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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:50 am
I like it! Even though you controlled more than one character Kaisude's sentences make up the majority and it's quite a lot which is good XD Pass~
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:10 am
Well they were NPC's and I didn't too much with them.
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 3:51 pm
I have two OCs in this RP example, and i havent picked a village yet ^^;
I tried my best to keep the example as short as i could ^^;;;
RP example
Aiko looked around the large dimmly lit room. It was alot cleaner than
he had expected considering who lived in the mansion-like house.
The walls were a light shade of green, the floors were tiled in white marble,
and the Tabels looked like they were made of some kind of fancy
glass and metal.
He really liked lighter hues of colors like the wall color. His honey colored eyes
shone with a warm happiness to them as he sat at one of the tables, brushing
some of his silver-white hair out of his dark skinned face. This was his second favorite
place to spend his weekend.
He looked over at his friend Suki. Who smiled at him and passed him a newspaper clipping.
Aiko blinked alittle, confused. He took the clipping none the less.
It was about an up coming dance at school and how the village's
Number one Band was going to be there. " Oh the dance.... I comepletely forgot about it. " Aiko
Smiles nervously.
Suki gave him a serious look, like he had forgotten the most important thing since breathing.
" Come on Aiko, you gotta find a date for it and soon, you can't keep shutting yourself out from everybody,"
Suki smiled alittle ," Seriously, not everybody is going to lash out at you for being a foreiner. "
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 5:53 pm
h0gwarts_gh0st070 I have two OCs in this RP example, and i havent picked a village yet ^^; I tried my best to keep the example as short as i could ^^;;; RP example
Aiko looked around the large dimmly lit room. It was alot cleaner than
he had expected considering who lived in the mansion-like house.
The walls were a light shade of green, the floors were tiled in white marble,
and the Tabels looked like they were made of some kind of fancy
glass and metal.
He really liked lighter hues of colors like the wall color. His honey colored eyes
shone with a warm happiness to them as he sat at one of the tables, brushing
some of his silver-white hair out of his dark skinned face. This was his second favorite
place to spend his weekend.
He looked over at his friend Suki. Who smiled at him and passed him a newspaper clipping.
Aiko blinked alittle, confused. He took the clipping none the less.
It was about an up coming dance at school and how the village's
Number one Band was going to be there. " Oh the dance.... I comepletely forgot about it. " Aiko
Smiles nervously.
Suki gave him a serious look, like he had forgotten the most important thing since breathing.
" Come on Aiko, you gotta find a date for it and soon, you can't keep shutting yourself out from everybody,"
Suki smiled alittle ," Seriously, not everybody is going to lash out at you for being a foreiner. "Okay normally you'd only play one character but I think you've got the skills. Pass!Sorry it took so long.
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:52 pm
Yes, I'm a muffin...Arabella stepped lightly over the rooftops in the blackness around her. Her feet glowed purple ever so slightly as she almost fell, holding on at the last second with some charged chakra. She smiled; her turquoise ponytail tickled her ankles and her deep silver eyes sparkled from her happiness. She had finally been able to kill once more. See the blood bloom on her hands; watch it run red beneath her feet once more. She suckled on her finger, hoping for one last drop of the metallic-y nectar that she held so close. She sloshed a bit of fire from hand to hand, forming a ball. She belonged to the Village of the Waterfall, though she didn't exactly abide by the rules. She loved death and destruction and had before been called insane. She didn't mind, to tell the truth. She came to a halt, standing before the place she often vistited. The orphanage she had spent in the years before her skill was discovered. She walked in, grabbing a few young children that looked promissing and bound their mouths, holding them and running to the west, running toward's their new destiny. ...Are you jealous?
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:40 pm
The carries name is Kuroi, Tokui is her pet and they are on the mountains, a lot of ninjas around and she is very much aware of it... enough me babbling... here it is...
A nice cold breeze blew into Kurois face as she took a deep breath. Kuroi looked around her only too see the mountains surrounding her. She rose her head and looked into the sky thinking it's a bit too cold for her standards. She took once again a deep breath, sighting, then her eyes met another ones. Beautiful, big, yellow eyes were watching her with intense as Kuroi spoke: "Tokui...". A big black cat rose ready for any order he might receive. Kuroi continued her sentence on the language no ordinary man would understand but Tokui was absorbing every word.
"What do you see..." Kuroi said to Tokui. As soon as the words were imprinted in his mind he turned around carefully scanning the area that was surrounding them. Although not too happy for being on a mountain Kuroi thought it is a good way too see more of the terrain that is surrounding them. Tokui was still carefully scanning the area and after a while came to Kuroi slowly walking. His steps were soft, it seemed like he was barely even touching the ground. "On the north i could see nothing but the mountains stretching, blocking my view. On the east i could see sand, but it doesn't seem it stretches far. The west is also covered with mountains and on the south i could see water." Tokui told Kuroi still on the strange language they both seem to understand and appreciate. "I see..." Kuroi said with the monotone voice in regular language. She stood there for a while thinking where should they direct them selfs... "Southeast..." she said as she started to run in direction they both agreed to go.
'So... Here we go... I wonder...' Kuroi thought to herself as they were running through the unpredictable terrain not wanting to meet anyone just yet...
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Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:44 pm
Sample From A Bleach Roleplay: Katsu walks into the training grounds. Looking around seeing nobody around, He takes out a hollow bait capsule. After taking a second look around to check if anyone is around, He crushes it. After doing so, He puts his hand on his necklace, that has a cross on it, and takes out a Spiritual Sword. After a few seconds, Hollows started to appear!
Katsu jumped up over one and shot an arrow at it! The arrow fell right between its eyes! Kasu then fell behind one and took a slash at its neck. Both started to denigrates at the same time. Turning around, Three more flying hollows appeared! He jumped up in the air, using a combination of Hirenkyaku. This made his gain altitude faster! He soon reached one and took a slash at it! Then shot a few arrows at the others. One was hit by two arrows while the other dodged them! He then put his arms to his side, and landed on the flying hollow! Took a slash its body making it scream and yell! It then fell to the floor! Katsu was holding on to the wing, and as soon as it crash landed on the ground, Katsu took another slash at its head. It denigrated within seconds.
Katsu fell on his knees sweating. Right when he was about to leave, Another hollow appeared. This hollow seemed to be stronger then the rest, A challenge maybe? Katsu ran towards it and took a slash at it! The slash didn't seem to have done much! The hollow sent its huge arm towards Katsu sending him flying towards a rock. Katsu was bleeding from the top of his head! He ran towards the hollow and took another slash at it! This time, When he took the slash, He sent an arrow on the slash. Hoping this would have done more damage, He ran up the Hollows arm and took another slash at its shoulder. The hollow looked at him and with its left arm swatted at him sending him flying to bolder! He slid on his rear end and started to bleed from his right shoulder. " Eh.. This might be fun..." He said to himself.
Katsu put both hands on his sword and started to charge it with some reiatsu. Rocks and pebbles started to float and disperse as they hover into nothingness! He sends a extremely fast and strong arrow towards the Hollow! The hollow knew this could end its life, So it started to run the opposite direction! Attempting to escape, Katsu used Hirenkyaku to catch up to the arrow! Using the remaining Reiatsu, He slashed at the Hollows legs! It fell to the floor and was it with the arrow! A huge explosion surrounded the training ground!
After the explosion cleared... Katsu laid on the floor, With his shirt ripped, and blood on his face, and arms. He lay there, Resting... Until he is able to recover...
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:10 pm
usiylover2 Yes, I'm a muffin...Arabella stepped lightly over the rooftops in the blackness around her. Her feet glowed purple ever so slightly as she almost fell, holding on at the last second with some charged chakra. She smiled; her turquoise ponytail tickled her ankles and her deep silver eyes sparkled from her happiness. She had finally been able to kill once more. See the blood bloom on her hands; watch it run red beneath her feet once more. She suckled on her finger, hoping for one last drop of the metallic-y nectar that she held so close. She sloshed a bit of fire from hand to hand, forming a ball. She belonged to the Village of the Waterfall, though she didn't exactly abide by the rules. She loved death and destruction and had before been called insane. She didn't mind, to tell the truth. She came to a halt, standing before the place she often vistited. The orphanage she had spent in the years before her skill was discovered. She walked in, grabbing a few young children that looked promissing and bound their mouths, holding them and running to the west, running toward's their new destiny. ...Are you jealous? pass!!! nicely done
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:11 pm
A-A Ragnarok The carries name is Kuroi, Tokui is her pet and they are on the mountains, a lot of ninjas around and she is very much aware of it... enough me babbling... here it is... A nice cold breeze blew into Kurois face as she took a deep breath. Kuroi looked around her only too see the mountains surrounding her. She rose her head and looked into the sky thinking it's a bit too cold for her standards. She took once again a deep breath, sighting, then her eyes met another ones. Beautiful, big, yellow eyes were watching her with intense as Kuroi spoke: "Tokui...". A big black cat rose ready for any order he might receive. Kuroi continued her sentence on the language no ordinary man would understand but Tokui was absorbing every word. "What do you see..." Kuroi said to Tokui. As soon as the words were imprinted in his mind he turned around carefully scanning the area that was surrounding them. Although not too happy for being on a mountain Kuroi thought it is a good way too see more of the terrain that is surrounding them. Tokui was still carefully scanning the area and after a while came to Kuroi slowly walking. His steps were soft, it seemed like he was barely even touching the ground. "On the north i could see nothing but the mountains stretching, blocking my view. On the east i could see sand, but it doesn't seem it stretches far. The west is also covered with mountains and on the south i could see water." Tokui told Kuroi still on the strange language they both seem to understand and appreciate. "I see..." Kuroi said with the monotone voice in regular language. She stood there for a while thinking where should they direct them selfs... "Southeast..." she said as she started to run in direction they both agreed to go. 'So... Here we go... I wonder...' Kuroi thought to herself as they were running through the unpredictable terrain not wanting to meet anyone just yet... PASS
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:12 pm
SnowLordRoggy Sample From A Bleach Roleplay: Katsu walks into the training grounds. Looking around seeing nobody around, He takes out a hollow bait capsule. After taking a second look around to check if anyone is around, He crushes it. After doing so, He puts his hand on his necklace, that has a cross on it, and takes out a Spiritual Sword. After a few seconds, Hollows started to appear!
Katsu jumped up over one and shot an arrow at it! The arrow fell right between its eyes! Kasu then fell behind one and took a slash at its neck. Both started to denigrates at the same time. Turning around, Three more flying hollows appeared! He jumped up in the air, using a combination of Hirenkyaku. This made his gain altitude faster! He soon reached one and took a slash at it! Then shot a few arrows at the others. One was hit by two arrows while the other dodged them! He then put his arms to his side, and landed on the flying hollow! Took a slash its body making it scream and yell! It then fell to the floor! Katsu was holding on to the wing, and as soon as it crash landed on the ground, Katsu took another slash at its head. It denigrated within seconds.
Katsu fell on his knees sweating. Right when he was about to leave, Another hollow appeared. This hollow seemed to be stronger then the rest, A challenge maybe? Katsu ran towards it and took a slash at it! The slash didn't seem to have done much! The hollow sent its huge arm towards Katsu sending him flying towards a rock. Katsu was bleeding from the top of his head! He ran towards the hollow and took another slash at it! This time, When he took the slash, He sent an arrow on the slash. Hoping this would have done more damage, He ran up the Hollows arm and took another slash at its shoulder. The hollow looked at him and with its left arm swatted at him sending him flying to bolder! He slid on his rear end and started to bleed from his right shoulder. " Eh.. This might be fun..." He said to himself.
Katsu put both hands on his sword and started to charge it with some reiatsu. Rocks and pebbles started to float and disperse as they hover into nothingness! He sends a extremely fast and strong arrow towards the Hollow! The hollow knew this could end its life, So it started to run the opposite direction! Attempting to escape, Katsu used Hirenkyaku to catch up to the arrow! Using the remaining Reiatsu, He slashed at the Hollows legs! It fell to the floor and was it with the arrow! A huge explosion surrounded the training ground!
After the explosion cleared... Katsu laid on the floor, With his shirt ripped, and blood on his face, and arms. He lay there, Resting... Until he is able to recover... Try to talk in thrid person like telling a story. I wont pass you maybe someone else will
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 3:35 pm
Karite The Reaper SnowLordRoggy Sample From A Bleach Roleplay: Katsu walks into the training grounds. Looking around seeing nobody around, He takes out a hollow bait capsule. After taking a second look around to check if anyone is around, He crushes it. After doing so, He puts his hand on his necklace, that has a cross on it, and takes out a Spiritual Sword. After a few seconds, Hollows started to appear!
Katsu jumped up over one and shot an arrow at it! The arrow fell right between its eyes! Kasu then fell behind one and took a slash at its neck. Both started to denigrates at the same time. Turning around, Three more flying hollows appeared! He jumped up in the air, using a combination of Hirenkyaku. This made his gain altitude faster! He soon reached one and took a slash at it! Then shot a few arrows at the others. One was hit by two arrows while the other dodged them! He then put his arms to his side, and landed on the flying hollow! Took a slash its body making it scream and yell! It then fell to the floor! Katsu was holding on to the wing, and as soon as it crash landed on the ground, Katsu took another slash at its head. It denigrated within seconds.
Katsu fell on his knees sweating. Right when he was about to leave, Another hollow appeared. This hollow seemed to be stronger then the rest, A challenge maybe? Katsu ran towards it and took a slash at it! The slash didn't seem to have done much! The hollow sent its huge arm towards Katsu sending him flying towards a rock. Katsu was bleeding from the top of his head! He ran towards the hollow and took another slash at it! This time, When he took the slash, He sent an arrow on the slash. Hoping this would have done more damage, He ran up the Hollows arm and took another slash at its shoulder. The hollow looked at him and with its left arm swatted at him sending him flying to bolder! He slid on his rear end and started to bleed from his right shoulder. " Eh.. This might be fun..." He said to himself.
Katsu put both hands on his sword and started to charge it with some reiatsu. Rocks and pebbles started to float and disperse as they hover into nothingness! He sends a extremely fast and strong arrow towards the Hollow! The hollow knew this could end its life, So it started to run the opposite direction! Attempting to escape, Katsu used Hirenkyaku to catch up to the arrow! Using the remaining Reiatsu, He slashed at the Hollows legs! It fell to the floor and was it with the arrow! A huge explosion surrounded the training ground!
After the explosion cleared... Katsu laid on the floor, With his shirt ripped, and blood on his face, and arms. He lay there, Resting... Until he is able to recover... Try to talk in thrid person like telling a story. I wont pass you maybe someone else will This wasn't third person? question
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 5:19 pm
Karite The Reaper usiylover2 Yes, I'm a muffin...Arabella stepped lightly over the rooftops in the blackness around her. Her feet glowed purple ever so slightly as she almost fell, holding on at the last second with some charged chakra. She smiled; her turquoise ponytail tickled her ankles and her deep silver eyes sparkled from her happiness. She had finally been able to kill once more. See the blood bloom on her hands; watch it run red beneath her feet once more. She suckled on her finger, hoping for one last drop of the metallic-y nectar that she held so close. She sloshed a bit of fire from hand to hand, forming a ball. She belonged to the Village of the Waterfall, though she didn't exactly abide by the rules. She loved death and destruction and had before been called insane. She didn't mind, to tell the truth. She came to a halt, standing before the place she often vistited. The orphanage she had spent in the years before her skill was discovered. She walked in, grabbing a few young children that looked promissing and bound their mouths, holding them and running to the west, running toward's their new destiny. ...Are you jealous? pass!!! nicely done Thank you!
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 11:16 pm
SnowLordRoggy Karite The Reaper SnowLordRoggy Sample From A Bleach Roleplay: Katsu walks into the training grounds. Looking around seeing nobody around, He takes out a hollow bait capsule. After taking a second look around to check if anyone is around, He crushes it. After doing so, He puts his hand on his necklace, that has a cross on it, and takes out a Spiritual Sword. After a few seconds, Hollows started to appear!
Katsu jumped up over one and shot an arrow at it! The arrow fell right between its eyes! Kasu then fell behind one and took a slash at its neck. Both started to denigrates at the same time. Turning around, Three more flying hollows appeared! He jumped up in the air, using a combination of Hirenkyaku. This made his gain altitude faster! He soon reached one and took a slash at it! Then shot a few arrows at the others. One was hit by two arrows while the other dodged them! He then put his arms to his side, and landed on the flying hollow! Took a slash its body making it scream and yell! It then fell to the floor! Katsu was holding on to the wing, and as soon as it crash landed on the ground, Katsu took another slash at its head. It denigrated within seconds.
Katsu fell on his knees sweating. Right when he was about to leave, Another hollow appeared. This hollow seemed to be stronger then the rest, A challenge maybe? Katsu ran towards it and took a slash at it! The slash didn't seem to have done much! The hollow sent its huge arm towards Katsu sending him flying towards a rock. Katsu was bleeding from the top of his head! He ran towards the hollow and took another slash at it! This time, When he took the slash, He sent an arrow on the slash. Hoping this would have done more damage, He ran up the Hollows arm and took another slash at its shoulder. The hollow looked at him and with its left arm swatted at him sending him flying to bolder! He slid on his rear end and started to bleed from his right shoulder. " Eh.. This might be fun..." He said to himself.
Katsu put both hands on his sword and started to charge it with some reiatsu. Rocks and pebbles started to float and disperse as they hover into nothingness! He sends a extremely fast and strong arrow towards the Hollow! The hollow knew this could end its life, So it started to run the opposite direction! Attempting to escape, Katsu used Hirenkyaku to catch up to the arrow! Using the remaining Reiatsu, He slashed at the Hollows legs! It fell to the floor and was it with the arrow! A huge explosion surrounded the training ground!
After the explosion cleared... Katsu laid on the floor, With his shirt ripped, and blood on his face, and arms. He lay there, Resting... Until he is able to recover... Try to talk in thrid person like telling a story. I wont pass you maybe someone else will This wasn't third person? question
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 11:01 am
Heres an rp sample of an entrance to a battle.
As the sky darkened around the area, the wind began to pick up. Slowly, it began to move towards the center of the arena, creating a small cyclone. Some leaves picked up, moving slowly around the small cyclone. Then, a small spark of fire was created. The fire danced around, as if it we're a dragon. Then, a small figure could be seen appearing inside of the fire cyclone. The figure looked at the foe, and the eyes slowly morphed to a red color. Three small balls formed on the eyes, and they slowly began to spin around. Then, the fire stopped, and Zikaru emerged from the fiery remains of the cyclone. With his face emotionless, and his stare set firmly on the opponents figure, ready to begin the fight. "Its time."
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 1:13 pm
Well here is my chance. Will I pass?
Drips of water could be heard as the liquid condensed from the mist that seemed to permanently stick to the area. "How could a place like this stay misty?" thought Vegal to himself. Then again it was the Kirigakure the Hidden Mist Village. The weather seemed to stay in a depressing state and the village's past didn't make it any better.
Vegal, a average tan, five foot, genin, with blue eyes and hair, jumps through the trees of the outer forest. "Sheesh, they couldn't pick a better place to make this village besides in the middle of a mist strewn forest?" he mumbles almost to the point where he didn't make a sound. The mist really didn't cause any problem for the boy being that he grew up in the place and navigating the forest during the time he chose was just the give him a challenge.
In truth he really didn't have a set place in his mind of where he was going. He just jumped from tree to tree in hopes of actually landing somewhere that was worth staying at. However as he made his final leg of the trip he was sadly disappointed. He had been out all morning and found nothing. "I so need to explore the other villages," he says jumping to a tree branch and stopping. "Maybe they could provide me with some adequate spots to hang out at," he complains looking down upon bridge that led into the village.
He begins his descent one foot at a time, however due to gravity he was brought down a little faster than he needed to be and fells most of the ways down the tree. Luckily, he landed on a bush that broke his fall allowing for him to live another day. "Stupid gravity," he mumbles getting up and walking to the bridge.
He takes a single step on the bridge and it makes a loud creaking noise. The thing had been their for ages and the boards needed to be replaces. "Lazy people not looking after their village," he complains taking another couple of steps before hearing another creek. He keeps walking finally hits the grass of the village. "This sucks," he says walking down the path and towards his home.
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