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 Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:57 pm
Sand Ninja Kolby- lol whoops sweatdrop While walking through the village hidden in the sand kolby seen a merchant selling puppets. He walked up to the merchant and saw that he is smuggling weapons from the village hidden in the clouds. Kolby walked away in big disappointment. Kolby thought to himself *why would he be smuggling cloud village weapons, and why to the sand village*. Later that day he overheard a merchant say that the weapons from the cloud village wernt for the sand village they where for the village hidden in the mist. Kolby gathered his belongings and quickly set of on a journey to the village hidden in the clouds to deliver the news. When he got there the village leader asked him why he was trespassing on cloud village land and kolby said "the village hidden in the mist are planning on attacking you". The village leader believed him and got all his ninja prepared for battle. ALright then. I guess I can pass you. Pass!
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Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 2:36 pm
Well here it goes smile gl to me smile .
Zhegu suddenly heared a cracking noize, like something big was stepping on twigs. He noticed it was closing in to his current position the only thing blocking him and the thing that was coming closer where some thick green leaved bushes.
Before he knew it he stood eye to eye with a big white grizzly bear who was like dubble his size. The grizzle stood up on his 2 feet and gave a loud roar. Zhegu couldn't move a muscle cause he was frozen in place with sweat rolling over his fore-head.
He then noticed something was wrong with the grizzly, it's eyes where not real. That was the point he noticed he was beeing fooled.
"Come on guys this isn't funny!!" Zhegu said angry knowing he was being fooled by his 2 younger brothers, he looked as if he could punch them in the face.
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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 1:17 pm
Proscure Well here it goes smile gl to me smile . Zhegu suddenly heared a cracking noize, like something big was stepping on twigs. He noticed it was closing in to his current position the only thing blocking him and the thing that was coming closer where some thick green leaved bushes. Before he knew it he stood eye to eye with a big white grizzly bear who was like dubble his size. The grizzle stood up on his 2 feet and gave a loud roar. Zhegu couldn't move a muscle cause he was frozen in place with sweat rolling over his fore-head. He then noticed something was wrong with the grizzly, it's eyes where not real. That was the point he noticed he was beeing fooled. "Come on guys this isn't funny!!" Zhegu said angry knowing he was being fooled by his 2 younger brothers, he looked as if he could punch them in the face.
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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 3:12 pm
np smile I always get that when It's already past the time I had to go to bed razz
If there are any more errors pls tell me these were all I could find.
Zhegu suddenly heard a cracking noise, like something big was stepping on twigs. He noticed it was closing in to his current position the only thing blocking him and the thing that was coming closer where some thick green leaved bushes.
Before he knew it he stood eye to eye with a big white grizzly bear that was like double his size. The grizzle stood up on his 2 feet and gave a loud roar. Zhegu couldn't move a muscle because he was frozen in place with sweat rolling over his fore-head.
He then noticed something was wrong with the grizzly, its eyes were not real. That was the point he noticed he was being fooled.
"Come on guys this isn't funny!!" Zhegu said angry knowing he was being fooled by his 2 younger brothers; he looked as if he could punch them in the face.
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:16 pm
Proscure np smile I always get that when It's already past the time I had to go to bed razz If there are any more errors pls tell me these were all I could find. Zhegu suddenly heard a cracking noise, like something big was stepping on twigs. He noticed it was closing in to his current position the only thing blocking him and the thing that was coming closer where some thick green leaved bushes. Before he knew it he stood eye to eye with a big white grizzly bear that was like double his size. The grizzle stood up on his 2 feet and gave a loud roar. Zhegu couldn't move a muscle because he was frozen in place with sweat rolling over his fore-head. He then noticed something was wrong with the grizzly, its eyes were not real. That was the point he noticed he was being fooled. "Come on guys this isn't funny!!" Zhegu said angry knowing he was being fooled by his 2 younger brothers; he looked as if he could punch them in the face. Grizzle should be Grizzly. Its should be it's. And fore-head should be forehead. Other than that, it's fine. Just make sure you spell check things before you post them when you're Rping. Pass!
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:34 pm
Okies here goes my second roleplay sample try for a long time... sooo yeah.. tell me my mistakes and i have no problem with being retrained in rping if i must.
Le Sample.
Daemon walked through his villages street looking around taking in the sheer beauty of it all. It was a nice sunny day and everything was going well. Until he stumbled over a rock and fell flat on his face. "I hope no body saw that... im trying to become a great ninja and trip over rocks". he scanned the empty street "WHEW... no ones around... that i know". He slowly stood up and checked himself to make sure he didnt rip anything.
"Well i think im good. I think...". Daemon Slowly walked over and sat down on a bench and stared off into space. He thought to himself One day ill be an Anbu black ops and be able to protect everyone i care for.
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 6:09 pm
A cloaked figure ran along the trail as the gaurds yelled behind him the blue moon above was shining brilliantly... it might have been harder to get away but the blizzard made it quite dificult for his followers to keep an eye on him... he rounded a corner at the end of the path jetting down the ally way the stones on either side freezing over by unseen methods... he stopped as he hit a dead end ... seconds passed and the followers had caught up and now had him trapped in...
"Well I thought you never would catch up..."
The gaurds drew there swords in anger as they held there ground... finnaly the main gaurd waved his hand signaling the others to attack.... in an instant two of the gaurds froze dead in there tracks starting from there feet.. quickly moving up to there waists... the cloaked man held a hand sign ... a gust of wind blew through the air blowing the hood back revealing a handsome young man his blue eye's glowing like the moon
"Do you wish to continue?"
The gaurds began to faulter mentally... even inch backwards.. they were no match for an S-rank criminal they themselves wern't even ninja and here they were fighting the last of a legendary bloodline from snow village there was no chance... the frozen gaurds were released in an instant with the ice exploding into small dust fragments... the cloaked man along with it flowing into the wind... the gaurds left dumbfounded they wandered back to tell of there failure...
((I'm a long time rper ;D ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 10:21 pm
Corbenik Ovan Okies here goes my second roleplay sample try for a long time... sooo yeah.. tell me my mistakes and i have no problem with being retrained in rping if i must. Le Sample. Daemon walked through his villages street looking around taking in the sheer beauty of it all. It was a nice sunny day and everything was going well. Until he stumbled over a rock and fell flat on his face. "I hope no body saw that... im trying to become a great ninja and trip over rocks". he scanned the empty street "WHEW... no ones around... that i know". He slowly stood up and checked himself to make sure he didnt rip anything. "Well i think im good. I think...". Daemon Slowly walked over and sat down on a bench and stared off into space. He thought to himself One day ill be an Anbu black ops and be able to protect everyone i care for. looks ok, though some of your I's need to be capatalized.i see nothing else particularly wrong with it. I PASS YOU! 4laugh
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 10:25 pm
Kaito 801 A cloaked figure ran along the trail as the gaurds yelled behind him the blue moon above was shining brilliantly... it might have been harder to get away but the blizzard made it quite dificult for his followers to keep an eye on him... he rounded a corner at the end of the path jetting down the ally way the stones on either side freezing over by unseen methods... he stopped as he hit a dead end ... seconds passed and the followers had caught up and now had him trapped in...
"Well I thought you never would catch up..."
The gaurds drew there swords in anger as they held there ground... finnaly the main gaurd waved his hand signaling the others to attack.... in an instant two of the gaurds froze dead in there tracks starting from there feet.. quickly moving up to there waists... the cloaked man held a hand sign ... a gust of wind blew through the air blowing the hood back revealing a handsome young man his blue eye's glowing like the moon
"Do you wish to continue?"
The gaurds began to faulter mentally... even inch backwards.. they were no match for an S-rank criminal they themselves wern't even ninja and here they were fighting the last of a legendary bloodline from snow village there was no chance... the frozen gaurds were released in an instant with the ice exploding into small dust fragments... the cloaked man along with it flowing into the wind... the gaurds left dumbfounded they wandered back to tell of there failure...((I'm a long time rper ;D )) i see some godmodding by using these guards. try doing a post with just your character.
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:17 pm
((Here is an rp example. Junta is the character I'm creating for the guild.))
"I was bored..." Junta nipped at the creases of his lip, he had really done it this time and there wasn't any real excuse. Abandoning a mission typically leads to either expulsion or outright corporal punishment. Inwardly, he smiled to himself. He somewhat found himself enjoying the fiasco that had accompanied his uneventful return to the village.
"What should I do with you? The council is breathing down my neck, they're talking about stripping you of your rank. Do you think this kind of crap if funny?! You're a Jounin, how would you like to be a Genin again?"
A genin? Are you kidding me? Junta shifted in his spot, the thought was unnerving. It'd been years since he'd relieved himself of that wretched rank and has since enjoyed the solitude and respect of his higher position. He lowered his head slightly, but held his tongue. His expression said it all...
"I can't get you out of this, but there is another way." The kage ran his hand through the wire-like strands of his facial hair. He was an elderly man with a soft heart, but a face of stone, "We need Jounin to mentor the latest academy graduates."
'Genin?!' Junta's face curled into a snarl or perhaps just a look of disgust. Either way, he was clearly dismayed by the latest subject, "You can't be serious..." He muttered.
"The council believes that it'll take that chip off your shoulder. Teach you to think with the basics and act like a team. Honestly, I'd prefer to have you banished!" His voice was booming and his face as intimidating as ever, but the kage had a flaw. His eyes could never lie...
'You crazy old man... You talked them into giving me another chance, didn't you?' Junta thought in silence. He sighed as he carelessly scratched the back of his neck, "You 'do' know that I hate kids, right?"
The old man smirked, "They probably won't like you either. Now get out of my office, you've got to make preparations for all your wonderful new missions. Like cutting grass and finding lost poodles." He bellowed with evil laughter, clearly pleased with his heinous victory.
'I really hate you, old man...' Junta grumbled, forcing himself to bite the kunai and bow respectfully before storming out of the room. The day was really off to a 'fantastic' start...
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 1:55 pm
((Dont see how you can god mod with exp characters but your the boss biggrin ))
Ashida left the academy with a blank expression on his face as he closed his eye's and sighed thinking about the past day evaluating it and proscessing things... after a few minuets of walking he reached an open field with a large tree in the middle of the area it was dead and withered... he sat down with his legs crossed as he pulled out a large scroll and layed it on the ground and unravled it... pulling out a black case the size of his forarm from his bag opeining it revealing 3 brushs and a small black ink bowl... the paper had the drawing of the old tree that was in front of him... Ashida picked up a large brush and dipped it in the ink slowly placing it on the paper drawing the branches back from once they were broken... after an hour he placed it in the grass and pulled out a smaller brush drawing small cherry blossoms on the tree and surrounding them also replacing grass and roots..
"There...."
He said with a smild as he looked upon the tree drawn in front of him with a new found beauty... he stood up looking at the real tree
'Now to finish this work...
He thought as he formed a few hand signs stopping with the dragon seal... the drawing began to glow ...a large flash erupted blinding everyone near the area for seconds... as Ashida reopened his eye's... the tree that was once withered... now held beauty that it hadn't in long years... rolling up the scroll he walked up to the tree placing it in a hole that was naturally there so that it would be safe from harm.. packing up he began to walk away this time with a smile... another restored to former beauty ...now the next
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 3:42 am
Ugh so sorry for the wait..
Both pass!
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 5:43 pm
((Kizamotou is my character that I am going to apply with to this guild, so I suppose I should use him here...))
Kizamotou's electric blue eyes squinted until his eyes were merely lines upon his visage, despite it being afternoon. The dusk light paraded over the buildings and streets, where many young kids were jumping around and running for fun. If only they knew what it was like to be a ninja, to be the ones that guard them everyday... Kizamotou thought, not feeling hatred towards the youth, but rather a jealousy at their simplicity. Of course, he loved being a ninja, but sometimes it frustrated him.
Nonetheless, Kizamotou continued on down the streets. The purplish maroon sky overheard soon disappeared behind a few curtains that had been hung over an alleyway. Kizamotou meandered through the slim alleys, this course being the one he was so used to, to get home. He remembered his Academy days, when he was merely a young school kid. Or, at least as close to a school kid as you can be while still having a ninja status and the heaving weight of soon protecting the entire village when you grow older.
Kizamotou was thirteen now, a full-fledged teenager. He was hoping maybe, soon, to finally take up the idea of becoming more than a young student. He flicked a strand of bright reddish orange hair out of his face, sighing. Yea, he thought, maybe soon.
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 7:19 am
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 4:42 pm
[Oh I hope this is right. I post a sample here before I do anything else, right? I hope so .__.]
Kasandera sighed as she brought the bowl of ramen, which was now simply juice, to her lips, drinking it all down. After setting the bowl down she stood. "Thank you," she told the man behind the counter before she left the building. The ramen had really hit the spot after a tough mission. Well no, it wasn't that it was tough, but it had been so boring. All she did was sit and watch over a house, a house.
The owner of the house had insisted on recruiting a ninja to watch over her procious posesions while she was away. Nothing had even happened! So Kasandera had spent her whole day, which could've been used for training, watching a house that wasn't even under any danger. She was itching to fight someone.
Suddenly she heard a snapping twig and she grinned. Thank God! She though quickly sliding out a kunai as she turned. "Hah!" She said exclaimed when she had fully turned around. To her dissapointment though, no one was there.
Feeling eyes on her Kasandera's dark green eyes narrowed and she took a look around. She became embarresed when she saw that many people were giving her strange looks. Cheeks burning she put the kunai away and turned, starting to walk towards the exit of the village. "Training it is," she sighed out, tucking a strang black hair that had fallen in her face.
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