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 Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 10:00 pm
Cobra_X Defined By Spontaneity Cobra_X Defined By Spontaneity Cobra_X ultimashade No...lost of people in POTS haven't even heard of his reputation, nobody there is threatened by him. Cobra is a decent RPer, but like everyone else, there's room for improvement.
*stabs you in the face*
...care to expound? I'm actually curious as to what you'd say.Well, I can not deny your fighting ability is outstanding, your skill to elaborate and find the weakness in the opposing RPer is flawless. I think you could be more... descriptive. Maybe broaden your RPC's goals. I understand Sai Konaga is a mysterious character, the Akatsuki leader, but with that there is always a fiery mandate. Who is Sai Konaga? Who really are these "Akatsuki"? Secrecy seems to discredit you. I think that if you showed more of his personality, his history, his true feeling of pain, it would be a significant change. Maybe it's just the slow RP, that hasn't let Sai come out of his shell, but I don't know. What do you think, Cobra?
...as to the other points, they are intriguing. Have you read the posts made recently in the Rice Fields w/Zenko or the Hot Springs? I think they reveal a lot about Sai.
The concept of his true feeling of pain however, I thought I did that well, what with always mentioning it and in showing how he dreams. I guess I may be wrong though. Maybe it's too I guess, passive.
Yes. I think that in not showing it more in a public way, it makes Sai seem less palpable. I did see the fight, and it did show certain things. I didn't receive that deep impact though, that I'm sure you have tried to convey. While I RP, I try to understand other people and their connection to their character. Whether we like or not, that character often shows a reflection of ourselves in one way, or another. By learning Sai, I can learn about you. All I can say, is make Sai a more fearless character. Make him publicly renown. Though, I can see the battle within that, being you wouldn't want him to be so known and wanted by everyone. It's a paradox I suppose...
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 10:07 pm
Well, Sai would never show weakness publicly, that's his whole deal, considering he considers himself better/stronger then everyone else. He's an Assassin who specializes in stealth, so it's not like he's going to make some kind of evil state of the union address and make people fear him. He'd rather do that from the shadows and allow people to fear that which they do not understand (which is often time much more fearsome then the alternative)
(Which fight are you talking about? Did you see the discussion at the hot springs?)
As to Sai reflecting my character, I'd say the only reflection you can see there is a love of nature and the ability to be soothed by it (or rather Sai's longing to be soothed by it) Sai is already fearless, but another reason why he is so reclusive, is yes, becasue of activity.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 9:19 am
I got lost after Cobra stabbed Defy (YES "DEFY"! GOT A PROBLEM WITH THAT?! *holds up chainsaw* burning_eyes actually... that was just a typo... I'm too lazy to delete it. xD ) in the face. =/
I think you're both fantastic Rpers... with room for improvement. That's not a bad thing. Everybody needs improvement. Hell, I'll be the first to tell you, that I need improvement.
Sai, kinda reminds me of the second to the final boss in a manga or video game, who's powerful; and everybody thinks that after him the world will be saved (but little do they know that behind Sai lies SHIRA!!! MUHAHAHAHA) and they can relax. And when the hero and company go to fight him, they think he's completely cold hearted and all that, only to discover while fighting him, that he has some sort of pain that has corrupted him and made him that way.
While, that's cool and all (and don't get me wrong... on several occasions, I've wished Sai was real, that way I could give him a hug... and probably get stabbed in the process. D:) but if you really want to show Sai as being the pinnacle of all evil; then you need to make him more colder and less reserved. And I don't mean having him go around going "Muhahaha. Look at me! I'm invincible! No one can stop me! I think I'll go murder a village today. Aren't I diabolical?" Just... more colder; and I'll leave that to your imagination, because if I told you how to do that, it wouldn't be a learning experience for you. ;D
As for you Defy (*snorts*), three words: Emo Teenage Angst. That's what almost all of your character's remind me of. Whereas, that is good (And believe me, you're character's ARE good. Esp Kichuro.) to be a truly good RPer, you need to learn how to RP other personalities. For example, in one guild I'm RPing a girl who's so optimistic that it annoys the hell out of everybody she goes around. At the same time, in another guild, I'm RPing a girl who's only wish in life is to kill as many people as possible. At the same time, in another guild (dear Lord, am I apart of a lot of guilds) I RP as a guy(YES! A GUY!) who's a depressed, intelligent, schizophrenic who at the same time, happens to be a Demi-Demon. Normally people would say that it is impossible to have depressed, intelligent, and schizophrenia all in the same person, but I make it work. And that's what you need to improve on. Instead of Role-playing the same personality of character again, broaden your horizon. Only then can you say, that you are a true Rper.
In other news... is honey-nut cheerios suppose to taste like Reese's Peanut Butter Cups? Because if I've been poisoned... I swear to God...
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:30 am
Lol
Martin needs not improvement. His posts are, liek, da best rofl
N00bz, i pwn y'all
jkjk...About the last part
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:35 am
I still want to go through Def's RP school, since I know there's a lot I could improve on. ;o;
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:45 am
ya if def ever gets on! : P
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:47 am
I wish the guild had slowed down when Mattei was free so I could load up on jutsu and interact with Jade's Oto-rogue.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 10:57 am
You could go through my school Meta. ;D
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 12:00 pm
I've followed a bunch of the fights Cobra. And yes, I've seen the Hotspring discussion.
Actually Shira, I do RP different personalities, the only characters you've seen me RP are those couple. And believe me, Svellos, Aeldevera, (Mistalune from the Bleach guild), are COMPLETELY different in goal, perspective, and their backgrounds. None of which reflect teenage angst, other than Svellos (a tiny bit).
And Shira, the only thing I've seen you RP as is overly submissive as well as non-aggressive RPCs. You're always the good-guy. XD Let's not mention your seductive RPing either... that's for the closet sweety. >;3
Did you two want to go through that process? I say Cobra ought to join in too. All of us can teach each other.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 12:03 pm
i just need help fighting in rp ;P [kinda why i avoid fighting...]
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 3:48 pm
LadyShirahime93 but if you really want to show Sai as being the pinnacle of all evil; then you need to make him more colder and less reserved. And I don't mean having him go around going "Muhahaha. Look at me! I'm invincible! No one can stop me! I think I'll go murder a village today. Aren't I diabolical?" Just... more colder; and I'll leave that to your imagination, because if I told you how to do that, it wouldn't be a learning experience for you. ;D
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 4:13 pm
not me cause i would hug him to death!
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 4:18 pm
Anyhow, Cobra.
I am/was the Raikage in this guild. Do you still need me to fulfill that in your new guild? Or do you want me to start over?
I'm keeping my other RPC, the medical genin that was in Sound.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 6:42 pm
little mintchan not me cause i would hug him to death! I get the feeling that would result in Sai turning you into a smear of blood
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 2:09 am
Hmmm a super Evil RpC who just want to kill.... I am making on of those xD It was gonna be a ink assasin like Sai from naruto buuuut with the new guild and all I think im gona make a New RpC with a custom clan to destroy me some people
Mwahahahahahahaha
I wonder how long he will live before someone puts him down lol.
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