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numbah23

PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:59 pm


Almost the moment the angel was put on the bed, Zack backed out of the room. He had actually gotten a chance to really see the arrow in the girl's body, and it made him woozy. He'd never seen an injury like this...mostly just cuts and scrapes. One time, he did watch his brother jump off the roof of their house into their dad's very expenisve convertable, and ended up hitting the emergency brake and slicing his leg open, but the e-brake didn't stick in his brother's leg. Zack also had a moment to think to himself, Where did that arrow come from, anyway?

Sarah managed to shoo the rest of the boys out of the room, knowing all too well that it might make the angel slightly nervous to have so many boys looking down at her body. She allowed Strake to stay, because he seemed to know what he was doing...That arrow had to come out somehow, right? And they couldn't just sit and wait for it to fall out when it was ready or anything.

Outside the room, Kevin looked at Zack, and shook his head. "Why the hell did someone shoot a girl with an arrow?" he asked. "Where the hell did they get an arrow anyway? I didn't know they still sold them."

"Those boy scouts use the arrows, dimwit," Jay scolded.

The boys flinched at hearing the angel shout, and immediately Jay and Zack were back in the room, afraid that something had happened. They were both relieved and a bit perplexed that they watched the girl fall asleep with the pillow she was using to defend herself.

Sarah looked at the two boys, sighed, and turned to Strake. "My father is a doctor, and he hides his drugs in the upstairs bathroom. That's why I told Jay to take us here. I think there's anesthesia up there." She looked at Jay while saying where the numbing drug was, and he knew that meant he was to go and get it. She knew he was the only one who would know what it looked like...The reason why he would know, she didn't want to get into that.

Jay nodded, and left. Zack looked at Strake. "What should we do?" he asked him.


((Hiya new person! Well...so far...we had a battle of the bands contest, and while that was going on, an evil demon struck terror, and shot Melody with a "mystery" arrow. Now Zack and his band, Strake and Katie, and Melody are at Sarah's guest house (sarah is part of Zack's band, as is Jay, Kevin, and Tristan), and they're trying to take the arrow out of Melody...to point out a few key events. If anyone wants to add more detail, go ahead. ^_^

Hey, Dart...whatever happened to the other member of your band? Not Josh, the other one...=/ I forgot her name...))
PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:33 am


((Katie was sitting, and she wouldn't have been shood out right? So she's just kind of sitting. I sometimes have trouble recalling her name too, I was originally gonna call her Lilly, but then I realised that it was the same name as one of the pre-mades, so I switched it to Katie. When I don't give a character action it meens they aren't really doing anything, or I forgot them, like Sparky, I'm constantly forgetting him, just assume he's on Strake's shoulder. Or did you meen Michelle, she left to help her brother study for the upcoming school year.))

"So they do have anestesia? You should have checked Strake, you're so absent minded sometimes." Katie said to Strake, sitting down next to him.

"Well, I wasn't expecting that they would have it, and to administer it is a very tricky process, I don't really want to mess with such a powerfull medicine, too much could kill her, and too little would put her through a pain of a hot white flame, even worse that just ripping it out. Our best bet is to rub a drug that causes the skin to open up, or contract around a wound, so that way we can pull it out with little damage." Strake said feeling very uneasy. "But if we must use the anestesia," Strake said standing up,"I'll need a computer to search how to calculate the amount of anestesia we'd need, and somebody else to administer it, because I don't really think she trusts me to administer it, I think you should do it." Strake said to Zack. "After we administer it, I'll stay to watch her, so when she wakes up she won't be alone." Strake said looking over at the bed where Melody was laying.

"Strake, do be very careful in your calculation. Hey, why don't we have your dad administer it?" Katie turned to Sarah, she was completely clueless of Melody being an angel, so she really didn't know that Sarah's dad wouldn't be aloud to know about this. She was also completely clueless about why earlier Sarah gave the all clear for them.

"When have you ever known me to be careless...don't answer that, this is a very serious matter, but I'd hope to avoid it if at all possible." Strake said, trying to ease up Katie's apparent worry.


((What time is it in the roleplay, because I would suggest that they go to bed while melody is drugged, so that way she's not left out for too long. Oh and when are the winners of the Battle of the Bands gonna be announced?))

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numbah23

PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 7:56 am


((Yeah, it was Michelle I was talking about...and Katie wasn't shoo'd...sarah only shoo'd my boys. And I'd imagine it'd be mid to late afternoon...depends on how long the battle lasted...with all those other performances. I don't have time to post right now, so I'll do it later. I just wanted to throw in my two cents real quick...))
PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:23 am


((numbah's right; since techinacally the band thing was around 12-1pm, it's...........oh, let's just go with 4:30pm here.

I don't remember writing anything about her falling asleep, but I suppose that'd be natural, with the wound and all, so I'll work with that.))

Melody was drifting in and out of consiousness, so things were going very blurry at the time, and she was finally closing her eyes sometimes while hugging the fluffy thing in her arms. She had to remember to thank Sarah later for shooing out some of the guys; too many in the room! However, she was still fighting off the thing she finally remembered was called "sleep". This was because one of hte other band members (it might have been Zack; she couldn't really tell cause her vision was all fuzzy.) was now talking to the demon, which nerved her completely. Why didn't they realize that Strake was a demon? Were humans really that clueless? No wonder they needed angels.

But as she went to close her eyes again, she saw something fall in front of her. Thinking it came out of the fluffy thing, she tried to go back to this "sleep." until she looked at it again.

But wait................it was pure white and shining with glory....HER WING FEATHER! NOT GOOD!

She shot up in a instant in the bed, forcing herself to wake up; her wings weren't outstretched or even showing, but this feather was a warning sign that she couldn't hold her diguise for much longer at all, for it came out of her back and floated into her line of vision. God's sign to get moving to a isolated area of the house. As the two boys were talking as well as some of the other people, she shoved the feather into the top of her dress, and looked around for another room. Seeing a room that she remembered from a past angel called a "bathroom" in the corner of this room, she forced herself up onto her feet. She started tipping foward, but she refused to fall as she ran into it clusmily and shut the door behind her, perhaps shouting something about apologies for rushing off, but whether it was in speech or real voicing she wasn't sure. She saw some strange knob-thingy on the door, but left it alone and decided not to mess with it. ((AKA the lock))

Finally safe in the closed slightly smaller room, she let her disguise fall. Her body began to show yellow glowing symbols as she began to sort of.....transform, one could say.

Two glorious white wings shot out of her back, outstretching themselves knocking over a few glass bottles of something or another, happy to be free. Her white bleeding dress fell to the floor, and the girl took a step foward as she could feel her normal clothing return to her in whirling swifts of fabric covering her body, which formed into one thing; a long floorlength dress, white in color (but slowly turning red due to the arrow still sticking out of her), and it cut off abouve the chest, revealing her slender shoulders and part of her back. A light blue material that tied about her like one would a jacket was in a neat bow and gave a bottom-cape like appearance. Two golden bangles appeared, one on each arm, each with strange symbols on it, matching hte ones on her body. Only the cross remained the same, but even then it was different, for it was glowing.

Although still weak, this was a relief to her and she smiled as it was finishing up; it was painful to hold that disguise. The room glowed a golden yellow as this process was being gone through, and the only sign showing on the outside was that you could see the glow under the door.


((Ah! Welcome okami sohma! Numbah explained it pretty well; I'm trying to see if there are any details left....

Oh! It's a holiday just for the angels and all, as you can see in the history post on the first page how that was formed. Strake is a demon in disguise, which is why Melody is afraid of him. Melody is weak now, and in this post she can't hold her diguise any longer and hides in the bathroom as she returns to her angel form.

What the arrow DOES is it strands her on the Earth and she can't return to the heavens; which is later in the plot so you don't know that yet, but might as well say it now to plan you all. The Priest'll be coming by soon, maybe in a post or two to give you all a good explanation.

Let's see............okami sohma, since it's a holiday and all, you can just fly about the city (since you haven't been stranded by the arrow, techinacally no human other tahn those gifted can see you. This includes the Priest, if you wanna run by him and join TanManDown in helping Melody and the lost people. Or you can just find the house by accident and come in I guess, but only Strake and Zack can see you (strake being demon and Zack gifted), but that's the more dangerous route, so be careful if you plan on that one!))

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TanManDown

PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 11:48 am


((-_- I thought I'd be able to post during this last week of school... apparently I was wrong. And then I thought I could squeeze in a post right after graduation and before grad night... wrong again. And starting Sunday, I'll be totally gone for a week.

Feeling guilty? Definitely.

It always bothers me when people join and then flake... and it bothers me quite a bit more when I'm the one doing the flaking.

Good lord, I finally find a roleplay I like, and then I start failing epically at keeping up.

So yeah. I don't know what you guys want to do with Amadeus. If it would be at all possible to keep him on hold/suspended until I get back... I'll have lots more time this summer to stay updated and active.

Otherwise, if my erratic posting behavior is really throwing a wrench into your roleplay, by all means remove me. It's obviously your prerogative, and I probably deserve it.

Trying to make you feel guilty and get a pity vote? Definitely not. I'm above that kind of crap.

So yeah... just let me know and I'll act accordingly.))
PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:13 pm


((TanManDown, I'll tell you the exact same thing I told you in the PM here, but with an added summary: don't worry about it! Lives do that, making you busy and all, and your character'll be waiting here ready for ya when summer finally comes for you! We usually keep a slow but steady pace, so I"ll help ya catch up if you need it. 3nodding


Dude, if you were being a pain and junk in the RP I would've kicked you out by now, blacklisted you, and all that bad stuffs which has not happened, obviously. I know EXACTLY what you mean by a busy schedule; the only reason I've been posting so much is because I've graduated high school and I'm off for the summer (though I have a camp thing coming up in a few weeks, which I'll let you all know about as we get closer), and therefore have tons of free time to spend to make such an RP and keep it going. Normally I am not this lazy IRL, but summer does that. xd

If there's understandable reasons for you to be on hold for awhile, I'm totally fine with it (such as when RunWhileYouCan has been sick and asked one of us to keep her character on hold; that's something that no one is at fault for nor should be punished for.) I'm not gonna be a heartless bia-tch unless people haven't been posting JUST BECAUSE they don't went to post, like avoiding it or something. Like, when they're online a TON and they don't stop by once or something like that, and NOT because they forgot it existed (again, I understand that too; when you're in alot of RPs at once it's hard to remember them all. xd ). Lives are understandble reasons to be a bit harder to keep up, and I fully understand that, and have been in that position myself many times. 3nodding

So don't feel guilty; there's a difference between being very busy IRL and flaking, and you're not flaking. smile ))

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Currupted Dart

PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:39 pm


((don't worry about it dude, one week isn't really that bad, at this rate you may have a page to catch up on, and it's not like we're doing anything plot-critical with your character right now(well not that I know of). I say have fun with the little camp thing, and don't get hurt, or if you do get hurt pee on an ant hill and say "that is the power of man" that's what I did, and I felt so much better. Irl meens in real life right?))
PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 7:23 pm


((oh ok i get it now thank you to everyone who helped me heart lol and thanks sora kitty now all i have to do is figure out how i want to run into everyone in this rp , quick question though what do you mean by the lost people??? i hope this post isn't to short but if it is tell me and i will add to it kk. lol ok well here i go))

Bella was jumping with joy since the holiday when she was allowed down on earth was taking place and this year I was allowed to go. I ran to my home before taking my leave

"Momma, Pappa guess what i was just told that this year i'm allowed to down down to earth for there holiday"I tell them quickly while also saying my good byes to my mother, father, and brother. As I ran out the door I could see that my brother gave me a funny look but I didn't care i was just happy that I was one of the angels that got picked to enter earth this year.

I ran to the area where they were letting the angels take off as one of the angels were directing the others and telling them how to take off and land when they got to earth. I was sing as the line moved up till it was my turn, when i finally i got up there the guy at the gate asked me if this was my first time leaving heaven.
" yes sir this is my first time" I giggle with excitement.
He gave me a sweet look and replied " ok heres a few tips before i let you leave. When you first take off dive into the clouds and warp your wings around your body for about 10 seconds and then open them this for spend so this trip doesn't take forever. Next for the landing flap your wings slowly so you don't hit the ground hard and are able to stand without falling. Ok you got that?" I shake my head yes "ok then ready go" he yells
I yell back " thank you mister" and run out the gate and do as he said with my wings. When iI started to glide I felt so weight less and worry less. As i came in to view of the planet call earth I said to my self " oh wow it's even pretty in person" as i close my eyes and contuine to glide but soon find my self hitting the ground with a bump. I sit there for a second and then get up and laugh at my self " well there goes my great landing" I smile as I walk around exploding earth and the festival taking place.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:09 pm


((Not bad, interesting way of putting how to leave the heavens.

The only complaint I actually have is just a standard RP one; try to use just third person, not first. It makes it less confusing if it's in third. In other words, don't use "I" unless Bella is actually speaking to somone or to herself in thoughts, and not for describing her actions. 3nodding

The lost people? OH, that. Don't worry about that right now; that might come in alot later in the plot. Assuming we get that far. xd ))
PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 10:22 pm


((yeah, "I" is kind of like a bad word in a roleplay, and it sometimes might make the person who's talking to her forget what her name was if there character knew her name, like if Strake knew her name and was talking to her I might forget her name, forcing Strake to have a completely random amnesia attack, or I have to go all the way to the first page to find out, and that's not much fun. Other than that, pretty good, I think you're at the correct level, sorry about my bad language(I said "I"). Oh and don't worry, I'll stay with it Sora Kitty, I'm not going anywhere without my laptop anytime soon, and I'd probally take my laptop anyways. Oh yeah, and make sure to proof read.))

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okami sohma

PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 11:00 am


(( lol thanks
oh ok i will talk in 3rd person lol it's kinda funny though this other rp i belong to yelled at me for talking in 3rd person and said to talk in 1st it's easier.
oh ok i guess i will have to wait and see to find out what the lost people are))
PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 9:21 am


((I thought Melody fell asleep...Huh...maybe I should get checked for dislexia...@_@ Or something...I seem to be having those problems lately....Anyway...))

Sarah and Zack looked at each other when the angel ran into the bathroom. Something wasn't right, and they both knew that Strake and Katie probably shouldn't be around for whatever it was that wasn't right. Maybe the angel was changing into the angel again.

Sarah stood in front of Strake and Katie's vision of the bathroom, as Zack calmly walked to the bathroom door, trying to hide the shine emitting from the bottom of the door.

"Uhm..."Sarah said. "Maybe you two should go out into the sitting room with Kevin and Tristan. I don't think she's feeling very good." She put her hands out and tried to usher the two out of the room, not unkindly, with a big smile on her lips.

Zack knocked on the door softly and put his ear up against the wood. "Are you okay?" he whispered, just loud enough for the angel to hear.

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Currupted Dart

PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 1:44 pm


((Massive writers block, I can only think of oneline, today is not a good day, pretty much all I can think of is "Katie and Strake leave quietly to the other room where Tristan and Kevin were." well I can't post I'm seriously horid right now, I got really sick suddenly, I'm probally not gonna post for a few days, so Sora Kitty, you can take over Strake and Katie while I'm sick, I don't see it going away for a little bit. You know how Strake and Katie are by now right? Oh and don't forget Sparky, cause I always do.))
PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 3:43 pm


((There've been times when I write stuff w/o realizing it, so I dunno, numbah23. xd Besides, it'd be normal for her to do that anyways, since she's sick and all.))

Sorry to hear that, Currupted Dart. Sure, I'll cover a few posts for ya.))

Strake and Kaite looked at each other, confused as the girl ran into the bathroom so.......suddenly. Kaite was unaware of the fact that this girl was not human. However, although Strake had his suspicions (for he had noticed the girl stick something shiny down her dress), he figured it best not to try and get invovled at the moment. It would do no good for anyone. Without arguement, they both nodded and joined the crew out hte room, the door shutting behind them.

Hearing a knock upon the door and her transformation complete, Melody turned to the door and peeked through the keyhole. There was someone there blocking her way to seeing the room, and the voice sounded like Zack. No, it was Zack! She could also here Sarah trying to usher out the other two out of the room. They had taken the unplanned hint; good, good!

"Are the other two gone, the Strake and Kaite?" she asked quietly, her voice barely above a whisper. She moved so her back and wings rested against the door for a moment, and the glow finally faded. She forced herself to open the door the next moment and peek; it was only Sarah and Zack. She opened the door fully, and now saw that it was Zack in front of her, and stepped out of the tiny room. As she moved out of the bathroom, her wings spread into full glory, and her angelic clothing had replaced the white bleeding dress on the floor ((Which is described in last post)), swishing about in a almost floaty way as she turned to face the two. Of course, her current dress was also turning red, but she felt much more comfortable despite her pain.

Relying on the heaven's customs, she bowed quite lowly for a moment, hand cupped in front of her for a moment before rising back up and speaking. "Thank you all for your help, you and the others of your 'band'. I am sorry for my sudden show of what you humans call 'fear', and for putting you all through such troubles, but I do not trust the one called Strake. He is........not human, nor angel......*sigh.....As predjuice as it sounds,he cannot be trusted, for he is actually a demon, disguised as a human. But do not tell him this, or he will be angry at me for saying such things." she finally forced herself to admit to Zack and Sarah. Otherwise, it'd be confusing as to why she suddenly just lept up out of his reach. She smoothed out her dress, before turning to the closed door for a moment, then turning back. Good; no peekers.

"But all judgemental thoughts aside, I can't thank you enough for your help in bringing me back here. Since the room is empty at the moment, I should take a moment to briefly explain who I am. After all, Zack, I've nearly cost you your sanity, have I not?

I am Melody, Guardian Angel of Zack. Er, techinacally Junior Angel, but that's too difficult to explain at the moment. I have been Zack's guardian since his birth, watching over him and keeping him safe, but after some issues on both sides, I haven't been face-to-face with him in years. Actually, I don't think angels are supposed to be seen by others, so I don't understand why Zack saw me all those years ago.

Also, I am not sure why you can all see me now, why I am loosing this red stuff, why I feel unwell, why I can walk on the ground. Unfortunately, the class of angel I am in, we learned not alot yet about the human world, so I apologize for my incompetence!" she said, bowing low again and keeping it for a moment as the two had time to think over her words.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 9:18 am


Zack and Sarah looked at each other for a moment, and then back at Melody. Sarah finally understood why Zack seemed so attatched to the angel...er, Melody...and she suddenly felt that twinge of jealousy again. Ever since Sarah and Zack met, she's been trying to take care of him, make sure he was safe, and make sure he didn't thrown out of his apartment. When he was kicked out of his house and cut off from his family, she had offered this guest house to him, but he declined and took his grandmother's offer and decided to live on his own. Back then, she actually took it personally, maybe he didn't want to live so close to her...after all, they had just met about a month before. Ever since he moved into his apartment, she's been the one keeping it fairly clean and functional, knowing a guy wouldn't do it himself. Well, despite her efforts of wanting to take care of Zack, he had a guardian angel. So what did he need her for now?

Zack looked back to the closed door from where Sarah had ushered Katie and Strake earlier. So...the guy was a demon? So many fictional beings are coming to life, and this news was really close to just shattering what he knew about the universe.

He looked back at Melody, and studied her for a moment. She was his guardian angel...So that would explain the truck accident. That might also explain the arrow in her side. If it did, then someone was actually trying to hit him with an arrow? Why?

"Who did that to you?" Zack asked, waving his and toward the arrow in her side.
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