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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 1:21 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 11:50 am
..... sigh...
No comments on my story....
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 2:08 pm
I'm sorry I haven't had time to add to it - I'll do it over Christmas ok? I promise! X] It is very good though, if a little hard to follow on from - where do you want to go with it?
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 6:03 pm
Eventually, in a few days time or soemthing, I was thinking a dog would sniff out the body in the wall or somthing, and then police would investigate.... and then eventually thats going to lead to Leone's death.... I can't decide if I should have him get shot or die in the sun because I was thinking of adding to the ending and having Olivia slowly burn to death peacefully on a roof, seeing the sunrise for the first time...
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Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 5:54 pm
Nobody's commented on my origami? Jeez! I like everybody elses art in general..
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 10:20 am
I keep forgetting to comment about that... They're really good! And I learned how to do the rose box thingy!
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 6:17 pm
Batjesusman I keep forgetting to comment about that... They're really good! And I learned how to do the rose box thingy! Thank you! That made my christmas!
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:18 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:38 am
*holds up a banner* I've put up a couple of new pictures. Heehee. I'd appreciate it if you guys would take a look.
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:48 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 11:49 pm
Tarr... I'll put up a link to my other drawing tonight.
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 1:14 pm
No comments on me storry...?
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:02 am
Tis good except where did she get the knife from? Other than that I really like it. ^_^
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 1:10 pm
Mabey I forgot to write it, but it was one of the silverwares by her plate- you know, knife, spoon, fork...
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:20 pm
Ahh, ok. =P I might have missed that - the first time I read anything I tend to skim read it. >< Blame English lessons!
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