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Kai_Chi
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:58 am


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Okay, I posted this in PP a few days ago (which was a tad frightening), got some feedback, and tweaked it accordingly. Does anyone have any other suggestions for it? (btw, I know the anatomy is off, but it's so far done that I can't really change it)

http://syde-redrum.deviantart.com/#/d387kx7

Done in Photoshop Elements 7.


I think its pretty darn good so far : D. If I were to comment on ways you could improve your image it would be the fallowing. I would be to watch your fure strokes more. In certain areas like the legs you can still see your original base colour lines under the fure, maybe try filling up thoughs sections with more fure to hide it more would help : )

Aso I'd use a more concentrated brush for the fure strockes. Right now your fure lines aren't really crisp but more defused. Its good to start like that, but now that your comming more to a qulaity finish I would clean up thoughs brush strokes more, and make the lines more crisp and finely defined. : )

I love the details you added through out the fure... it must have taken you a while to draw all thoughs highlights on his body : D !!!! I think you need a larger mass of light that covers his uper body though... Not so much each hair individually but more some light that covers a mass of hair at the top of his body.

: D other than that it looks really great! I love what you've done with it so far, and can't wait to see the update on this : )
PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 12:16 am



Could I get a red line please? without being too harsh ; u ; ;;;

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 7:45 am


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@Delicious: first let me start off by saying how beautiful your sketch is so far : D I really love the face its sooo pretty ^o^ !!!!! There wasn't much on your sketch that needed to be changed actually : ) One of the shoulders was a little to high and you just needed to relaxe it out more, and the elbox of the other hand should be a little less round. When ever we fold our elbows we generaly see more our elbow bone : ). Other than that its a really nice sketch I really like it. I wasen't sure if your character was leaning on something like a pillow or not, but I redrew it as if he was leaning on the floor. If he wasen't supposed to be on the floor then just ignore the other comments I gave about his muscles being tilted more towards the right because of the way the body is laying. Hmmm think that was about it... its really lovely and I really love your choice of posing : D!!!! Can't wait to see it when its done ^^ <3

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@snow: awsome : D !!! I love all the details you put into the cloths!!! he's eyes are so captivating as well ^o^

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 1:59 pm


@Kai_Chi - ahgsd dgkdf thank you ; u ;
That'll be a huge help to me <333
PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 4:38 pm


no prob : D can't wait to see it once its done ^-^

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Snow Mishibari

PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 7:07 pm


thanx 8'D
PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 7:08 pm


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 7:22 pm



Ahhh~ This is my first WIP with Sai..
Looking at it now there are quite a few things I need to redo.. but.. YES. This is my current Project! XD

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 7:36 pm


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next drawing I will finish is Kai chan`s comission O3O

I will open an art shop - 5 hours rally.
I will earn some speed at coloring, MUST to
after 2 years saying "I will practice" and not doing anything >w<

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Koichi

PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 8:32 pm


Kai_Chi
@ Cuckooz: yey an update : D looking good so far!!! can't wait to see it done

@ koichi: Sooo many details > : its crazy!!!! how long has that pic taken you so far XD


I don't really knovv to be honest haha. Maybe 2-3hours? XD
PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 8:35 pm


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@Kai_Chi - ahgsd dgkdf thank you ; u ;
That'll be a huge help to me <333



just my vievv butI think the red line made the legs too high up. The top leg should fall a bit dovvn more or it vvould make his legs far too thick imo XD

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 9:54 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 2:31 pm


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Very lovely style, you have there.

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Kai_Chi
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 5:22 pm


@ snow : Love how its turning out so far : D

@cherry : How do you like using Sai?

@ D-4: Yey!!! your back : D !!! and your working on my avi ^o^ heart can't wait to see it once its done!!

@koichi : only 2-3 hours nice : D!!! lots of details for what is is. And also yes the red lines are higher, because I started drawing one of his legs on the floor while the other had a foot laying on the ground, which made his legs rise more... but since I erased it, it was a good call to let her know XD I forgot about that ... thanks : )
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