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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 2:40 pm
This Rp Sample of Course is going to be of an academy student taking the Genin Exams ~ Kazemaru the aspiring Genin had walked up to the front of the classroom. He was very nervous you could see it in his eyes. He looked over in the teachers direction, as he had heard him speak. The teacher had instructed Kazemaru to first do the handsigns he had named. Kazemaru along with the teacher, muttered the names of the Handsigns as he paused within each one. ~
"Dog, Rat...Dragon...Tiger...Horse, Ox"
~ The Exam Proctor, had not said a thing, this had made Kazemaru a little, nervous. The proctor had then explained to Kazemaru that he would have to use genjutsu to turn into the proctor. Kazemaru cheered up just a little bit more as he easily had done handsigns. "Henge!" He shouted as a shroud of smoke had envelloped him. The smoke cleared and revealed a very accurate copy. Everyone clapped as Kazemaru was handed a certificate, he was to fill out a form to get his headband. A wide smile had come across his face as he walked back to his seat. ~
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 4:56 pm
Here's my Rp example. Does it matter if it's not my character's name? I haven't decided on one yet. XP
As the wind blew through the tree, Enoki woke, and decided it was about time to get back to the village, as he and his partners had just finished their mission. That was why he was sleeping in the tree. However, as he climbed down the tree, he realized that his friends were nowhere to be seen. "How long have I been up here?" he asked himself.
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:02 pm
Zikaru94 Heres an rp sample of an entrance to a battle.
As the sky darkened around the area, the wind began to pick up. Slowly, it began to move towards the center of the arena, creating a small cyclone. Some leaves picked up, moving slowly around the small cyclone. Then, a small spark of fire was created. The fire danced around, as if it we're a dragon. Then, a small figure could be seen appearing inside of the fire cyclone. The figure looked at the foe, and the eyes slowly morphed to a red color. Three small balls formed on the eyes, and they slowly began to spin around. Then, the fire stopped, and Zikaru emerged from the fiery remains of the cyclone. With his face emotionless, and his stare set firmly on the opponents figure, ready to begin the fight. "Its time." Heehee, nice! Pass!
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:20 pm
Icha Icha Takutikusu Well here is my chance. Will I pass?
Drips of water could be heard as the liquid condensed from the mist that seemed to permanently stick to the area. "How could a place like this stay misty?" thought Vegal to himself. Then again it was the Kirigakure the Hidden Mist Village. The weather seemed to stay in a depressing state and the village's past didn't make it any better.
Vegal, a average tan, five foot, genin, with blue eyes and hair, jumps through the trees of the outer forest. "Sheesh, they couldn't pick a better place to make this village besides in the middle of a mist strewn forest?" he mumbles almost to the point where he didn't make a sound. The mist really didn't cause any problem for the boy being that he grew up in the place and navigating the forest during the time he chose was just the give him a challenge.
In truth he really didn't have a set place in his mind of where he was going. He just jumped from tree to tree in hopes of actually landing somewhere that was worth staying at. However as he made his final leg of the trip he was sadly disappointed. He had been out all morning and found nothing. "I so need to explore the other villages," he says jumping to a tree branch and stopping. "Maybe they could provide me with some adequate spots to hang out at," he complains looking down upon bridge that led into the village.
He begins his descent one foot at a time, however due to gravity he was brought down a little faster than he needed to be and fells most of the ways down the tree. Luckily, he landed on a bush that broke his fall allowing for him to live another day. "Stupid gravity," he mumbles getting up and walking to the bridge.
He takes a single step on the bridge and it makes a loud creaking noise. The thing had been their for ages and the boards needed to be replaces. "Lazy people not looking after their village," he complains taking another couple of steps before hearing another creek. He keeps walking finally hits the grass of the village. "This sucks," he says walking down the path and towards his home. O.o Wow...Pass!!!! Definitely a pass! Though, you do need to watch it. You have present tense words mixed with past tense. ^_^
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:30 pm
Gourde This Rp Sample of Course is going to be of an academy student taking the Genin Exams ~ Kazemaru the aspiring Genin had walked up to the front of the classroom. He was very nervous you could see it in his eyes. He looked over in the teachers direction, as he had heard him speak. The teacher had instructed Kazemaru to first do the handsigns he had named. Kazemaru along with the teacher, muttered the names of the Handsigns as he paused within each one. ~
"Dog, Rat...Dragon...Tiger...Horse, Ox"
~ The Exam Proctor, had not said a thing, this had made Kazemaru a little, nervous. The proctor had then explained to Kazemaru that he would have to use genjutsu to turn into the proctor. Kazemaru cheered up just a little bit more as he easily had done handsigns. "Henge!" He shouted as a shroud of smoke had envelloped him. The smoke cleared and revealed a very accurate copy. Everyone clapped as Kazemaru was handed a certificate, he was to fill out a form to get his headband. A wide smile had come across his face as he walked back to his seat. ~ I'm a strict one for using NPC characters or interactions for the examples >.>' But...other than that, you should try to look over your things a bit more. At one point I was lost and I couldn't understand where a though ended and began again.I saw some coma's where they didn't need to be and some where they were missing. Though, they were small mistakes...So...Just watch them and make sure you read over your posts before you press the shiny little submit button ^_^ Pass
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:33 pm
Death Scythe Hell Here's my Rp example. Does it matter if it's not my character's name? I haven't decided on one yet. XP
As the wind blew through the tree, Enoki woke, and decided it was about time to get back to the village, as he and his partners had just finished their mission. That was why he was sleeping in the tree. However, as he climbed down the tree, he realized that his friends were nowhere to be seen. "How long have I been up here?" he asked himself. Yes, you can use whatever name here you'd like. Hm...try to make a longer post? And your TWO sentences were run-on's XD Do it again please? ^_^
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:14 pm
My turn to try and pass =)
Running through the forest, completely unaware of the three others following him, a dense and steady thump, pounding. His heart. His intent to kill was overthrowing his common sense, and thus making him completely vulnerable to an outside attack.
Drawing his hand across his forehead protector Konaro screamed, "I must not let him escape, no. I CAN NOT let him escape!"
Steadily closing the distance gap between him and his enemy, Konaro withdrew three kunai. Aiming them at his enemie's back as precisely as he could, he let them go, or he thought he did. The three following him had surrounded him. Using genjutsu to confuse him, they quickly made their kill.
*beep**beep**beep*
Swiftly sitting up in his bed, in a cold sweat, Konaro realized that it had only been a dream. What a silly dream after all, today would be his first day at the academy!
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:53 am
Demari My turn to try and pass =) Running through the forest, completely unaware of the three others following him, a dense and steady thump, pounding. His heart. His intent to kill was overthrowing his common sense, and thus making him completely vulnerable to an outside attack.
Drawing his hand across his forehead protector Konaro screamed, "I must not let him escape, no. I CAN NOT let him escape!"
Steadily closing the distance gap between him and his enemy, Konaro withdrew three kunai. Aiming them at his enemie's back as precisely as he could, he let them go, or he thought he did. The three following him had surrounded him. Using genjutsu to confuse him, they quickly made their kill.
*beep**beep**beep*
Swiftly sitting up in his bed, in a cold sweat, Konaro realized that it had only been a dream. What a silly dream after all, today would be his first day at the academy!
XD nice, entertaining. Well, to me anyway...and I am easily entertained >.>' anyway...try to keep from using the * in RPs when your character does something, using it in this way though I see no problem. Pass!!! ^_^
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 5:07 pm
Will I pass? We shall hope the horrid OCD doesn't strike...
RP Starts.... Now.
Alixeda looked to the dark green trees around him. He never understood why the trees grew so large in Konoha... He smiled to himself and turned to face the slap of concrete behind him.
"Amazing... Absolutely amazing... It's a shame these people don't know how truly privileged they are." He murmured before opening the door to the stair well. His concentration turned to guiding his clumsy feet down the frozen stone stairs. He turned the corner of the stairs and encountered a large mirror. He didn't understand why such a beautiful object was standing here alone, but he tried to push past it. The mirror struck out and him and pushed him town, forcing his eyes to avert to the reflective surface.
In the mirror, Alixeda's eyes focused on him, on his past. The gashes, the bruises, the shattered bones... the pains of his memory washed back over him. The stress was unsurmountable, he collapsed to the ground without a seconds delay.
Alixeda awoke in a large cage. He was strapped to a soft surface, and yet it was almost familiar. Then he suddenly realized exactly what it was...
"I should really stop sleeping with so many blankets at night..." He leaned forward and looked around cautiously, his instincts never allowing him a moment of reprise. He quickly noticed the clock next to him and his eyes widened.
"WHAAAAAAT?! If I don't hurry I'll never make it to the academy!" His small amount of ninja training allowed him to guide his body from the bed and onto the floor. He quickly threw his Grey pajama's to the floor and threw on his ninja outfit He sped towards the door and froze. He gazed at his picture on the wall. His eyes glowed green, in their unnatural beauty. His unkempt, reddish-brown hair fell around his face and his bruised eye shed a small drop of blood from the healing cut above his eye. He smiled and noticed the once deep gash had now reduced to a semi-normal looking slash. He nodded and ran out the door, allowing his thoughts to dawdle on his absurd dream.
"At least the villagers won't attack me today..."
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 11:12 pm
The-True-Angel-of-Death Will I pass? We shall hope the horrid OCD doesn't strike...
RP Starts.... Now.
Alixeda looked to the dark green trees around him. He never understood why the trees grew so large in Konoha... He smiled to himself and turned to face the slap of concrete behind him.
"Amazing... Absolutely amazing... It's a shame these people don't know how truly privileged they are." He murmured before opening the door to the stair well. His concentration turned to guiding his clumsy feet down the frozen stone stairs. He turned the corner of the stairs and encountered a large mirror. He didn't understand why such a beautiful object was standing here alone, but he tried to push past it. The mirror struck out and him and pushed him town, forcing his eyes to avert to the reflective surface.
In the mirror, Alixeda's eyes focused on him, on his past. The gashes, the bruises, the shattered bones... the pains of his memory washed back over him. The stress was unsurmountable, he collapsed to the ground without a seconds delay.
Alixeda awoke in a large cage. He was strapped to a soft surface, and yet it was almost familiar. Then he suddenly realized exactly what it was...
"I should really stop sleeping with so many blankets at night..." He leaned forward and looked around cautiously, his instincts never allowing him a moment of reprise. He quickly noticed the clock next to him and his eyes widened.
"WHAAAAAAT?! If I don't hurry I'll never make it to the academy!" His small amount of ninja training allowed him to guide his body from the bed and onto the floor. He quickly threw his Grey pajama's to the floor and threw on his ninja outfit He sped towards the door and froze. He gazed at his picture on the wall. His eyes glowed green, in their unnatural beauty. His unkempt, reddish-brown hair fell around his face and his bruised eye shed a small drop of blood from the healing cut above his eye. He smiled and noticed the once deep gash had now reduced to a semi-normal looking slash. He nodded and ran out the door, allowing his thoughts to dawdle on his absurd dream.
"At least the villagers won't attack me today..." Pass! very well done ^_^
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:21 am
the sky was dark no light filtered in from the heavy rain clouds, ekairu idatatski was walking down a mud path a he wore a long dark shrouded cloak, he walked quietly and focused on nothing, rain dripped from the trees around, he stopped and lifted his head "you can come out now" he yelled into the darkness. soon six others came from the trees around they pulled out there weapons swords and kunai alike. ekariu pulled a sword from his back "lets see want you got" ekariu said and ran at the group..... and nothing
rofl im not telling you the ending yes im evil like that bwahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:23 am
ekariu the sky was dark no light filtered in from the heavy rain clouds, ekairu idatatski was walking down a mud path a he wore a long dark shrouded cloak, he walked quietly and focused on nothing, rain dripped from the trees around, he stopped and lifted his head "you can come out now" he yelled into the darkness. soon six others came from the trees around they pulled out there weapons swords and kunai alike. ekariu pulled a sword from his back "lets see want you got" ekariu said and ran at the group..... and nothing rofl im not telling you the ending yes im evil like that bwahahahahahahahahahahahaha You need to capatalize and punctuate before I can even read through the whole thing XD I can't tell when one thought ends and another begins...
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:33 am
sasuke is my boyfriend Death Scythe Hell Here's my Rp example. Does it matter if it's not my character's name? I haven't decided on one yet. XP
As the wind blew through the tree, Enoki woke, and decided it was about time to get back to the village, as he and his partners had just finished their mission. That was why he was sleeping in the tree. However, as he climbed down the tree, he realized that his friends were nowhere to be seen. "How long have I been up here?" he asked himself. Yes, you can use whatever name here you'd like. Hm...try to make a longer post? And your TWO sentences were run-on's XD Do it again please? ^_^ Ok then...
As Enoki ran to the waterfall, he was in deep thought of what had become of his friends. If they were somewhere, it was most likely by the waterfall. It's roar drowned out almost everything else.
As he got closer to it, he could barely hear himself think. Before he could react, however, three shuriken flew by his face, and his slow reaction had caused him to only dodge one. One of them had made a small slit on his cheek, and the other one severed a few strands of hair.
"Show yourself!" he roared.
Better?
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:39 am
Death Scythe Hell sasuke is my boyfriend Death Scythe Hell Here's my Rp example. Does it matter if it's not my character's name? I haven't decided on one yet. XP
As the wind blew through the tree, Enoki woke, and decided it was about time to get back to the village, as he and his partners had just finished their mission. That was why he was sleeping in the tree. However, as he climbed down the tree, he realized that his friends were nowhere to be seen. "How long have I been up here?" he asked himself. Yes, you can use whatever name here you'd like. Hm...try to make a longer post? And your TWO sentences were run-on's XD Do it again please? ^_^ Ok then...
As Enoki ran to the waterfall, he was in deep thought of what had become of his friends. If they were somewhere, it was most likely by the waterfall. It's roar drowned out almost everything else.
As he got closer to it, he could barely hear himself think. Before he could react, however, three shuriken flew by his face, and his slow reaction had caused him to only dodge one. One of them had made a small slit on his cheek, and the other one severed a few strands of hair.
"Show yourself!" he roared.
Better? 4laugh Yessness~ Pass. Keep in mind that you need to post 4 or more lines all the time okay? ^_^
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:07 pm
sasuke is my boyfriend Death Scythe Hell sasuke is my boyfriend Death Scythe Hell Here's my Rp example. Does it matter if it's not my character's name? I haven't decided on one yet. XP
As the wind blew through the tree, Enoki woke, and decided it was about time to get back to the village, as he and his partners had just finished their mission. That was why he was sleeping in the tree. However, as he climbed down the tree, he realized that his friends were nowhere to be seen. "How long have I been up here?" he asked himself. Yes, you can use whatever name here you'd like. Hm...try to make a longer post? And your TWO sentences were run-on's XD Do it again please? ^_^ Ok then...
As Enoki ran to the waterfall, he was in deep thought of what had become of his friends. If they were somewhere, it was most likely by the waterfall. It's roar drowned out almost everything else.
As he got closer to it, he could barely hear himself think. Before he could react, however, three shuriken flew by his face, and his slow reaction had caused him to only dodge one. One of them had made a small slit on his cheek, and the other one severed a few strands of hair.
"Show yourself!" he roared.
Better? 4laugh Yessness~ Pass. Keep in mind that you need to post 4 or more lines all the time okay? ^_^Okay.
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