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 Posted: Sat May 21, 2011 1:09 pm
Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu: Iron Dome technique
Rank of Jutsu: D
Range of Jutsu: N/a
Guild-Wide? No.
Jutsu's Element: satetsu
Description: It is a metal version of the Doton jutsu... Do I really need to explain it?
Just because I know i do...
This jutsu creates a dome of Iron anywhere on the field. The Dome's Diameter is 10 feet, effectively making the volume which it covers over 500 cubic feet. Which isn't really all that much. It gives them Five feet to stand up inside the dome, and the dome is five feet from the center in every direction. So really it isn't all that large. Also, the user can either dig out from below, or even make a door opening in any side of it to get out of the dome. The user doesn't even have to be inside of the dome really.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 2:03 pm
Hinote:Apple: sure I guess. I don't really see any reason to deny this. Accepted, can you move it to the proper thread? Suna Ryuusei: a 100 foot ball boulder dropped on an opponent seems pretty strong for a C-rank jutsu doesnt it?Even if they survived they'd probably have to break out of the debris which would probably take a whole post... Raijin: The Hyoton jutsu you reference (Raikou Koori No Jutsu?) only does one thing, attacks. It also doesn't say that it is absolutely unstoppable.
If it can be dodged take out the bit that says it can't.
iSix: looks good to me. Approved, as always this can be overruled later by another Jutsu admin or anyone who has a good enough reason to change it. I will add this to the jutsu list.
TIM:
Iron Dome: looks good, just add in how strong it is. Generally defensive jutsu (purely defensive) require jutsu or taijutsu of one rank higher to destroy. It would be one rank weaker to katon jutsu though.
Just put in a bit that you have to be able to see where the dome is being formed to prevent godmodding.
Quote: 7. Anyone can create custom jutsus here, but you must be at least chuunin level before you can learn jutsus unique to your character
I just thought I'd bring this up, you can have a personal jutsu lower than C-rank, but you must be a chuunin to learn it. (see first post of the thread)
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 2:17 pm
Your Rank: Genin Name of Jutsu: Iron Dome technique Rank of Jutsu: D Range of Jutsu: N/a Guild-Wide? No. Jutsu's Element: satetsu Description: This jutsu creates a dome of Iron anywhere on the field. The Dome's Diameter is 10 feet, effectively making the volume which it covers over 500 cubic feet. Which isn't really all that much. It gives them Five feet to stand up inside the dome, and the dome is five feet from the center in every direction. So really it isn't all that large. Also, the user can either dig out from below, or even make a door opening in any side of it to get out of the dome. The user doesn't even have to be inside of the dome really. Because it is made of solid iron, it takes A Katon technique of D rank ( Within reason ) to destroy, and any other type of attack of atleast C Rank. Quote: Quote: 7. Anyone can create custom jutsus here, but you must be at least chuunin level before you can learn jutsus unique to your character I just thought I'd bring this up, you can have a personal jutsu lower than C-rank, but you must be a chuunin to learn it. (see first post of the thread) ... FFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU---
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 2:23 pm
Tim: you can make it defend to a katon of D-rank. My wording was unclear, what I meant was it should be one rank weaker to katon jutsu than it is to other jutsu, I can see how you misunderstood. In fact, forcing you to give it a weakness of one E-rank katon jutsu is just plain mean and ruins the jutsu. sorry for the misunderstanding
Do you still want it to be personal? Honestly I think this jutsu isn't worth it, especially since it's so basic.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 9:55 am
Edited
And yeah, Because if anyone else is a satetsu user, and i come into contact with them, I want to be able to use this against them, or if someone has fought a satetsu user, they can't know any of Yukio's techniques.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 2:02 pm
Allright, I won't tell you what you can or can't waste your personal jutsu on.
Accepted, put it in your vault
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 2:07 pm
Edit: these are guild-wide btw...
Name of Jutsu: Infestation
Rank of Jutsu: A
element: Bug
Description: If used on a corpse, the special Aburame Jutsu Infestation can be used to set an effective trap. The Aburame must make contact with the target corpse, animal or human, for 3 turns. During these turns the Aburame is pouring bugs into the body to build a temporary nest. The aburame is also supplying a temporary source of chakra. The temporary nest allows the kikaichuu a home. In return, if a ninja attempts to reclaim the body the Kikaichuu burst through the body and attach to the target, draining chakra. The release is so forceful that the host is rendered unrecognizable.
Name of Jutsu: Insect nuisance
Rank of Jutsu: D
element: Bug
Range: 1 yard around user
Requires:Must Know bug gathering technique
Description: The bug-user forms chakra the same as the bug gathering technique. They then tap a target, and the chakra forms a light web on the area about 3 inches in diameter. It takes the form of a normal spiderweb, though it is very light and hard to see. It draws nearby bugs to the target for 5 posts. This causes no more damage than a several bugbites, and makes the targets movement more limited. Someone who is observant enough, or familiar with bugs could probably notice the behavior of the bugs and use them to find the target. Web cannot be easily removed without water. If removed, the bugs will simply circle wherever the web is.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 2:21 pm
Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu:
Iron Whip creation and manipulation
Rank of Jutsu:
D
Range of Jutsu:
5ft
Guild-Wide?
Personal
Jutsu's Element:
Satetsu
Description:
Through this technique, for a total of ten posts, The user can use their iron sand to create a whipe that is manipulatable, and made completely from their sand that provides one action, then disapates back into iron sand. ( Such as whiping someone and disappating, wrapping around an ankle and slamming someone to the ground, or restraining someone's hands making them unable to prefrom jutsu the next post )
This technique is mainly used for combat in which the user is facing multiple opponents, and can create a whip without having to weild it.
Wait, what do you mean waste? there is a limit now?
RP Sample:
Yukio stood in the field, looking around at all of the targets which stood on posts. They weren't much, just paper targets with everything covered except the bull's eye on them. This was precision training, not learning the technique. Yukio smiled, making quick handsigns. " Iron whip creation and manipulation technique! " He said, quickly turning and swinging one of his arms, a whip appearing infront of one of the targets and whipping the bull's eye perfectly. turning Yukio quickly swung his arm again, the first whip turning back into iron sand and a second appearing infront of the next target, whipping the target, putting a slashmark through the paper from it sliding. Standing up straight, the whip disappeared into iron sand like the first. Yukio shook his head, shighing. " Great, I still can't aim well while in motion. "
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 1:49 pm
Your Rank:
Genin
Name of Jutsu:
Advanced Clone Jutsu
Rank of Jutsu:
C-A [Treated as a B rank for learning purposes]
Range of Jutsu:
N/A
Guild-Wide?
Village Specific[Otogakure]
Jutsu's Element:
N/A
Description:
This technique was developed by a loyal shinobi native to Kariko Village though he never actually mastered the technique, sucumbing to a combination of tuberculosis and pneumonia. By manipulating a larger amount of chakra to create a clone, the user is able to give it the ability to repair itself from damage done against it. While the clone CANNOT repair their entire body, they can reconstruct a lost limb though the amount of damage that can repaired is based on the chakra applied. A direct attack cannot destroy this clone even if the damage is immediately fatal however if nothing is left of the clone it cannot repair itself. Otherwise the clone follows the same Bunshin rules.
Follow this chart for the extent of damage that can be repaired;
C-Ranked: The clone can regenerate large gashes
B-Ranked: A single lost limb can be regenerated or severe gashes
A-Ranked: Two limbs can be regenerated
Your Rank:
Genin
Name of Jutsu:
Presence Detection Technique
Rank of Jutsu:
C-Rank
Range of Jutsu:
40 meters
Guild-Wide?
Clan Specific[Ushio]
Jutsu's Element:
N/A
Description:
The orginal technique was known by both the Second and Fourth Hokage but was believed to be lost after the death of the latter. Later, a similar technique was developed by the Ushio Clan By placing their finger on any surface the user extended a small amount of chakra into the ground where it would spread, undetectable, like roots from a plant. In actuality, these 'roots' act like an exterior nervous system and pick up on distant vibrations allowing the user to detect any movement on the surface they are in contact with. Due to an Ushio unparalled computing ability and the extensive connectivity between their nervous and chakuratory system they are able to determine what type of creature[whether it is humanoid, size, weight] within a few seconds. Though it is learned as a C-Rank jutsu it only requires a single chakra point every four posts.
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 10:27 am
Tim: I don't think there's a defined limit, but don't expect to be running around with 20 personal jutsu either. If it get's rediculous we'll cut you off.
Iron whip: It only lasts for 10 posts and only gets one use? one or the other would be fine. Make it one or the other and I don't see much reason to deny this.
Martin: Downpour Clown: I think the name is a typo, but if these are clown versions of yourself I guess I can't hold it against you... though it's a bit silly...
We are trying to avoid jutsu that level with your character, and weed out the already existing ones that do, so on that alone I have to say this jutsu cannot work as is.
The only bunshin that can survive attacks are genjutsu bunshin (that cannot actually attack) and the doton bunshin which take two blows to destroy.
the C-rank version can work, two hits to destroy the bunshin completely.
You can make it D-rank if you remove the ability for the bunshin to perform suiton jutsu.
Also please don't just say "like the mizu bunshin" since that forces people to go search up the original bunshin for more description. Write it so that it says exactly what it does right where you can see it. Make Mizu bunshin a prerequisite.
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 5:51 pm
Hikaro_rin Tim: I don't think there's a defined limit, but don't expect to be running around with 20 personal jutsu either. If it get's rediculous we'll cut you off. Iron whip: It only lasts for 10 posts and only gets one use? one or the other would be fine. Make it one or the other and I don't see much reason to deny this. No ,it allows me to make multiple whips, but a single whip only lasts for a single post. Think of it like an ability that allows you to make multiple whips, but only one at a time, and they disappear quickly.
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 9:27 pm
Ummm... can I get an RP sample? I don't really get what you mean...
Martin: I didn't think of this earlier, but just make it one bunshin per use. It will be treated like any other bunshin technique where you can create up to three bunshin (per use) by paying the chakra cost per clone.
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Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 6:07 pm
Your Rank:Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Sound recollection
Rank of Jutsu: C
Range of Jutsu: The range of the otosan
Guild-Wide? Anyone with the otosan, so guild wide.
Jutsu's Element: Otosan Clan jutsu
Description:
THis technique is rather peculiar in that it actually recalls lost sounds. Every thing that makes a sound to an Otosan member leaves a ghost in their Otosan. Using chakra, A clan member can recall the "ghosts" left behind to replay a situation for up to an hour before his arrival. It would be like stepping outside of time itself and viewing the events as they happened without being affected by any of it.
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Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 6:16 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 6:27 am
editted and added another technique to save space
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