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First off, I think the battling starts up too quick, though you do have a reason for this. There are just a few problems with the battles. In one battle, I saw 3 dodges by your Pokemon by moves that have a very high hit percentage. Generally you want to avoid any dodging in missions, because then you give yourself an unfair advantage over your opponent. I also don't like how you have Noctowl hit the ceiling and fall to the floor. You can just pretend it's a high ceiling. The only area factor we like to see that actually affect the battle is the weather. The last thing is that Psychic will not damage Houndoom, as it is part Dark.

*Hunter pops out of a trash can*
Me: I'm here!

Hiyas! What are you doing in a trash can?
*Puts head inside another empty trash can and falls in*
@_@...Oww....
*Ninetales knocks over the trash can and I climb out*

*Yoshi puts a couple of holes in the trash can*
Yoshi:This is my base inside the base... ninja
Me:Freaky....
*Yoshi puts the lid on as a door and peeks out through one of the holes*

Ninetales: I think they zoned out...

Yes......

*we sit on the couch*

*SL starts talking in her sleep*
Me:No.....stop chasing me you chocalate bunnies! xp
*Yoshi pops out from trash can*
Yoshi:ATTACK THE CHOCOLATE BUNNIES!!!!AHHHHHH!!!!!!!! scream
*Flys through the HQ shooting random hyperbeams all over the place*

*Rides into Aqua*
Me: Howdy Aqua.

Me: How's it going Hunter?
*Grabs a Coke*