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 Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:22 pm
yeah why? What did you think it was weak against?
Fire is strong against Wind but weak against Water.
Wind is strong against Lightning but weak against Fire.
Lightning is strong against Earth but weak against Wind.
Earth is strong against Water but weak against Lightning.
Water is strong against Fire but weak against Earth.
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:28 pm
SinnerXion yeah why? What did you think it was weak against? Fire is strong against Wind but weak against Water. Wind is strong against Lightning but weak against Fire. Lightning is strong against Earth but weak against Wind. Earth is strong against Water but weak against Lightning. Water is strong against Fire but weak against Earth.
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:30 pm
Well I have to wait a bit before I start Rping seeing as I sent Havik a revised version of the Exploding Clay Kekkei Genkai. I the old one looks real half-assed
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:31 pm
Sure, whenever you're ready though feel free to just rp without using that technique. Alright, that's it for me, I'm heading for bed. night guys.
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Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:32 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:56 pm
zephyer55 (My computer won't let me post pics at the time) Full Name: Zephyer(apllying for Senjuu clan)
Nicknames: Zep
Age: 11
Birthdate: March 15
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White
Nindo: "you can take my life, but don't touch my friends"
Personality: Likes to joke around and mess with people.
Behavior: When he is alone he is quiet. Around others he jokes around, even with his enemies
Backstory: Born with a muscle defect that somewhat healed over time, he gets tire after a while of fighting .He grew up in an average family. Not rich, not poor. He's an average ninja and is known to pull pranks on his friends. He has never stood out, he prefers to blend in so no one will notice him pulling pranks. His grandparents died from cancer when he was 4 years old.
Village: Sand
Rank: Academy Student
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: (If applicable, please supply a link)
Clan/Bloodline: (applying for Senjuu)
Curse Mark: (If applicable, please supply a link)
Weapon of Choice: scalpel
Ninja Class:Medical
Strengths:
--> Primary: Great Chakra Control
--> Second: Intelligence
--> Tertiary: Durability
Weaknesses:
--> Primary: Elemental Vulnerability
--> Second: Stamina
--> Custom: Jokes around too much
Shinobi Skills:
• Learn ninjutsu in 1 less post
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Chakra Element(s):
Primary --> Earth
Secondary --> Water
Third --> Lightning
Chakra Color: Brown
Total Chakra Points:
25 ________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
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→ Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
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Primary Style:
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________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
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Maneuvers/u]
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((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
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Headband Location | Style | Color: Around waist | sand | Black
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 10
Makibishi: 10
Kunai: 30
Shuriken: 20
Senbon: 25
Flash Bombs: 10________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5 ft. 4 in.
Weight: 80lbs
Body Build: skinny
Eye Color: Hazel
Hair Color: Brown
Family: Mom and dad. Grandparents are dead.
Theme song: Iron man by black sabbath
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Posting Format:
Combat:
Chakra: 25/25
Mental Stamina: 25/25
Makibishi:10/10
Kuni: 30/30
Shuriken: 20/20
Senbon: 25/25
Flash: 10/10
Smoke:
I looked but I can't seem to find your application, mind sending me a link?
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:04 pm
Lament_of_the_lonely  Full Name: Saiyuri Mayu
Nicknames: Sai, Saiya
Famous Shinobi Names: Kamiatama {God's Mind}
Age: 16
Birthdate: 2/12
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Japanese
Nindo: "I'll follow you through Hell and back, level the entire shinobi world, or tear down the sky if you only wish it so."
Personality: Intuitive, quiet, calm, peaceful
Behavior: When Saiyuri is alone, she often takes the time to meditate, or seek knowledge. With others, once more she is quiet, only speaks when she deems necessary. Every know and then Saiyuri can crack a joke, and she has one hell of a humor. For someone of a young age, Saiyuri is extremely capable of understanding adults, and their habits. She has always had a knack of picking people apart, more of an observer than a participator. Even in battle, Saiyuri is calm, and always collecting information.
Backstory:
Ever since birth, Saiyuri had been a very bright child. She had learned to read, books and people that is. Saiyuri lived with both of her parents, and an older brother. They kept her in a peaceful world, yet devoid of true love. She never felt a connection with them, and usually sought attention elsewhere. One fateful day, she met [Enter Cody's RPC name here when he makes him] and grew attached to him. While out with him, her family was slaughtered mercilessly by a rampaging Bijuu. Saiyuri has taken a deep seated hate in Bijuu, a grudge never to be wiped away. Now, Saiyuri follows [Enter Cody's RPC name here when he makes him] like a lost puppy. Her motto for him is
"I'll follow you through Hell and back, level the entire shinobi world, or tear down the sky if you only wish it so."
Village: Mist
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning:
Clan/Bloodline: Mayu Clan
Curse Mark:
Weapon of Choice: Spiked knuckle bracers, Stiletto Dagger
Ninja Class: Medic
Strengths:
--> Primary:Chakra Control
--> Second:Intelligence
--> Tertiary:Strength
Weaknesses:
--> Primary:Weak Ninjutsu
--> Second:Lightning
--> Custom:Weak Bodied
Shinobi Skills:
•Able to learn Medical jutsu in two less posts
•Can break out of Genjutsu more easily than others due to enhanced chakra control.
•Can learn Ninjutsu 1 less post than normal
•-1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin techniques, -3 for all Jounin, and -5 for all Kage
Chakra Element(s):
Primary --> Suiton
Chakra Color: Gold
Total Chakra Points: 25
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
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→ Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→ Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→ Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→ Kai - Dispell
→Water - Suiton
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________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
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Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
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Headband Location | Style | Color:
| Neck l Mist l Black l
Flack Jacket Style | Color:
| Konoha l Original l
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
| Thight l Tan l
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
| Thigh l Tan l Color
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
| Hip l Tan l
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 3
Makibishi: 4
Kunai: 4
Shuriken: 5
Senbon: 4
Flash Bombs: 2 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5'2
Weight: 42 kg
Body Build: Slim
Eye Color: Light Blue
Hair Color: Pink
Family:
Mayu Clan
Cody Gaijin
Theme song: Moonlight Sonata
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Well, I've look over everything and it al looks great! You're approved! Oh, and I removed the secondary and tertiary element part for you since there's no point in them even being there.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:06 pm
_Manpish_
Full Name: Faith "Greed" Tsukikage
Nicknames: Greedy-kun
Age: 12
Birthdate: 4/11
Gender: male
Ethnicity: white
Nindo: "when in doubt... blow everything up and get out."
Personality: Faith is mostly a laid back person while not on a mission or taking orders. after getting a mission Faith becomes the ultimate war machine capable of doing anything he is assigned to.
Behavior:
Alone/ when alone he's mainly calm and shy.
With Others/ when with others he is calm, shy, and sometimes talkative when asked questions.
In Combat/ while in combat Faith is like a Anbu. he shows no emotion and kills without any regrets.
Backstory: Faith mainly was seperated from his brothers and sisters at a young age and has been living alone for as long as he could remember. Faith mainly does odd jobs that mostly involve assasination, killing people, blowing up stuff, breaking into buildings, etc. In a way Faith is a mercinary who works for who ever offers him training or the most money. Faith is mainly looking for his siblings and once he finds them he will protect them with his very life and try to make sure that they are happy and safe.
Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: N/A
Clan/Bloodline: Origami no Dara
Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice: Paper!
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths:
--> Primary: High Chakra Reserves
--> Second: Great Chakra Control
--> Tertiary: Intelligence
Weaknesses:
--> Primary: Elemental Vulnerability
--> Second: Durability
--> Custom: His sister
Shinobi Skills:
• Can learn Ninjutsu in 1 less post than required
• 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu.
• Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu
Chakra Element(s):
Primary --> Fuuton ~ Wind
Secondary --> Katon ~ Fire
Third --> Raiton ~ Lightning
Chakra Color: Dark purple
Total Chakra Points:
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei: N/A
Team Mate: N/A
Team Mate: N/A
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→ Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→ Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→ Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→ Kai - Dispell
→ Wind - Fuuton
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→ Paper Shurikens (D)- One of the first paper abilities Konan learned was to make shurikens out of paper. Her ability to control the the properties of paper makes these projectiles extra sharp and swift.
→ Paper Clone (D)- The user make a clone out of paper, the clone has an actual substance and is completely hollow. Can only be destroyed by shredding it to peices or setting it on fire. It can fly and float due to it's paper affinity.
→ Paper Butterflies (C)- By turning her body into millions of paper butterflies, Konan has the ability to conduct surveillence over a wide area, simultaneously observing multiple sectors.
→ Paper Concealment (C)- A special ability that allows Konan to compress her paper body onto any flat surface, making her essentially undetectable.
→ Paper Airplane (C)- A more aerodynamic form that Konan can fold her paper pieces into. It is used when Konan needs to arrive at a location swiftly.
→ Water Resistance (C)- The user makes a thin veil of chakra over their paper creations, allowing them to be used underwater.
→ Paper swarm (B)- This attack swarms the target with a storm of paper that bind the body in tight layers until the target cannot move.
→ Paper Weapons (B)- Konan was first seen making a spear out of a coil of paper, but it is likely that she can make any type of melee weapon using paper.
→ Paper Form (A)- Konan has the ability to transform and separate her body into thousands of pieces of oragami paper. Each one is able to fold itself into whatever form suits the mission. It also appears that she can take critical damage while in the paper form and still reform her body using scraps of paper.
→ Paper Wings (A)- The wings are more for show since Konan already has the ability to fly and hover in her paper form. Konan can perform an attack with the wings by launching the blades of paper in its structure down at opponents below.
→ Paper Dragon (S)- The user turns into a ferocious dragon made of paper. The scales can cut anything that touches it. When flying, a shockwave is sent from it for about 10 feet, rendering un-touchable.
→ Jutsu Name: Paper Teleportation technique
Jutsu Rank: C
Use: Restricted, only members of the Oragami no Dara bloodline can learn this.
Range: one-two miles
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Paper
Description: After forming the needed hand sign the user will suddenly be engulfed in swirl of paper then they will disappear from sight and re-appear wherever they wish within a one-two mile radius as long as they can imagine the location they wish to go to. This jutsu is a rather basic one and can only be used when not in battle (cannot be used in a fight).
→ Jutsu Name: Paper Summoning: Paper Snakes
Jutsu Rank: D-S
Use: Restricted, only members of the Oragami no Dara bloodline can learn this.
Range: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Summoning
Element: Paper/Chakra
Description: After making the required seals the user will be able to summon several different sized snakes to attack their opponent/help them in battle. These snakes have a small chakra system so that they can preform any one paper jutsu that the user knows (large snakes may preform up to three paper jutsu).
The most seen Paper Snake is one that Hana Tsuchikage summons to his aid which looks like the boss snake summon Manda. this snake can use up to four paper jutsu that Hana knows before he disperses in a burst of smoke and paper.
(This Jutsu does not count towards a Summoning jutsu but is instead a regular technique that is unique to the Oragami no Dara bloodline and is only usable by the members of the bloodline.)
________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed: 1
Primary Style:
--> Current level of Mastery:
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
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Headband Location | Style | Color:
| right shoulder | wrap | blue
Flack Jacket Style | Color:
| no sleeve | Black
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
| right thigh | blue
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
| right hip | black
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
| left hip | blue
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 10
Makibishi: 20
Kunai: 10
Shuriken: 20
Senbon: 5
Flash Bombs: 10 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 4'5"
Weight: 105 lbs
Body Build: muscular/ athletic
Eye Color: see pic
Hair Color: see pic
Family: Crystal Tsukikage
Theme song: The End ~ Roadrunners United
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Posting Format: N/A (creating)
Okay Manpish, here's a few points:
1) Bloodline hasn't been approved yet. I'll make a few comments in a bit.
2) You're carrying way to much stuff, those flash/gas bombs are heavy. To carry 20 of them along with all the other stuff you're rpc's already carrying is way too much. How about toning down the numbers a bit?
3) You're starting off with a bit to many bloodline techniques. If fact, I don't think you're suppose to start of with any jutsus at all.
4) You should actually have only one elemental vulnerability and I think it's decided based on your primary element. I'll have to double check on that for you.
5) Also, total number of chakra points should be 35.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:09 pm
White Water Lilly  Full Name: Miiki Nakasa
Nicknames: Sora
Age: 11
Birthdate: May 25
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White
Nindo: "Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon"
Personality: Calm. Collected. Only fights when he needs to.
Behavior: Alone: Talks to himself and practices
With others: Quiet. Funny
In combat: Stays far from the opponent
Out of combat: Mediates and tries to regain chakra
Backstory: Sora was born out of pure luck seeing as both of his parents are over fifty and already had kids who have kids of their own. His mom loved him and treated him well while she was pregnant and didn't do much that could damage him. When his mom was finally in labor with him, she was in labor for 68 hours. When he was finally born he mother was extremely happy and they were a happy family. When he was four-months-old his father died and sent his mother into depression. Now he works as hard as he can to make his mom proud.
Village: Mist
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: none
Clan/Bloodline: none
Curse Mark: none
Weapon of Choice: Ninjutsu
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths:
--> Primary: High Chakra Reserves
--> Second: Great Chakra Control
--> Tertiary: Intelligence
Weaknesses:
--> Primary: Elemental Vulnerability
--> Second: Weak Strength
--> Custom: Harder to Break Genjutsu
Shinobi Skills: (Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
• Can learn Ninjutsu in 1 less post than required
• Can learn Ninjutsu one rank higher
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Chakra Element(s):
Primary --> Suiton
Secondary --> Fuuton
Third --> Raiton
Chakra Color: Light Orange
Total Chakra Points:[/b 30
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei: Unknown
Team Mate: Unknown
Team Mate: Unknown
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→ Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→ Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→ Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→ Kai - Dispell
→Water - Suiton
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Primary Style: None
--> Current level of Mastery:
Maneuvers
Abilities
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Custom Weapon 1: None
Weapon Type: None
Weapon Range: None
Weapon Location: None
Weapon Description: None
Special Properties: None
Techniques None
Maneuvers/u] None
Associated Weapon Style:None
Maneuvers
Techniques________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: Waist | Normal | Lavender
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Kunai Holster Location | Color: Left Hip | White
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: BackPack | White
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5
Makibishi: 1
Kunai: 10
Shuriken: 10
Senbon: 10
Flash Bombs: 3________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight:5' 4''
Weight: 97 lbs
Body Build: Small boned
Eye Color: blue
Hair Color: Orange
Family: Mom
Theme song: Don't Stop Believin' By Journy
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
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1) I believe we're trying to have ppl have their RPCs be a minimium of 12 but I think 11's fine. I'll double check on that for you.
2) Weapon of Choice: I believe that is asking for a physical weapon of choice such as a kunai, katana, etc.
3) Your elemental vulnerablitity is related to your primary element. In this case, your primary element is Suiton thus making you element vulnerablity lightning.
4)Since High Chakra Reserves is your primary strength, you get +5 chakra/10 max chakra points meaning you actually get a 10 extra chakra point bonus. So your total chakra points should be 35.
5) Since you're not apart of any bloodline, you can just kick out the bloodline abilities' section. Or have you considered applying for one of the clans?
6) You're also allowed one Taijutsu/weapon style which can be achieve once you've advanced to chunnin.
Well, I think that's about it, if you have any further questions feel free to post them here or pm them to me. I'll be glad to help.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:35 pm
Wewt! I've been waiting for this character for AGES!!! *Does Happy Dance* Alright, I'll go RP with her now~<3
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:41 pm
kuro-uchi  Full Name:Rei Kaguya
Nicknames:N/A
Age:17
Birthdate:6/27
Gender:Male
Ethnicity:Japanese
Nindo:If you surrender now, I'll visit you in the hospital.
Personality: A sadistic emotionless MOFO that loves fighting
Behavior:
Alone:Bored but calm
With Others: "Painfully" Annoying
In Combat: Calm and Focused
Out of Combat: BORED
Backstory: After the attack on the clan, I made my way through various villages joining fight clubs and making a living. After a while, one of the jonin of a village noticed me, and recruited me into the military.
Village: Leaf
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning:
Clan/Bloodline:Kaguya Location
Weapon of Choice: Bone weaponry, Katana
Ninja Class:Taijutsu
Strengths:
--> Primary: Durability
--> Second: Speed
--> Tertiary: Cunning
Weaknesses:
--> Primary: Low Chakra and Poor Chakra Control
--> Second: Strength
--> Custom: High pitched noises like fingernails on a chalkboard send vibrations through his bones making him practically have seizures
Shinobi Skills:
• Physically stronger than those of the same rank
• Attacks 2 ranks below will have half the effect on you. (E.g. if you are a Jounin, then, Chunin attacks are cut in half, Genin attacks will only put a small scratch on you
• Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu
Chakra Element(s):
Primary --> Katon
Chakra Color: Blue (Natural)
Total Chakra Points: 17
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→ Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→ Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→ Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→ Kai - Dispell
→Fire - Katon
Rank E - (Basic)
→ Katon: Ichi (Fire Release: One)
→ Katon: Shoumeidan no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flare Technique)
→ Katon: Shuriken no Jutsu (Fire Release: Shuriken Technique)
→ Katon: Fukumen no Jutsu (Fire Release: Veil Technique)
→ Katon: Tanebi no Jutsu (Fire Release: Cinder Technique)
→ Katon: Houka Hira no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flaming Palm Technique)
Rank D - (Genin)
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Rank B - (Special Jounin)
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Rank A - (Jounin)
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Rank S - (Sannin/Kage)
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed: 4
Primary Style: The Hidden Mist Sword Fighting Style
--> Current level of Mastery: None
Description: The Hidden Mist Sword Style is the one most commonly used by the shinobi of Kirigakure no Sato. It has been used for a long time, and has a fine tradition, in which the styles basics and moves are taught directly from master to pupil. Used as a focus, it is a pure weapon style, based solely upon the ancient tradition of sword fighting.
Link to Style
Maneuvers None
Abilities None
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Headband Location | Style | Color: not on person
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Kunai Holster Location | Color: N/A
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh | Black
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: N/A
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5
Makibishi: N/A
Kunai: N/A
Shuriken: 10
Senbon: 20
Flash Bombs: N/A________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 6'1
Weight: 180lb
Body Build: mildly muscular
Eye Color: green
Hair Color: black
Family: N/A
Theme song: Get Ready To Die - Andrew W.K.
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Posting Format:
Done. Alright here goes:
1) You actually start off with a total of 25 chakra points not 17
2) Have you actually applied for the taijutsu style and gotten approval for it? If so, can you add in the link please. Same goes for the bloodline approval can you add a link to it please?
3) You don't actually start off knowing any jutsus and techniques so you'll have to remove them.
4) I've removed the two extra chakra slots for you seeing how they don't really even need to be there.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:43 pm
Lament_of_the_lonely Wewt! I've been waiting for this character for AGES!!! *Does Happy Dance* Alright, I'll go RP with her now~<3
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:46 am
Full Name: Faith "Greed" Tsukikage
Nicknames: Greedy-kun
Age: 12
Birthdate: 4/11
Gender: male
Ethnicity: white
Nindo: "when in doubt... blow everything up and get out."
Personality: Faith is mostly a laid back person while not on a mission or taking orders. after getting a mission Faith becomes the ultimate war machine capable of doing anything he is assigned to.
Behavior:
Alone/ when alone he's mainly calm and shy.
With Others/ when with others he is calm, shy, and sometimes talkative when asked questions.
In Combat/ while in combat Faith is like a Anbu. he shows no emotion and kills without any regrets.
Backstory: Faith mainly was separated from his brothers and sisters at a young age and has been living alone for as long as he could remember. Faith mainly does odd jobs that mostly involve assassination, killing people, blowing up stuff, breaking into buildings, etc. In a way Faith is a mercenary who works for who ever offers him training or the most money. Faith is mainly looking for his siblings and once he finds them he will protect them with his very life and try to make sure that they are happy and safe. Faith mainly loved to partake in Assassination missions because he loved to be stealthy and silent.
Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: N/A
Clan/Bloodline: Origami no Dara (pending)
Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice: Paper!
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths:
--> Primary: High Chakra Reserves
--> Second: Great Chakra Control
--> Tertiary: Intelligence
Weaknesses:
--> Primary: Elemental Vulnerability
--> Second: Durability
--> Custom: His sister
Shinobi Skills:
• Can learn Ninjutsu in 1 less post than required
• 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu.
• Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu
Chakra Element(s):
Primary --> Fuuton ~ Wind
Secondary --> Katon ~ Fire
Third --> Raiton ~ Lightning
Chakra Color: Dark purple
Total Chakra Points: 35
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei: N/A
Team Mate: N/A
Team Mate: N/A
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→ Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→ Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→ Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→ Kai - Dispell
→ Wind - Fuuton
Rank E - (Basic)
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Rank C - (Chuunin)
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Bloodline Abilities
→ Jutsu Name: Paper Summoning: Paper Snakes
Jutsu Rank: D-S
Use: Restricted, only members of the Oragami no Dara bloodline can learn this.
Range: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Summoning
Element: Paper/Chakra
Description: After making the required seals the user will be able to summon several different sized snakes to attack their opponent/help them in battle. These snakes have a small chakra system so that they can preform any one paper jutsu that the user knows (large snakes may preform up to three paper jutsu).
The most seen Paper Snake is one that Hana Tsuchikage summons to his aid which looks like the boss snake summon Manda. this snake can use up to four paper jutsu that Hana knows before he disperses in a burst of smoke and paper.
(This Jutsu does not count towards a Summoning jutsu but is instead a regular technique that is unique to the Oragami no Dara bloodline and is only usable by the members of the bloodline.)
________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed: 1
Primary Style:
--> Current level of Mastery:
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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Headband Location | Style | Color:
| right shoulder | wrap | blue
Flack Jacket Style | Color:
| no sleeve | Black
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
| right thigh | blue
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
| right hip | black
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
| left hip | blue
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 4
Makibishi: 2 bags (about 5 per bag)
Kunai: 10
Shuriken: 13
Senbon: 4
Flash Bombs: 3 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 4'5"
Weight: 105 lbs
Body Build: muscular/ athletic
Eye Color: see pic
Hair Color: see pic
Family: Crystal Tsukikage
Theme song: 9 In the Afternoon ~ Panic at the disco
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Posting Format: N/A (creating)((alright here it is with the requested changes))
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 7:12 pm
 Full Name: Crow Namikaze
Nicknames: Crow
Age: 15
Birthdate: 6/04
Gender: male
Ethnicity: white
Nindo: i never go back on my word
Personality: fun loving silly guy
Behavior: Alone:he tries to make the best of it With Others:Fun In Combat:serious
Backstory: Crow was only 2 when his parents were murdered or went missing they never knew and so he was watched after by a ninja. He was raised to be a ninja and always wanted to be one. He always tried his hardest but nobody ever cared that much and no one wanted to be his friend and was considered a loser. He started to live on his own when he was 10 but he never let anything get him down. He then became a ninja and tried to do everything to keep his village safe
Village: Suna
Rank: Gennin
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Weapon of Choice: Katana
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths:
--> Primary: High Chakra Reserves
--> Second: Great Chakra Control
--> Tertiary: Durability
Weaknesses:
--> Primary: Elemental Vulnerability :fire
--> Second: Cunning
--> Custom: Can not break genjutsu
Shinobi Skills:
• Can learn Ninjutsu in 1 less post than required
• Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu (At Kage or Sannin : Can learn up to Chuunin level)
• 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu.
Chakra Element(s):
Primary --> Wind
Secondary --> lighting
Chakra Color: Black
Total Chakra Points: 35
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation
Non-Elemental
→ Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→ Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→ Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→ Kai - Dispell
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Wind - Fuuton
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed:
Primary Style:
--> Current level of Mastery:
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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Headband Location | Style | Color: Fore head, normal, Blue
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: back
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Jacket
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5
Makibishi: 5
Kunai: 5
Shuriken: 5
Senbon: 5
Flash Bombs: 5 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5' 8
Weight: 135
Body Build: athletic
Eye Color: blue
Hair Color: Blonde
Family: orphan
Theme song: A little less sixteen candles, A little more touch me
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 7:50 pm
Hi Kira, so I've looked over you profile and here are a few things to note:
1) You're weakness are incorrect. Refer to the chart below for what to put in ( I just copied and paste it from the ninjutsu ninja class thing).
Weaknesses:
Primary Weakness:
•Elemental Vulnerability {Required}
Secondary Weakness:
•Any from list
Custom Weakness:
•A weakness regarding your specific character
2) • 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu. Should also be included in your shinobi skills there was also a slight typo so the cannot learn medical ninjutsu skill should look like this:
• Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu (At Kage or Sannin : Can learn up to Chuunin level)
3) You're allowed to have three elements since you're in the ninjutsu class. Even though you haven't learned it yet you still have to put them down.
4) Since you've chosen to have high chakra reserves that means +5 chakra points/ every 10 chakra points. Therefore you have a bonus of 10 extra chakra points so your actual total is 35.
As for everything else, they look okay. Just edit the things I've mentioned above and you should be good to go.
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