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Jes-sama

PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:02 pm


Well it ain't the end of the day, yet. I need dinner. Then I'll give you the low-down, k?
PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:41 pm


Double post win.

Ok, Enchanted--

All in all, your profile looks just fine, but there are some minor changes you need to make. First off, I know it says in your RP sample that you're the 23 espada, but can please also put that somewhere in the profile? Like, after the name, maybe-->

Number:
23


Know what I mean? But, again, just a minor change. Slightly more important are the two attacks you have listed: Infierno Bala and Infierno Cero. In this guild, there's a rule that there can be no specialty Bala or Cero attacks unless you've gained an Espada ranking and trained for the attacks. As of now, I'd like you to remove those two techniques from your arsenal.

Everything else looks just fine. On a more technical note, some of your grammar and punctuation need a little bit of work. Be sure to keep everything in the past tense at all times. Also, I noticed that, occasionally, you refer to your character not as Kiva but as Alexander. I'm sure this is just a mistake, but you may wanna fix that ^^

Please address all the above concerns and post your updated profile here. I'll approve you after you've made the appropriate changes 3nodding

Jes-sama


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:21 pm



Name:
Kiva Infierno

Aliases/ Nicknames:
Hell Hound

Number:
23

Physical Description:
User Image
Kiva is about 6'2" and weights in at about 195-214lbs. He as you can see has a Canine appearance and has golden brown/ hazel eyes. Kiva also has a tail and the canine ears, snot, teeth, etc. He wheres the traditional Arrancar bottoms, but his top is open and has long sleeves. His hollow hole is in the center of his torso, just above the abs.

His Hollow mask [In image] is on the left side of his face, it has the teeth and part of a jaw still there and what seems to be an extension of the cheek near the ear and also covers around part of the left eye. When he laughs of shouts his mask moves with him and seems to give others a eerie feeling.


Zanpakutou:
Zanpakutou Sealed
Kiva blade in it's sealed form is a basic Katana. The Guard is silver and is shaped like a length Octagon that near each of it's corners has small holes near them. The blade itself is very well sharped and seems to always be clean to perfection. The hilt is has red hilt rapping and silver trims to it. And the case is red with some silver trims on it and is also very well cleans to perfection. Kiva usually keeps his blade on his left side in his sash. He would rather hand -to - hand than use lethal force on a target, even his enemy if they prove to be weaker than him.

Zanpakutou name
English: Hell Hound
Spanish: Infierno Galgo
Japanese: Naraku Ryouken

Release phrase:
"Rise from the pits, Infierno Galgo [Hell Hound]..."

Ressureccion
Kiva Release is similar to that of Grimmjow. Kiva grabs the blade of his sword with his left [he is a right handed fighter] and grips it until it cracks and breaks into spiritual particles after his gives the order to his release. After which Kiva appears to with with a body similar to that of human canine cross, like Grimmjow's panther like release, But Kiva's mask covers his entire face besides his eyes, his ears are also covers giving him a bone canine face. He also has long flames coming form the back of his mask acting as hair or a main. Kiva also has flames coming from his wrist and ankles. His legs are like that of canine legs [like Grimmjow's release]. Kiva also has blades form on both his arms that start just after his wrist and extend to a sharp point at the end of his elbow.This release is able to produce flames and combined them with other attacks that Kiva uses such as punches, kicks, Ceros, and Balas to make them more powerful and deadly. Though there is a limit of how much fire his release can produce.

This release is said to have red flames that can melt some of the strongest of metals. Not only does it give Kiva his release and elemental powers back he also is given many other power bust because of his release. His Strength, Speed, Endurance, & Spiritual Pressure are all enchanted in his release.

Release Attacks:
Infierno Tsume
Kiva heats up the his two forearm blade to a very high temperature making the blades golden hot. He than releases them in a slash motion creating two massive blades of energy and heat about 20 feet tall and 5 feet wide at his target.

Infierno Howl
Kiva begins to charge a powerful fire blast in his mouth while on all four. He than releases it at his target and it forms into the shape of a pack of wolves, howling and barking.


Special Accessories:
Kiva has two silver bells the size apples tide around his black wrap around his waist on his left side.. He has kept them after he encountered a shinigami carrying similar things like beads, talisman, and other things for good fortune and a better results during missions. He also has a silver ring on his right hands ring finger he seems to keep it and the bells safe.


Skills:
Kiva is very flexable, quiet, calm, and quick. He is able to dodge many mid speed attacks with ease if he truly wished. He clam and quick refers to his skills to get behind his foe or target while maintain his very quiet and calm composure.


Abilities:
None As Of Now


Personality:
Kiva is a very quiet, calm, respectful, and collective Arrancar. Unlike some of the others he would rather avoid conflicts and let others deal with fighting. He is also a bit self thought about his appearance or having a Canine look for an Arrancar and usually just ignores people that mock him for it. He is similar to Halibel from the anime and Manga series when in meetings or talking, he is very serious when ever he talks on an important matter.


Biography/History:
Kiva believe it or not was a former Shinigami that was enlisted in to squad 7, that had a captain whom also had a canine appearance at the time. After Kiva began taking missions and more he became the squads 5th seat and like his captain hide his appearance in a mask or helmet. Later he would be told to go on a dangerous mission with 10 other individual to find a dangerous hollow and eliminate it. After about 5 weeks of the mission seat a search party was sent to find the shinigami all where dead and Kiva was seen still fighting the hollow as his mask was being broken in the battle, as he fellow shinigami lay fatally wounded on the ground. During the fight his mask/ helmet was completely destroyed, exposing his face.

Before the search party could save him from the hollow, Kiva was killed and his body said to have been taken in to the hollow. After two Vice-Captains killed the hollow in a furious battle that lasted several nights. All that was left of Kiva was his helmet which they gave to the captain. Kiva was later made a hero for saving several of his fellow Shinigami, his helmet and some remains where given a honorable grave site. After which he was just a memory to be remembered at times or forgotten.

Years passed and Kiva was a now a hollow, with a Hound/ Hell Hound like appearance and he had a powerful hunger. He devoured hundreds of his own kind to become a Gallian class hollow and continued to eat. There where some points where he was almost killed by stronger hollows but he was able to avoid death by getting his foes into traps and ambushing them with a Dooms Blast, than devouring their upper body after fatally wounding them. After about 65-80 years, Kiva evolved into a Adjucha. As and Adjucha he had a werewolf like form, but could walk/ run on all four if he truly wished. In battle he was known for his quick front attacks and quick reflexes. He killed and devoured many of his own kind and was known in the desert as Hades Cerberus. After about 195-200 years of fighting, killing, and devouring, Kiva had reached his level of evolution, but wanted more power.

Later he would meet a man named Aizen that wanted his powers and cold heart in his army. But when Kiva was reborn as an Arrancar Kaname Tuosen disliked his appearance, so he was seen as a failed attempt and dumped into the middle of the desert. He was left do die like trash, just another memory like his past life to be forgotten or little remembered. He would wonder through the desert for years before entering the Menos Forest and making a cave his home for all eternity. Never to be seen outside for another 2 years.

Later in his life Kiva returned to Las Nochas only to see it was run by a new group of Arrancar, stronger, fast, and more suited to be the rulers there. Kiva begged to join but was seen as a weak outcast that Aizen trashed long ago, but after asking and refusing to leave he was granted into this new world of Arranacar, power, and strength. Hoping to prove that he is not a useless weakling or failed attempt of any kind.


Powers:
Cero (虚閃):
Like all other Hollows, they can use this blast technique. The Espada user fires a laser blast of great, concentrated destruction. While the color of most Ceros is red/crimson, several members of the Espada appear to have great color variations in their Cero.

Bala (虚弾 (バラ)):
Is an Arrancar alternative to the Cero. The technique hardens the user's spiritual pressure and fires it like a bullet from their fist. Though somewhat weaker than a Cero blast, it moves about twenty times much faster than a Cero and can be fired at a much higher rate. This technique was first demonstrated by Wonderweiss Margera against Kisuke Urahara, and elaborated upon by Yammy during the same battle.

Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ)):
Is how Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Hierro (鋼皮 (イエロ)):
Refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin. Nnoitra Jiruga claimed his Hierro is toughest amongst the Espada; being of higher rank than Nnoitra, Ulquiorra's Hierro appears to be much tougher.

Pesquisa (探査回路 (ペスキス)):
Is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using Pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state; however, Nnoitra has a variation of this technique that involves placing his fingers to the ground to determine an opponent's approximate location as well as the amount of Spiritual Pressure an opponent has.

Sonído (響転 (ソニード)):
Is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound used for Flash Steps. Zommari claims that his Sonído is the fastest amongst the Espada; Starrk and Ulquiorra appear to be faster, however, being the Primera and Cuarta, respectively.


RP Sample
Kiva the 23rd Arrancar enters Lord Aizen and Commander Gin and Tousen chamber room. Kiva bowed to Aizen as he looked down at him as if he where an annoying ant that needed to learn the respectful way of knocking. "Lord Aizen I have my report ready for you..." Kiva said as he held his head low looking at the ground as he was on one knee bowing to the Aizen and the Commanders. Kiva was created and abandon, but continued to serve Aizen, for the purpose of a new world in Aizen's vision. As Aizen nodded and waved his hand for Kiva to continue, Tousen appeared behind Kiva with his blade drawn. "We throw you out of Las Nochas and continue to come back, you are nothing but a failed attempt and a lost cause..." Tousen said harshly as he held his blade closer to Kiva's neck cutting it and making blood flow out and drip to the floor. Gin smiled and simple looked at Kiva as he walked down from the steps away from Aizen's thrown. "My, my Tousen no need to be so rude, he is making use of himself as a spy and a informant..."Gin said as he stopped just in front to Kiva and Tousen. The tension was growing and Kiva was in the middle of two fearsome creatures form the very pits of hell, but before anything happened, Aizen rose from his throne and began to walk down. "I Aizen will listen to your Report, Kiva..."he said stopping in the middle of the steps to his throne and waiting Kiva to speak.

Kiva in fear just looked at Tousen whom only gave him a harsh look and than Gin whom looked pleased that Aizen stood up and spoke. "Yes, my lord, the Former Espada have just begun battle with the intruders and the 8th Esapda is planning something without your order my lord." kiva paused fearing he was nothing but a spy looking for his minute of fame. "I fear it may get out of hand if the intruders continue the way they are going..." Kiva finished with a silent stare at Aizen before bowing his head down again in respect to him. There was silent until Gin spoke out with a bit of a chuckle at Tousen. "See Tousen,no need to kill him until he is seen useless to Aizen-sama..." he said as he turned and walked away back to Aizen's side. Tousen simple put away his blade and walked back to his maser's side without a word from his mouth, though he did give Kiva a look before Lord Aizen dismissed him so that he and the commanders could talk about his report, though they already knew about what Kiva had reported. That was the day when Kivameet his master and his cold eyes. The man that will rule with fear and power.


PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:31 pm


Jes-sama

Why did you reapply, then, silly? XD

All your reorganization made me think everyone had to reapply and resetted the non-espada arrancars...

DarkTsukai


Jes-sama

PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:33 pm


Ah. Sorry if that wasn't clear to you. Anyway, you don't have to re-apply. Once you're in, you're in for good ^^

Unless you break some rules... But that's a different story XD
PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:56 pm


sorry ><

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Jes-sama

PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:50 am


*poke*

You haven't actually changed the Alexanders to Kivas... >.>

It happens three times. Once in the physical description and twice in the description of his blade. Please fix these.

Once you do, you'll be accepted. I just want you profile to be complete and correct before you start posting it in other places like the character forum or in the Las Noches profiles and journals area.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:11 pm


Double post again!

Enchanted Musician: accepted ^^

Make sure you post your profile (or a link to your profile) in the Profiles and Journals thread, k?

Jes-sama


crispy flamefire

PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:55 pm


Name: Nirro Tokage

Number: 32

Aliases/ Nicknames: The deception blood stain hurricane

Physical Description: The boy has a strange style of clothing for an Arrancar. Nirro wears a high black collared coat. It appears short as its edges are burned off making it seem old. Although he may wear pants they are tighter than most Arrancars.

Belts with spikes are attached to the black pants, like one his wrapped around his right ankle. His hole is where his heart should be, but this is not very visible since it’s cover by his coat. Also his left eye is cover by a skull eye patch making his opponents only see his right one. Even though his opponent may see his right eye they could see kind and gentle soul. The cloths he wears not just make him more out of ordinary than most Arrancar, but appears more human. One reason why he is still alive is his fast movement and reiatsu amount. His left ankle his were his remaining hollow piece is, but just like his hole it’s not visible.

Nirros height is 5’6 and weight is 105 pounds. His hair is spiked, but some what flat. His skin tone is light brown. The Zanpacto he wealds is behind his waste.

Zanpacto & Resurreccion:
"Zanenoman"
His Zanpacto is eight inches long making it appear like a long knife. On the butt of it is a hole.

Resurreccion:
"Shread everything in your path!!!"

There is a powerful change with the teen once his releases his true power. His killer instinct that was once within his left spreads though out his entire body. This makes him nearly kill anything without a second thought of what he has done. The Zanpacto he once carried is fused with his bones, nails, and teeth. He grows hair similar to a lion’s main with a metallic color to it.

Sharp bones stick out from his elbows at a length of four inches. A scarf made up of reiatsu is around his neck. Finally his body is covered in black fur. His movement are greatly increased along with his reiatsu.

Special Accessories: A skull eye patch. For some reason he carries a neckles with two different sides. One that is light on that is dark. Once Nirro needs help this object splits into two people depending on the on the problem.

Zen-su: She’s as gentle as the boy is. Zen-su contains his memories before his death and is willing to put him on the right path of real human being. Included in this she can create illusions for a short amount of time.

Eno-ren: You can say he is his killer instincts. He wants Nirro to play the role he’s in, an Arrancar. Even though he knows himself and Zen-su have the same goal for the troubled teen he won’t believe it. He creates shield that can take a minimal amount of damage depending on the enemy.

Abilities: Although he may appear to be a weak teen his speed is above regular Arrancar standards. He can control every movement he makes also being very agile and aware of his surroundings he easily mocks his opponent as he move quickly though out the battle field.

Personality: Needless to say, Nirro knows he is a Arrancar, but will not kill almost anything. He has a gentle heart that can be reflected from his smile on his face. If the teen feels the enemy is to strong and is trying to kill him or his comrade then he will kill he/her at any given moment.

Biography/History: Nirro Tokage, once known as Raven five, Mr. five , or no future…a Bount. No one nor he can give a answer to why he had become a hollow let alone a Arrancar. All they know is that he is a kind person with exceptional power.

The power to move at fast speed and cut his enemies without them seeing him pull his Zanpacto out. He was born in small town in California as a only child. He thought he was a normal kid like his fiends, until he noticed he was not ageing. Later on his father killed his own mother and with it he killed his father.

“Living on” that was his one and only goal in life. That was a burden for him living for hundreds of years, losing his wife. Still he had met to Bounts along the was Yori and Meluk. Several years later he had fought some punk teenager that was hurting a women and her child. Although the women had seen him as a hero the cop had thought he was the punk teen. He would’ve been dead it wasn’t for a man with a smirk on his face, Ky Die Verrater.

For some reason he had served under the man for along while as he received and become a Raven. More Raven had come with him though his missions, still there was something he was longing for….someone that he could call a rival. Soon enough he had fought with Jes only person to defeat him. He wasn’t to have one last fight with her to the death, but didn’t view him as a challenge. The thought of it made him calm, knowing someone could defeat him.

Needless to says, he wanted to become stronger, but through his training he had died.

Powers: Flash sword: By concentrating his reiatsu to one of his arms he can cut nearly anything at great speed. It’s so fast that only the wind his slashes make can be seen. It can reach to about twenty feet long.

Killer instinct: All of his kill instincts are concentrating into his left eye. Once he removes the skull eye patch that covers it he can nearly see all of his opponent(s) movement with ease.

Long sword: He concentrates his reiatsu into his knife to make it longer. Not just only that, but this attack can split energy in half. The down part of it is that can’t withstand high level powerful attacks from third seat and above. This would cause a great deal of damage to him.

Cero: Like all other Hollows, they can use this blast technique. The Espada user fires a laser blast of great, concentrated destruction. While the color of most Ceros is red/crimson, several members of the Espada appear to have great color variations in their Cero.

Bala : Is an Arrancar alternative to the Cero. The technique hardens the user's spiritual pressure and fires it like a bullet from their fist. Though somewhat weaker than a Cero blast, it moves about twenty times much faster than a Cero and can be fired at a much higher rate.

Garganta:Is how Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Hierro:
Refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin.

Pesquisa :Is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using Pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state.

Sonído:Is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances.

Role-Play Example:
“Where am I…..right I’m dead…..my name Nirro Tokage,” Nirro says to himself as he raised up from the dirt floor of Hueco Mundo “,I can’t remember how I died……But why do I feel alive.” He looked around to see hollows around him, but he was confused. Was he the enemy or was he not important that they wouldn’t bother to attack?

“You’re in Hueco Mundo my brother,” A mysterious hollow had told him “, How could you not know that even for a Arrancar.” The teens expression from confusion had changed into happiness knowing what he was and where. He gave it a friendly smile. Now the hollow was beginning to feel worried and confused as the teenage boy was a moment ago. Seeing the hollow reaction the teenage boy turned the other direction.

“I don’t understand you….you act like a gentle human being than an Arrancar,” The hollow says to him “, Are you planning to kill while my guard is down?”

“No, not at all…I really don’t kill anything,” Nirro replies to him question. He suddenly heard heavy breathing and a warm breath behind himself. He quickly turns around to see a terrifying hollow. It was at least eight feet tall, with grimy dreadlocks swinging about its large head down to its shoulders. Furry arms swinging below its knees as if were a monkey. Then there was two curving tusk from its low jaw that appeared to cut anything.

It truly looked hungry for the teenager, drooling out of satisfaction seeing him. Also Nirro’s gentle eye had shown no fighting back making an easy meal for the beast. Needless to say, Nirro had seen the aggression in its eyes.

“Hey we don’t have to fight, we can become friends….and plus I a lover not a fighter,” the teenager says as he lays his Zanpacto onto the floor. Doing that he wanted the hollow to know he didn’t want to fight him nor no one else. Although Nirro’s actions did nonviolence the hollow had taken it as an opening to attack him. A glowing red light slowly grown larger in the hollows mouth. Some how the boy had known it was a Cero. He had quickly punched the hollow in the throat less than a second. The lack of air had made it faint.

There was sudden clapping from a man in white. The man was taller than him maybe at six feet tall. He had slicked back hair with a warm smile. Nirro return the mans smile with his own. “It’s strange that you refuse to kill him although you could’ve,” The man says to as walked closer “,My name it Aizen Sosuke and your name is?” The teen looked to see everyone else was bowing down to the man….except himself. He noticed that this Aizen it one important person. “My name is Nirro Tokage, sir,” Nirro says to him. “Well would you like to join me?” Aizen says to him, his smile getting wider.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:30 pm


Ok... Everything looks pretty all right. Just a few things:

Your zanpaku-to needs a name and your Resurreccion needs a release phrase. Other than that, the powers look all right to me. One note on your Flash Sword-- it won't be able to cut through *everything* in existence. It can have a powerful cutting edge and may be difficult to block, but a technique that cuts through *everything* is unblockable by most standards, making it a powerplay and, thus, against the rules.

As for your RP sample-- it looks pretty good except that you have a habit of slipping into the present tense. Keep everything in your posts in the past tense, k?

Nothing else is a problem. Just give your zanpaku-to a name, give your Resurreccion a release phrase, and change the description of your Flash Sword. Once you've made the changes, I'll accept you 3nodding

Jes-sama


Konigin von Agypten

PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:18 pm


((Submitting a new character, had my other one killed off, I hated the b***h >.< xD))

Name: Vorbote

Aliases/Nicknames: Schnitter

Sex: Male

Age of Death: 17

Actual Age: 126

Number: N/A

Physical Description:
Clothing wise Vorbote wears nothing but a long flowing white scarf around his neck. The scarf itself is longer than he and Vorbote is taller than most. When he is fully stretched out his height reaches about 7'5" but due to the way he walks and his stature he generally stands around 7'1". He is a very lean fellow, his muscle definition fully visible. His hair is a dark brown, his eyes a deep amber. Skin tone is overall darker than a humans, nice and tan, caremel almost. Vorbote has large, oversized black hooves and coiled black horns on the sides of his head. His hands are larger than most and appear too large for his body, his ears too small. His face has angled and rough features and he has a long unique tail. Vorbote is a hodge podge of mixed matching features that make him look very adolescant and youthful though he has a visibly hard and stoic exterior. Lastly, his hollow hole is located between his hips, just above his groin and below his stomach.

Zanpakuto:
Name: "Herz der Bestie"
(Heart of the Beast)

Herz der Bestie is a long curved knife. Usually kept sheathed and strapped to his left thigh. Rarely is his Zanpakuto used in its sealed state. Vorbote prefers to use his body, and powerful legs to deal the most damage. With his horns and naturally strong body Vorbote is a living weapon and therefore the need to use his Zanpakuto is dismissed. Furthermore, Vorbote has never wanted to use the blade itself, he prefers close hand-to-hand combat highly over weaponary combat.

Resurreccion:
Name: "Herzlos der Bestie"
(The Heartless Beast)

Release Phrase: "Reiß aus dein Herz" (Tear out your heart)

Once speaking the release phrase, Vorbote stabs himself in the heart with his Zanpakuto, as if to tear out his heart. Dropping to his knees in the ritual-like transformation Vorbote undergoes a visible and highly painful transformation into a Centaur. Sprouting a second set of hips, an elongated spinal cord and a second set of legs, more powerful and muscular, Vorbote appears more menacing and animalistic. The hair on his head turns black and elongates while his body hair turns white. The tan like skin tone is then gone, his skin black and tough. Swirling glwoing symbols coat his fur and parts of his body. Vorbote's once coiled horns straighten out with only a slight curve. The tiny ears that once made him look goofy now grow to mimic those of a buros. No longer lean and thin Vorbote beefs up considerably his formely large hands becoming even larger and more powerful. Unlike most Arrancar who become encapsulated in the bone like remanants of their mask Vorbote's body is coated in fur.

With his new appearance comes a new set of powers and a heightened aggression. Much like in his previous form, Vorbote continues to relinquish any and all weaponry for his most trust worthy hands. Mentally he has lost all humanity and abides soley on instinct. Like a Shinigami in Shunko, Vorbote's Reiatsu floods his limbs beyond imagination making each and everyone of his strikes three times as powerful. A simple backhand from a child would now be a bone shattering strike from one of Vorbote's massive furry hands. Much like horse he'll kick and buck at anyone behind him sending them several meters backwards. In contrast he can also rear up like a horse and trample those in front of him. Charging is a specialty as well buch much like a bull he compramises eyesight when doing so. Below are a comprehensive list of abilities, they have no names.

Abilities:

• By charging his feet with Reiatsu Vorbote will slam his front hooves into the ground and cause a tremor that radiates for miles. Dependant on the amount of Reiatsu compressed and then released he can even cause the earth to split beneath an opponent as well as cause the entire ground of the battlefield to break apart causing small islands and massive abyssal gaps.

• Vorbote will face the sky, shut his eyes and release the most blood curtling screech to ever be heard. By doing so he breaks all mental and physical restraints of his Resurreccion and essentially goes on a berserk rampage. Only by exiting his Resurreccion can this ability be "shut off".

• Visibly he will subjucate surrounding Reishi and force it to orbit a specified hand. The Reishi will swirl about in small globulous streams and reach a peak velocity. Once done so Vorbote will thrust the hand forward and a claw like kido projection will fly out from his hand. Once an individual is struck, they'll be lacerated all over the side attacked.

• Almost as if he were clapping Vorbote slams one palm against another to cause powerful waves of energy to fly out in all directions. The sound is a lound boom, similar to that of thunder. These waves of energy can concuss several targets at once, shatter glass, force Zanpakuto or other weaponry to vibrate and in some cases can shatter the eardrum.

• Chanting in German and in an almost full blown out growl. Performing a ceremonial and ritualist song that travels from his throat the ivy like fur coated appendages that wrap around his arms and up around his shoulders will quiver and seemingly come to life. Slamming both his hands out before him the appendages will travel like vipers outward and follow an opponent as they travel. They will not stop till their reach their target and once they do the opponent's arms and legs will be restrained and their body constricted.

• The fur that coats Vorbote's body in Resurreccion acts like a super strong Hierro that absorbs kido like attacks up to a level 20. The Reiatsu of the kido like attacks is diffused within the fur and rendered harmless. Stronger kido based attacks are hindered but not diffused. Only the fur coated parts of his body have this attribute.

Special Accessories:
Vorbote's only piece of clothing is a long white scarf about 8' long. It travels behind him as his only reliable companion. It has never known a stain, the taste of blood unfamiliar and undesirable. This scarf is like his signature generally scene before one can see him. It sways with the breeze and swirls in a strong wind. Using it like a tool he can often predict the weather conditions before they are apparent.

Skills:
Vorbote has one of the best Pesquisa amoungst the Arrancar, his own rivalling that of Jes-sama's. Due to his animalistic attributes his sense are all highly adapted for the untamed wild. As well, Vorbote's Sonido is above average, his powerful muscled legs able to reach an impressive gallop in no time flat. Lastly, he retains one of the most impressive natural strengths. With his pure muscle body he can lift things almost double his weight and size.

Abilities:
Vorbote's natural abilities include hypersensative hearing, sight, smell, taste, and feeling. His animal instincts are irresputably the most notable ability of his. Vorbote can turn off all logical portions of his brain and rest sure footedly on his instincts to keep him safe and a step above the rest.

Personality:
Vorbote is usually very quiet. Because he can't speak hardly any english he often keeps his mouth shut. His expression is normally stoic and void of all emotion. He appears very angry and cold but when not in his Resurreccion Vorbote is very kind and loving even if he doesn't outwardly show it. His compassion knows no bounds and he'd readily put his life on the line to save anothers even if he knew it would all be in vein.

Biography/History:
Vorbote was long ago a human with a normal name and a normal body. That was over 126 years ago in the 19th Century Germany. Growing up he lived a rather lavish life, his family as far as he can remember wealthy and of noble descent. As a child he had everything he could have ever desired but lacked the love and companionship that even the peasants had. He was never spoiled despite what many could think but he was very sadistic and cold due to the fact that his parents were never around. He resented them for that and ran away from home. Living on the streets like an animal he ditched all civilization within him and lived the life of a thief and a vagabond. He stole with care or resent and even killed should things have not gone his way. Vorbote used to be a kind curt child but once he left home his bratty and unpredictable ways ensued. As far as he can remember Vorbote hated the word and hated people. Slowly and gradually he lost what humanity he had in him and eventually became immersed in his survival instincts.

With his patchy memory Vorbote could pick out only a few notable memories the most notable being a nameless but beautiful woman. The second he saw her beautiful face the second the last bit of humanity within him was visible. It lasted for but a moment however as his uninhibited animalistic desire for her took hold. He would stalk her and follow her day after day, hiding in the shadows following her from one place to the next. He would pick at the scraps left out back and even went hungry for days. Eventually he presented himself to her, sneaking into her open window in under the veil of night. Staring at her as she slept his loud breathing and intrusive hands awoke her, a loud shrill escaping a terrified face. As her father rushed into the room he used his hunting rifle to deal the death blow, a through and through bullet into his skull.

As a hollow spirit his true natures dictated his appearance and he's been an animalistic creature ever since. During his evolutionary life Vorbote made many careful alliances but never a friendship. He lead several Adjucha under a single name, that being Schnitter or "Reaper". They traveled about Hueco Mundo dominating it, coming just as swiftly as the sandstorms and leaving just as fast. Using a Blitzkreig methods of attack they overwhelmed many individuals and that type of mentality and attack transpired over into his now Arrancar being. His Resurreccion is the best example of these methods as trades intellect for pure uninhibited instinct. That instinct has earned him a name, that being Vorbote. Going by for over a Century he knows no other name and has seemingly forgotten his original identity.

Theme Song: Imagine

Powers:
Caja Negación - variant of the Gillian-exclusive ability Negación used to punish Arrancar subordinates by trapping them eternally in an alternate dimension. However, should the Caja Negación be used on an Espada, the Espada will eventually break out of the alternate dimension (usually within a few hours), due to their large amount of Reiatsu.

Cero - user fires a laser blast of great, concentrated destruction. While the color of most Ceros is red/crimson, several members of the Espada appear to have great color variations in their Cero.

Bala - an Arrancar alternative to the Cero. The technique hardens the user's spiritual pressure and fires it like a bullet from their fist. Though somewhat weaker than a Cero blast, it moves about twenty times much faster than a Cero and can be fired at a much higher rate.

Gran Rey Cero - a particular, very strong Cero. To perform this potent variation of the Cero, the Arrancar first draws blood from the Cero-generating appendage using his or her Zanpakutō, then charges the Cero while mixing the blood with it. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power and speed, as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. This attack was first used by Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez in order to incite Ichigo into donning his Hollow mask.

Garganta - how Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Hierro - refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin. Nnoitra Jiruga claimed his Hierro is toughest amongst the Espada; being of higher rank than Nnoitra, Ulquiorra's Hierro appears to be much tougher.

Pesquisa - Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using Pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state; however, Nnoitra has a variation of this technique that involves placing his fingers to the ground to determine an opponent's approximate location as well as the amount of Spiritual Pressure an opponent has.

Sonído - Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound used for Flash Steps.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:41 pm


It's fixed.

crispy flamefire


Jes-sama

PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:56 pm


@ Cripsy: Accepted ^^ Post your profile (or a link) in the Profiles and Journals thread, k?

@ Konigin: A satyr/faun thing? Cool ^^ I'm good with all your powers except the kido-absorbing move. There's nothing wrong with absorbing some kidos, but would you mind lowering the number you can absorb to, say, 20 until such time as you gain Espada ranking? You already have some good powers. This ensures hat you're not ridiculously overpowered for a starter Arrancar. Is that ok?
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:57 pm


Perfection!

Konigin von Agypten


Jes-sama

PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 10:03 pm


Bien ^^

You're accepted, too. Post up your profile (or a link). You know the drill 3nodding
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