no.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:44 pm
eh, fair enough. Alright.
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Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 6:32 am
Rpc Name: Damien Oweno Rpc Element: Suiton Rpc Type: Taijutsu
Rp Sample: Damien's fists connected with the leaf ninja's face. The shinobi's recoil lasted a split second before he was once again assaulting Damien with a barrage of punches. A punch to the gut doubled Damien over, and the elbow over the head sent him to the ground. This isn't working... He heard the Sanbi think dimly. well if you'd shut up and help, maybe we'd be getting somewhere, Damien countered in his head. He rose slowly, feeling the Sanbi slowly lend him some power. His skin grew taut as he got on his feet. The Leaf ninja flicked his nose, then rushed in. He punched at Damien with enthusiasm. Damien blocked as well as he could, but an uppercut elbow to the chin sent him into the air. The blow would've stunned him, but for his skin was harden and deadened the pain. He flipped backwards in the air and landed, showing the Leaf ninja how little his blows were doing. Thanks He thought, in a better mood than he had been. The leaf ninja's chakra started to build. Damien crouched, on guard for whatever the shinobi tried.
"5th Gate, OPEN!" Yelled the ninja. His skin turned red and his chakra flared, almost knocking Damien over. The ninja held still for just a second, before disappearing from sight. Damien's eyes flicked over the area, searching for the ninja. He appeared suddenly, his fist embedded into Damien's stomach. He became a blur, vanishing in the blink of an eye, than reappearing on a different side of Damien's guard. A blow to the back launched him a distance, mercifully giving him a little time to think.
Damien closed his eyes and entered a world of complete darkness. Within his mind, he could see a large gate, holding Isonade at bay. The massive turtle grinned devilishly. He......fast.... Spoke the Sanbi slowly. Damien ran towards the gate, bringing up the key he had used when he first defeated the Demon within him. "Will you shut up and 'do' something!" Damien thought, as he plunged the key into the gate and turned. The doors opened, blasting him backwards, but when his eyes opened to reveal the leaf ninja, they were circular and turtle like.
"A Turtle Sage?" said the leaf ninja in wonder. "Not quite" said Damien as a tail sprout from him as his body coated with protective chakra. He stood up slowly, his speed reducing as his skin got harder and chakra rose. He looked around, and crouched as the leaf ninja disappeared once more. Damien's fists snapped out at a random, trying to stop the shinobi from rushing in on him.Not good enough He thought as the shinobi appeared in front of him and sent him flying to the side with a lightning fast roundhouse. He had already unlocked the Sanbi's power, so he commanded the demon to give more of it. Fine.....I....Help, the Sanbi thought as Damien picked himself up once more.
A second tail sprouted. Damien began to feel lethargic. He stood up extremely slowly, searching his surroundings with a dimmer sort of disinterest. He was slightly larger than he had been, and his chakra appeared thicker than it had been. Leaf Hurricane! The leaf shinobi shouted as he jumped into a spin kick. Damien was too slow to avoid it. The foot landed directly on Damien's temple, but he didn't even feel it. They both stared at the foot still placed at his temple. The demon chakra coated Damien's body from head to toe, completely protecting him. He moved to flick the foot away, but the shinobi had already disappeared. He appeared a distance away and performed some handsigns. Mugensajin Daitopa Damien heard faintly. Suddenly wind blasted him. He held fast, digging his feet into the ground and crouching low. A tree ripped from the ground and was sent into the air. Can we finish this if you don't mind? thought Damien at the Sanbi. A third tail sprouted out as Isonade took control over the body. His body grew larger, and he roared defiantly. Damien stared at the ninja, who was frozen with shock and fear.
Damien smashed his foot into the ground, and found himself 15 feet down from where he'd started. He went through a series of handsigns fed to him by the Sanbi, and opened his mouth and shot forth a torrent of water, quickly causing a lake to form. He stood on the lake and watched. The leaf ninja disappeared again, but Damien could track the shinobi's footsteps on the water. When the shinobi came in to attack, Damien held up an arm and clothes-lined him. The speed of the leaf shinobi gave the blow enough force to instantly knock the ninja unconscious. Damien walked away, leaving the man to drown. Happy? The Sanbi thought as the tails retracted and Damien was given full control over his body once more. yes, I'm happy. Demon Applying For: Sanbi - Isonade
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:03 am
Kuroteisei Rpc Name: Damien Oweno Rpc Element: Suiton Rpc Type: Taijutsu Rp Sample: Damien's fists connected with the leaf ninja's face. The shinobi's recoil lasted a split second before he was once again assaulting Damien with a barrage of punches. A punch to the gut doubled Damien over, and the elbow over the head sent him to the ground. This isn't working... He heard the Sanbi think dimly. well if you'd shut up and help, maybe we'd be getting somewhere, Damien countered in his head. He rose slowly, feeling the Sanbi slowly lend him some power. His skin grew taut as he got on his feet. The Leaf ninja flicked his nose, then rushed in. He punched at Damien with enthusiasm. Damien blocked as well as he could, but an uppercut elbow to the chin sent him into the air. The blow would've stunned him, but for his skin was harden and deadened the pain. He flipped backwards in the air and landed, showing the Leaf ninja how little his blows were doing. Thanks He thought, in a better mood than he had been. The leaf ninja's chakra started to build. Damien crouched, on guard for whatever the shinobi tried.
"5th Gate, OPEN!" Yelled the ninja. His skin turned red and his chakra flared, almost knocking Damien over. The ninja held still for just a second, before disappearing from sight. Damien's eyes flicked over the area, searching for the ninja. He appeared suddenly, his fist embedded into Damien's stomach. He became a blur, vanishing in the blink of an eye, than reappearing on a different side of Damien's guard. A blow to the back launched him a distance, mercifully giving him a little time to think. Damien closed his eyes and entered a world of complete darkness. Within his mind, he could see a large gate, holding Isonade at bay. The massive turtle grinned devilishly. He......fast.... Spoke the Sanbi slowly. Damien ran towards the gate, bringing up the key he had used when he first defeated the Demon within him. "Will you shut up and 'do' something!" Damien thought, as he plunged the key into the gate and turned. The doors opened, blasting him backwards, but when his eyes opened to reveal the leaf ninja, they were circular and turtle like. "A Turtle Sage?" said the leaf ninja in wonder. "Not quite" said Damien as a tail sprout from him as his body coated with protective chakra. He stood up slowly, his speed reducing as his skin got harder and chakra rose. He looked around, and crouched as the leaf ninja disappeared once more. Damien's fists snapped out at a random, trying to stop the shinobi from rushing in on him. Not good enough He thought as the shinobi appeared in front of him and sent him flying to the side with a lightning fast roundhouse. He had already unlocked the Sanbi's power, so he commanded the demon to give more of it. Fine.....I....Help, the Sanbi thought as Damien picked himself up once more. A second tail sprouted. Damien began to feel lethargic. He stood up extremely slowly, searching his surroundings with a dimmer sort of disinterest. He was slightly larger than he had been, and his chakra appeared thicker than it had been. Leaf Hurricane! The leaf shinobi shouted as he jumped into a spin kick. Damien was too slow to avoid it. The foot landed directly on Damien's temple, but he didn't even feel it. They both stared at the foot still placed at his temple. The demon chakra coated Damien's body from head to toe, completely protecting him. He moved to flick the foot away, but the shinobi had already disappeared. He appeared a distance away and performed some handsigns. Mugensajin Daitopa Damien heard faintly. Suddenly wind blasted him. He held fast, digging his feet into the ground and crouching low. A tree ripped from the ground and was sent into the air. Can we finish this if you don't mind? thought Damien at the Sanbi. A third tail sprouted out as Isonade took control over the body. His body grew larger, and he roared defiantly. Damien stared at the ninja, who was frozen with shock and fear. Damien smashed his foot into the ground, and found himself 15 feet down from where he'd started. He went through a series of handsigns fed to him by the Sanbi, and opened his mouth and shot forth a torrent of water, quickly causing a lake to form. He stood on the lake and watched. The leaf ninja disappeared again, but Damien could track the shinobi's footsteps on the water. When the shinobi came in to attack, Damien held up an arm and clothes-lined him. The speed of the leaf shinobi gave the blow enough force to instantly knock the ninja unconscious. Damien walked away, leaving the man to drown. Happy? The Sanbi thought as the tails retracted and Damien was given full control over his body once more. yes, I'm happy. Demon Applying For: Sanbi - Isonade It looks pretty good, i think you have a good grasp of how the sanbi works, and it seemed like you were implying that you were a perfect host, which would allow you to release all three tails and have your very essence consumed by the demon. But anyway, I say APPROVED!!! congratulations
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 10:52 am
Hello all. Sorry if this demon is not open but I did not see it's spot filled on the first post and I didn't see it claimed in the Master List. I was told that the current Nanbi host is on hiatus and there's no telling if or when she'd be coming back. So I'm just inserting this as a reference in case you want to have her replaced. I am RPing this as if I were a perfect host. I hope that such a thing is allowed.
Rpc Name: Izanari Yobachiro Rpc Element: Doton Rpc Type: Assassin Rp Sample:
They were coming and they were coming faster then he ever could have expected. Damn these Mist Ninja! I thought there attack was suppose to be next week. It seems we were fooled. Izanari could feel the footsteps of the soldiers quickly invading the village after just bombarding the gates with numerous attacks. He had to think fast if he wanted to save his home. Right now Izanari was in the Tsuchikage's office, hoping to speak to her to devise some sort of counter strike, but she was no where to be found. "Dammit! Of all times for you to be missing, you choose now!" The jinchuuriki could hear the Nanabi buzzing rapidly inside his mind, trying to get his attention. Taking a moment to listen to him closely, he translated the buzzing to understand what the demon had to say. "The...caverns? Of course!" If he could lead a multitude of the ninja into the caverns, he would be able to crush them like little maggots. This would require a bit of ingenuity but it was nothing that he couldn't handle. Running towards the door of the office, he pushed it open fiercely, nearly breaking it off of it's hinges as he ran downstairs and stormed out of the building. Once making it outside, he began doing some parkour to get to the top of a building, jumping up the fire escapes, and flipping off of walls until he made it to the top. Taking only a second to gather his breathe, he began to leaping rooftop to rooftop, until reaching an area where he could see the Mist Ninja fighting some of the first response Combat Iwa Nin. Performing some quick handsigns, a smoke cloud appeared next to him as an exact copy stood in the same position as him. "Sekkai Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Rock Clone Technique)!" They looked at each other and nodded as they ran down to the battle field.
The Iwa ninja cleared out as they realized who was behind them, as much of the Mist ninja seemed rather confused. Quickly performing a series of about forty hand-signs in unison, the duo stomped their feet on the ground as plates of rocks, shaped like shurikens begun to rise as if in a zero gravity chamber. "Earth Tile Shuriken!" The rocks launched out like a barrage of bullets, knocking ninja down and piercing the bodies of some of the weaker ninja. Izanari's clone disappeared, reducing to nothing but a pile of rocks. The mist ninja looked ferociously at the Jounin Jinchuuriki as they just witnessed many of their comrades fall. Taking this time to be an opportunist, Izanari, stuck up a middle finger as he began running to the caverns. Like a pack of wolves chasing dinner, they followed him, not knowing that he was leading them into their inevitable death. He would enjoy crushing the life out of each and every one of them for what they had done to his village so far. He would NOT allow them to gain any more deaths. Their killstreak would end now!
Izanari finally made it to the cavern, and he could still hear and feel the crowd of people chasing him. No one knew these caverns better then he did, so as he smiled a devilish smile, he began running. First it went into the wide open space but then he ran towards the edge of the tunnel, which had three large openings. The tunnel on the farthest left would lead them to a pit in which they would fall to their doom. The tunnel in the center was laced with tripwire that would case large boulders to fall down at alarming speeds, crushing the bodies of all unlucky enough to enter. Alas, the right tunnel would not have any traps, but would instead lead only deeper into the cavern which was filled with more tunnels and powerful monsters. Running into the right tunnel, Izanari began to awaken the Nanabi. His eyes went from their natural form as they began to look more bug-like. His skin began to become dry and rough, as scales formed all over his body. He felt an odd tingling feeling as he grew four more arms and slightly larger in size, reaching an 8 foot two, rather then his normal five foot eleven. Izanari stopped running as he place two of his left hands on the wall and began to blend in with the rocks around him. Still feeling the footsteps of his enemies. It seemed like they had decided to split up into three groups. Minutes passed by as screams that came from the groups who took the center and left path, echoed through the halls of the cavern. The group that took the right side paused for a moment, no doubt scared about what must lie within these caves. Moments went by, as they began walking once again.
Finally they entered the area, but they did not see him. Not even the chakra sensors could pick up on him as they walked slowly, turning around and nearly jumping out of their skin with each noise they heard, no matter how small. Their, numbers were small now as only twelve of them remained. The leader of the group seemed to be a Hatake user. More then likely a jounin as well. Izanari removed his camouflage, but still was yet to be noticed. His hands now off all wall as he placed them on the ground, he sent a fierce tremor in their direction, shaken them up, causing most of them to fall and scream like little girls. Gathering up large amounts of chakra he began to perform on of his ultimate techniques. "Earth Plate Barrage!" Stomping on the ground he began to perform an even more devastating version of the attack as he launched oversized shuriken shaped boulders at them, crushing almost all of them instantly, but somehow, their leader survived but was wounded. That would mean that his speed was greatly reduced. Pushing all six hands onto the ground, he lifted the ground up until he had six stone staffs in his hands.
The Hatake used a fire justu as he launched a fairly large fireball at the host, hoping to catch him off guard. Using a bit of earth bending, he stepped on the ground as a large wall blocked the jutsu. Running up, Izanari jumped onto the top of the wall as he leaped into the air, coming down on the unsuspecting jounin as he used all the force he had to push the staffs through his body. Making sure to push two of the staffs through his victim's head and his heart, Izanari look into his eyes as he left this world.
The jinchuuriki was breathing heavily as he stumbled a bit and returned to his normal state. He had used a large amount of chakra already and wasn't sure if he could use anymore. Izanari fell to his knees as he noticed someone with a high chakra level approaching him quickly. "Oh s**t..." He couldn't fight anymore. He still had his staffs but he would have to yank them out of the hatake's body. He began crawling to the lifeless body at his only hope for survival. "There you are!" Izanari froze. <******** all over Izanari fell flat our on his stomach as he looked over and seen the man screaming, but he couldn't make out what he was saying. He was losing it, and about to pass out. The man was running toward him, and instantly he felt blood splattered all over him. He closed his eyes thinking he was dead, but oddly, he didn't feel anything. He had enough strength to open his eyes a bit as he seen the man ripped in two the Tsuchikage smiling down at him. "Thank god...so you're not completely useless..." He smiled as he let his eyes close and felt his kage lift him up. Iwa would stand tall for another day.
Demon Applying For: Nanabi
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:31 am
Rpc Name: Hara Arekkusu Rpc Element: Lightning Rpc Type: Sealer Rp Sample: A quiet day in a little village in Sand Country, was suddenly disturbed by the sound of someone crashing through the wall. It was the middle of a summer day the sun was intense. The villager looked around as the wall of the local bar was torn open.
As they got close they saw a young teen holding his cheek, with a red marked on it from where he was hit. Though curiously enough he had a big grin on his face as he stood up dusting himself carefully. "Your quite violent." Arekku said as he rubbed his head after he had finish dusting himself. The sun reflected from the metal of his head band revealing he was a Suna nin.
From the hole of the wall a giant of a women came out holding a club. Her eyes had a murderous intent for Arekku who just stood there carelessly with his smile. "Boyo do you even know who I am!? If you do I find it hard to believe you come by yourself!" She yelled at him while flicking him off with his middle finger. As she walked closer to Arekku who just looked up toward her face, the woman was at least two seven feet tall though she had a slender body with curves. She growled at the young man as she suddenly dropped her giant club down at Arekku.
Arekku didn't move away from the attack as he put his forearms to block it. The impact hurt his arms almost fracturing his bone, but he dealt with the pain. "Yuna of the Red Stone. You been charged for assault, theft, and attempted kidnapping by the elders of Suna. I have already giving you one warning to come peacefully with me. This is my...." Arekku was saying as he was interrupted by the incoming knee of Yuna to Arekku's face. And though it looked like it connected Arekku simply jumped and used the force of the knee to carry him away. "As I was saying this is my declaration of forceful retrieval. You will be tried as a traitor of Sunakagure as well." Arekku said as he suddenly kicked a man who came to attack him from his left side.
Suddenly Arekku was now surrounded by random thug looking members of Yuna's gang replacing the villagers that were just there a moment ago. All could be heard in the area was an awkward silence then follow by the snickering of the members and the faraway yells of the villagers who had left to find shelter.
"One, two three........... only ten? No wait twelve?" Arekku asked rubbing his head carefully as he put his hands together to make a seal. The floor around two that were in front of the and three that were in the back of the alley erupted. The eruption was small, but cause a hole to appear that was preemptively made with wood for a foot hold and covered by dirt. The hole was deep and not made by conventional means as well there was a container that broke inside which release a sleeping gas. Before long there was sounds of fighting around Arekku and Yuna as two more sand nin appeared to Arekku's aid. " Mission capture Yuna of Red Stone, mission rank b, team of three sent out. Plan A, trap set up a success." Arekku recited the situation to himself with a sly smile as he rushed the giant of a women. Yuna in response swung her giant club across at the direction he was coming at her as well placing a hand on the floor. Though Arekku was got low enough to dodge it by falling to the floor and using his hands to run as well. He then was hit by a sudden earth column that came from the floor underneath him. The column send him up in the air though he was able to use it as a jumping base greatly reducing the attack damage potential.
"Opening." Arekku thought to himself as he flew in the air with a slight grinned on his face as he unsheathe the katana on his back. With the sun shining on his back he threw his sword down to her as a projectile to her, though he charged it up using Nagare Isou no Jutsu (Current Transfer Skill) before he did threw it. It surprised Yuna to see that Arekku threw the katana at her as she had gotten her club ready to block a downward strike from it, instead of dodging she carelessly swatted it away instead. Now unable to see Arekku thanks to the sun as well a moment of pain, leaving her perfectly open for a second or more. Arekku landed on Yuna's shoulder with great force to send her down to the floor. While they fell back he placed his feet so they would land on the middle of her arm restraining Yuna's movements. Moving his hands quickly to make a new set of seals as a small bluff to make her flinch in fright of his finisher. Only to be suddenly knocked out by a powerful physical punch instead.
Arekku then took out his; steel wire,rope, and a simple seal. With these items he started tying her up quickly. On her head he placed an explosive tag, after finishing all these steps he sat on top of her large body as he waited for comrades finishing off the other pest. When they came he just smiled, "I took down five of them so you guys get to carry her home. Wait six actually, or was it seven? Either way." Arekku said as he jumped up from where he was sitting and before they could say anything a flash bomb rolled out off Arekku's hand. The moment it set off Arekku took this chance to run from them as the blinding flash hit his friends. He was now on the other side waving his hands at them, his victory short lived as they launched the women at him squishing him under her.
As he laid in the floor defeated under the giant women with a miserable face. "Fine I'll help....... Just please get her off me before I died."
With that scene over Arekku an his comrades from Suna finished there mission and as well returned to there village. Leaving the quiet little village and hopefully the blazing sun behind them though that was doubtful.
Demon Apllying For: Hachibi
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Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:02 pm
Since it seems that Lance won't be getting on anytime soon, I will judge this.
This application had absolutely NOTHING to do with using the Hachibi. You're applying for Hachibi, so you have to show us that you can skillfully use it. The fact that you didn't know that an RP sample must include elements of what you're applying for worries me already.
This was generally hard to read due to the various grammatical errors. Please fix those.
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Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:15 pm
I did use what little my rpc has in the last one, I used my lightning, an a minor seal, though mostly through the last sample I did use hachibi raw strength, this one I added a scene of demon stage one at least taking off the lightning part. As well I don't think the grammar was so horribly bad on the last one, though here is a better fixed up version.) Naito_Arekkusu7 Rpc Name: Hara Arekkusu Rpc Element: Lightning Rpc Type: Sealer Rp Sample: A quiet day in a little village in Sand Country was suddenly disturbed by the sound of someone crashing through the wall. The villager looked around as the wall of the local bar was completely torn open. The hole made an opening into a dirt road with some surrounding two story-buildings. As they got close they saw a young teen holding his cheek, with a red marked on it from where he was hit. Though curiously enough he had a big grin on his face as he stood up dusting himself off carefully. "You're quite violent." Arekku said as he rubbed his head after he had finish dusting himself. The sun reflected from the metal of his head band revealing he was a Suna nin.From the hole of the wall a giant of a women came out holding a club. Her eyes had a murderous intent for Arekku who just stood there carelessly with his smile. "Boyo do you even know who I am!? If you do I find it hard to believe you come all the way here by yourself! Idiot!" She yelled at him while flicking him off with her middle finger. As she walked closer to Arekku, who just looked up toward her face, it could be seen that the woman was at least seven feet tall; though, she had a slender body with some nice curves. She growled at the young man as she suddenly dropped her giant club down on Arekku. Arekku didn't move away from the attack as he put up his forearms to block it with his inhuman, demonic strength. The impact hurt his arms, almost fracturing his bone, but he dealt with the pain for now. "Yuna of the Red Stone. You been charged for assault, theft, and attempted kidnapping by the elders of Suna. I have already giving you one warning to come peacefully with me. This is my...." Arekku was saying as he was interrupted by the incoming knee of Yuna to Arekku's face. In answer, Arekku put his foot on it to use it as a platform to jump away. "As I was saying this is my declaration of forceful retrieval. You will be tried as a traitor of Sunakagure as well," Arekku finished as he suddenly kicked a man who was hiding in the crowd of villagers. Suddenly Arekku was now surrounded by several random thug-looking members from Yuna's gang, replacing the villagers that were just there a moment ago. There was a sudden rampant chaos of screams and yells as the villagers tried to run away from the area. The bandit just laughed in victory as they felt that they had the young man surrounded now.
"One, two three........... only ten? No wait twelve?" Arekku questioned curiously as he rubbed the back of his head carefully, quickly taking actions as both hands came together to form a seal. The floor around two of the men on his left side and three others in the back of the alley erupted. The eruption was small, but caused a hole to appear that was preemptively made as a trap with wood for a foot hold and covered by dirt. The hole was deep and not made by conventional means. Additionally, there was a container that broke inside which would release a sleeping gas. Before long there were sounds of fighting around Arekku and Yuna as two more sand nin appeared to Arekku's aid. " Mission capture Yuna of Red Stone, mission rank b, team of three sent out. Plan A, trap set up, a success." Arekku recited the situation to himself with a sly smile as he rushed the giant of a women. Yuna in response swung her giant club across at the direction he was coming at her as well as stomping on the floor to unleash an earth jutsu. Though Arekku had gotten low enough to dodge the swing by falling to the floor and then using his hands to keep moving using a bear crawling type of movement, he was still hit by a sudden earth column that came from the floor underneath him, the jutsu Yuna had previously set up. The column sent him up in the air. Though, he did jump up to reduce the columns blow on his body.
"Opening." Arekku thought to himself as he flew in the air with a slight grin on his face as he tapped into the demon chakra to perform a special jutsu. What appeared next was two giant horns on his head {Horns of the Ox} as well as the chakra coat, drastically changing Arekku's appearance and revealing where his inhuman strength from before had come from: the Hachibi, the bijuu he was jinchuuriki to. With Arekku's eyes becoming greener than before with a glow, his skin becoming darker, the tails behind Arekku started spinning to add a sudden twist to Arekku's descent down to Yuna. Down below Yuna made her own change of appearance as her body suddenly bulk as well as she suddenly summoned a new bigger spiked club from a scroll. She put up her defense quickly as Arekku was coming down on her at great haste now.
Arekku's attacked collided with Yuna's club in an instant, the impact would have crush any normal person. Though Yuna absorbed the blow and release it under her, instantly creating a crater underneath her. Arekku looked at her as he transformed his arms into tentacles that quickly went under the women's club and wrapped themselves around Yuna bulked up body {Tentacle Wrap}. Arekku jumped away quickly from Yuna who could only use her right arm, the one that was holding the club, as the rest was wrapped up in Arekku's chakra tentacles. The horns from his head disappeared as Arekku put some distance between himself and Yuna. Arekku then used his tentacles to slingshot him back to Yuna before they retracted back into his body.
Yuna prepared to swing her giant club at the charging Arekku, who was still in his first stage of demon mode. Arekku then caused his body to become solid with a single seal {Charge of Recklessness} as he then became a rampaging bullet heading to Yuna. Yuna swung her club the moment Arekku got close enough to her, but the hardened Arekku's pure, demon-enhanced strength knocked her club away with the sheer force of his charge. Arekku body connected to Yuna's as he tackled her with great force, sending her flying to a nearby wall and knocking her out. Taking a deep breath, Arekku calmly release his chakra coat and became normal again as he walked over to where Yuna laid unconscious.
Arekku then took out his steel wire, rope, and a simple seal. With these items he started tying her up quickly. On her head he placed an explosive tag, after finishing all these steps he sat on top of her large body as he waited for comrades to finish off the other pest. When they came he just smiled, "I took down five of them so you guys get to carry her home. Wait six actually, or was it seven? Either way." Arekku said as he jumped up from where he was sitting and before they could say anything a flash bomb rolled out off Arekku's hand. The moment it set off, Arekku took this chance to run from them as the blinding flash hit his friends. He was now on the other side waving his hands at them, his victory short lived as they launched the women at him squishing him under her.
As he laid in the floor defeated under the giant women with a miserable face. "Fine I'll help....... Just please get her off me before I died."
With that scene over, Arekku an his comrades from Suna finished there mission and returned to their village, leaving the quiet little village and hopefully the blazing sun behind them; though, that last part was doubtful.
Demon Apllying For: Hachibi
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Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:21 pm
Nai, I believe what Greg is trying to say, is that for the purposes of this application, we don't care what your RPC has. All we want to see here is your use of the demon. So, having only a small portion of the sample dedicated to the demon is going to fail your application every time. You need a completely new sample, using the demon.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:30 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Nai, I believe what Greg is trying to say, is that for the purposes of this application, we don't care what your RPC has. All we want to see here is your use of the demon. So, having only a small portion of the sample dedicated to the demon is going to fail your application every time. You need a completely new sample, using the demon. First part of fight use some of the demon passive abilities second part is mostly demon stage 1. It's not a small portion of it.
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 11:10 am
Rpc Name: N/a ( I haven't come up with a name for my second RPC i get in three months and a couple of days. For now I'll call him Host) Rpc Element: Fuuton ( Because Hachibi is a Suna aligned demon ) Rpc Types: Offensive, Combo User Rpc Profession: Taijutsu ( Perks: Warrior's Rush, Improved Reflexes ) Rpc Rank in Rp Sample: Chunnin Rp Sample: Host stood in the desert, looking around slowly awaiting for his sparring partner to surface. " Come on! you are ranks above me, and you've known about your power for longer! " Host said, his dark skin turning darker as he began to get angry. He was always angry, always pissed. Most people thought it was because of the Hachibi he housed, since it was known for being brutal, impatient, angry, and one track minded. He was actually angry because people labeled him as strong even though most of his power and drive came from the demon. As such, he became attached to his demon, often falling into it's rage for fun, just to get stopped by the Ichibi host, David. " Come on you coward! this is how you always catch me! " He said, breating heavily, his anger beginning to get the best of him.
Suddenly a tendril of sand shot out of the sand, attempting to wrap around his arm as two more came forth, one attempting to tie his legs, the other attempting to grab his neck as a stone pillar shot forth at his back as if to lift him off of the ground, taking away his body's natural strength to use the ground for leverage.
Host smiled as the tendrils wrapped around his arm and neck, giving a bit of slack as the stone pillar lifted him off of the ground. " Hachibi, lend me... your... STRENGTH!" He shouted, his eyes gleaming black for a second, Suddenly tentacles like that of a brown octopus came from his arms. His free arm shot straight behind him laying flat against the stone pillar as his tentacles for that arm wrapped around it and suctioned themselves to it, causing a perfect grip on the pillar. "Guraaaaaaaaah! " Host shouted as he swung his arm around, to a straight upwards position, coming with it was bits and peices of the pillar which was now a pillar of only three fourths it's original size, topped with rubble and a crouching Host. " Now for the finale! " He said his eyes gleaming black yet again as he tapped the power of the Hachibi again. His fists glowed with a dark aura, which festered and shook until his hands were pitch black. The tentacles receeded into his arms, and he ripped his captured arm free, spreading his stance as the tendril of sand around his ankles was ripped, sand now littering the rubble of the stone pillar. " Feel my wrath! " He said, jumping down and getting prepared to use a technique he had been working on. Through days and days of watching someone punch and send out chakra shockwaves with that punch to create a crater, he had actually mastered it. He leaped straight from the top of the pillar and shot toward the ground, as soon as his fists hit the ground, all other sound was canceled out as a deafening boom was heard as his dark chakra shot out in a wave from his fists, flattening all the sand in the area for about a hundred meters. no dunes were left standing, and about twenty meters away stood David, a sand barrier barely standing between him and the remnants of dark chakra which fizzled in the air. " So, you were hiding there huh?!?!? " Host said, his eyes flashing black again. Dark chakra formed on his head, shifting and changing, slowly white could be seen through holes in the darkness as horns were created from the darkness. Letting out a roar as his entire body was consumed by the inky blackness. Suddenly the blackness dispersed, leaving only an insanely dark boy standing there, eight tentacles sprung from his hindquarters, like tails, and suddenly inky black chakra slowly curled from those tails, the solid tails reatched up around his entire body, one for each leg, two for each arm, and two on either side of his face, holding down everything that could be grabbed or caught on something, making Host completely aero-dynamic. Grinning host's eyes regained their regular whiteness, except his irises, which had gone from the regular brown to a striking green. he began to increase in size, his shirt ripping slightly as his size increased by double, his pants stretched to their limit, tiny rips appearing all over them. " This is the Hachibi's strength... " Host said, dark tendrils forming in the corners of his eyes as he sat on the brink of losing control again. " MY STRENGTH! " Host said, although a second voice was heard along with it, undoubtably the voice of the Hachibi.
David sighed, looking over his shoulder at Host. " You idiot. you can't hope to defeat me without gaining more power. " He said turning to face Host and raising a single open hand in host's direction. " Sand Prison. " He said, a sphere of sand forming perfectly and instantly around Host. " this training session is over. " David said, rolling his wrist so that his palm faced the sky, and slowly closing his fist, increasing the pressure inside of the sphere.
Suddenly a single side of the sphere to the right of where host had been standing burst, sand pouring out of the sphere. Host turned quickly, his white horns shrouded by a chakra tail each, a third in the middle of his forehead making another horn, and the final two attached to each of his fists, the hands of which were inky black yet again. " GURAURAHHH! " Host yelled as he ran directly at David, lowering his head. He was closing the gap quickly, busting through several walls of sand that David was creating, only slowling for a second, then picking up perfect speed again as he used Warrior's Rush after every wall stopped him. suddenly a giant sphere of sand fell on top of him. Halting instantly, host's eyes widened, He had only encountered this technique once, and last time it had nearly suffocated him. " Damn! " he said, stopping his charge knowning that David would only make it move over him and drop it again. " Gugh..." He siad, the tendrils in the sides of his eyes retreating as his rage was replaced by concentration. His arms were straight backwards, and holding onto the giant sphere of sand. The sphere began sliding and the tails that were solid shot from host's body and gripped onto the sphere, slowing it's sliding. Host began to buckle under the pressure of the shpere, which weighed far more than anyone else could have lifted. according to the other villagers, even the giant monster that ravaged the village when David was only a chunnin couldn't stand the weight, nor the impact easily. " Damn... Damn... Damn, damn dman damn damn damn! " He said, his vision getting blurry as his chakra was draining quickly. in a last attempt he focused his last bit of usable chakra on making more tentacles sprout from his arms and latch onto the sphere. Gaining the upper hand with a total of eighteen arms worth of strength on the sphere Host shifted the sphere in his hands getting directly underneath it and changing his stance to get into a position to throw the sphere directly at David. " Here Ca- " He said as the sphere disappated and covered him in a dune that was as tall as the Kazekage's tower.
Several hours later, host popped out of the top of the dune, breathing heavily. " what the hell!! " he shouted as David finally took the time to climb the dune and lean forward to look host in the eyes.
" I told you, this sparring session is over. " David said, openning his hand andlifting it into the air, a sphere holding Host's body inside popping out of the top. " now, let's get you to a hospital, I heard that snap. " David said sighing. ' He's gotten a lot stronger, if he hadn't have broken his arm freeing it from my sand restriction technique, he probably could have just tossed the sphere backwards. ' David thought to himself as he walked back to the village, the sphere with host in it not even floating anymore, it was rolling behind him, going up into the air every now and again from host's head getting put on the bottom. Demon Applying For: Hachibi
( Sorry Hinote, but if this character knew that David was a host as well, he would be trying to learn from David on how to use a demon effectivly. also since I didn't ask permission to use David in the Rp sample, I made him the Kazekage in the sample. )
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