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 Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:27 pm
Very nice start so far, man. A few punctuation errors here and there, but not too bad. I don't quite understadn everything that's going on because I didn't read the other story, but that's for another time, right? xd :
If you don't mind, could I be in this one? I don't have to have an important role, but it'd be cool if I were in it to some extent.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:32 pm
Downed Very nice start so far, man. A few punctuation errors here and there, but not too bad. I don't quite understadn everything that's going on because I didn't read the other story, but that's for another time, right? xd : If you don't mind, could I be in this one? I don't have to have an important role, but it'd be cool if I were in it to some extent. Make Mark Kill his cousin xd
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 2:02 pm
Aww Koosei and fs had kids how sweet. Love the names .Don't know why but I think I have read them somewhere before rofl
Loved the chapter.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 2:25 pm
Nice chapter. I wonder where you got the names for the kids from. wink
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 2:33 pm
@Fish - Ah that would have been good to, I didn't think of that! Don't worry no Fish juniors you haven't found anyone yet wink
@Downed - Thanks, yeah my grammer hasn't been on par like usual thanks for pointing that out. I can see why you are confused, but you won't be to badly, maybe, as the story progresses but who knows will have to wait and see. I have a role for you I am adding a few new people in this time around and yu were already on the list so no worries (it isn't for a little while though)
@Sauvie - Forgot you two are cousins twisted
@Godstone & Masamune - XD Everyone who doesn't know where I got the names from are sitting here thinking WTF? Thanks for the feedback though!
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 2:35 pm
he he he Possible Mark klls Aaron scene twisted
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:50 pm
Great chapter.
Cant wait for more.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 5:00 pm
Hey, I didn't notice there was a chapter three! Me knows where the names came from. ninja
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 4:30 am
Seaphron
@Sauvie - Forgot you two are cousins twisted
Well, if there is a Mark Kills Aaron scene, I want to do the killing. Why? Because it'd be more believable. twisted
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 5:56 am
Downed Seaphron
@Sauvie - Forgot you two are cousins twisted
Well, if there is a Mark Kills Aaron scene, I want to do the killing. Why? Because it'd be more believable. twisted I thnk your forgetting the summer of 05 twisted
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 7:29 pm
-Chapter Four and Five Added-
@LF - Here is your more
@Aku - VD XD
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 7:37 pm
O: Awesome.
Absolutely awesome.
THE PLOT THICKENS.
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 7:38 pm
It's picking up. It seems that this story won't just be a short little side sequel.
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 7:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 7:43 pm
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