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 Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:31 am
yungbeezy u c dis dis blac boy white girl fued make no sense,b***h(no offense) yall need 2 get yall selves rense,bcuz yall avis aint nun nun so y yall even fightin,both off yall niggas get on sum where, cus im tryin 2 define how lame u is, lik 2 boys nd one dik, mi waves mak a** sea sik, nd i hope yo a** kno dis is strictley non personal, but if u keep on fukin ill be da first note ^Your rhyming here quite frankly sucks and you're an obvious mule, if you want to prove otherwise, take these suggestions and put up more effort, otherwise, I might assume that you're not trying to improve and you're only trying to mess up the game for people which in itself is useless as some people try their best regardless. You're only wasting your own time by not putting up more effort. Suggestions, talk less about yourself and focus more on dissing on your opponent. Get a variety of disses, spread them apart, like a new subject every verse, so the effect of your insults spread more deeply. Stay consistant in flow, lenghth and disses, try not to have verses all over the place, make it more neater. Don't talk about what you're going to do to someone, just insult people. Try avoiding guns, sex or homo lines. Be more creative, word play, metaphors, funny arse punchlines. JUST MAKE THE WORDS LEAVE AN IMPACT ON YOUR OPPONENT IN A NEATER FASHION. This is to help you improve. Try not biting (taking someone elses' raps and using it as your own) or feeding (Taking someone elses' verse and using it against them).
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Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:34 pm
On that note by Femm I must agree
But seein as she didnt lay a dis then your stuck with me
Yungbeezy...hmmm, young perhaps but a beezy is definate
Beezy meaning b***h, Im the car your the padestrian
So you best move ^ and get the ******** out the way
Before you make yourself look hella gay
Oh wait it seemes its too late
Its about time you claimed your fate
I feel bad for anybody whos around when you speak, forced listenin
Even to the deff who have to read its so sickinin
Oh look he claimed a color just like a crab a** wanna be
Does he claim crips? Probably
But the real reason he rocks blue is so you can tell he's sad
Probably cried at night after being molestid by his dad
But deep down he knows he liked it
Got used to the abuse and never tried to fight it
Who gives a ******** about personal this is "dis the rapper above you"
Not (put in parenthases how much you didnt mean too)
Femm said her bit now take a little from me
Im not the greats and I could read all your rhymes and beat you with 3
Anybody can rap but few flow fatal
With a spoken word Ill smash yo head through a table
{somone plz diss lagitametly I cant get amped enough to type anything good....}
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 3:10 am
Alexander the Fallen... The name fits with perfection.
As I speak, you fall further into the abyss. You need protection.
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 4:39 am
(okay jaiden ya likkle nappy dread me a tek it easy pon you since u a di likkle youte don hesa xd jk )
ew... i think Jaiden mind is populated with a bad vision
warning his victims of their belated rape so theyll bring the protection
and as if the gay thought wasnt even bad enough
apparently alexander fell to his knees to take a puff
a small d**k, its a bit crazy what jaiden refers to it as:
the black abyss cause no one can see his a**
(lol hmm idk if i meant because hes black or his dicks so small on that 1)
wondering why jaiden replied when he asked for some 1 legit
im monitoring this haven, you been denied find a better spit
(wheres fem when u need her? xd )
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:41 pm
ok, every body against everybdy tryin make dey a** feel sad,but wit you you against yo self u make yo self luk bad, all fkin long words say u tryin way 2 hard,and yo s**t barely ryhme u lik a retard,so u try 2 s**t up wit dat dnt make sense,well,in rtard world makes everythang quence, and da only thng dat go hard wit you is yo u kno wat,shithow bout you jus quit nd strt t f**
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:20 pm
haha how about you shut up because no 1 understands what you say
your like a street bum mumblin about how he need a quarter in change
if you had a quarter of brains you's sit down
but apparently bitches are the new alpha males now
Also what kinda of a name is young beezy?
haha i get you like to kiss men like young weezy f baby
now that i look at it by ur avi i can tell ur a ***** as you read, knowin its true havent touched a kid in awhile
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 3:51 pm
***** you straight up whack
Obviously don't know how to act
Straighten up your lines
I can barely read that
b***h b***h b***h my ******** a**
Ill ******** shank you with a piece of broken glass
Learn to ******** spell
Before my gun claps and sends you to ******** Young Beezy, That's rippin Young Weezy and Young Jeezy
You put shame to their name
I put a bullet to your membrane
And ******** right I'm insane
Your so ******** bad I bet Soulja Boy could outbattle you
Your so ******** bad you don't even have a crew
We all hate you like Hitler hated a Jew.
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:12 pm
were da f** you gat dat s**t ***** wat a fukin grab bag,and while u sukin yo daddy dik wat ***** puff puff pass,cuz oblvliously yo a** high,wat,you at burger king sellin fries,***** please,i kno im probaly,actualy,not da illest,but dealist,im makin mo paper den yo a**,shank me wit a glass please ***** learn how rhyme,and take yo tyme,wat you twelve,blank shiit out of crime,igga please im makin gs in these street,makin babys in these street,so y da f** u go soft,ima fukin bear,***** u just a moss,like ill,u ned 2 chill doe 4 real,cuz i get treated everyday bi niggas who ca rap and i respect dat,but wen yo a** try 2 go hard you get laughed at so da next tyme u c** at me go hard or go home,please,g,take dat dirty s**t and go on
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:54 pm
***** half your rhymes don't even make sense The click-clack of my mossberg will leave your whole body tense I'll leave shells in you AND your brother Your whole family will be running for cover My niggas and I will shoot up your wake And dump the rest of your f*****t-ridden family in a lake ***** you make Chi-Town look lame I'll ******** head over there and snatch up your dame* I know you don't know what that is so check the footnote As soon as you do I'll ******** slit your throat. Your so bad you went and deleted your post When I'm through with you you'll like youve seen a ghost Cuz I'm the best battle rapper from coast to coast. *Dame - 1940's slang for a girl. EDIT:: Hell man let's solve this with a real battle I already made a thread.
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:01 am
both of you are out wack from your own rap distortion
I'm exhausted cuz yall only getting gassed off of spitting carbon portions
Trevor the only rep you get on set, is in xbox live
cuz out here on the streets nobody knows your alive
Say we happened to notice, we'd soon find you living off guys
Gay fags say, "man let's solve this...," cuz he wanna settle like wives
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 10:28 am
b***h stop trying before I smack you up Then I kick you back into the streets like an un-wanted pup I could just be coming up with racist s**t, For example "I saw you at Panda Express handing out a free sample." But nah I ain't racist, Maybe just a lil sexist Ahh ******** it race is involved with this next diss Your color isnt white, We all know it's yellow Calling me gay because your just jealous you could never get a fellow Now go back to being a ******** lesbian whore Because we all dyke bitches is what you explore. I have to say you got alotta wit But step to me again and surely gonna take a hit Go back to that nasty a** country that you fleed Because the only thing your good for is yelling "Derivery" (Delivery)
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:21 pm
hold up b***h, gettin on our ******** nerves,eveybody up in hear,da way u rhym ***** i think u quer,if u frum chi town ill b near,but wen u talk bout mi femm ***** u jus need 2 b slaughterd,thats y im takin u up wit yo offer,a battle,i win u stop da all s**t up diss da rappa ahead of u i lose same,b***h
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:38 pm
This 'rapper's so gay Ru Paul wouldn't talk to him
Keep ******** with me and your future'll seem dim
I'm sorry I talked about your b***h, You obviously don't have one
I had you crying from these rhymes before I even begun
Keep thinking that you big
Then I'll lay you out like a pig.
And I know it seems brief
But this ***** ain't worth a beef.
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 1:21 pm
Okay second racist offense by the same race against mine
I have to ask, "is this dumb a** ******** autistic or blind?"
If I'm ******** right you were brought by a boat and tied
Just like your rhymes your gonna die by slavery of my lines
Listen to this f**, probably mad cuz my names a-RIANA but he couldnt bag <******** drag I couldnt get a fellow? if ur referring to yourself well thats a laugh
Before you talk about beat my a** you might wanna get a gat
this aint no online game of gta when i shoot you, you wont come back
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