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AlchemicSound

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:16 pm


so ya want me to do it over the same story
well for now im just going to type the same thing but if you want me to write another
i will do soo

The sky was dark no light filtered in from the heavy rain clouds, Ekairu Idatatski was walking down a long mud path. He wore a long dark shrouded cloak and huge sword hung from his back. He walked quietly and focused on nothing around him, a long howl came from the surrondings. He stopped and lifted his head "i know you're there" he yelled into the darkness. Soon six shrouded ninjas jumped from the trees around the path. They pulled out there weapons swords and kunai alike, ekariu pulled off his hood, his hair was long and black and looked a bit greasy passing his eyes they were yellow and had the look that could see stright into you're soul. Ekariu pulled his sword from his back and smiled "lets see want you got" Ekariu said and ran at the group..... and nothing.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:42 pm


ekariu
so ya want me to do it over the same story
well for now im just going to type the same thing but if you want me to write another
i will do soo

The sky was dark and no light filtered in from the heavy rain clouds.Ekairu Idatatski was walking down a long mud path. He wore a long dark shrouded cloak and huge sword hung from his back. He walked quietly and focused on nothing around him. A long howl came from the surrondings. He stopped and lifted his head "i know you're there" he yelled into the darkness. Soon, six shrouded ninjas jumped from the trees around the path. They pulled out there weapons, swords and kunai alike. ekariu pulled off his hood, his hair was long and black and looked a bit greasy passing. His eyes, they were yellow and had the look that could see stright into you're soul. Ekariu pulled his sword from his back and smiled "lets see want you got" Ekariu said and ran at the group..... and nothing.


things i saw wrong are in red XD things misspelled or not capatalized in bold. Try really looking through your posts before pressing send. XD

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:48 pm


gaaaaa man other that that what ya think
ya want me to write another right ?
PostPosted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:33 pm


XD yes please. Just so you know, you just have bad luck, I'm a very strict RP example person >.< most would just warn you and expect you to remember. I don't. I make SURE you know XD

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 12:53 am


ahhhhhhh dont hurt me XD

ok let me think

"I hate you ya know that right" Ekariu said while trying to pull his hair out
"haha you couldn't hate me even if i did this" hikari said and grabbed a pole off the ground and hit him across the head. ekariu went flying back, and blood dripped from his head.
Hikari looked back at him and laughed "you're such and idiot" she said.
Ekariu got up, wipped the blood from his face and said "you are the biggest pain in a sister". He pick up a rock and smiled "hey catch" he said and threw the rock at her head. She moved ot of the way "im telling mom!!" and ran off giggling "MAN!! hey get back here shrimp!!" and ran after her.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:13 am


Here it goes-


RP sample


"Todays the day," Faust said to himself to pass the time as he walked down the lonely road he'd often traveled as a child. Faust was so close to becoming a chuunin he could feel it. Despite the angry weather, he remained ambitious as ever and continued to his training site he kept secret. As he walked along the overgrown path, his long, straight, blonde hair blew in the wind and touched his soft features and honed muscles. Faust knew it was imperative to train tonight even though the exams were only two days away. He didn't care though, because the want to acheive greater things burned inside his heart.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:14 pm


ekariu
ahhhhhhh dont hurt me XD

ok let me think

"I hate you ya know that right" Ekariu said while trying to pull his hair out
"haha you couldn't hate me even if i did this" hikari said and grabbed a pole off the ground and hit him across the head. ekariu went flying back, and blood dripped from his head.
Hikari looked back at him and laughed "you're such and idiot" she said.
Ekariu got up, wipped the blood from his face and said "you are the biggest pain in a sister". He pick up a rock and smiled "hey catch" he said and threw the rock at her head. She moved ot of the way "im telling mom!!" and ran off giggling "MAN!! hey get back here shrimp!!" and ran after her.


XD I'm not a big fan on god modding. Only one character at a time please? XD wow...I can really get people to hate me sometimes >.>'
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:16 pm


visceral_nightmare
Here it goes-


RP sample


"Todays the day," Faust said to himself to pass the time as he walked down the lonely road he'd often traveled as a child. Faust was so close to becoming a chuunin he could feel it. Despite the angry weather, he remained ambitious as ever and continued to his training site he kept secret. As he walked along the overgrown path, his long, straight, blonde hair blew in the wind and touched his soft features and honed muscles. Faust knew it was imperative to train tonight even though the exams were only two days away. He didn't care though, because the want to acheive greater things burned inside his heart.


<(^.^)> Nice, Pass.

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visceral_nightmare

PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 5:12 pm


So what now?
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 5:51 pm


Now, you can create your character and apply to an available village^_^

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visceral_nightmare

PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 6:03 pm


sasuke is my boyfriend
Now, you can create your character and apply to an available village^_^

One last question, which do I do first?
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 6:21 pm


um...either one...XD it's best to do the first half of your character's profile,and get things ready. It'll more than likely up the chances of your character being let into the village ^_^ also, make sure you already know which village you want to join first. If you want an academy student character, it's kinda pointless to try and join a village that has 'jounin or above' as their open to's XD After you make sure you know what village you want, make your character and then request to be let in the village by sending your profile and things to the kage of the village. They, should, do a few things like look it over and help you with something and decide if they have room in their village for you ^_^

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 6:23 pm


- - i never knew it would be this hard to pass razz anywayhe it goes AGIAN! i wrote pages on my character and he was from the inuzaka clan
so thats how im going to write it now


a heavy mist hung over the river and seemed like it was never going to let up. Dew had began to develope on the grass around him and small droplets of dew fell from the leaves above him. Ekariu Inuzaka seemed to enjoy this weather but this time he wasnt. He was laying up aginst a tree, and his dog kiaharu slept on his lap and had his ear being scratched. Ekariu looked up and moved his hair from his face "people seem to jump to conclusions with me" he thought, he had a soft look on his face with a bit of melencohly. He looked down at kiaharu, he was sound asleep. He sighed and threw his head aginst the tree trunk and slowly fell asleep.

He woke to find kiaharu pulling on his hair "ow hey let go!!". Ekariu looked around and noticed that the moon hung over now and the mist had let up
"ohh" he said pulled kiaharu off his hair and stood up, kiaharu barked happily, ekariu them put kiaharu in his hood. Kiaharu snuggled in the hood and quickly feel asleep. he sighed agian and said "better get home i hope kiba isnt awake" he said and walked off into the dark forest around

that was long but serouisly was it better
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 6:31 pm


sasuke is my boyfriend
um...either one...XD it's best to do the first half of your character's profile,and get things ready. It'll more than likely up the chances of your character being let into the village ^_^ also, make sure you already know which village you want to join first. If you want an academy student character, it's kinda pointless to try and join a village that has 'jounin or above' as their open to's XD After you make sure you know what village you want, make your character and then request to be let in the village by sending your profile and things to the kage of the village. They, should, do a few things like look it over and help you with something and decide if they have room in their village for you ^_^


Then I'll get to it. Thanx for all the help 3nodding

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 8:28 pm


ekariu
- - i never knew it would be this hard to pass razz anywayhe it goes AGIAN! i wrote pages on my character and he was from the inuzaka clan
so thats how im going to write it now


a heavy mist hung over the river and seemed like it was never going to let up. Dew had began to develope on the grass around him and small droplets of dew fell from the leaves above him. Ekariu Inuzaka seemed to enjoy this weather but this time he wasnt. He was laying up aginst a tree, and his dog kiaharu slept on his lap and had his ear being scratched. Ekariu looked up and moved his hair from his face "people seem to jump to conclusions with me" he thought, he had a soft look on his face with a bit of melencohly. He looked down at kiaharu, he was sound asleep. He sighed and threw his head aginst the tree trunk and slowly fell asleep.

He woke to find kiaharu pulling on his hair "ow hey let go!!". Ekariu looked around and noticed that the moon hung over now and the mist had let up
"ohh" he said pulled kiaharu off his hair and stood up, kiaharu barked happily, ekariu them put kiaharu in his hood. Kiaharu snuggled in the hood and quickly feel asleep. he sighed agian and said "better get home i hope kiba isnt awake" he said and walked off into the dark forest around

that was long but serouisly was it better

XD wow...this is going to be a while...I see wrong punctuations and missing capatalization.
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