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 Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 1:31 pm
[This is against Smico, in another guild...]
...With a unseen smile at the unseen blocker the figure let out a deep sigh. Releasing his blade from where it sat apon the huge ducks. He eyed the duck strangely. "Ducks... Really?" He asked rhetorically with a deep emoish sigh. As the Duck rushed at him he let back his hood revealing a orange mask that had a spiraling shape that centered around his left eye. His spiky short black hair was the only thing that was visible about his head. Every other thing was covered either by his clothes or by the mask he wore. As the Duck seemed to just disperse, Enigma just placed his left palm with a black glove over it on his head, and scratched alittle. "This is not what I expected..." He said nonchalantly as thought Myo didn't even stand there. "...I was expecting to kill a few shinobi to cure my boredom, then be on my way back... I didn't need any of this. Some overgrown Duck... no, no, no... just wasn't planned..." He said to himself as though Myo was still irrelevant. Looking at Myo, finally, he let out yet another sigh. "I guess your death will come... hope you lived a full life..." He said in a happy tone before listening to Myo's words...
...That was when Enigma realized this person didn't shut up talking. He was as much of a motor mouth, as Enigma was himself. "...Friend? Otokage? You seem to be strong enough to take the Otokage position... I guess you'll just die the Otokage... And i'm sorry for your friends life... he must have been a good man... or maybe not... I don't know..." Enigma said talking to himself once more. Tilting his masked face up to the sky he watched a few clouds pass by as Myo introduced himself finally. "...Nice to met you, Myo... I'm Enigma. I'll be you sever today... Are special is death, with a side of beating..." He said with a laugh before watch with his single bright blue eye, Myo almost disappear, suddenly with his nun-chaku in hand. Sending a suddenly blast toward Enigma, he doubted that Myo knew anything about Enigma. Even though he was a mystery to everyone. So maybe that had something to do with it. With his katana still in hand Enigma slash in a vertical angle releasing a blast of chakra in the form of a shallow arc. The two blast of energy would met, and counter-act each other. "Can't you just fall down and die? It would make my job so much simpler... Oh! Or even better you can give up..." He said with a childish laugh. As the laugh echoed through the area Enigma had been storing chakra in his feet the whole time they had been speaking. With this Enigma usually advance speed will have been upped to three times that...
Suddenly Enigma vanished from sight leaving a crater about the size of a full grown Akamichi male. Or seven feet in diameter. Appearing just behind Myo with a unseen smile across his face Enigma slashed horizontally first just at the base of his spine, but halfway through were he slashed Enigma dropped his blade, his other hand shot up for it, grabbing the hilt with a echoing laugh. He slashed upward in a vertical angle dead center with his spine. If it connected this would be the end of the battle before it started. But being of Kage status, Enigma doubted Myo would be taken by such a simple attack...
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 5:42 pm
Approved, though you need to watch out for some grammar and spelling errors. But nothing much.
Post your profile for it to be evaluated and PM me with any doubts you might have.
Welcome to the 13th Squad! xp
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 4:54 pm
Down on all fours... That was Joe's style. No special stance. Joe leaped across the huge gap between two buildings which stood outside the Seretei walls. His bright blue eyes shining in the moonlight. Even though he was blind, he still felt the cool chill of the night. Joe's zanpakuto rested at his side, as his black robes rippled from the wind. He was an exiled Soul Reaper back for revenge.
Joe stood up straight. He faced the walls of the Seretei. His arm flew towards the wall, and dug into it. Joe climbed up quick, and fiercely. His fangs started to grow when he scaled the wall. Now he sat at the top, observing all the activity in the Seretei. Even at night, the place was as lively as ever. I bet all of those soul reapers have no clue that they are food for a mighty beast.... The predator... Joe. The predator hopped off the wall. The ground shook beneath him as he landed on all fours on the cold concrete.
Foot steps were heard near Joe. He started to growl at the figure that turned the street corner in the distance. It stepped slowly toward him. The figure was the captain of the sixth court guard squad. "What a delight. The first meal of the night... Kuchiki, with a side of the
Seretei! Yum!" Joe said, raising his voice as his sentence ended. Byakuya, and Joe drew there swords at the same time. Joe charged at him with a savage smile on his face...
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 9:17 am
Accepted.
Post your profile for evaluation and welcome aboard! xp
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:25 pm
Accepted.
It's OK to have hopeful wishes! But moderation is also important. That's why everyone goes through an evaluation period before they are granted shikai.
But enough of technicalities, post your profile, so I can read and evaluate it.
For the moment our squad is not open for RP yet. I'm busy now, but in a couple of days I'll update this sub-forum and everyone will be free to post wherever they want. Just be patient please, and use this time to get your profile done and approved.
Oh!... And Welcome aboard!!! xp
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 7:59 pm
Ready to read when you're ready to read it. XD
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:47 pm
((Shiranai is new in school))
Shiranai suddenly started to feel sick in the stomach, and slightly weak. " Teacher, may I go to the sick room, I don't feel so well..." The teacher nodded, giving her a hall pass and a mini map to the nurse's office. Once she got in there, the nurse wanted to check what was wrong. "Your suffering lack of sleep and malnutrition. The best I can do is let you sleep in on of the beds, and I'll get you healthier foods to eat."Shiranai went to one of the beds and laid down. man, I didn't know I was in rough shape.... just for waking up from the dreams...and maybe skipping breakfast was not a good idea... Shiranai look up to the ceiling for a few moments before slipping into a deep sleep.
"Shiranai, don't go too far now... the farthest your allowed to go is the park." " Yes mama, I will listen mama, may I bring Cinnamon with me mama?." (( Cinnamon is a big, tan teddy bear)) " Yes, you may. have fun at the festival dear!"
Shiranai ran fast down the block, with Cinnamon close behind. When she got to the festival she saw a huge monster in front of her; which she now knew was a hallow. The monster had millions of skulls on his face, and looked down upon Shiranai. "Look at what we got here! A cute, helpless, little girl." Shiranai was terrified,however just as the hallow was going to attack her, it stopped, and yelled as one of the monsters arms fell from its body. Shiranai burst into tears still to scared to move. "What is this? Who the hell did this to my arm" Turning from side to side the great beast didn't even notice when its meal, Shiranai, was stolen from under its very nose. Shiranai looked up at her savior through the tears; he was a tall man with long dark brown hair in a weird looking outfit, that reminded her of the Yukata her mommy liked to wear to festivals only his was black with legs. "Who are you mister?" However before he could answer the Hollow, who had gotten over his initial surprise, attacked "Damn you Soul Reaper! How dare you steal my meal." The man did not seem to mind the Hollow at all as he simply dodged the attack with a Shupou. Setting Shiranai down the strange man turned to face the Hollow and with one quick movement dispatched it with a movement so fast Shiranai couldn't even see it. He turned back to Shiranai he smiled for the first time and said, "You should be safe for now, but you seem to have a spiritual pressure that feels similar to that of a Soul Reaper. So take this and never take it off." Reaching into his pocket he gave her a necklace before leaving.
Shiranai awoke soon after the dream ended, and looked at the necklace. 'I wonder if that soul reaper is still around?'
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 12:01 am
Accepted! There are some minor misspellings, but nothing much. I also enjoyed your writing style.
Anyways, post your profile for evaluation.
Welcome to the Divine Protectors! xp
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Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:17 am
((This is a post I made in a Naruto guild, if anyone knows anything about Naruto here its my RPC getting a very powerful demon, its the best I could find that hadn't been moved to a recycling bin that I cant access))
Kazuma walked into the temple with the scroll a monk had sent him, it was an invitation to meet the head monk. Kazuma looked around for someone to talk to, in the shadows of the entrance room was a monk-in-training, Kazuma approached him and help out the invitation "Can you take me to the head monk" he asked the teenager. The kid grabbed his hand and took him threw the hallways of the temple, it was criss-crossing and very confusing to Kazuma. The kid finally lead him to a massive door way and motioned for Kazuma to enter on his own, this was the chamber the head monk stayed in. Kazuma opened the door a crack and bowed his head , he entered and closed the door silently he could feel the eyes of the monk on him and he stepped forward. Kazuma stopped and bowed eight feet in front of him "I received an invitation that you needed to see me" he asked the monk reverently. The monk rubbed his old face and looked at him "We wish to give you a present that arrived to us not too long ago, but this will most likely kill me" he said to him with a slight smile that Kazuma couldn't see. Kazuma's eyes widened "But you can't I will not accept a present that would kill you, life is something to be revered not given up to give a gift" he said frowning. The old man smiled at him widely "I have lived a LONG time young one and passed knowledge to all the monks of this temple but this is something that should be done and we need someone with good intentions for the fire country to have it, and you are a prosperous young shinobi and there is potential to you" he said smiling. The monk waited to see if Kazuma would answer, which he didn't and continued himself "We have received the Gobi demon and you will be given it as a present to a prosperous fire shinobi and a main branch Hyuuga" at this he rose up. The monk walked swiftly to Kazuma, Kazuma lifted his head and saw him walking right at him he straightened up and tried to think what the monk was going to do. The monk swiftly punched him in the gut which made him stoop, as Kazuma stooped the Monk swiftly hit his neck to knock him out. Kazuma sprawled to the ground, the monk rolled him over and pulled out a ornate jar that held the demon.............
Kazuma woke up to see some monks around him he sat up "W w what happened" he asked them then he realized "So the powerful felling is..... he did it didn't he" he said his face turning deathly pale. The monks looked at him in sympathy and one final nodded, Kazuma stood up quickly "I am sorry for your lose I did not agree to take it" he said. One of the monks walked to him and put his arm around him "It is all right he left a predecessor and wanted you to have it he thought it of a final gift to the whole world" the monk said and smiled. Soon after the monks left Kazuma alone and he said quietly to himself "Thank you Buddha and and you too mother thank him for me" Kazuma whipped a tear from his eye and left the temple to head back to the village.
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Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:51 pm
I would prefer a Bleach RP, in order for me to evaluate your knowledge of the Bleach "Universe". But this is mainly meant to evaluate literacy, so choosing a Naruto RP is not necessarily a problem.
Despite some small mistakes (misplacement of punctuations mark in the construction of the sentences, and overall too long post for what's intended in this application) you are unquestionably literate and therefore you've been accepted.
Post your profile for it to be evaluated. Any question send it to me via PM, and you can begin RPing right away - even while you await for your profile to be approved.
Welcome aboard!!! xp
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 11:32 pm
Shizu Mori was at home on a rainey day. He was geting bored from being kept inside. He decided to go outside and walk in the rain to the park. He snuck out the house so no one could hear him. Ran a little ways to get a good distance from him and the house. After about walking 15 minutes in the rain he was soak but he loved the rain so it did not bother him one bit. When he finaly got to the park he saw that one of his friends wear there. Shizu walked up to him. "Hey Genshu! How are you and what you doing out hear?" Genshu turned to Shizu realy quick becuse Shizu startled him. "Why you Shizu you almost gave me a heart attacke!" Genshu walked up to him and hit him over the head. "And I am hear becuse I knew you would sneak off to hear. You all ways go sneaking off in the rain."
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 5:29 pm
Sorry Drake. I hate having to say this. But you're not accepted.
You lack literacy in every way. You've shown lack of knowledge in grammar, syntax, lexical, and spelling. To be completely honest, that was terrible.
The only explanation I can find, is that you're not fluent in English. Either that, or you have a condition, related to a certain degree of agraphia.
I can't accept you the squad as it is, but if you want to talk this through with me, maybe I can find a way to help you. If that is what you want.
Other than that, you can always apply again.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:16 am
((Oh my so this is my first bleach rp.... Lol... I may need help lol but I'm wiling to learn.)) Looking to the sky a short young female hide her eyes by her long deep red hair. A smirk appeared on the lips of what seemed to be the young female, her deep blue eyes finally visible as her hair slid away from her face. The air seemed to shimmer around her as one of her feet slid backwards. She once more had that overly smug look she rolled her eyes slightly as she flicked her Zanpacto out from it's sheath as she pivoted to the right. The long katana blocked an attack that was intent on slicing her in half, the wind from the attack blew her attire into the air the sand swirled around her as she laughed slightly. "Oh come on you have got to be kidding?!" he said bored with the pathetic hollow. She ducked the next strike as she slid forwards sliding forwards as her sword finally connected sliding the blade upwards she smiled as the Hollow finally collapsed dying. Sliding her zanpacto back into it's sheath she snorted "Not evn worth my time." however it had been a good small workout.. She supposed.
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:54 pm
(This is my first time RPing, I apologize if I'm horrible)
Wandering aimlessly for a quiet and secluded spot away from all the other graduates, Rei walked toward the forest without any real clue of what she was doing. Before she had realized it, she was surrounded by trees and was at the very center of the dense and silent aside from the occasional chirping of birds forest. The academy years are finally over.... sighing gratefully, she sat down in the middle of a clearing with satisfication and closed her eyes. She opened them again quickly with the startled realization that she would have to join a squad to be able to go to the real world, and her brows narrowed slightly. She would have to talk to people (one of the things she felt most uncomfortable doing, though getting better) and socialize with them, she thought with growing anxiety. Talking...... the thought alone left her feeling dizzy as she clambered back toward the trail leading her out of the protection and seclusion of the forest.
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