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 Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:13 am
All of your edits are acceptable. And btw, Explosive Clay is actually an Elemental Combination Technique, but remain weak against Raiton Chakra.
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Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 10:31 am
Nah it's undertstandable dude =^^=
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:15 pm
Panthers: Alright a few issues
1. The number of posts one can remain in these states is too long, at the current number of posts one could continue to have a gate active for 40 posts... this is just ridiculous. 3 posts for each stage. This technique is very similar to the eight gates and so you will be able to maintain it for that same amount of time. Perhaps as Jounin you can remain in the first stage for 4 posts, 5 at Sannin/Kage, and for second stage perhaps you could maintain it for 4 posts at Sannin.
2. The ability to remain sain, you can spend twenty posts to learn how to remain in control during the third gate, but never for the fourth. The reason I say this is because it seems that this is one of the major parts of the whole jutsus concept, your character loses themselves to rage.
3. Just make it clear that it should require more training than the average jutsu, I'm thinking ten posts for the first three stages in which he focuses on the darkness within, and twenty posts for the final stage doing the same thing.
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:30 pm
Character's Name:Zin Your Rank:Genin Name of Jutsu: Kiri biggrin emon Gate Opening Element of the Jutsu: Darkness Rank of Jutsu:The Jutsu is a move in development. It enables my char. to get stronger as he grows. The demon gate opening has four stages.Or four Demon Gates.
*At Genin level,Zin can use the technique but only to the first gate release.
*At Chuunin,Zin level can release two gates and have a reduced effect if they simply open only the first gate. But the opening of the second gate will still have tremendous effect on the body.Also at this level the opening of the first gate will be able to last longer.
*At Jounin,Zin level,my char. will have the ability to release three gates. The opening of the first gate will have minor bodily harm,the second gate release will have a reduced bodily harm but not significant. But the opening of the third gate will actually have tremendous effect on the body. The first and second releases although will jave a stronger duration at this level.
*Finally at any level above Jounin my char. will have mastered the technique entirely. He will be able to open the last and final gate at the cost of a near to death exposure to the body. Also the three gates underneath the final gate will have a stronger duration.
Range of Jutsu:The move happens to the self,so there is no true range. Except for the range in which my char. will be able to hold the technique.
Jutsu's Element:No true element.
Jutsu Type:Again it depends on the char. Zin will be Taijutsu/Battojutsu based with very select few ninjutsu/genjutsu. If any.
Description:To begin with,my character developed this technique with the thought of the psychology of the mind and body. As well as wanting to gain power the of having either the curse mark or bijuu's without having the pain of....well having them. Thinking like his father, Zin wishes to gain power on his own accord.Going off the theory that everyone has a bad,evil,and rather unwanted side that lies within them;regardless of how powerful it may make them. Well my Char.(Zin) took this to an entirely new level. Instead of repressing the darkness that hides in our souls he would instead force it to reveal itself. Now time to describe the stages in which he named by the degree's of emotional dislike.
First Demon Gate:Anger *Abilities= In this stage there is a spike in the chakra. I wouldn't nessarily say the chakra is doubled but it indeed is a tremendous raise in power.Zin's attack has increased lightly but his speed is definately the focus of the form. In this form there is no physical change but their is a thin line of chakra surrounding Zin.He will also gain an increase with his poison that lies within his body.(Fangs) He will be able to hold his power for a sustained amount of time.(Which means only 3 posts). Although at higher levels,as said before,the ability to hold the power will be increased.(Meaning 4-5 for Chuunin&Jounin but 5 for any level higher.) *Weakness:After the time is up(depending on the rank),Zin will take the repercussions of forcing the dark entity out of him. At a Genin level he will face tremendous pain even to a point of a comatose state.(Meaning I will do the pick a number option 1-10,which will depict the severity of the punishment. 1 being the lowest,ten being the highest.This method will be used through the majority of the technique.) Second Demon Gate Release:Hate *Ability:At this stage of the technique Zin is has another tremendous chakra boost. Speed and strength his near to doubled due to his basis the prominant basis of this technique being Taijutsu except for a select few ninjutsu's. He takes a small change physical appearance. The thin line of chakra has become thicker. The ends of his hair will start to become while as well as his entire eyes starting to form into milky white slits instead a normal pupil for a Naga Clan member..Zin will also be able to produce even more deadly poison,to where it is near to toxic. This will be the last powerful increase of his poisonous fangs.(At this level he can sustain the technique for 3-4 posts.) *Weakness of this stage:In this stage,depending on the level of my char.,will have a hardened effect. Like the first,it will put the body in an immobilizing pain. (My char. will be in this harmed state depending on what my outcome in the *post action* action. 1-10) Third Demon Gate Release:Rage *Abilities: In this state there is a doubling of the power of both chakra,speed,and strength. My character is also become more demonic in mentallity and will even attack teamates at this stage. There is also a huge diffrence in physical shape.The white tips at the ends of his hair will have also become brighter and rise up a little more up the strands. The slitted pupils will have become more apparent,and the eyes will have an intense glow to it. The last true physical feature will be the horns that protrude from both sides of the skull. They will take the shape that of a bull. Meaning a low dip from the base of the horn and a slow increase upwards. (1 inch protrusion.)(Also,the length of this move will be up to 4-5 posts before the reverse affects take place.) *Weakness of this stage: Like the other two there will be horrid pain my char. will have to face by bringing up this power. The pain,if you wish to inquire,will feel like burning needles stabbing Zin in every orifice of his body. His eyes may bleed due to the trama of using such a tremendous,yet deadly force.The recovery and injury time is also quite a punishment.(Meaning using the *post action* routine,he will have 10-15 posts to go through.) Fourth Demon Gate Release:Grudge *Ablities: In this form Zin is practically a demon himself. He has revealed the darkest portion of the human soul and brought it to surface. His speed,power,and strength in increased tenfold and there is no bias to whom his enemy is. Teamates and those around are in complete and utter danger if they think to reverse this move.His nails,the outlining of his eyes would turn black and half of his hair will have turned pearl white. The pupils will have turned into milky long slits. Also in this form Zin will not only have horns upon his head,which have also grew;in which they have grown to resemble that of a fully grown bulls but with Zin's bloodline the bone is more than deadly. But the other areas these powerful bones are protruding.And they are as follows:each bone that makes up the spine,the shoulders have bones shooting out horizontally,the elbow has a bone shooting out the back,around his wrist are bones protruding,his knee caps has a bone firing out from the front and lastly,there are bones shooting out the back of his ankles.At the tips of each of these bones will be doused with the toxic poison that flows through Naga Clan at it's limit.(Duration is a max of 5- maybe6. But it takes quite a bit of training posts.) *Weaknesses of this Stage: The pain is near to death to put it bluntly. Every muscle,joint and limb is in sever pain. Though some extremely high leveled medical nin may be able to help a little but the use of pulling out the darkness from one's soul is are harsh move. Yatho will have a very long recovery after using this techniqe. (15-20 posts to recover.) Some notes to further explain
*Zin has to open every gate in order to unlock the gate he
wants. (Meaning,if he wanted to unlock the third gate,he would have to unlock the first,second,then the third.)
*In which,the posting of each release will reset the posting timer. But that doesn't mean the posting is doubled. It simply means that one would have to post the max amount for that stage.
*As said before Zin can alleviate some of the pain if he uses the low level gates while at a higher level:
-At Genin level Zin can only use the first gate. Period.
-At Chuunin level Zin and use both first and second gates. in which the first gate's punishment for using the technique will be lessened.(By only 2 posts.)
-At Jounin level,Zin can use all three gates. The punishment will be lessened for the lower two.Meaning a decrease of two posts for opening the second gate at this level,and a decrease of four posts for using the first gate at this level.
-Any level HIGHER than Jounin,Zin can open all gates. The punishment for using the lower will be as follows:For opening the third will be a decrease of two posts.For opening the second will be a decrease of four posts,and for opening the first gate will be no punishment as that level is practically mastered.
*The last note I can really think of for now is that Zin,like the demons,angels,and Curse mark individuals,can train to be sane during these levels. Though this truly only pertains to Zin's second and third release it posting goes as follows (The Fourth can never be controlled):
-For control over the first it takes 5 posts
-For control over the second it takes 10 posts
-For control over the third there must be 15 posts.
-For control over the fouth there must be 20 posts.
-This is not including the recovery time.
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:37 pm
Is that a better edit? ^^
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Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:54 am
Your Rank:
Name of Jutsu: Dimensional Caving: Black Hole Force
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu:5 meters
Jutsu's Element:Fuinjutsu
Description: This jutsu requires no handseals as long as the user is able to use the 'Seal Creation Technique'.
By applying a seal in a specified location the user is able to freely unleash a vacuum force from the created seal. The vacuum has an insistent pull, drawing in surrounding matter within 5 meters towards a black sphere at it's center. A crater will be formed where this jutsu was executed Five meters deep and wide while sizeable debri within 10 meters can be drawn into the sphere if not properly bolted.
This technique literally compresses matter into such a fall form that it enters a different dimension, leaving empty space in the local area. Getting caught in this technique results in instant decimation as the victim is put under pressure to intense to shrug off. Luckily a loud warning keen alerts them to the seal activation.
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Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu: Seal Creation Technique
Rank of Jutsu: E
Range of Jutsu:They can send seals as far as they want
Jutsu's Element:Fuinjutsu
Description: The user can create Fuinjutsu seals from small amounts of their chakra and can place them on any surface, even water with no fear of damage. The seals can even be branded onto matter such as flesh, wood, or brick, and are very hard to view without chakra sensing abilities/
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 5:34 pm
Your Rank:Jounin
Name of Jutsu:Bullet Sand
Rank of Jutsu:B
Range of Jutsu:15 meters
Jutsu's Element:Earth
Description:The user of this jutsu can form sand on the ground and in the air into the size of ball shaped bullets that float up into the air and the back of the bullet sand gets a pointed edge to increase the speed to that of a bullet shooting out of a rifle,the amount of bullets varies from rank.
academy student=1
genin=3
chuunin=5
Jounin=7
Sannin=9
Kage=11
the power of the bullets are like sharp rocks hitting you as if you where wearing nothing,the drawback of this jutsu is that there is no complete control.The user can only shoot it in one direction and once it is released,it goes in that direction and is not able to switch or be manipulated to another direction.But for Jounin and higher,they can combine all of the bullets to form a large boulder shaped object to either fire at the opponent or use it as a quick defensive shield.This jutsu can be combined with the lightning element or water element to send electrically charged sand bullets and an opponents or bullet shaped mud to cause confusion or stick someone to the ground for a few minutes.
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:52 pm
RPC Rank: Kage
Name: Beast Seal
Rank: S
Range: Must be touching
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Description:
A sealing method which works on the 9 Bijuu. The user will summon up a massive amount of chakra to their hands, and must come in contact with the jinchuuriki/bijuu to successfully seal them. The jinchuuriki's bijuu will be sealed for 10 posts. The downside of this jutsu is the user must take a 2 post recharge period before moving on their own.
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:58 pm
Your Rank: ANBU Captain
Name of Jutsu: Hourglass Illusion
Rank of Jutsu: A
Range of Jutsu: N/A
Jutsu Type: Genjutsu
Jutsu's Element: Universal
Description: The user traps his/her opponent in a Genjutsu in which the the target is trapped inside a giant Hourglass. The sand will flow from above until the target is completely trapped and suffocates. This cannot be used to kill. When the target is about to completely suffocate, they will be automatically released from the Genjutsu. When they are released, they will feel as if they had actually experienced that event and they will most likely be incapacitated. This Genjutsu is made for mainly torture and interrogation.
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Name of Jutsu: Clay Kunai
Rank of Jutsu: D
Range of Jutsu: 3m
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu's Element: Doton/Katon
Description: The user molds clay by using Chakra Mouths and makes a kunai that consists of explosive clay. It looks exactly like a normal kunai and it is impossible to tell the difference. It can be detonated at any time.
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Name of Jutsu: Replicating Explosives
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: 20m -10m - 5m
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu's Element: Doton/Katon
Description: The user molds a large amount of clay with his/her Chakra mouths and then releases it into the air. It can take on whatever form the user wishes, but it is only the size of a normal human. It will be controlled by the user, but if it is broken, then the pieces will mold themselves into the original form according to their current size. They are able to combine themselves together to get larger, but the maximum size is the same size that they were created as. The first explosive has a blast radius of 20m. After replicating, the blast size is lowered. Within a fifth of the original size, the blast size is about 10m. Within a tenth of its normal size, the blast size is only 5m. Anything smaller and they must mold themselves together before being able to create an explosion.
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Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:11 am
((My character isn't created yet, due to my waiting on the approval of my kekkei genkai, but I'd like my character to start with this technique, As I believe it's something very easy that I'd imagine anyone with that KG could preform.))
Your Rank:Academy
Name of Jutsu:Piston punch
Rank of Jutsu:D
Range of Jutsu:close
Jutsu's Element:Boil release
Description:The user concentrates Boil chakra into his fist, and releases a shot of concentrated steam that adds additional force to the punch
Rp Sample
"Hehehe, You little piece of sh**. You know she doesn't like you, Why do you even come around here?".
Tai opened one eye, the other, was swollen shut from the punches he'd already received. He clenched his teeth hard, and spit on the man who was holding him up by his shirt. Tai couldn't understand how he got himself into this situation. He was only checking up on a close friend of his, In fact, she was the only friend he had when he was younger, and up until now, he had been away finding work in other villages and countries to gain money for his sick, adopted mother. After he left her home, three men had come out of the shadows as if they were expecting his arrival, and seemed it fit to beat him to a pulp. This is not to say that Tai couldn't fight, but he had made a promise to his mother that after the ninja academy, he would stop training to be a ninja, As the life of a ninja was what killed her husband. This would also explain how a nineteen year old boy was still only at academy level.
"You got any last words punk?",
was the only thing Tai heard through all the ringing in his ears. His eyes welled up with tears as his frustration grew.
"Why? why do I have to deal with this? If i were a ninja, I'd be respected. If I were a ninja, I would be feared...If...If."
The thoughts screamed in his head as an unfamiliar boiling heat grew within him. Tai hung his head, and the man holding him laughed.
"look guys, seems this little Sh** accepted his own fate."
Tai's head sharply snapped upwards to meet the gaze of his opponent, intangible fury pouring forth from his very being, he cocked his fist back, and yelled loudly.
"WHY DO I HAVE TO SHOULDER SOMEONE ELSE'S BURDENS!?"
A spiral of boiling water vapor was sucked towards the middle of his fist, Evaporating into steam, as he launched the punch, Steam connecting first, causing the man to lose his grip on Tai and be jettisoned ten-feet away into a nearby garbage can. The other two, seeing what had just happened, ran over to their leader. He was unconscious, and first degree burns could be seen on his face. The other two looked back in Tai's direction, as he stood there, barely able to keep his balance. The two henchmen ran off screaming, and Tai fell unconscious on the ground.
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Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:06 pm
@Interest: Well, I have no real problem with the jutsu, but you will still have to learn it in rp, sorry that's how it is for everyone else, that's how it's going to be for you my friend. I'm not going to say approved just yet, because I want to talk to the crew members about your kekkai genkai, but I'll let you know asap
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Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:16 pm
I am...Just waiting until after my fight to start it... =^^= I have a storyline to that technique and....two more I think.
But thanks!!!! blaugh
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:17 am
Panthers7 Character's Name:Zin Your Rank:Genin Name of Jutsu: Kiri biggrin emon Gate Opening Element of the Jutsu: Darkness Rank of Jutsu:The Jutsu is a move in development. It enables my char. to get stronger as he grows. The demon gate opening has four stages.Or four Demon Gates.
*At Genin level,Zin can use the technique but only to the first gate release.
*At Chuunin,Zin level can release two gates and have a reduced effect if they simply open only the first gate. But the opening of the second gate will still have tremendous effect on the body.Also at this level the opening of the first gate will be able to last longer.
*At Jounin,Zin level,my char. will have the ability to release three gates. The opening of the first gate will have minor bodily harm,the second gate release will have a reduced bodily harm but not significant. But the opening of the third gate will actually have tremendous effect on the body. The first and second releases although will jave a stronger duration at this level.
*Finally at any level above Jounin my char. will have mastered the technique entirely. He will be able to open the last and final gate at the cost of a near to death exposure to the body. Also the three gates underneath the final gate will have a stronger duration.
Range of Jutsu:The move happens to the self,so there is no true range. Except for the range in which my char. will be able to hold the technique.
Jutsu's Element:No true element.
Jutsu Type:Again it depends on the char. Zin will be Taijutsu/Battojutsu based with very select few ninjutsu/genjutsu. If any.
Description:To begin with,my character developed this technique with the thought of the psychology of the mind and body. As well as wanting to gain power the of having either the curse mark or bijuu's without having the pain of....well having them. Thinking like his father, Zin wishes to gain power on his own accord.Going off the theory that everyone has a bad,evil,and rather unwanted side that lies within them;regardless of how powerful it may make them. Well my Char.(Zin) took this to an entirely new level. Instead of repressing the darkness that hides in our souls he would instead force it to reveal itself. Now time to describe the stages in which he named by the degree's of emotional dislike.
First Demon Gate:Anger *Abilities= In this stage there is a spike in the chakra. I wouldn't nessarily say the chakra is doubled but it indeed is a tremendous raise in power.Zin's attack has increased lightly but his speed is definately the focus of the form. In this form there is no physical change but their is a thin line of chakra surrounding Zin.He will also gain an increase with his poison that lies within his body.(Fangs) He will be able to hold his power for a sustained amount of time.(Which means only 3 posts). Although at higher levels,as said before,the ability to hold the power will be increased.(Meaning 4-5 for Chuunin&Jounin but 5 for any level higher.) *Weakness:After the time is up(depending on the rank),Zin will take the repercussions of forcing the dark entity out of him. At a Genin level he will face tremendous pain even to a point of a comatose state.(Meaning I will do the pick a number option 1-10,which will depict the severity of the punishment. 1 being the lowest,ten being the highest.This method will be used through the majority of the technique.) Second Demon Gate Release:Hate *Ability:At this stage of the technique Zin is has another tremendous chakra boost. Speed and strength his near to doubled due to his basis the prominant basis of this technique being Taijutsu except for a select few ninjutsu's. He takes a small change physical appearance. The thin line of chakra has become thicker. The ends of his hair will start to become while as well as his entire eyes starting to form into milky white slits instead a normal pupil for a Naga Clan member..Zin will also be able to produce even more deadly poison,to where it is near to toxic. This will be the last powerful increase of his poisonous fangs.(At this level he can sustain the technique for 3-4 posts.) *Weakness of this stage:In this stage,depending on the level of my char.,will have a hardened effect. Like the first,it will put the body in an immobilizing pain. (My char. will be in this harmed state depending on what my outcome in the *post action* action. 1-10) Third Demon Gate Release:Rage *Abilities: In this state there is a doubling of the power of both chakra,speed,and strength. My character is also become more demonic in mentallity and will even attack teamates at this stage. There is also a huge diffrence in physical shape.The white tips at the ends of his hair will have also become brighter and rise up a little more up the strands. The slitted pupils will have become more apparent,and the eyes will have an intense glow to it. The last true physical feature will be the horns that protrude from both sides of the skull. They will take the shape that of a bull. Meaning a low dip from the base of the horn and a slow increase upwards. (1 inch protrusion.)(Also,the length of this move will be up to 4-5 posts before the reverse affects take place.) *Weakness of this stage: Like the other two there will be horrid pain my char. will have to face by bringing up this power. The pain,if you wish to inquire,will feel like burning needles stabbing Zin in every orifice of his body. His eyes may bleed due to the trama of using such a tremendous,yet deadly force.The recovery and injury time is also quite a punishment.(Meaning using the *post action* routine,he will have 10-15 posts to go through.) Fourth Demon Gate Release:Grudge *Ablities: In this form Zin is practically a demon himself. He has revealed the darkest portion of the human soul and brought it to surface. His speed,power,and strength in increased tenfold and there is no bias to whom his enemy is. Teamates and those around are in complete and utter danger if they think to reverse this move.His nails,the outlining of his eyes would turn black and half of his hair will have turned pearl white. The pupils will have turned into milky long slits. Also in this form Zin will not only have horns upon his head,which have also grew;in which they have grown to resemble that of a fully grown bulls but with Zin's bloodline the bone is more than deadly. But the other areas these powerful bones are protruding.And they are as follows:each bone that makes up the spine,the shoulders have bones shooting out horizontally,the elbow has a bone shooting out the back,around his wrist are bones protruding,his knee caps has a bone firing out from the front and lastly,there are bones shooting out the back of his ankles.At the tips of each of these bones will be doused with the toxic poison that flows through Naga Clan at it's limit.(Duration is a max of 5- maybe6. But it takes quite a bit of training posts.) *Weaknesses of this Stage: The pain is near to death to put it bluntly. Every muscle,joint and limb is in sever pain. Though some extremely high leveled medical nin may be able to help a little but the use of pulling out the darkness from one's soul is are harsh move. Yatho will have a very long recovery after using this techniqe. (15-20 posts to recover.) Some notes to further explain
*Zin has to open every gate in order to unlock the gate he
wants. (Meaning,if he wanted to unlock the third gate,he would have to unlock the first,second,then the third.)
*In which,the posting of each release will reset the posting timer. But that doesn't mean the posting is doubled. It simply means that one would have to post the max amount for that stage.
*As said before Zin can alleviate some of the pain if he uses the low level gates while at a higher level:
-At Genin level Zin can only use the first gate. Period.
-At Chuunin level Zin and use both first and second gates. in which the first gate's punishment for using the technique will be lessened.(By only 2 posts.)
-At Jounin level,Zin can use all three gates. The punishment will be lessened for the lower two.Meaning a decrease of two posts for opening the second gate at this level,and a decrease of four posts for using the first gate at this level.
-Any level HIGHER than Jounin,Zin can open all gates. The punishment for using the lower will be as follows:For opening the third will be a decrease of two posts.For opening the second will be a decrease of four posts,and for opening the first gate will be no punishment as that level is practically mastered.
*The last note I can really think of for now is that Zin,like the demons,angels,and Curse mark individuals,can train to be sane during these levels. Though this truly only pertains to Zin's second and third release it posting goes as follows (The Fourth can never be controlled):
-For control over the first it takes 5 posts
-For control over the second it takes 10 posts
-For control over the third there must be 15 posts.
-This is not including the recovery time.
I made one edit for the last part about posts to learn to remain in control, I simply got rid of the 4th stage post requirements as you already stated it could not be mastered Also I think that for the PA of picking a random number the number should be the number of posts Zin is affected by the pain, and perhaps 1-4 is severe pain that reduces speed and strength by half, 5-8 is crippling pain that reduces speed and strength by half and also makes performing jutsus impossible. 9 and 10 would a comatose state. And since you already have that the number of posts the weakness affects Zin is reduced by X amount for each rank, it would be easy to apply this idea
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:41 am
Interest In Your Insides ((My character isn't created yet, due to my waiting on the approval of my kekkei genkai, but I'd like my character to start with this technique, As I believe it's something very easy that I'd imagine anyone with that KG could preform.)) Your Rank:Academy Name of Jutsu:Piston punch Rank of Jutsu:D Range of Jutsu:close Jutsu's Element:Boil release Description:The user concentrates Boil chakra into his fist, and releases a shot of concentrated steam that adds additional force to the punch Rp Sample "Hehehe, You little piece of sh**. You know she doesn't like you, Why do you even come around here?". Tai opened one eye, the other, was swollen shut from the punches he'd already received. He clenched his teeth hard, and spit on the man who was holding him up by his shirt. Tai couldn't understand how he got himself into this situation. He was only checking up on a close friend of his, In fact, she was the only friend he had when he was younger, and up until now, he had been away finding work in other villages and countries to gain money for his sick, adopted mother. After he left her home, three men had come out of the shadows as if they were expecting his arrival, and seemed it fit to beat him to a pulp. This is not to say that Tai couldn't fight, but he had made a promise to his mother that after the ninja academy, he would stop training to be a ninja, As the life of a ninja was what killed her husband. This would also explain how a nineteen year old boy was still only at academy level. "You got any last words punk?",was the only thing Tai heard through all the ringing in his ears. His eyes welled up with tears as his frustration grew. "Why? why do I have to deal with this? If i were a ninja, I'd be respected. If I were a ninja, I would be feared...If...If." The thoughts screamed in his head as an unfamiliar boiling heat grew within him. Tai hung his head, and the man holding him laughed. "look guys, seems this little Sh** accepted his own fate." Tai's head sharply snapped upwards to meet the gaze of his opponent, intangible fury pouring forth from his very being, he cocked his fist back, and yelled loudly. "WHY DO I HAVE TO SHOULDER SOMEONE ELSE'S BURDENS!?" A spiral of boiling water vapor was sucked towards the middle of his fist, Evaporating into steam, as he launched the punch, Steam connecting first, causing the man to lose his grip on Tai and be jettisoned ten-feet away into a nearby garbage can. The other two, seeing what had just happened, ran over to their leader. He was unconscious, and first degree burns could be seen on his face. The other two looked back in Tai's direction, as he stood there, barely able to keep his balance. The two henchmen ran off screaming, and Tai fell unconscious on the ground. It looks fine, but again, you won't be able to start off with it
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