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 Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:16 pm
((I think the order is duckie, me, sauron, kaarrii. And then anyone else who wanted to go. Right? I just find that going out of turn makes things more difficult.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:18 pm
Izzy and Logan were almost at their house, like three meters from the yard, when Logans phone started to ring. He took out his phone and looked at it like it was crazy. Izzy peered over his shoulder, looking at the ringer I.D. It was thier house number. Logan ignored it and went inside, Izzy following behind, confused. They opened the door, seeing their parents injured on the ground, and a stranger at the phone. "Izzy, run" Logan said under his breath. Izzy didn't want to leave him, but she knew from the tone in his voise that he meant it. It was the do what I say or die, sounding voice. She looked one more time at her brother, a worried look plastered on her face. "I said run Izzy." Logan said again. With that she ran toward the center of town. She wasn't paying attention, and she slipped on a wet patch on the ground by the bar. She pushed herself up so that she was sitting, and stayed there panting while tears scared tears starting to streak her face.
((wow, that fun to write! xd ))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:18 pm
((Okay I g2g now, bye all!))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:25 pm
The words to activate his power probed him undauntedly. He didn't care that there was another defender here, no, the only thing he saw was a demon who wanted to come between him and the creatures he had been charged to destroy. "What are you doing?" He asked the hooded figure. He watched as the Purifier began to retreat, and his anger boiled over like lava from the mouth of a volcano. He didn't want to hear the answer, but he did want to fight.
"Orme!" He cried within himself, and spontaniously his body felt invigorated. Speed washed over him and his body began to tingle from head to to. Ninder pivoted on the foot that had been nearly dug into the earth and sprang forward. His peripheral vision becoming nothing but a blur as he sped forward at breakneck seed, he seemed to be floating inches above the ground as he ran.
His katana was drawn to his right, both arms at his side but tilted backwards from the inertia that pressed against him as he ran. he could see the cloaked defender pass by him on his right as he advanced on the retreating Purifier. He had drawn his blade upward, a killing stance as he came to a dead stop ahead of the Purifier, but to his surprise there was someone else there, an innocent it seemed, and it took all of his strength to keep from swinging. Instead he tried to grab the human by the clothes but missed, she was just out of reach.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:31 pm
[[OOC: Let me get this straight...am I still there, and out of nowhere there's also a human there? Or what? Just asking for clarification (It's really hot in my town, I think my brain has melted sweatdrop )]]
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:33 pm
Ryn watched as the elf ran off, before glancing at a girl who had come up, and had asked a question. He calmly answered, using a single word,"Purifier."
He glanced at her again, before following the elf, deciding that the time was now, to begin protecting this town. His sword was still sheathed, but his clawed fingers would be more than enough for the seemingly human, Purifier.
Ryn skidded to a stop next to the Elf, his wings held wide, ready to block an attack at any second. He glanced down, spotting a girl lying on the ground next to the Elf and said,"Leave the Purifier... If she flees then she will not kill anyone here for awhile, afraid of retribution from us."
((OOC: She was there... its Izzy I do believe.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:33 pm
((I read her post worng, I thought she was standing in front of you, let me edit.
Nevermind, Im not going to edit it. It plays into what sauron had said about too many humans being about so don't fight because we could injure them. So it's just a random human from the town.
But originally it was supposed to be Kaarii god im confused.
Omg ive edited this like 8 times ok.
Originally it was supposed to be Kaarii's character. But then I reread her post and she said she was already at me and sauron, so it is a random girl from the town, cuz if it is left as Karii's character the rp as to stop until she comes back))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:41 pm
((ok, now I'm confused. who's character is where? I know my character fell in the street in front of the bar, but I is confuzed as to where the rest of the characters are.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:45 pm
((My character is standing in front of duckies. Saurons is standing next to me. Kaarii's is back near the bar. Me duckie and sauroon aren't by the bar anymore we are down the street. And it's your turn by the way since Karrii isnt on anymore. heart
So it goes duckie, me, sauron, you
Hmm, someone in my house farted.... ))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:51 pm
((It doesn't make sence for me to post!))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:56 pm
((Ok, so don't.
duckie go ahead and post if you are there.))
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:05 pm
Masaru was aware of a sudden movement nearby. She took note of the human and the sword. Her rage rose higher.
"You scorn me for killing these creatures, and yet you were ready to kill me with no warning?" She was getting angrier. "Are you sure you're not the coward here? Never mind, this doesn't matter. Do you still want to battle me with one of your things here? Or are you going to spare it's..." she sneered "innocence from such a sight?"
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:14 pm
"Did I say humans were innocent? No!.." But the damn Purifier was right. He wasn't going to endanger the Mortal simply to kill his prey, but he wasn't going to leave her there for the slaughter either. He snatched her up by the waist of her frock. Nendir was strong, stronger than he looked, and with little no effort he slung the girl over his shoulder. Just before he was about to make haste he saw another girl, just as defenseless looking as the one he carried, and in an instant he was upon her. "Are you just going to sit here and pout? GET THE HELL UP!" He motioned for the girl near the bar to take his hand, they needed to get out of here, but not for his sake. If he had his choice he would of slaughtered the Purifier and then questioned the other defender. His little battle royal had been shot to hell thanks to the interference of the Mortals.
"Lets go, get on your feet, or run the risk of being sliced in half, and possibly devoured." He looked over his shoulder at the Purifier, she would be distracted by the Defender standing in front of her, but Nendir knew it wouldn't be for long. He hated running from a fight, it wasn't his nature, but if he disposed of the female Mortals quick enough (disposed as in took to safety to rid himself of them) then he might make it back in time to finish the fight.
He took off toward the back of the town, not checking to see if the other girl was following behind him. He cared for sur4e, but if she wanted to sit there in front of the bar and twiddle her thumbs all day that was her choice, but the Mortal on his shoulder had none.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:26 pm
Izzy's head shot up at the the man's harsh words. She stared at him, hers held a mixture of frieght and confusion. He took off and and she was on her feet, following after him. Her mind was too mudled to think like a normal person, and to think of all the rumors of murders that had been going on.
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