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 Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 7:27 pm
((Is Angela with them? Gosh, I've missed this whole idea... I think I shall just have to make her pop up later...))
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 12:12 am
((Angela is with Alianae, Saphira and Eragon, yes.))
Oromis felt somebody enter his mind and tried to stop them but he was too weak. Besides, thye might be trying to help him. After all, Alianae had established a mental linkw ith him that allowed him to draw strength from her. Although he had been disgusted at the thought of himself living of anohter like a parasite, the fact was, he had to stay alive long enough to deliver the message. Nothing mattered past that.
Something about the presence that entered his mind felt familiar but he couldn't pinpoint it. Who are you? he asked cautiously.
Alianae felt Oromis talking to someone in his mind and cautiously felt through him to the presence that entered him. It felt familiar. Minasia. It must be Minasia.she thought, shielding it from them both. Yes. I've known her long enough to tell. She walled herself away from them so Oromis could still reach her but she couldn't hear them. Father and daughter both needed their privacy.
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 1:40 pm
Oromis.... FAther....
Tears raced down her cheeks as the thought of her father being like this was just so.. Unbearable...
I came as soon as I heard news of your from Alianae... Please... I would like to hear the message I am to recieve...
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 6:42 pm
((okay..ideas? What could Oromis tell? What is his message? How to defeat Galbatorix?))
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 7:20 pm
((Got a super idea here, but depends totally on you:
Oromis has finaly given in to his injury and is getting even weaker because of Galbatorix... He's sapping his energy litte by little, killing him a bit more every day... And he has to tell Minasia that the remaining dragon is supposed to hatch for her, and that she might be the only one, with Eragon and possibly Murtagh if he winds up good, that can defeat the king.
She also has to know that she has to find her twin, for she DOES have a twin, MAY, in Melian after a series of Urgal attacks have occured...
She might be the source of the power that they all need to win!
He should tell Eragon that SOMETHING will happen happen to Minasia and that they will have to travel to melian, and there they will find 'the power' t end all, the strength to stop all wars and bring peace to the land.
He also must know that he must accompany Minasia and guard her, for she... Is the princess of the lands of Alalea... and that May is her messenger and twin, meant to guard her as well... But recently, things haven't been going well... (you know the story I wrote on the forums...)
Well, that was my idea... Hope you like it!))
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 7:47 pm
((sounds familiar..Minasia already has a dragon though, right? Ingothold. Maybe the last dragon hatches for May? Does anybody mind if I use elements from the min RP thread?))
Minasia? My daughter. I have to tell you...I am going to die soon, it is how things must be. Galbatorix, he takes my strength each day. It is how he grows stronger as my strength fails. You may be the only one who can defeat him Minasia, you, Eragon and the remainder of the Shur'tugal who are still fit to call themselves such. Your sister may be one of them.
Yes, you have a sister. A twin. When you were born, it was decided for saftey that you would be split up. She lives..in Melian, a haven for most. It is not safe there anymore though. Wave after wave of Urgals have attacked and they are almost overcome, i fear. Go to her and be together again. She may be the only way this war can be ended.
And, my dear, take care. Alalea needs her princess to return safe and sound.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 7:52 am
"For you... For Alalea..."
tears slid down her face as she caressed his hand against her cheek, perhaps this was the last time she ever saw him... Alive, at least...
She gave a short kiss to his hand, slowly getting up and brushing down her clothes.
"Yes... As former ruler of Alalea, you are no longer able to control the situation at hand... I now take the position of grand ruler of the forgotten states af Alalea, much to my displeasure, and will continue our reign...
I bid you farewell, my father.... May your soul fly high with many others when your time will come..."
Without a second glance back, she walked away from the ill man, flowers blooming after she had passed...
"Now will come Eragon's time... I wish him to understand Oromis' words..."
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:38 am
((Time for Eragon to see Oromis, then))
A while after Minasia had left Oromis's lonely hut in the cliffs, Eragon arrived to the cliffs, and after walking through a path of unseasonal flowers that were in full bloom, he entered the elder's house. He gasped in shock as he saw his master's form so weak. He closed his eyes, and reached out with his mind to Oromis's. Ebrithil, he said, trying to greet his master with all the respect he deserved.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 10:16 am
((Oromis is mine, MINE!! MINE I SAY!!!))
Eragon...
How I am glad to see you are still well...
But I suppose that you can easily see that the case is not the swame for myself... I am dying, Eragon, and my life will soon leave me... galbatorix is tking my strength, little by little growing stronger with it while I fade into death... But the time is not for mourning, it is for due explanations.
Minasia, my daughter, is princess and now Queen of Alalea, also known as the Forgotten States of the seas. She is now on a quest to find her twin, for she has a sister, in Melian. Something will happen there, but I know not what it is.
You duty, eragon, is to protect her while you travel there, for if she dies, so wil Alalea...
Help her, Eragon, help her see through this blurry vision and find herself, for she is lost within all that has happened recently... And my death will not help her...
And in Melian, you will find her, May, villager and Guardian of the city. But be warry, for Urgals have be passing and little by little exterminating the town... Help them; The Guardians, then depart with May, and head here... Islanzadi will know what to do...
He grasped Eragons' hand lightly, for he had barely enough strength to lift it, and with a flicker of his tougn, said "Farewell, My Son..."
With a peacefull sigh, the old one was gone...
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 10:55 am
Eragon half-gasped, and stared at his master's body. He held Oromis's hand firmer, trying to hold on to Oromis's life, keep him connected to this world, anything. After a moment of silence, Eragon fruitlessly tried to blink back a tear, and it rolled down his cheeks, as he whispered to the deceased master, "Atra du Evarinya ono Varda," May the Stars watch over you. He slowly let go of his hand, and picked up one of the tablets of the fairth. He concentrated on the image of Oromis, and said the words. When he sensed the magic was complete, he placed the fairth on a table near Oromis, and without looking at it, walked out of the elder's house, and to the Palace in Ellesmera.
((Um, I wanted Eragon to show deep respect, so I just made him make the fairth. I couldn't remember the words for the life of me, though))
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 10:59 am
((*tried to hold back tears* Oh god.. That was beautifull.. Oh I love this RP!!!))
She sat silent on the steps a ways of the hut, trying to fix her mind on something, but everytime she found something, it always had a connection to Oromis... Nothing she could do or say at that moment could help her...
"Kingdoms for you, Father, Kingdoms and worlds..."
She sighed and got up, clenching her fists.
"But no, I must go on in life and live by the words you taught me, I must rule over Alalea..."
She stomach grumbled as she blushed, hoping no one was hearing, or seeing her.
"But my hunger comes first..."
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 11:16 am
((*bows* Thank you!))
Eragon entered the palace hall, Saphira now next to him. He saw Islanzadi, and bowed, the tears he had been carrying since his departure from Oromis's now feel freely to the floor under him. "Queen Islanzadi," he said. "It is to my displeasure to break the news to you that Oromis, the Cripple Who Is Whole, has passed on."
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 11:47 am
She simply nodded at the news, throwing a black cloth in the air, the wind twirling inside the hall and flinging it in the air.
"Thank you, Eragon Finiarel, for bringing me the news... May his soul fly as freely as that raiment..."
She closed her eyes and dipped her head, a tear slowly beading in the corner of her eye.
"Please, go join his daughter, Minasia, and bear the news to her as well, and confort her, for she cannot pass through this alone..."
She swan feathers spun around with her as she vanished in one of the many rooms of Tialdari hall.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 12:08 pm
Eragon nodded after Islanzadi. This was going to be a sad day, but like sad days, it would lead to an important demise. Possibly not today, but in a few days. Like when Garrow died, he was forced to realize part of his destiny, one that had grown so large in such little time. He turned and exited, and looked for Minasia. When he sighted her, he sat down next to her. "Hello, Minasia," he said. "I'm sure you already knew this by now, but I'll tell you anyways. Before I left your father's house, he died," he finished. What was he doing, telling her. Of course, she knew. It was her father, she probably sensed everything they said, and felt the very moment of his death. What was he doing, going about like some mortician, telling the family that their loved one had died?
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 12:21 pm
She shighed and nodded, pushing her hair behind her left ear.
"I'm glad you came anyways... That proves to me that you're loyal and will stay beside your friends... Never let that quality escape, Eragon, because it's part of what gives you your freedom..."
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