Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi Type: Tamer Trait from Familiar (Chunin - Jounin) Description: Hearing of a cat, can hear at least a thread away. Also because of the hearing of a cat: A cats sound sensitivity might be one of the reasons some people think they have supernatural powers. This may be why the Egyptians treated them as Gods they believed the cats had powers. This is probably in relation to how a cat can sense something coming because of their extremely sensitive hearing. For example they can hear ultrasonic sounds before a noisy event happens like an earthquake. This is due to their hearing being amplified four times greater than a humans.
Their inner ear is responsible for their remarkable sense of balance. The tiny chambers and canals of the interior of the ear are lined with millions of sensitive hairs that contain fluid and floating crystals. When a cat changes its physical position, these hairs detect the slightest movement of the fluid and crystals and rapidly send signals to the cats brain. This gives the cats brain accurate readings on the cats body position so their muscles can compensate helping the cat keep his perfect sense of balance. Which explains why cats almost always land on their feet.
(meaning that with the hearing my balance is better then usual. and that the hearing is almost a knowing when something is supposed to happen before it does by sounds that are not usually picked up by others without this hearing. on large scales. (aka huge tailed beast coming in etc.....) hope it helps)
Pick which natural weapon you want, you don't get all of them.
What im after is the actual hearing of a cat, but what the actual information states is the cats hearing is actually what gives them such amazing balance due to the cat ears plus the hearing, both of which my character would have. I just wanted the hearing package that natural feline information explains. Or would I have to ignore the fact it works that way and choose one?
Also just wanted to point this out as well for as to why i chose natural weaponry (meaning all)
Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
that part i highlighted there doesnt specify i must choose 1 of the natural weapons, or sences that I should be able to have all... but if that is not the way its supposed to happen then i would say it needed to maybe be added so as to not have this issue again....
hearing: so long as it stays within the thread, your good. If you wish to gain balance, you will need another attribute. As far as weaponry, they don't specify because you choose additional weaponry per attribute.
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Deep Shadow Evasion Rank: B Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: The Nara clan user can enter his own shadow as a means to quickly escape or advance on a target near a local shadow in the immediate area (Half mile range, within thread) This is an alternative to the elemental or non elemental body flicker technique. The reason for the higher chakra rank is the user is able to stay hidden in the local shadows for one additional post after entering before having to emerge in one of the local shadows. This is also to prevent being auto killed if all shadows are expelled in the area. The user has the ability to use some clan ability while hidden in the shadows.
Restrictions Follows all rules explained by the body flicker explanation. Limit to one use of nara clan jutsu while hidden inside this jutsu per battle.
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Leviathan Rank: s or s+ (which ever is more fitting.) Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. Not only does the jutsu create a water version of this but also the giant Leviathan is at first secretly a shadow version of the same thing. Two creatures of each element working together. Once the shadow Leviathan is discovered as a beast of its own they separate striking individually against whatever is deemed a foe in their eyes. (What the user targets) They are able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower.
Restrictions and weaknesses: The water Leviathan can be destroyed by a jutsu of equal rank, suitons weakness element 1 rank lower, suitons strength element 1 rank higher. The shadow Leviathan can be destroyed by a brilliant source of light, Light from an S rank fire jutsu or something that creates a blinding flash. Both Leviathans disolve after a five post duration. The jutsu can only be used once per battle This jutsu takes 2 posts to execute.
(Extra, If the Leviathans both could have their own single move that can cause A rank damage but only used once per summoning) Water Leviathan - Water Beam: The water Leviathan shoots a jet of extremely sharp water capable of blowing holes through trees and things of the sort. Shadow Leviathan - shadow Lunge: The Shadow Leviathan launches out of its own shadow at the target trying to land a blunt hard hit. Much like shadow sewing technique but much more blunt and fast. Would typically sent a target flying out of breath or possibly causing broken bones.
Shadow evasion: only one kageton tech, c rank and lower, may be used while hidden in the shadow.
Leviathan is still a little confusing. How many shapes does this tech make?
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Deep Shadow Evasion Rank: B Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: The Nara clan user can enter his own shadow as a means to quickly escape or advance on a target near a local shadow in the immediate area (Half mile range, within thread) This is an alternative to the elemental or non elemental body flicker technique. The reason for the higher chakra rank is the user is able to stay hidden in the local shadows for one additional post after entering before having to emerge in one of the local shadows. This is also to prevent being auto killed if all shadows are expelled in the area. The user has the ability to use some clan ability while hidden in the shadows.
Restrictions 1) Follows all rules explained by the body flicker explanation. 2) Limit to one use of Nara clan jutsu while hidden inside this jutsu per battle. 3) Only a rank C bloodline technique can be used while being hidden in the shadow.
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As for the Oily Shadow, I added 20 chakra
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Oil Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu Element: Kageton Description: Allows the user to cast any of his Nara clan techniques for an additional 35 chakra cost per use. In doing so laces them with a dark flammable substance that is easily masked in the shadows. Once this is done the path of the shadows it had taken and is currently can now be caught fire. Although the fire will dispel the shadow jutsu due to the light it will emit. Any form of fire can catch the shadow or path on fire streaming to wherever the shadow has reached even on a person. Once done the fire burns in that locations or locations for the duration of one post after being caught.
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The Shadow Leviathan, everything stated above but as for shapes it forms One single Leviathan formed of Water and its shadow is another single Leviathan formed of shadow, They both are their own beasts and attack the target of the users choice. For a better discription of the Leviathan.
Same size as each other. Just shy of most Boss summons in size
I'm not keen on the levisthon technique. If it just created a single form, that be as little better
Invasion approved
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Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2014 5:20 pm
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Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Leviathan Rank: s or s+ (which ever is more fitting.) Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. As black as night it is built of both water and shadows. This monster then attacks the users target upon request or instruction. It is able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower. The Leviathan being a large serpent is able to slither very quickly on land and bend its body in many ways to avoid attacks. Under water it moves twice as fast and can spear enemies with its sharp nose submerged in larger bodies of water like a torpedo with S rank damage. The size and abilities of this creature are strong enough to give a tailed beast a small run for its money in combat.
Restrictions and weaknesses: • The shadow leviathans weaknesses, Waters weakness of Earth (Doton) one rank lower can greatly Injure the the beast, two to destroy it. Equal rank can destroy it. • Other Ninjutsu or Taijutsu or Bukijutsu of equal rank can Greatly Injure the beast, two can destroy it. One rank higher can Destroy it. • Bright sunlight will annoy the creature and cause it to fight close to the ground, Brilliant light will injure the creature allowing it to become vulnerable. •Can only be cast once per battle due to the amount of energy and focus used to create it. •Takes two posts to launch the jutsu, to bring both Kageton and Suiton chakra into it. •The Leviathan is able to stay out for 5 posts of duration, Any longer would force the user to remain in a non moving state pushing chakra into the beast to keep it alive. Costing S rank chakra per post past 5 to sustain.
The Shadow Leviathan uses both elements to strengthen its existence, the Kageton depends on the suiton side to prevent it from being completely expelled by light.
Two attacks it can do that can be used once per summon.
Water Beam: The Leviathan shoots a jet of extremely sharp water capable of blowing holes through trees and things of the sort. Can also use this beam to slash with making it into a cutting action. (A rank damage)
Shadow Lunge: The Leviathan launches out of its own shadow at the target trying to land a blunt hard hit. Much like shadow sewing technique but much more blunt and fast. Would typically sent a target flying out of breath or possibly causing broken bones. (A rank damage)
Willing to give 2 custom jutsu slots for this technique.
Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2014 5:28 pm
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Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Leviathan Rank: s or s+ (which ever is more fitting.) Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. As black as night it is built of both water and shadows. This monster then attacks the users target upon request or instruction. It is able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower. The Leviathan being a large serpent is able to slither very quickly on land and bend its body in many ways to avoid attacks. Under water it moves twice as fast and can spear enemies with its sharp nose submerged in larger bodies of water like a torpedo with S rank damage. The size and abilities of this creature are strong enough to give a tailed beast a small run for its money in combat.
Restrictions and weaknesses: • The shadow leviathans weaknesses, Waters weakness of Earth (Doton) one rank lower can greatly Injure the the beast, two to destroy it. Equal rank can destroy it. • Other Ninjutsu or Taijutsu or Bukijutsu of equal rank can Greatly Injure the beast, two can destroy it. One rank higher can Destroy it. • Bright sunlight will annoy the creature and cause it to fight close to the ground, Brilliant light will injure the creature allowing it to become vulnerable. •Can only be cast once per battle due to the amount of energy and focus used to create it. •Takes two posts to launch the jutsu, to bring both Kageton and Suiton chakra into it. •The Leviathan is able to stay out for 5 posts of duration, Any longer would force the user to remain in a non moving state pushing chakra into the beast to keep it alive. Costing S rank chakra per post past 5 to sustain.
The Shadow Leviathan uses both elements to strengthen its existence, the Kageton depends on the suiton side to prevent it from being completely expelled by light.
Two attacks it can do that can be used once per summon.
Water Beam: The Leviathan shoots a jet of extremely sharp water capable of blowing holes through trees and things of the sort. Can also use this beam to slash with making it into a cutting action. (A rank damage)
Shadow Lunge: The Leviathan launches out of its own shadow at the target trying to land a blunt hard hit. Much like shadow sewing technique but much more blunt and fast. Would typically sent a target flying out of breath or possibly causing broken bones. (A rank damage)
Willing to give 2 custom jutsu slots for this technique.
if you want more techs for the leviathan, each one costs a custom slot.
It is considered an s rank tech, which already takes 2 custom slots.
The leviathan can perform formless techs for its fangs and slam, but stamina is drained from you. Capable of 2 activations a post
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Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Leviathan Rank: S Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. As black as night it is built of both water and shadows. This monster then attacks the users target upon request or instruction. It is able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower. The Leviathan being a large serpent is able to slither very quickly on land and bend its body in many ways to avoid attacks. Under water it moves twice as fast and can spear enemies with its sharp nose submerged in larger bodies of water like a torpedo with S rank damage. The size and abilities of this creature are strong enough to give a tailed beast a small run for its money in combat.
Restrictions and weaknesses: • The shadow leviathans weaknesses, Waters weakness of Earth (Doton) one rank lower can greatly Injure the the beast, two to destroy it. Equal rank can destroy it. • Other Ninjutsu or Taijutsu or Bukijutsu of equal rank can Greatly Injure the beast, two can destroy it. One rank higher can Destroy it. • Bright sunlight will annoy the creature and cause it to fight close to the ground, Brilliant light will injure the creature allowing it to become vulnerable. •Can only be cast once per battle due to the amount of energy and focus used to create it. •Takes two posts to launch the jutsu, to bring both Kageton and Suiton chakra into it. •The Leviathan is able to stay out for 5 posts of duration, Any longer would force the user to remain in a non moving state pushing chakra into the beast to keep it alive. Costing S rank chakra per post past 5 to sustain. • The Leviathan gets 2 activation per post.
The Shadow Leviathan uses both elements to strengthen its existence, the Kageton depends on the suiton side to prevent it from being completely expelled by light.
The Shadow Leviathan's Attacks • Body Slam (A rank damage) - drains from users stamina • Sharp bite (A rank damage) - drains from the users stamina • The Leviathan is able to use Jutsu that is currently known by the user at the cost of the users chakra.
Seperate Jutsu application.
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Void Blast Rank: A Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: The user summons up his own shadow into a ball in his hands forcing it off as a projectile of destructive force. A jutsu of katon or of light one rank lower can dispel the attack. Able to blast through even rock in terms of strength. Upon hitting a living organism with a shadow causes B rank damage making them fall into their own shadow to the same dimension that Ryoku can travel to using his Shadow evasion technique. Once there they are stuck for 3 posts. Once they are there the use has the ability to join them using shadow evasion to use their post to retrieve them or to fight them there for that single post before having to leave himself. Or using this time to retreat.
3 Custom jutsu slots
Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:57 pm
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Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Leviathan Rank: S Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. As black as night it is built of both water and shadows. This monster then attacks the users target upon request or instruction. It is able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower. The Leviathan being a large serpent is able to slither very quickly on land and bend its body in many ways to avoid attacks. Under water it moves twice as fast and can spear enemies with its sharp nose submerged in larger bodies of water like a torpedo with S rank damage. The size and abilities of this creature are strong enough to give a tailed beast a small run for its money in combat.
Restrictions and weaknesses: • The shadow leviathans weaknesses, Waters weakness of Earth (Doton) one rank lower can greatly Injure the the beast, two to destroy it. Equal rank can destroy it. • Other Ninjutsu or Taijutsu or Bukijutsu of equal rank can Greatly Injure the beast, two can destroy it. One rank higher can Destroy it. • Bright sunlight will annoy the creature and cause it to fight close to the ground, Brilliant light will injure the creature allowing it to become vulnerable. •Can only be cast once per battle due to the amount of energy and focus used to create it. •Takes two posts to launch the jutsu, to bring both Kageton and Suiton chakra into it. •The Leviathan is able to stay out for 5 posts of duration, Any longer would force the user to remain in a non moving state pushing chakra into the beast to keep it alive. Costing S rank chakra per post past 5 to sustain. • The Leviathan gets 2 activation per post.
The Shadow Leviathan uses both elements to strengthen its existence, the Kageton depends on the suiton side to prevent it from being completely expelled by light.
The Shadow Leviathan's Attacks • Body Slam (A rank damage) - drains from users stamina • Sharp bite (A rank damage) - drains from the users stamina • The Leviathan is able to use Jutsu that is currently known by the user at the cost of the users chakra.
Seperate Jutsu application.
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Void Blast Rank: A Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: The user summons up his own shadow into a ball in his hands forcing it off as a projectile of destructive force. A jutsu of katon or of light one rank lower can dispel the attack. Able to blast through even rock in terms of strength. Upon hitting a living organism with a shadow causes B rank damage making them fall into their own shadow to the same dimension that Ryoku can travel to using his Shadow evasion technique. Once there they are stuck for 3 posts. Once they are there the use has the ability to join them using shadow evasion to use their post to retrieve them or to fight them there for that single post before having to leave himself. Or using this time to retreat.
3 Custom jutsu slots
leviathan can only use sui and shadow techs the user knows. Chakra and stamina drained from user.
Ball. Denied, needs to be toned down and cleared up
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Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Abyssal Leviathan Rank: S Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. As black as night it is built of both water and shadows. This monster then attacks the users target upon request or instruction. It is able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower. The Leviathan being a large serpent is able to slither very quickly on land and bend its body in many ways to avoid attacks. Under water it moves twice as fast and can spear enemies with its sharp nose submerged in larger bodies of water like a torpedo with S rank damage. The size and abilities of this creature are strong enough to give a tailed beast a small run for its money in combat.
Restrictions and weaknesses: • The Abyssal leviathans weaknesses, Waters weakness of Earth (Doton) one rank lower can greatly Injure the the beast, two to destroy it. Equal rank can destroy it. • Other Ninjutsu or Taijutsu or Bukijutsu of equal rank can Greatly Injure the beast, two can destroy it. One rank higher can Destroy it. • Bright sunlight will annoy the creature and cause it to fight close to the ground, Brilliant light will injure the creature allowing it to become vulnerable. •Can only be cast once per battle due to the amount of energy and focus used to create it. •Takes two posts to launch the jutsu, to bring both Kageton and Suiton chakra into it. •The Leviathan is able to stay out for 5 posts of duration, Any longer would force the user to remain in a non moving state pushing chakra into the beast to keep it alive. Costing S rank chakra per post past 5 to sustain. • The Leviathan gets 2 activation per post.
The Shadow Leviathan uses both elements to strengthen its existence, the Kageton depends on the suiton side to prevent it from being completely expelled by light.
The Shadow Leviathan's Attacks • Body Slam (A rank damage) - drains from users stamina • Sharp bite (A rank damage) - drains from the users stamina • The Leviathan is able to use Jutsu that is currently known by the user of Kageton and Suiton at the cost of the users chakra and stamina depending the techniques cost.
((Edited, changed the name of jutsu))
i'll think about the other to think of a way to make it legal. The main reason for it though was to have a way to separate a target from the battlefield, even if only temporarily. Could drop the damage it causes upon impact if need be. But ill spend more time thinking on how that one will work. Just came to me tonight.
Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2014 11:56 pm
Character: Sacreia Toshigowa Technique Name: Deceptive Intention (Sagi-teki ito) Rank: C Type: Bloodline Element: Bakuton/Maruton Description: This technique allows the user to create exact replicas of solid objects desired. Example clay being formed into coins or other inanimate objects that cannot move but can still receive the chakra signal to explode. The explosion is equal to that of C1 creations. Used to deceive opponents or play jokes on others.
Character Name: Inka Hizara Technique Name: Hebi no Rendoreiku [ Snake's Rend ] Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [ Fire ] Description: Snake's Rend is executed in two steps. Fire is breathed out by the user into a long stream, no wider than the user's mouth, reaching 20m/65ft in length. The length may twist and turn around obstacles, shapped like a snake until that length is achieved. The flame itself is only hot enough to cause first degree burns and lights flamable materials instantly. However, at anytime, the user can instil a pulse of deliberately unstable chakra. This second step causes an explosion along the entire flame's length. The force of the explosion is as follows; when an individual is next to or closer than 4m/13ft to the blast they are blown clear off their feet, with the organs vitally damaged by the blast force alone, causing a painful, slow death. They would also suffer third degree burns and numerous, deep gashes. When standing at a distance of 4m/13ft to 6m/19ft the individual is still blown down, suffers minor burns and the organs are injured enough to severly impact performance then on, with minor internal bleeding and tearing occuring. Healing recomended but not fatal. After 6m/19ft the individual will be buffeted by the explosive force but may retain enough stability to not be knocked down completely. No burns will occur.
Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2014 8:43 am
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Character: Sacreia Toshigowa Technique Name: Deceptive Intention (Sagi-teki ito) Rank: C Type: Bloodline Element: Bakuton/Maruton Description: This technique allows the user to create exact replicas of solid objects desired. Example clay being formed into coins or other inanimate objects that cannot move but can still receive the chakra signal to explode. The explosion is equal to that of C1 creations. Used to deceive opponents or play jokes on others.
interesting idea. Only one object is made per usage, and you must have physically been in contact with an item to make it a true replica. Nothing larger then half a person can be created.
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Character Name: Inka Hizara Technique Name: Hebi no Rendoreiku [ Snake's Rend ] Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [ Fire ] Description: Snake's Rend is executed in two steps. Fire is breathed out by the user into a long stream, no wider than the user's mouth, reaching 20m/65ft in length. The length may twist and turn around obstacles, shapped like a snake until that length is achieved. The flame itself is only hot enough to cause first degree burns and lights flamable materials instantly. However, at anytime, the user can instil a pulse of deliberately unstable chakra. This second step causes an explosion along the entire flame's length. The force of the explosion is as follows; when an individual is next to or closer than 4m/13ft to the blast they are blown clear off their feet, with the organs vitally damaged by the blast force alone, causing a painful, slow death. They would also suffer third degree burns and numerous, deep gashes. When standing at a distance of 4m/13ft to 6m/19ft the individual is still blown down, suffers minor burns and the organs are injured enough to severly impact performance then on, with minor internal bleeding and tearing occuring. Healing recomended but not fatal. After 6m/19ft the individual will be buffeted by the explosive force but may retain enough stability to not be knocked down completely. No burns will occur.
the explosion can only be activated by another pulse of b rank chairs, counting as a offensive activation. I'm guessing the snake lasts a single post?
Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2014 9:02 am
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Character: Sacreia Toshigowa Technique Name: Deceptive Intention (Sagi-teki ito) Rank: C Type: Bloodline Element: Bakuton/Maruton Description: This technique allows the user to create exact replicas of solid objects desired. Example clay being formed into coins or other inanimate objects that cannot move but can still receive the chakra signal to explode. The explosion is equal to that of C1 creations. Used to deceive opponents or play jokes on others.
interesting idea. Only one object is made per usage, and you must have physically been in contact with an item to make it a true replica. Nothing larger then half a person can be created.
okies...
Character: Sacreia Toshigowa Technique Name: Deceptive Intention (Sagi-teki ito) Rank: C Type: Bloodline Element: Bakuton/Maruton Description: This technique allows the user to create exact replicas of solid objects desired. Example clay being formed into coins or other inanimate objects that cannot move but can still receive the chakra signal to explode. The explosion is equal to that of C1 creations. Used to deceive opponents or play jokes on others. Only one object is made per usage, and you must have physically been in contact with an item to make it a true replica. Nothing larger then half a person can be created.
Character: Sacreia Toshigowa Technique Name: Deceptive Intention (Sagi-teki ito) Rank: C Type: Bloodline Element: Bakuton/Maruton Description: This technique allows the user to create exact replicas of solid objects desired. Example clay being formed into coins or other inanimate objects that cannot move but can still receive the chakra signal to explode. The explosion is equal to that of C1 creations. Used to deceive opponents or play jokes on others.
interesting idea. Only one object is made per usage, and you must have physically been in contact with an item to make it a true replica. Nothing larger then half a person can be created.
okies...
Character: Sacreia Toshigowa Technique Name: Deceptive Intention (Sagi-teki ito) Rank: C Type: Bloodline Element: Bakuton/Maruton Description: This technique allows the user to create exact replicas of solid objects desired. Example clay being formed into coins or other inanimate objects that cannot move but can still receive the chakra signal to explode. The explosion is equal to that of C1 creations. Used to deceive opponents or play jokes on others. Only one object is made per usage, and you must have physically been in contact with an item to make it a true replica. Nothing larger then half a person can be created.
there added what u said... how does it look?
approved
Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 1:35 pm
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Character Name: Inka Hizara Technique Name: Hebi no Rendoreiku [ Snake's Rend ] Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [ Fire ] Description: Snake's Rend is executed in two steps. Fire is breathed out by the user into a long stream, no wider than the user's mouth, reaching 20m/65ft in length. The length may twist and turn around obstacles, shapped like a snake until that length is achieved. The flame itself is only hot enough to cause first degree burns and lights flamable materials instantly. However, at anytime, the user can instil a pulse of deliberately unstable chakra. This second step causes an explosion along the entire flame's length. The force of the explosion is as follows; when an individual is next to or closer than 4m/13ft to the blast they are blown clear off their feet, with the organs vitally damaged by the blast force alone, causing a painful, slow death. They would also suffer third degree burns and numerous, deep gashes. When standing at a distance of 4m/13ft to 6m/19ft the individual is still blown down, suffers minor burns and the organs are injured enough to severly impact performance then on, with minor internal bleeding and tearing occuring. Healing recomended but not fatal. After 6m/19ft the individual will be buffeted by the explosive force but may retain enough stability to not be knocked down completely. No burns will occur.
the explosion can only be activated by another pulse of b rank chairs, counting as a offensive activation. I'm guessing the snake lasts a single post?
This had been approved previously - the only thing changed is length and snake's ability to move. So are you saying the character needs to expend more 2 lots of B-ranked chakra or that it requires another post to activate? Yes, single post.
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『 ♔ 』 "The Half-Blood Prince"
Character Name: Inka Hizara Technique Name: Hebi no Rendoreiku [ Snake's Rend ] Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [ Fire ] Description: Snake's Rend is executed in two steps. Fire is breathed out by the user into a long stream, no wider than the user's mouth, reaching 20m/65ft in length. The length may twist and turn around obstacles, shapped like a snake until that length is achieved. The flame itself is only hot enough to cause first degree burns and lights flamable materials instantly. However, at anytime, the user can instil a pulse of deliberately unstable chakra. This second step causes an explosion along the entire flame's length. The force of the explosion is as follows; when an individual is next to or closer than 4m/13ft to the blast they are blown clear off their feet, with the organs vitally damaged by the blast force alone, causing a painful, slow death. They would also suffer third degree burns and numerous, deep gashes. When standing at a distance of 4m/13ft to 6m/19ft the individual is still blown down, suffers minor burns and the organs are injured enough to severly impact performance then on, with minor internal bleeding and tearing occuring. Healing recomended but not fatal. After 6m/19ft the individual will be buffeted by the explosive force but may retain enough stability to not be knocked down completely. No burns will occur.
the explosion can only be activated by another pulse of b rank chairs, counting as a offensive activation. I'm guessing the snake lasts a single post?
This had been approved previously - the only thing changed is length and snake's ability to move. So are you saying the character needs to expend more 2 lots of B-ranked chakra or that it requires another post to activate? Yes, single post.
ah yes, I see the confusion. To make the explosion happen counts as a separate activation (snake+explosion=2 activations) which requires an additional b rank of chakra due to desired effects.
I also wouldn't mind if you wanted to add a clause that allowed you, at initial creation, to extend the lifespan of the snake by spending more b rank of chakrs to a max of 4 posts (s rank)
