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 Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:13 pm
Seth_Tyron .:RP Sample:. Seth woke up from bed and looked out the window. "What a beautiful day." Seth thought and he went out to the kitchen to see his older brother Leo making breakfast. "I've got breakfast for you" Leo said as he gave Seth his plate. "You going on another ninja mission Leo?" Seth said with Leo nodding. "Alright I'll see you tonight." Seth said as Leo put his head band on and left the house. Seth quickly ate his breakfast and went out to the back yard to practice his taijutsu. He would practice the basic taijutsu techniques and the try his own made up techniques. It was hard for Seth to fight with both his left and right because since he was little his left arm was made of metal and was bonded to it by chakra. It was hard still after the years to control his arm. Later Seth just waited for his brother to come home and he came home at midnight. "Leo how was the mission?" Seth said. "It was a success." Leo said hugging Seth from not seeing him all day. [Honestly this is just a backround of a normal day for my character Seth.]
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 5:16 pm
((I've asked permission to join Kumogakure, but I haven't gotten word yet, so at the moment, no village. Not a kekkai genkai clan either. Her name's Kantana Amaya[last name first]))
Amaya tossed and turned on the floor, beads of sweat dripping down her face and falling onto her wooden floor. She awoke with a start, sitting straight up, her dark blue hair sticking to her skin. Gasping for breath, Amaya slowly registered her surroundings, and sensed no dangers nearby. She rose from the sheets she'd tossed away in her sleep, and went to wash up, since it was near time to rise and greet the day anyways. Her red eyes fogged with sleep, she walked down the hallway, only to realize she was walking the wrong way, when she hit the wall at the other end.
((So, there's my graduation sample role play.))
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 5:21 pm
KantanaAmaya ((I've asked permission to join Kumogakure, but I haven't gotten word yet, so at the moment, no village. Not a kekkai genkai clan either. Her name's Kantana Amaya[last name first])) Amaya tossed and turned on the floor, beads of sweat dripping down her face and falling onto her wooden floor. She awoke with a start, sitting straight up, her dark blue hair sticking to her skin. Gasping for breath, Amaya slowly registered her surroundings, and sensed no dangers nearby. She rose from the sheets she'd tossed away in her sleep, and went to wash up, since it was near time to rise and greet the day anyways. Her red eyes fogged with sleep, she walked down the hallway, only to realize she was walking the wrong way, when she hit the wall at the other end.((So, there's my graduation sample role play.)) Good enough, Pass!
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 5:50 pm
RP Sample
[I try again]
Seth woke up in the middle of the night hearing the howl of a wolf. He got dressed and went outside to see if there was a wolf near but there wasn't. Seth walked around a little bit to think. "These times have been tough. I mean the training I have to do at the academy and my own goal to try to be as good a ninja as my dad." Seth thought as he walked back to his home and heard another wolf howl to the moon and felt a cold gust of wind blow through his hair and blow the dark green leaves off the trees. Seth took a breath and looked up at the moon to which the wolves howled to. "I guess the wolves are happy." Seth said while smiling. He felt his cold metal arm and thought he should go back to bed in his warm bed. Seth ran back home and quietly closed the door behind him and went to his bed to get some sleep. He pulled the covers over him and closed his eyes.
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 6:25 pm
Two rival clans, the Matsuro and the Kouu, are fighting over the Ojiin territory, a rich land with abundant resources, after a severe winter had ravaged the two clans’ own homelands, resulting in severe famine.
However, Ojiin holds only the capability to support one clan, thus resulting in a fierce war between the Matsuro and the Kouu clan. Both clans sent out an expedition team of their own, consisting of twelve members from their clans – their objective being to journey to Ojiin, observe the land, and sabotage the other expedition team, before either clan could decide Ojiin was safe to invade and claim as their own.
Mia cast a cautious glance at Freedert. The raven-haired girl was usually so talkative, but today...today, she seemed so withdrawn. Freedert’s white eagle Kayaku perched deathly still on the younger girl’s shoulder, the afternoon light casting strange shadows over his snowy feathers. “Freedert...” She whispered. The other girl's hands trembled, tightly gripping the clan leader’s letter.
There was no doubt. The leader of the Kouu clan had convicted her sister of betraying information to the rival Matsuro clan and would execute Nyame. Freedert...she was torn. Was that girl regretting joining the Kouu clan’s quest to recover Ojiin, and now the very reason she was on the expedition squad endangers her sister? A bitter smile from Freedert interrupted Mia’s trail of thoughts.
“Mia. I’m going back. To free Nyame. Wasn’t I...wasn’t I a fool...? For thinking the Kouu finally accepted us...” Mia knew what Freedert was referring to – her original clan and family were nomads. Traveling nomads whom had raided Kouu towns every year for food and supplies. But Mia slowly shook her head before reaching out to hold Freedert’s hands, gripping the younger girl’s hands tightly, murmuring softly. “No, not all of the clan. We have.” The former mercenary shinobi motioned in Satsu, Amuu, and the other gathered Kouu expedition members’ directions. Their smiles...it was heartbreaking. Pity? Sympathy? Or a bit of both?
“You are a precious comrade. We’ll never abandon you.” Mia vowed.
Note: This was from an actual roleplay. Mia is my character, Freedert belongs to another. This came after Freedert's post.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:03 am
((OK, if you go on my profile, you'll see all my RP characters. The one I'm using right now is Kawasaki Ina.[last name first] Blood-line Limit:
Koodori FushigiRP example:Ina walked down the hall, brushing her fingers on the beautiful jade wall. It was a beautiful day outside, the garden outside was a nostalgic sight. 'Makes me want to go back to...', her thought were quickly disturbed when a kunai zoomed in front of her porcelain like face, cutting her cheek. "Gah!" Ina screamed. "That scared the crap out of me!" Ina said in a whisper, placing her hand on her cheek, wiping the crimson colored blood away.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:26 am
xxXxxINAxxXxx try to use a bit more description in your post. Saying everything is beautiful doesn't really cut it. And maybe make the posts a little longer. Your about at the minimal requirement for a regular post. Hmmm i'd like you to try again although you might be ok. It's up to you.
NamikazeNaruto, you have a few run on sentences but other than that, i don't see any problems. Pass.
Seth_Tyron, good job. I don't see anything wrong. Keep it up. Pass.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:53 am
Starting all over!
RP Example:
Ina woke up, feeling the soft fabric of the blankets. She felt her blood run cold as it rushed through her body. Ina shivered, with a mix of pain and confusion plastered on her face. Her long, white hair covered her face. Questions filled her head as her world became a blur. "My head hurts... So much..." she said with a wince. She heard a knock on the door,"Who is it?" Ina said with a strained voice. "It's me! Mike!", she rushed to the door,"Get out of here!" she screamed. "Ouch." Mike winced. "Fine! See you in the morning!" Mike said with a smirk. As Ina heard his footsteps fade, she released the breath that she held for so long. "Finally, some peace and quiet...." Ina said with a mental sigh or relief.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:14 am
Another Rp smaple, not for thoughs weak at heart.:
Jasq sprinted forwards keeping his body low, he didn't know who was fallowing him, or why they would shoot at him. The rebound of a bullet could be heard throught the complex as a plum of dust jutted out of the wall in front of his face. "Where the hell are they?" he asked him, although out loud... maybe not the best choice under such cercumstances. His question was meet with the sound of another gun shoot. A spray of red mist was fallowed by a thud as his arm fell to the floor. It seemed whatever they where using it was big. He grasped at the stump of where his arm used to be falling to th ground and covulsing in pain. His cloths where now stained with blood, his hand slick, and hair matted. he tried to stand up but slicked on the blood slicked tile. As he fell the sound of thousands of guns could be heard echoing through the barrens of Jasqs mind. So this is how it ended? The great Jasq of all trates out smarted by the police of this... this village? He could feel each bullet enter his body, he could feel the hot lead peirce the skin and sick just far enough into the skin not to kill him. He could feel the cold tip of primitive arrows join the hot lead of modern guns.... It was over, there was not ecape from such a thing as this... He was screwed. His body slumped forawrds, however here is where I must stop. Just as with Tarnis I must leave you without a picture, for the pure image (even imagination) would leave you scared and nassious.
((For some reasons its not as good as I would have hoped...))
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 4:35 pm
((Here is mine!))
"Shoot!" Ichiro exhaled when he saw the Konoha's previous year's top rookie appeared from a distance. He quickly concealed himself behind the trunk of the tree he stood on and pressed his back against it in hopes he would not be found out. Of all the ones for me to run into it would have to be him. Ichiro carefully peered past his shoulder to survey the current threat and assess any possible methods that could have him leave with his life intact. Hm? Is that what I think it is? Something on the Genin's person had caught Ichiro's attention to which he focused intently on. It was a Heaven Scroll! The second half his team needed in order to successfully pass this portion of the Chuunin Exams was in posession of an unbearably talented shinobi. Although running away was a viable, if not the most intelligent, option to undertake, Ichiro knew that he would have to face against this ninja some time sooner or later and now would be a good chance to understand this one's abilities. Before he could concoct the a plan to snatch the needed scroll that exact ninja had already located Ichiro and held him at kunai point.
"Now what did you plan on doing skulking around like a slithering serpent?"
"..." Ichiro gulped hard as his heart beated hard as though it would burst out of his chest. The cold stare from the shinobi exasperated his lungs to near arrest, forcing his head to perspire profusely. He was now cornered with no possible escape.
"Nothing to say for yourself, eh? That's fine. I have never been one for words to begin with anyway. I'll be taking that scroll of your's now if you don't mind."
The shinobi then thrusted the kunai into Ichiro only instead to the trunk behind him. Ichiro had apparently fallen off the branch and was plummeting to the forest floor below using his unorthodox weapon that consisted of attaching two large kunai with chains he wrapped around his forearms. He had used one of them, which he sank into the base trunk, and yanked on it to pull himself out of harm's way. Still holding his chained kunai, Ichiro twirled himself in mid-air, lashed out his other chain into a further tree, and swung himself onto its branch.
Impressed yet annoyed by his antics, the Genin leaped onto the still attached chain and ran lithely towards Ichiro. Realizing he would have to do something fast lest he suffer greatly, Ichiro took a small leap back and hung on his chain like a zip-line, flexed his legs to grab the line with his feet, and pulled on it. The chain line twanged, causing the Genin to lose balance but recovered quickly by using the momentum to bounce off and fly towards Ichiro with kunai. With time to think non-existent, Ichiro impulsely yanked his other chain and pulled it towards with hopes of countering the impeding attack...
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 8:41 pm
( I'm impressed by the activeness of the thread. )
A ragged, little boy could be seen crouching down near small road, picking something from a plant and placing the things in his mouth as fast as he could. It was as if he was an orphan abandoned by some ruined farmer and left to the sometimes bitter gaze of nature.
He sighed, content with the sweet aftertaste of whatever he had eaten now lingering in his mouth and a small thought formed in side him to find somewhere to hide and sleep in. He was tired, longing for the cozy futon of his home even though a strangely mature voice inside him told he would never ever sleep on that futon or never ever be in that home again. A small tear trickled out as the boy realized that the life he once had was gone, destroyed by the mean people. He tried to cry, cry for his mom to com and cradle him while his dad would then make him laugh but no matter how hard he cried, his mom and dad would never come.
Lost in the terrible nightmare that he wanted to run away from, the boy picked himself up and slowly walked down the road, away from the still-burning fires of his village.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:43 pm
[I'll just take that as a compliment! ^^"]
Unknown Akatsuki Member:
Hmm... well.. too much NPC lol. Not really a stand alone RP post. But you seem literate so pass! Lol.
Raeg: Your samples scare me lol. They are quite scarily good. D: Pass~
Seifer: Nice use of NPCs and the length is wow! Super pass!
Enkaeli: Pass.. a very tragic sample.. XD
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:55 pm
kouri-chan_xx [I'll just take that as a compliment! ^^"]
GTG now do rest later~Unknown Akatsuki Member:
Hmm... well.. too much NPC lol. Not really a stand alone RP post. But you seem literate so pass! Lol. Ummmm... Thanks...?
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:12 pm
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:42 am
RP EXAMPLE!
As the cell of three make there way through the forest leaping from tree limb to tree limb, Kaisude looks to his left and then to his right. He was gazing at both of his ANBU teamates, he knew the mission they were on was very dangerous; and if taken lightly they all could die. He had faced many A missions with his team but, they had never faced an S-Class mission before. "Kinikushi." He said only to get the attention of his cell member on his left, she was new to the ANBU and barely passed all the test to become an ANBU. "Hinoku." He said trying to get the attention of his cell member on the right of him. They both looked over at him, though he couldn't see their faces due to the fact he was looking straight and both of them had their mask on. "We have to be extra careful on this mission. Their is no room for mistakes here. Should you get caught the rest of the cell will leave you to fend for yourself. If we all get caught then we will abandon the mission and make our way back to the Hokage." He said and then Hinoku and Kinikushi noded and returned their sites back to what was infront of them. "Hinoku I can count on you not to mess up, but you Kinikushi I....I." He stoped for a bit to catch his breath and then gaining some saliva in his mouth to keep it from getting dry. He spoke clearly and only to Kinikushi, "You are new and this mission requires someone with age. I chose you as my teamate because I saw something in you. I saw that you had a potential and determination. So I am trusting that you will keep your wits about you and do what is necessary." He said and then stoped speaking for the rest of the way there, Kinikushi on the other hand spoke to him responding to what he said. "I will not let you down sir." She said and then they all remained silent havin discussed their strategies and battle plans. Approaching the great stone faces from the rear, the cell readied themselves mentally. Jumping off the stonce faces was the start of their mission, Asassinate the Tyrant of Konoha.
If you want to read the rest pm, I'll leave not knowing what happens.
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