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Shouldn't the clays be technology or weapon? Then just have a jutsu for detonation and animating them (seperate jutsu for each use, spider, bird etc)?
The clay itself is something that has limited quantity for one thing, you'd need to designate how many jutsus a "bag" would allow. Plus simply having the clay and molding it wouldn't really need chakra until you animate or detonate it. OR if the strength is determined when you mold it into a shape you can simply mark each Animation jutsu by strength.

Hinote: Sorry, I forgot about this thread for a bit...
Zen Sand- Okay, seems fair, just need to designate how much you can change. Can you turn the whole Suna desert blue? Can you use it on "neutral" sand to just sand you have/are manipulating?

Filtration Mask- If we ever get the poisons in this guild working this would probably be just a little bit much. Put an absolute limit on how long it can be used at a time so it can't be used indefinitely.

Yea a person would/should at some point run out of clay, which is why in my case I'll be keeping track of it.

@ Hirako: And no, it shouldn't be tech since the clay itself is a jutsu. I'm planning on adding a jutsu in which the user creates the clay by mixing in their chakra with earth, but this way they can only make up to C2 in a battle.

Exactly, the Clay itself isn't the technique, it's what it does.

Anyway, what are your verdicts on this initial batch so I can keep on working with the rest.

Oh, that's in Zane's hands now. I don't have much jurisdiction over bloodlines.

@Akura: Go ahead and make a thread in the debate forum with the clays, quote Zane so he'll see it, and do the work there.

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Name of Jutsu: Zen Sand
Rank of Jutsu: E
Guild-Wide? Yes
Jutsu's Element: Sand
Description: A notable weakness of sand jutsu is that they retain the color of sand. Even a clone does not take on the coloration of it’s creator. Thus, a jutsu was created to counter that weakness. Named for the colored sands used in Zen Gardens, the Zen Sand jutsu changes the color of any sand to whatever the jutsu user wishes, allowing them to better disguise a sand clone, or even make it different colors entirely. The technique is capable of changing the equivalent of one clones worth of sand at a time. (Cannot be used on another person’s sand.)

Name of Jutsu: Filtration Mask
Rank of Jutsu: D
Guild-Wide? Yes
Jutsu's Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu creates a filter around the user of it, which cleans the air they are breathing. This effectively removes any airborne toxins, such as poisons, stink bombs (Or more generic bad smells), and even smoke, to prevent choking, before they can be breathed in. It won’t remove the effect from the air, but it will stop it from effecting the user of this jutsu. After three posts, keeping the technique active requires one chakra point per post, including the post in which it is cancelled. The technique can also be used on others. Only effective against toxins of equal or lower rank to the technique. Higher ranking toxins are not blocked.

Your Rank: Genin

Name of Jutsu: Kaminari Hakushu no Jutsu (Thunder Clap Technique)
Rank of Jutsu: C
Range of Jutsu: (only when applicable) 5-30ft
Guild-Wide? (Available to everyone or personal jutsu) Guild-Wide
Jutsu's Element: (only if it has one) Raiton
Description: The user performs a few handsigns and charges at his opponent(s), lightning forming around his hand and quickly crawling up his arm, up to his elbow. . The jutsu charges as the user runs. Walking does not charge the jutsu. When the user decides to release the jutsu, he releases the chakra-lighting on his arm and a loud (and temporarily deafening, if the opponent isn't used to such loud noises) clap of thunder is heard and all the built-up lighting is released in a cresent-shaped wave. For every foot the user runs, the jutsu can travel one foot farther after its release (If the user does not move or moves less than 5 feet the jutsu travels only five feet from him). The max effect it can travel is 30ft. If the user runs farther than 30ft, the wave will still only travel 30ft. When the crescent wave travels through a ninja or other object, he/it is painfully shocked. Note: Your arm is not a conduit that can continue to hold the electricity. You can hold it for 30 seconds (or one post, if your post doesn't take up 30 seconds) before it disapates all at once.

Name of Jutsu: Doton: Naku Tenshi (Earth Release: Weeping Angel)
Rank of Jutsu: A
Range of Jutsu: N/A
Guild-Wide? yes
Jutsu's Element: Doton (genjutsu)
Description: The jutsu is activated by performing handsigns and then making eye contact with the enemy. The enemy must watch the handsigns as well to be caught in the genjutsu. Immediately the ninja will notice something out of both sides of his periphreal vision. Once he turns around, he'll notice that on all four sides of him, about 15 feet away, are stone angels, their faces covered by their hands, as if crying. Every time the ninja looks away from any of the angels, or even blinks, they get closer. As they are each on a different side there is no way the ninja can see them all at once. Once any one angel gets within five feet, it's posture changes. Its hands now more closely resemble claws, and its face is pure anger, mouth wide open and bearing wicked sharp teeth, with two sets of elongated canines on the top and bottom rows of teeth. After all four gotten within 5 feet, they move (even if they are being watched) and begin to attack the ninja and eat his heart. Attacks to the angels do no damage; they are seemingly impossible to kill. Once the angels eat the ninja's heart, the genjutsu ends. The main point of this jutsu is extreme psychological damage, as the ninja has seen his heart eaten in front of his own eyes. They feel the pain of all this.

Name of Jutsu: Ka hoshō (Overcompensate)
Rank of Jutsu: E
Guild-Wide? yes
Jutsu's Element: Suiton
Description: The user covers either a weapon (in hand) or a limb in a thin layer of chakra. When it (the item/limb) hits a body of water (any size), the splash it would normally make is tripled. Mainly used by young boys to show off how manly and strong they are, this can be used as an upgraded Trick of Water to temporarily blind or distract an opponent. does not require hand seals.

Kaminari Hakushu no Jutsu: better? I tried to clean it up a bit, but if it's still unclear, please try to explain what i need to fix.

Doton: Naku Tenshi: sorry, that was poor wording. Before the 5ft-mark, the ninja never sees them move. They only move when he isn't looking-adding to the fear of them, because they keep getting closer and he can't stop them. After they attack him (and kill him) the genjutsu breaks.

Ka hoshō: I know it seems pointless, but it's a D-rank. Most (suiton, at least) are, at that rank. I just thought it seemed kind of fun and might be slightly useful as a distraction in a fight between genin. But, looking back over it, i realize most all D-rank are actually fighting-style jutsu, so can i switch it to E?

Also, no, I'm a ninjutsu specialist, though I've had some interest in making a Kabuto-esque medical RPC. Why do you ask?

Kaminari Hakushu no Jutsu: edited

Doton: Naku Tenshi: edited

So, not that its super important because my only element usable right now is water, but will these be added soon or when blue wolf of mibu logs on and checks the customs forums? and I don't mind at all about the process, I'm glad you're making sure jutsu are as good as they can be. I'm jus happy that you're getting back to me so quickly smile

Well, it can always be turned into a ninjutsu. I just thought, given the boss-ness and general invincibility of the weeping angels, it would be impossible to have them be as powerful as they are in Doctor Who and still be a POTS-usable ninjutsu. I'd love to see that though.