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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:27 pm
doing this from my cell so gonna keep it short. Read my prof Zan and you'll understand better about the chain, it extends and the end is in a clip on his gauntlet. The blade was not behind her it was in front. She grabbed it as she ran in, and hold on to it. Most fighters if charging will leave the other hand up as a guard but thats something else. The blade is in front and strikes towards her chest. The chain is able to extend and its later portion is what shot to wrap around her. It doesn't have to disconnect from him because it continues to extend d to the needed length. It starts at her bicep as stated in the post so head to to was more figurative. As for arching or swinging again that can be found in his prof. With his velocity control he does not need to swing a weapon to get speed or whatnot. Its a very possible combo for him. To better get an understanding of the wrap you may have to hold a long rope. Or I can sketch a short image. The chain has more than enough legnth to wrap her. Its her post that is the issue. As for her flailing her arm against it, I stated the chain is tight meaning rigid and solid. It bends where he needs it but as he uses said chain with his abilities it is able to become firm. Hope that last bit makes sense to you.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:31 pm
I would question how he has enough focus to both use his reflect move, perform punches, and micromanage the firmness/ slack of his extended chain with his mind, in such a short amount of time. Splitting his attention and concentration quite broadly.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:37 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:38 pm
The chain goes rigid it was tight. Like a solid pole of sorts no way for her to spin it at all. Also Zan his chain extends from its housing cartridge on his gauntlet which is in my prof. im not saying anything that isnt fair. And there would be no way to backpeddle if she was tank charging and swinging. It is sad Athena, you put yourself in something and cant take the heat but I won't tread down that road to open bickering chances.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:42 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:44 pm
This is probably a good time to make a Help thread for this kind of stuff.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:45 pm
Wait....if it's solid, then it's solid.
If she can't spin it away then you can't wrap it around her.
So....yeah.
There is that.
Alright, as far as I'm seeing it (and one of the other judges), the post is good, if poorly written in a fashion.
The flacid chain tried to wrap around her, she used her grip on it to whip it out of the way so that your mental control on it was limited at best.
Athena's got a bruised arm from the reflection and now the hammer is on the ground behind OutlawD.
If you two care to continue...
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:48 pm
What do you mean by "poorly written"?
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:51 pm
Yay drama to distract from the fact that I now, once again, have noone to fight!
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:52 pm
Glorious Athena What do you mean by "poorly written"? Vin...that post was a b***h and a half for me and the other judge to make sense of. It came off rushed. Your usually the one to bring some really beautiful posts to life. If I didn't know better, I'd say youd posted from a tablet and your heart just wasn't in it.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:54 pm
She cant sweat away what's connected and wrapped to her wrist for 1. Its still connected. Secondly its not going to be weak and limp wrapping cause it would fall to the ground. And her trying that wouldn't be able to break his mental connection at all. He ain't dumb. Finally how in the blue does some charge swing and manage a backpeddle? And even if she did back peddle Bojuka stepped in which would counter act that and shed still be punched in her face and catch the uppercut. Act out the actions as close as possible. Her movements for all this dodging couldnt be pulled off like that. Secondly how can ahe do this chain wrapping and throwing of something she didnt know was coming in the first place? Especially when it comes with such speed as it did. She should have never held it. As it said in my post she ******** up and thats not my fault. By letting her off you're saying her shenanigans are ok.....
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:55 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:00 pm
count_zantara Glorious Athena What do you mean by "poorly written"? Vin...that post was a b***h and a half for me and the other judge to make sense of. It came off rushed. Your usually the one to bring some really beautiful posts to life. If I didn't know better, I'd say youd posted from a tablet and your heart just wasn't in it. Honestly, I'm not trying to make big flourishing posts here. At the same time, I also don't want to pervert them with lots of technical details. I will agree that I didn't put much effort into it, but I also made sure to put enough to make sense of what I did. If I tried to 100% effort all my posts, especially in 25 posts, I'll get tired or lose content to use for other posts. Aka, don't want to blow my load too soon. I'm sticking to the minimal here, so I am prepared for low entertainment and writing scores. No one has drawn out my passion yet.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:02 pm
Slight Judgement Alteration
As it is, the post works except for the Throwing of the Chain.
As it's wrapped around her wrist, it's still there.
But it's flailing around currently.
She's got a grip of it with five feet of chain behind her hand.
As far as I read your profile, your taking hints from Scorpion not Mr. Fantastic.
It can extend out 50 feet but if that head gets caught, any extra extended out just becomes useless. If that wasn't what you wanted, then I am sorry.
It's how we read it.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 6:03 pm
OutlawD One She cant sweat away what's connected and wrapped to her wrist for 1. Its still connected. Secondly its not going to be weak and limp wrapping cause it would fall to the ground. And her trying that wouldn't be able to break his mental connection at all. He ain't dumb. Finally how in the blue does some charge swing and manage a backpeddle? And even if she did back peddle Bojuka stepped in which would counter act that and shed still be punched in her face and catch the uppercut. Act out the actions as close as possible. Her movements for all this dodging couldnt be pulled off like that. Secondly how can ahe do this chain wrapping and throwing of something she didnt know was coming in the first place? Especially when it comes with such speed as it did. She should have never held it. As it said in my post she ******** up and thats not my fault. By letting her off you're saying her shenanigans are ok..... Tip from someone who runs an annual tournament. This is the tournament of champions. The last thing either of us can do is try to question what the other can do. Just go with it and leave the decisions to the guys in charge. Your best strategy in tournaments is to look out for yourself.
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