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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:09 pm
OOC: This is the beginning idea for my eventual character.
Leiko rushed home as quickly as she could. There was not anyone there, having two parents as ninjas in a non-clan family made that a norm. However, Leiko hoped that there was going to be something waiting for her. She darted through the crowd to her home, working on her speed and dodging skills, after all it would do no one any good to knock into a laden baker at this speed.
She skidded to a stop in front of her door, her eyes open in awe. In front of her stood a delivary ninja with a crate. The man held out a signature form, which Leiko signed eagerly. Then she bowed her head in thanks, picked up the box, and walked into the house. Leiko knew that delivery nin were very busy right now and did not want to keep him waiting, so instead she focused on her package. Using a hammer she wedged the top of the box off. Dropping the hammer, Leiko stared with wondered at the contents, four books on flexible weapons use and her very own three-sectioned staff. Could life get any better?
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 12:24 pm
RP Example Rei strolled down the hallway and headed downstairs to the kitchen. Her parents were already out of the house and at work by this time so she had to get herself ready. The blonde girl fixed her some food and headed out the door. It was her first day at the Academy, but it didn't really phase her very much. That attitude would probably change somewhere in the course of the day, though. It was just too early for Rei to actually feel anything. Walking down towards the Academy, she ate her toast in quiet. Rei's family was new to the area so she didn't really know anyone yet. Not that it really mattered to her. She was usually alone anyway. Nobody really liked to talk to a shy girl. Especially with her hair color. Most said it wasn't normal. It didn't bother Rei, she was use to it. She was hoping to make a friend here, though. Coming up quickly on the Academy grounds, she finished up the last part of her toast. Walking towards the classroom that would be her new home for the day. Seeing the teacher, Rei bowed politely, "Hi, I'm Miamoto, Rei."
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 12:36 pm
`Mitsuki Yamada` [Oh I hope this is right. I post a sample here before I do anything else, right? I hope so .__.]
Kasandera sighed as she brought the bowl of ramen, which was now simply juice, to her lips, drinking it all down. After setting the bowl down she stood. "Thank you," she told the man behind the counter before she left the building. The ramen had really hit the spot after a tough mission. Well no, it wasn't that it was tough, but it had been so boring. All she did was sit and watch over a house, a house.
The owner of the house had insisted on recruiting a ninja to watch over her procious posesions while she was away. Nothing had even happened! So Kasandera had spent her whole day, which could've been used for training, watching a house that wasn't even under any danger. She was itching to fight someone.
Suddenly she heard a snapping twig and she grinned. Thank God! She though quickly sliding out a kunai as she turned. "Hah!" She said exclaimed when she had fully turned around. To her dissapointment though, no one was there.
Feeling eyes on her Kasandera's dark green eyes narrowed and she took a look around. She became embarresed when she saw that many people were giving her strange looks. Cheeks burning she put the kunai away and turned, starting to walk towards the exit of the village. "Training it is," she sighed out, tucking a strang black hair that had fallen in her face.
Passness! I see a few misspelled words, and thats fine, just work on it a bit. ^_^ Keep it up!!!
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 12:43 pm
Kiara Lycro OOC: This is the beginning idea for my eventual character.
Leiko rushed home as quickly as she could. There was not anyone there, having two parents as ninjas in a non-clan family made that a norm. However, Leiko hoped that there was going to be something waiting for her. She darted through the crowd to her home, working on her speed and dodging skills, after all it would do no one any good to knock into a laden baker at this speed.
She skidded to a stop in front of her door, her eyes open in awe. In front of her stood a delivary ninja with a crate. The man held out a signature form, which Leiko signed eagerly. Then she bowed her head in thanks, picked up the box, and walked into the house. Leiko knew that delivery nin were very busy right now and did not want to keep him waiting, so instead she focused on her package. Using a hammer she wedged the top of the box off. Dropping the hammer, Leiko stared with wondered at the contents, four books on flexible weapons use and her very own three-sectioned staff. Could life get any better? Pass! I'm not exactly sure if the use of the delivery ninja would be counted in the god mode thing since its not an actual person and doesn't say anything...but keep an eye on it anyway. Good job! whee
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 12:45 pm
Miss-Lefty RP Example Rei strolled down the hallway and headed downstairs to the kitchen. Her parents were already out of the house and at work by this time so she had to get herself ready. The blonde girl fixed her some food and headed out the door. It was her first day at the Academy, but it didn't really phase her very much. That attitude would probably change somewhere in the course of the day, though. It was just too early for Rei to actually feel anything. Walking down towards the Academy, she ate her toast in quiet. Rei's family was new to the area so she didn't really know anyone yet. Not that it really mattered to her. She was usually alone anyway. Nobody really liked to talk to a shy girl. Especially with her hair color. Most said it wasn't normal. It didn't bother Rei, she was use to it. She was hoping to make a friend here, though. Coming up quickly on the Academy grounds, she finished up the last part of her toast. Walking towards the classroom that would be her new home for the day. Seeing the teacher, Rei bowed politely, "Hi, I'm Miamoto, Rei." Hehe...wow...Putting info of your background in your post...a bit unique...Pass! whee
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 1:17 pm
I loved this intro so much, that I wanna recycle it... if that's not cool, I'll gladly type something else up for you all smile
It was dark enough in the cave, but the nearly black eyewear left the boy nearly blind. It didn't matter much, however. Without these precautions in place, he'd probably go blind for good.
He formed the seals wordlessly in the darkness, the intricate movements of hand and finger as natural as breathing at this point. As each seal completed, he felt closer to the rock around him, in particular the molecules of iron that was otherwise hopelessly trapped within the ore. With the final seal, his mind's eye saw for one moment the full depth of the mine, which could chill the hearts of even seasoned explorers. This dread, however, was quite necessary. It helped you to concentrate on your work.
"EARTH STYLE! IRON INGOT JUTSU!"
A burst of chakra flowed from his fingertips into the ground below, followed by a gentle rumble as the miniscule bits of iron gathered into a single spot. He moved his hand away quickly as the perfectly-formed ingot burst upward, floating momentarily in the darkness. The boy grabbed a small handful of carbon dust, tossing it into the air to cling to the exposed metal, and quickly formed the seals for a more advanced technique.
"FIRE STYLE! FOCUSED ARC FLAME!"
Despite the almsot overwhelming darkness, the boy could clearly see the flame through his protection. For several moments the mine was illuminated, and the former cold replaced by nearly unbearable heat. The metal glowed red hot, melting and mixing with the clinging carbon, forming something stronger than their individual parts. It was here that his clan's signature ability proved most useful. The raw material from the earth, met with the focused energy of the fire, combined to form:
"STEEL STYLE! CARBON STEEL KUNAI GENERATION!"
In this form, the act of creation was almost spiritual, even to those who clearly valued money over any concept of "god". The boy felt the metal bending to his will, slowly coming to a razor sharp point even as the steel itself hardened to a form stronger than a standard blacksmith would dare dream. All he had to do was concentrate, and he could form whatever he wanted. Just a little more focus... and...
"TAO! ARE YOU DONE YET?! WE HAVE TO GET THE ORDER OUT TONIGHT!"
Tao stumbled backward, falling clumbsily on his rear as his control on the metal was broken, and the molten mass fell to the ground below. Although it vaguely resembled a kunai knife, the metal was obviously warped out of shape by the impact, and as the metal cooled, it was worthless. Any further attempt at refinement would result in a lower-strength steel, which didn't do the clan any good in the eyes of their clients.
He sighed, and stood up, surrounded by dozens of completed kunai knives. As the one failure of the afternoon cooled, the light slowly faded from his clearly-annoyed face. "Yeah ma, I'd be done by now if you just let me finish..." he muttered as he kicked the failure away, crouching back down to repeat the process all over again.
Maybe if I ever got a chance to actually use one of these, he thought to himself, this whole deal wouldn't feel like so much of a chore...
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 2:07 pm
biggrin Hey, I just finished practicing and now ready for the real thing.
:Rp Sample:
Kaichi hesitated, then thought it was right. He brought the kunai to the opposing ninja's neck and shut his eyes. He gave it a little pressure and sliced. When he opened his eyes, blood was trickling down the ninja's neck and onto Kaichi's wrist. Two other jounin appeared behind him and kneeled. "It had to be done, sir. He was a danger to the village." "Raijin is right, captain. He would have unlocked his 3rd level, and went for the Hokage." Kaichi rose up and looked at his beloved friend. "It still doesn't seem right...."
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Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 11:45 am
So... um... do we just wait? Or should I PM someone or something?
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 1:00 am
T.A.O. I loved this intro so much, that I wanna recycle it... if that's not cool, I'll gladly type something else up for you all smile It was dark enough in the cave, but the nearly black eyewear left the boy nearly blind. It didn't matter much, however. Without these precautions in place, he'd probably go blind for good. He formed the seals wordlessly in the darkness, the intricate movements of hand and finger as natural as breathing at this point. As each seal completed, he felt closer to the rock around him, in particular the molecules of iron that was otherwise hopelessly trapped within the ore. With the final seal, his mind's eye saw for one moment the full depth of the mine, which could chill the hearts of even seasoned explorers. This dread, however, was quite necessary. It helped you to concentrate on your work. "EARTH STYLE! IRON INGOT JUTSU!" A burst of chakra flowed from his fingertips into the ground below, followed by a gentle rumble as the miniscule bits of iron gathered into a single spot. He moved his hand away quickly as the perfectly-formed ingot burst upward, floating momentarily in the darkness. The boy grabbed a small handful of carbon dust, tossing it into the air to cling to the exposed metal, and quickly formed the seals for a more advanced technique. "FIRE STYLE! FOCUSED ARC FLAME!" Despite the almsot overwhelming darkness, the boy could clearly see the flame through his protection. For several moments the mine was illuminated, and the former cold replaced by nearly unbearable heat. The metal glowed red hot, melting and mixing with the clinging carbon, forming something stronger than their individual parts. It was here that his clan's signature ability proved most useful. The raw material from the earth, met with the focused energy of the fire, combined to form: "STEEL STYLE! CARBON STEEL KUNAI GENERATION!" In this form, the act of creation was almost spiritual, even to those who clearly valued money over any concept of "god". The boy felt the metal bending to his will, slowly coming to a razor sharp point even as the steel itself hardened to a form stronger than a standard blacksmith would dare dream. All he had to do was concentrate, and he could form whatever he wanted. Just a little more focus... and... "TAO! ARE YOU DONE YET?! WE HAVE TO GET THE ORDER OUT TONIGHT!" Tao stumbled backward, falling clumbsily on his rear as his control on the metal was broken, and the molten mass fell to the ground below. Although it vaguely resembled a kunai knife, the metal was obviously warped out of shape by the impact, and as the metal cooled, it was worthless. Any further attempt at refinement would result in a lower-strength steel, which didn't do the clan any good in the eyes of their clients. He sighed, and stood up, surrounded by dozens of completed kunai knives. As the one failure of the afternoon cooled, the light slowly faded from his clearly-annoyed face. "Yeah ma, I'd be done by now if you just let me finish..." he muttered as he kicked the failure away, crouching back down to repeat the process all over again. Maybe if I ever got a chance to actually use one of these, he thought to himself, this whole deal wouldn't feel like so much of a chore... Pass!And yes, you just wait. Until now. The wait is over.
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 1:01 am
dark-Angel Kuronu biggrin Hey, I just finished practicing and now ready for the real thing. :Rp Sample: Kaichi hesitated, then thought it was right. He brought the kunai to the opposing ninja's neck and shut his eyes. He gave it a little pressure and sliced. When he opened his eyes, blood was trickling down the ninja's neck and onto Kaichi's wrist. Two other jounin appeared behind him and kneeled. "It had to be done, sir. He was a danger to the village." "Raijin is right, captain. He would have unlocked his 3rd level, and went for the Hokage." Kaichi rose up and looked at his beloved friend. "It still doesn't seem right...." I'm pretty sure you have the skills but just in case, I'd like to see a post with only one character since playing other characters is godmodding if they're not all yours.
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 8:05 am
Sorry I forgot about that. sweatdrop
:Rp Sample:
Kaichi took a deep breath and pulled the door open. I was dark, and musty smellling. The wood paneling was curling up, flaking. Kaichi stepped on the shacks wood floors, making a steady creeking sound. I can't see a thing!, Kaichi thought to himself in anger. Not only had Kaichi been cut off from his team in this strange village, but he had already lost a considerable amount of Chakra. Escape wasn't gonna be easy. Then, he saw movement. "Gotcha'!" Kaichi lunged at the figure, which sent them hurling through the decayed wooden walls. The two landed on the grass outside the suspended shack, quarreling with each other already. Kaichi pulled a kunai and stabbed the man in the right arm. He screamed, a cry for help that would be heard through the mist above the village. Kaichi removed the kunai and slit his throat. He dashed towards the shadow a tree had cast. Four men with blades ran past his cover and examined their friend. He heard whispers from them, then saw one of them scan the area. Kaichi was in a viewful place from there, and knew he had to do something before he was spotted. He sent a three shuriken towards the other men, who were still examining the slain man's body. The were all hit directly in the back and fell. The man that was scanning the area saw where they came from and cursed. He pulled out his blade and lunged at Kaichi. He was struck in the back of the head by a hilt, which made him fall unconcious. Kaichi put his katana away, and picked the man up. He saw the damage he had done and threw him back down. Whatever, he thought. Kaichi jumped on top of the roof of the old shack and searched for his friends. He saw a green flare fire up into the sky, meaning: Regroup at the top of the cliff above the mist villlage. Kaichi used the last bit of his chakra to climb the face of the cliff, where he saw the whole ANBU Black Ops force, his team in front of them. "Well, won't this be fun." Kaichi said with a chuckle, and fell to the ground.
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 12:57 pm
dark-Angel Kuronu Sorry I forgot about that. sweatdrop :Rp Sample: Kaichi took a deep breath and pulled the door open. I was dark, and musty smellling. The wood paneling was curling up, flaking. Kaichi stepped on the shacks wood floors, making a steady creeking sound. I can't see a thing!, Kaichi thought to himself in anger. Not only had Kaichi been cut off from his team in this strange village, but he had already lost a considerable amount of Chakra. Escape wasn't gonna be easy. Then, he saw movement. "Gotcha'!" Kaichi lunged at the figure, which sent them hurling through the decayed wooden walls. The two landed on the grass outside the suspended shack, quarreling with each other already. Kaichi pulled a kunai and stabbed the man in the right arm. He screamed, a cry for help that would be heard through the mist above the village. Kaichi removed the kunai and slit his throat. He dashed towards the shadow a tree had cast. Four men with blades ran past his cover and examined their friend. He heard whispers from them, then saw one of them scan the area. Kaichi was in a viewful place from there, and knew he had to do something before he was spotted. He sent a three shuriken towards the other men, who were still examining the slain man's body. The were all hit directly in the back and fell. The man that was scanning the area saw where they came from and cursed. He pulled out his blade and lunged at Kaichi. He was struck in the back of the head by a hilt, which made him fall unconcious. Kaichi put his katana away, and picked the man up. He saw the damage he had done and threw him back down. Whatever, he thought. Kaichi jumped on top of the roof of the old shack and searched for his friends. He saw a green flare fire up into the sky, meaning: Regroup at the top of the cliff above the mist villlage. Kaichi used the last bit of his chakra to climb the face of the cliff, where he saw the whole ANBU Black Ops force, his team in front of them. "Well, won't this be fun." Kaichi said with a chuckle, and fell to the ground. Very good. Pass!
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:38 pm
Yumi was stalling for time in her bedroom. The sun had just began to rise and she wasn't exactly eager about being up this early. She held her head loosely in the palms of her hands while she was sitting on her firm bed. Her medium length auburn hair fell in between some of her fingers. The window in her room was cracked open just slightly to allow in a breeze. She found that her room always got a bit stuffy during the night, and that wasn't a pleasant environment for her. She removed her head out from between her hands and shook it violently to become completely awake. She wasn't sure what the days events held for her but it was the first day of the academy. Although she wouldn't show her emotions about it, she was excited.
((I haven't gotten any of my profile information sent out yet so I hope this is okay just to get the ball a rolling. So to speak.))
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:50 pm
.:RP Sample:. Seth woke up from bed and looked out the window. "What a beautiful day." Seth thought and he went out to the kitchen to see his older brother Leo making breakfast. "I've got breakfast for you" Leo said as he gave Seth his plate. "You going on another ninja mission Leo?" Seth said with Leo nodding. "Alright I'll see you tonight." Seth said as Leo put his head band on and left the house. Seth quickly ate his breakfast and went out to the back yard to practice his taijutsu. He would practice the basic taijutsu techniques and the try his own made up techniques. It was hard for Seth to fight with both his left and right because since he was little his left arm was made of metal and was bonded to it by chakra. It was hard still after the years to control his arm. Later Seth just waited for his brother to come home and he came home at midnight. "Leo how was the mission?" Seth said. "It was a success." Leo said hugging Seth from not seeing him all day. [Honestly this is just a backround of a normal day for my character Seth.]
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:10 pm
Akimoto Ayumi Yumi was stalling for time in her bedroom. The sun had just began to rise and she wasn't exactly eager about being up this early. She held her head loosely in the palms of her hands while she was sitting on her firm bed. Her medium length auburn hair fell in between some of her fingers. The window in her room was cracked open just slightly to allow in a breeze. She found that her room always got a bit stuffy during the night, and that wasn't a pleasant environment for her. She removed her head out from between her hands and shook it violently to become completely awake. She wasn't sure what the days events held for her but it was the first day of the academy. Although she wouldn't show her emotions about it, she was excited. ((I haven't gotten any of my profile information sent out yet so I hope this is okay just to get the ball a rolling. So to speak.)) Pass. Very descriptive of the environment around her. ^_^
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