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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:19 pm
her blood ran cold as the noise got louder and closer. she reached for the light, but in her panic, couldn't find it. the noise was too loud now. deafening everything else. Elyse covered her ears and peered into the inky depths of her apartment. just as she reached a hand out in front of her, there was a knock at the door behind her. She nearly jumped out of her skin. Cold beads of sweat ran down her face as she creaked the door open. her heart beated faster than a hummingbird's as she peered out into the hall. "u reasy to go?" stevie asked. Elyse sighed a sigh of relief. "yeah, i just........." "what's wrong?" he asked with concern etched across his face. "nothing lets go," she said shrugging off the feeling and walking out the door.
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:20 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:35 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:41 pm
oh my god yes please continue
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:50 pm
Elyse picked at the food in front of her. She was enjoying herself but in the back of her mind she could still hear that sound. Stevie noticed how distant she had been acting. "Is something wrong?" he asked. "no, i'm fine. perfectly fine" she said taking a bite out of her broiled fish. where the hell did it come from? what was it? she had to know the answer to these questions. " I think i'm done here," she said removing her napkin and rising to leave. " what's wrong?" Stevie asked as he watched her leave. Elyse made her way to her car and just as she was about to open the door, the hairs on the back of her neck rose and she sensed someone watching her. She slowly turned to see if the culprit was visual. There was no one in the empty parking lot. Once again, she shrugged off the feeling and got into her car. On her back seat a porceline doll lay. Elyse began to hear the noise again so she turned off the radio to listen. it sounded like.........glass and metal. Elyse looked into here rearview mirror and..............
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:53 pm
(seriously...it's quite suspenseful and scary...) Damn.....pretty scary....
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:54 pm
thanx. i just made it up. u still want me to continue? i can stop if it's getting too scary.
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:57 pm
i think I can take it we arnt sleeping tonight
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 8:05 pm
.....and saw nothing. she sighed and put her eyes back on the road. she had to stay focused if she wanted to get home safely, because she already had a few drinks in her. As she climbed the steps to her apartment, elyse stopped to listen again. it was a different noise now. like putting ur ear to a sea shell, yet the wind wasn't blowing. that's when she saw it. A glass doll of a pale complextion and sandy blond hair. Elyse studied the doll and saw that she held a box cutter in her tiny glass hands like a soldier at arms. her sweet smile became disturbed and turned into a frown of pure rage and hatred. Elyse shook her head and blinked several times. when she came to.........it was gone. she chalked it up to the booze and opened her door.
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 8:07 pm
*hide head under pillow*pleasce continue
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 8:18 pm
she flicked on the light switch and let the warmth of the light spread throughout her little flat. She checked over all of her possisions to make sure no one had robbed her. as her eyes grzed the mantel, they stopped on an unidentified object. a stuffed bear sat beside a picture of her and Stevie. Its honey colored eyes were as cute as any other bear, but she couldn't sense the monster that lie dormant behind his eyes. Elyse took the bear off the shelf and placed it outside her door. someone would claim it. Elyse ran a hot bath and sunk neck deep into the alluring suds. she closed her eyes and breathed deeply. Suddenly, a hand pushed her head under water. she struggled to get up but was powerless against her attacker. Just as she bagan to black out, the pressure let up. She gasped for air and wiped the soap from her eyes. there was something very strange going on with her...........or involving her. she stepped out of the tub and dried off in haste. she ran out of the room and reached for the phone. Stev......... the line was dead. her heart began to swell and she could hear her pulse through in her ears. She made a mad dash for the door and ran to the elevator across the hall. As the doors closed, she saw a smile widen of the face of the teddy bear by her door.........
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 3:03 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 3:20 pm
is anyone still listening?
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 4:12 pm
I am and I really want to find out what happens
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 4:37 pm
wow, you're really good at story telling, this story is kinda crepping me out, lol eek xd
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