Naruoka
Hmmm... hey, Trinity, how did you get your banner to link? I tried tag and img but not url...
About your sig... it caught my eye. I need to learn how to analyze pictures better, so I decided to comment on it.
Feel free to ignore me. Chances are you aren't the creater of the banner. Either way, let me know what you think if you decide to read my comments.
3nodding I'm not sure how to read it. With the text in all four corners, which corner do I go to first? The hierarchy isn't quite clear. It seems to me to start in the upper left corner, but the text in the rest of the corners are about the same size and opacity, so I'm not sure which corner my eye is to go to first.
Are they supposed to be more in the background? I could go and read the phrases and see what order they make sense in, but that'd actually take time for me to read and piece together the information, instead of my eye just naturally following the text and reading it in order. Also, putting text in all four corners makes the picture stagnant. It brings too much stability to a picture. Is the picture supposed to be exciting, or mysterious? To make things more intresting, try giving the banner an asymetric feel.
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