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 Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:39 pm
I will give you....A Taco! >w< Haha!
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:41 pm
There's no such cat in the metropolis, who holds all the pieces in monopoly,
Haha! >x< I know not to try that again!!
for performing surprising illusions, and creating eccentric confusion.
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:45 pm
O.O
Uhhh. Let it be known that "licked" was supposed to be "flicked"
ROFL!!! xD
Sooorryyy >w< -nervous head scratch-
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:49 pm
There's no such cat in the metropolis, who holds all the pieces in monopoly,
Hahaha!!! Yeah I was like "O////0 Dude! WTF!!!?"
for performing surprising illusions, and creating eccentric confusion.
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:54 pm
Ahhhh >.<
Sorry ): Sometimes I rush when I type and I think I hit keys that I don't even hit. ):
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:21 pm
There's no such cat in the metropolis, who holds all the pieces in monopoly,
Meh, I've read worse mistakes.
for performing surprising illusions, and creating eccentric confusion.
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:29 pm
Haha (:
Do tell. And OMG! That Appeal was amazing >w<
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:49 pm
There's no such cat in the metropolis, who holds all the pieces in monopoly,
Well someone thinking off subject typed precisely and "pricelessly" and then there's the famous "I was in a ruck!" a simple movement of the finger and you can see where this is going.
Usually I write down appeals that I make up when I'm thinking miscellaneously about pokemon, but I couldn't find my list of attacks orders for Jinx. So I just came up with something.
for performing surprising illusions, and creating eccentric confusion.
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:16 pm
I don't get it O.o
And ahhh! That appeal was bad >.< Sorry. ):
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:28 pm
There's no such cat in the metropolis, who holds all the pieces in monopoly,
Look at the next letter down from the "r" key... and I'm not talking about "d" either.
And it wasn't that bad, I'll admit that it could have been better, like my appeal could have used Perish Song in combination with Fake Tears to make it much more emotional.
for performing surprising illusions, and creating eccentric confusion.
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:34 pm
Ohhhhh...the "F" Word hehe >w<
And wow...I hadn't even thought about that for your appeal. O.O How could mine be improved? Maybe with a type of move that would give the area scenery...like a Shock Wave or water Pulse. Or even a type of music?
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:49 pm
There's no such cat in the metropolis, who holds all the pieces in monopoly,
Well... Heal Bell is obviously used as a high pitched chime, as most bells are (unless we're talking about the big obnoxious church bells). Well if you changed that up to Sing you ad a flavor to it. Or you could produce both for a two sided door (lame metaphor) that is both strong and quirky (much like a Delcatty's personality). If you're going for ballroom type setting use bright line seals (yellow and white mainly)... Keep Double Team, but don't loose track of the individual pokemon. If you spread the attention out too much you'll lose the "Crowd's" attention in the large area. So keep the double teaming to a fairly small amount but never give a specific number. numbers are boring to read in an appeal... Hmmm... Maybe you could add some color by changing Feint Attack to.. I don't know... Something with a "colorful" typing. And since Black isn't truly even a color (it's a shade), avoid it... I understand it the pokemon's colors that matter but it also depends on the reader's imagination and how far they're willing to go to make something believable.
for performing surprising illusions, and creating eccentric confusion.
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:01 am
Wow....I wouldn't have came u with even half of this stuff. Thanks Arreku. I will take note of all this and make sure to use your advice in my Contest Appeals. I should really start trying to be more insightful. Thanks Arreku (:
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:34 am
There's no such cat in the metropolis, who holds all the pieces in monopoly,
Eh, it's really no problem. Once again, this is what I think about when I'm bored... And I'm bored very often.
for performing surprising illusions, and creating eccentric confusion.
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:54 am
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