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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:43 pm
Gah, Konoha is filled to the brim :l We'll have to redistribute again...Other than that, both approved, but I woud like you to link your bloodlines to where they ask you for it.
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 4:48 pm
 Full Name: Cody Kansatsuryoku Nicknames: N/A Age: 14 Birthdate: Nov 17 Gender: Male Ethnicity: White
Nindo: The only worst enemy is someone that has nothing worth fighting for.
Personality: Cody is not the type of person that will talk to anyone. You have to impress him. He stays to him self a lot trying not to make any friends because he thinks that will make him weak and able to be killed
Behavior: Doesn't talk to anyone at all.
Backstory: Cody was born in the sand village, sadly he never go to talk to him mom or dad. He lived on the streets the only friend he had was his brother. One day they were walking around in the desert out of the village. When his brother got attacked. The attackers ran away Cody went up to him to see if he was all right but sadly his brother died in his arms. From then on he never could let anyone into his heart no matter who they were. He lived the rest of his life alone. Finally when he came of age he joined the Academy.
Village: Sand Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning: N/A Clan/Bloodline: Kansatsuryoku Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice:
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths: --> Primary: Great Chakra Control --> Second: High Chakra Reserves --> Tertiary: Intelligence
Weaknesses: --> Primary: Elemental Vulnerability (Water) --> Second: Cunning --> Custom: Regular exercising/relaxation period of the mind is required
Shinobi Skills: • Can learn Ninjutsu in 1 less post than required • Users are able to pick up on various heat and chakra impressions left behind by people, allowing them to track people's heat signatures and detect the presence of sound waves with their eyes. • Capable of absorbing chakra and utilizing it to bend the visible spectrum of light allowing members to see into the various classifications of electromagnetic radiation/waves (infrared/ultraviolet/X-ray) • Members have an acute sense of hearing as well as a keen eyesight because of their clan's natural ability to see/hear electromagnetic waveslengths • Due to their constant training of the mind, members of the Kansatsu have built a sort of immunity against Genjutsu. With their developed insight clan members easier spot the difference between illusion and reality and are able to quickly find the weak spot of the Genjutsu thus breaking out of it before it can even take hold. • Skilled members of this clan will eventually be able to gain the ability to see into the past and future. • 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu. • Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu (At Kage or Sannin : Can learn up to Chuunin level)
Chakra Element(s): Primary --> Wind Secondary --> Fire Third --> Lightning
Chakra Color: Jade
Total Chakra Points: 31
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei: Team Mate: Team Mate:
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Non-Elemental → Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) → Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) → Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) → Kai - Dispell →
Wind - Fuuton
Rank E - (Basic) → → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → →
Fire - Katon
Rank E - (Basic) → → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → →
Genjutsu
Rank E - (Basic) → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → →
Bloodline Abilities → → →
________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities
Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed:
Primary Style: --> Current level of Mastery:N/A
Maneuvers
Abilities
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________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles
# Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Techniques
Maneuvers/u]
Associated Weapon Style:
Maneuvers
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Headband Location | Style | Color: |Forehead Normal Black Flack Jacket Style | Color: |N/A Kunai Holster Location | Color: |Left Leg Black Projectile Holster Location | Color: |Right hip Black Scroll Holster Location | Color: |N/A
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5 Makibishi:10 Kunai: 25 Shuriken: 25 Senbon: 20 Flash Bombs: 5
________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation
Height: 6'7" Weight:100 lbs. Body Build: Normal Eye Color: Black Hair Color: Unknown Family: None Theme song: Elena Siegman - Beauty of Annihilation
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation
S Rank: 0 A Rank: 0 B Rank: 0 C Rank: 0 D Rank: 0
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:50 pm
Hey Death, I see you've got your profile up well then, a few changes to note:
1. Secondary weakness - Its supposed to be one from the list meaning that you take one of the things on the strengths' list to be your secondary weakness. Below is a copy of the full list.
Tertiary Strength: {Pick One} • High Chakra Reserves • Great Chakra Control • Cunning • Intelligence • Durability
2. Your shinobi skills section is missing a few things that come with the ninjutsu class. • 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu. • Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu (At Kage or Sannin : Can learn up to Chuunin level)
3. To help save room on your profile, I would suggest removing your third element until you're close to getting it since I doubt you can jump from genin to jounin anytime soon (It'll probably take awhile so there no real point in keeping it there until your close to unlocking it)
4. 10 Smoke Grenades and Flash bombs are a bit to much equipment to carry along with what other ninja tools he's already carring. I'll be needing you to downsize the numbers a bit to make everything seem more reasonable unless you perfer to have your rpc weighted down by loads of ninja tools.
5. theme song?
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:59 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:03 pm
Alright. I can see that you made the neccessary changes and though the weakness part still confuses me a bit everything else is good. (I think the seconday should be non-cunning since its a weakness. How is being cunning a weakness. Sorry I asked you to make that edit but thinking bout it just makes it seem sorta off...) Anyways, APPROVED!
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 12:47 pm
Full Name: Jipin Irezumi Nicknames: Jip, Tattoo Age: 17 Birthdate: 7/13 Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Nindo: "You ask if I am nuts...well no...I'M INSANE!"
Personality: Outside of Fighting: Observant, quiet, peaceful Fighting: Masochist, No Mercy, Brutal, Savagery beyond mortal comprehension!
Behavior: Jipin is a follower. He sticks with his companions and follows orders. He is very polite and formal.
Backstory: Jipin used to be very attached to his mother, and always could be found with her. They lived in a middle-class district, and he was raised to be a gentlemen. His father was a Reconnaissance Ninja, and was very good at it. Unbeknown to Jipin, his father had a mental disorder, which drove him to insanity. One late night, Jipin awoke due to strange noises emanating from his parents' bedroom. He cracked the sliding door slightly, just enough for him to see. What he saw caused his mind to be torn in two ever since that night. His father had strangled his mother to death, and Jipin ran away to the authorities. Now, his father is in an asylum, his mother is dead, and Jipin is starting his own life. Jipin does well with a small group of people, but when a crowd is formed, he begins to feel the effects of that horrid night. There are a few people who can calm him down, those he considers near and dear to him.
Village: Konoha Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: Clan/Bloodline: Irezumi Clan Curse Mark:
Weapon of Choice: Longbow
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths: --> Primary: High Chakra Reserves --> Second: Great Chakra Control --> Tertiary: Intelligence
Weaknesses: --> Primary: Fire --> Second: Close Combat --> Custom: Random bipolar attacks
Shinobi Skills: • Can learn Ninjutsu in 2 less post than required • High Defense • -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques
Chakra Element(s): Primary --> Wind Secondary --> Earth Tertiary --> Lightning
Chakra Color: Bright orange
Total Chakra Points: 35 ________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei: Team Mate: Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental → Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) → Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) → Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) → Kai - Dispell →Wind - Fuuton
Rank E - (Basic) → → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → →Earth - Doton
Rank E - (Basic) → → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → →Genjutsu
Rank E - (Basic) → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → → Irezumi Clan → → → ________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed:
Primary Style: --> Current level of Mastery:
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Techniques
Maneuvers/u]
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles) ________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: | Left Arm l Konoha l White l Flack Jacket Style | Color: | Sand l Gray l Kunai Holster Location | Color: | Left Hip l Black l Projectile Holster Location | Color: | Right Hip l Black l Scroll Holster Location | Color: | Lower Back l Black l
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 3 Makibishi: 10 Kunai: 15 Shuriken: 10 Senbon: 5 Flash Bombs: 3 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 6'5 Weight: 185 lbs Body Build: Athletic Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Light Brown Family: Irezumi Clan Theme song: Down with the Sickness - Disturbed ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank: 0 A Rank: 0 B Rank: 0 C Rank: 0 D Rank: 0
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 12:52 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 1:24 pm
_____________│║║█║▌[ P e r s o n a l - D a t a ]F u l l - N a m e : Adein Hoshigaki N i c k n a m e : N/A F a m o u s - S h i n o b i - N a m e : The Black Shark B i r t h - D a t e : May 7th A g e : 15 G e n d e r : Male S e x u a l - O r i e n t a t i o n : Heterosexual [ Straight ] E t h n i c i t y : English O r i g i n a l - E y e - C o l o r : Black H a i r - C o l o r : Salt and Pepper H e i g h t : Six Foot - Two [ 6'2 ] W e i g h t : One Hundread- Ninety Pounds [ 190lbs ] P e r s o n a l i t y : Meet Him and Find out
S h i n o b i - S k i l l : High Endurance,High Chakra, High Damage Resistance C o m m o n - Q u o t e : "...This is your final warning" T h e m e - S o n g : Right Here-Stained F a v o r i t e - F o o d : Anything F a v o r i t e - D r i n k : Water L e a s t - F a v o r i t e - F o o d : Raisins L i k e s : Someone who doesnt ask alot of questions D i s l i k e s : Missing nin H a t e s : Dumb minded people _____________│║║█║▌[ C o m b a t - D a t a ] N i n j a - T y p e : Ninjutsu R a n k : Acadamy Student V i l l a g e : Cloud S h i n o b i - P r o f e s s i o n : Black Ops. Trainee N i n d o : "The Unseen Killer is the Strongest One" B l o o d l i n e : Hoshigaki Clan C h a k r a - C o l o r : Darkgreen With Motted Grey C h a k r a - E l e m e n t : • Suiton [ Water ] B a t t l e - S t r e n g t h : B a t t l e - W e a k n e s s : _____________│║║█║▌[ S t a t i s t i c a l - D a t a ] - C o m p l e t e d - M i s s i o n s -
S Rank -- A Rank -- B Rank -- C Rank -- D Rank --
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[ P r i m a r y ] W e a p o n - C l a s s : Katanna [ P r i m a r y ] N a m e - O f - W e a p o n : Reeshin [ P r i m a r y ] W e a p o n - R a n g e : 1 Meter [ P r i m a r y ] D e s c r i p t i o n : Coming Along [ P r i m a r y ] W e a p o n - L o c a t i o n : Back [ S t y l e] W e a p o n S t y l e : [ P r i m a r y ] A c c e s s o r y : 4 Summoning Scrolls [ P r i m a r y ] A c c e s s o r y - D e s c r i p t i o n : - Scroll One- Has senbon needles and Shurikens Scroll Two- Has kunai with tags Scroll Three- Summons a bigger scroll for an large scale attacks. Scroll Four- Summons his Katana's
S u m m o n i n g - T y p e : B o s s : _____________│║║█║▌[ T e c h n i q u e - D a t a ] xxxxx[ ! ] - N i n j u t s u - [ ! ]xxxxx N i n j u t s u
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• • • • • _____________│║║█║▌[ H i s t o r y - D a t a ] F a m i l y : B a c k g r o u n d - H i s t o r y : Coming Soon. . .Approved By Lyrical(Creator)to use[u][size=24]K[/size][size=18][color=black]irama[/color][/size] [size=24]K[/size][size=18][color=black]onaga[/color][/size][/u] [size=10]Genin | Leaf l Ninjutsu User l Hoshigaki Clan[/size] [imgright]http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e269/staind47201/Cool Pics/4189140036_e8423c9c1b.jpg[/imgright]
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 1:26 pm
It'd be good if you used the Profile Format we have here >.<
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 1:29 pm
Lament_of_the_lonely It'd be good if you used the Profile Format we have here >.< Ah but even if I did that Im just gonna chnage it once I get into my village This one looks so much more...professional Besides I just love making Layouts!
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 1:29 pm
Hey Vanilla, please use the profile format we have here for your profile submission please. Nevermind, it seems Jade has beat me to commenting on it.
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 1:46 pm
...If you can't follow the rules than do not make a prof. I don't mean to sound like a hardass but it makes it easier for us to approve things. You can change the format as long as everything is included AFTER its approved. So do this now, or don't get approved. Please and thank you
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 1:47 pm
Full Name:Aiden Hoshigaki Nicknames: Black Shark Age: 15 Birthdate: May 7th Gender: Male Ethnicity: White
Nindo: "The Unseens killer is the most skilled..."
Personality: Meet me and find out!
Behavior: Im a baddass...Year round...enough said
Backstory: He was born. Grew up in leaf. Joined Ninja Acadamy. Graduated. The end
Village: Leaf Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: Clan/Bloodline: Curse Mark: Weapon of Choice:
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths: --> Primary: Great Controll --> Second: High Intelligence Weaknesses: --> Primary: Raiton --> Second: Skilled Swordsmen --> Custom: Betrayel
Shinobi Skills: • High Chakra • Good Control • Learn Jutsu Faster
Chakra Element(s): Primary --> Suiton Secondary --> Raiton Third --> Doton
Chakra Color: Blue
Total Chakra Points: 40 ________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei: Team Mate: Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental → Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) → Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) → Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) → Kai - Dispell → Element - Japanese Element Name Rank E - (Basic) → → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → → Element - Japanese Element Name Rank E - (Basic) → → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → → Genjutsu Rank E - (Basic) → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → → Bloodline Abilities → → → ________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed:
Primary Style: --> Current level of Mastery:
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles) ________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Techniques
Maneuvers/u]
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles) ________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: N/A Flack Jacket Style | Color: N/A Kunai Holster Location | Color: Left Leg Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right Leg Scroll Holster Location | Color: Chest
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 0 Makibishi: 0 Kunai: 0 Shuriken: 0 Senbon: 0 Flash Bombs: 0 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 6'2 Weight: 190 Body Build: Strong Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Black Family: Hoshigaki's Theme song: Im Blue ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank: 0 A Rank: 0 B Rank: 0 C Rank: 0 D Rank: 0
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 1:56 pm
Now that you've done that, Thanks (:
You still have to wait to see if the Clan is approved, as well as apply for it
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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