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 Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 11:00 am
( UPDATE:
New Player: Korn on a Stik )
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:48 pm
Dylan glanced at sportie. "parents? You mean those pathetic people who pretended to love me? I don't really.....they wouldn't come...." she panted.
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 4:26 pm
In Room 306 a young man stirs on the bed, having fallen asleep after arriving with the police and being sent to check out some empty rooms on the 3rd floor. 'What.......where?.......Oh sweet skipping damn, sarge is gonna kill me if he find me dozing on the job!' Kelly-James Waters leaps up from the lovely queen sized bed and runs to the door of the empty and uneventful hotel room and opens the door and peers outside. A group of people he's never seen before are clustered around the room three doors down. For someone the number 303 held some significance but at the moment Kelly-James couldn't put his finger on it. 'Some great cop in training I am........' He walks down the the cluster quietly but there was really no point. They would be alerted of his presence shortly. Not bothering to flash his temporary badge that the Sargent had given he immediately started to speak. "Hey hey, police here. Please ste....... Sweet Jesus where in hell did that come from?!?" What caught his attention was the new corpse in the middle of the hall. Kelly-James had seen crime scenes before but something about the room just gave him the creeps.
(Well thank you much for the welcome and the correction.)
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 7:51 pm
(Korn On A Stik, welcome to the game and I hope you enjoy being part of it. As a side Note: The room is a complete mess, but the corpse is full of blood lying on the corridor's floor.)
Sportie had her arms around Dylan trying to comfort her and help her to her feet, but could not believe her ears. "What do you mean by pretend to love you, and they wouldn't come? Are you saying you go and do whatever you want to? Do you go home to eat and sleep? Does your parents ask you where have you been and if so, what do you tell them?"
Before Sportie could get another word out, she was startled by a voice that seemed to come from nowhere. She looked up and saw a young looking police officer heading towards them. "Where in the heck did he come from?" Sportie thought to herself. "Here I am, right where I didn't want to be, right in the middle of this drama! I hope this guy doesn't start to ask me any questions." She even began to re-think if she should tell Charles about her vision.
With so much going on, Sportie began to hope that Charles did not hear her and that she could convince Dylan to come downstairs with her. She also hoped that once away from this horror, she could get Dylan to open up to her. Maybe even get more information about who she is and what exactly is she doing here.
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 3:54 am
Dylan was about to anwser when someone said something. She turned and saw another officer. She shut her mouth and stood up, though still a little dizzy. She brushed herself off and walked down the hall, making sure to avoid looking at the corpse.
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 8:08 am
Sportie was surprised at the abrupt way Dylan got up and rushed off. "Dylan wait!" Sportie called out. "Where are you going in such a hurry?" Sportie could not understand why Dylan was leaving so fast, and had not answered her questions. She also did not want to be left alone with this new police officer.
(My pleasure heart )
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Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 12:32 pm
See Dylan and Sportie moving out of the scene made Cesar more easy. But the body kept attracting his attention "how did this get here?... It wasn't here"
Cesar saw the officer coming, now he could come with some questions, then in his thought of how to evade the police officer he remembered the girl
"...She still inside!" but it was dark and he didn't have any light
"Maybe someone... could help..." then he turn his face to the 303 room's door
"why did she have not come out yet by herself?"
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Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:12 pm
Kelly-James looks away from the corpse for a second to let out a bi breath, then he turns to the man who just said something about someone being in room 303. Kelly walks over to him a puts a hand on his shoulder to keep him in place so he doesn't run off like the woman and the girl. "Who's still in the room, pal?" Kelly-James' hand slowly creeps to the Colt that's in the holster on his hip.
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Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2008 7:19 pm
- 3º Floor Corridor:
it's sure that everyone is a little confused about what is happening, but the problems seem to be just beginning when the elevator begins to operate, its noise indicates that it was in the lowers floor and began to up, is only a matter of seconds to know where the elevator will stop.
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Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2008 8:25 pm
Cesar looked at Kelly-James, he did look sleepy
"A normal police officer... uhm... trying to be friendly" thought Cesar
"If I know how his kind thinks, he would like to my a hero... and maybe be promoted... it means..."
Them Cesar turn his face to Kelly-James "Officer there was a little girl here and she went inside and I haven't see she come out... it was just few minutes ago but... who knows with things like that something could happen to her" said Cesar pointing to the dead body
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Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 8:26 pm
The young man lets out another deep breath and pulls out his lighter in his left hand and the colt in his right. He flicks the lighter to life, readies his weapon, and walks slowly into room 303, oblivious to the running elevator. 'Father, Son, and Holy Spirit help me......'
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 1:45 pm
(My fault, I mis-read her last post. I'll try not to make that mistake again!)Dylan was moving to fast for Sportie, especially being in high heel shoes, by the time she had gotten to the place where she last saw Dylan, Sportie could not find her. Sportie decided to go downstairs to see if Dylan went there, but by the time she got to the bottom of the stairs Dylan was no where to be seen. Sportie stood there a minute catching her breath and trying to decide what her next move should be. She really wanted to get a closer look at the corpse in the corridor on the 3rd floor. "I'm dying to know if she is the woman I saw in my vision. I know that I'm going to regret this later, but I just have to go back up there and find out." Sportie thought to herself. Sportie noticed that the elevator was in use, and that confused her because she had been told earlier that it was out of service. She squinted her eyes and raised her right eyebrow. She knew something was not right about the elevator working now and had not seen a repair man anywhere around, but she turned around and started walking back up to the 3rd floor.
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:42 am
( i'm a little confused about where Dylan run way?? she still in the 3º floor?? )
- 3ºFloor Corridor:
About the Corpse, it can find that is a man. Somehow, Sportie who saw a picture before and Charles which is in charge of investigating the case, they are the only ones who may recognize the corpse. Can you find out who the corpse is??
The elevator stopped on the 3ºfloor and open his door, in that short period of time that the door was open, it can be noted that nobody was inside and the light from inside the elevator was blinking, then the door is closed but the elevator remains on this floor.
note: There was something writen on the wall inside the elevator.
- 303 Room - Lucky's Room???:
This room it's different, is equal to the others rooms with the same objects and furniture, but it's all messy, dirty and destroyed, with a strong smell of rotten.
For further investigation select some place or something in specific.
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:20 pm
Cesar walked in the room
"I'm gonna help you... Let's find her together it will be faster"Said Cesar to the officer with a hanchief in his nose"It's too stinky here right I gonna open a window"
And he walked to the bottom of the room
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 9:42 pm
Sportie made her way back to the 3rd floor corridor. She knew that she had to get a closer look at the corpse on the floor. She couldn't help but think it was the woman from her vision.
She could see that there was no one in the corridor, so she felt safe that no one would stop her from getting closer to the corpse. Sportie walked slowly and quietly towards the corpse. As she passed one of the rooms, she could see that the door was open. The room was dark except for a faint light that seemed to be moving further into the room. She thought to herself, "It must be the officer trying to get a better look at the room."
Sportie quickly walked pass the room so that she wouldn't been seen. As she got closer to the corpse, she could tell that it was not a woman as she had thought, but instead it was a man. She kept getting closer to the body, and when she got right next to it, she let out a loud scream before she could stop herself.
She screamed because she recognized the dead man laying on the floor from the photo she had been shown earlier in the evening. Sportie also realized that she knew who the man was, and she became overwhelmed at the sight of him. She was so shocked that she fainted right on the spot.
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