The first skill should be Rank C, the Weapon creation for any other element is either Rank C or B so even though it's iron sand, its either higher in rank, or weaker in frame.
The second skill I have worries about, I'd like to consult Yo-ko.
The third skill I like, however please be specific as to how big the animal can be, and how small it can be.
Alright, not a problem. With the weapons, I wasn't sure what the common rank was so I just threw out a random letter xD I figured E would be too low.
Uhm, for the animal size; So, the base chakra prices are as follows: (Of course, enough iron sand/gold dust will also be required) B is the minimum for any size up to that of a large Lion. A encompasses all animals between a Lion and a small dragon? S anything larger than that will require a lot of iron sand also. How does that sound?
Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 4:06 pm
Mental Neko-Hime
Okay then,
Iron Weapon Creation - Approved at Rank C
Sentient Animal Creation - With sand amounts added, this will be allowed. Max of 2 out at a time, Approved.
Iron Sand: Threading Spikes - How strong are these spikes? I see a situation where you use this technique, and a shinobi is surrounded by this sand, can they uses Taijutsu and Bukijutsu to snap the needles with strong blows to the sides of the needles?
Sentient Animal Creation - With sand amounts added, this will be allowed. Max of 2 out at a time, Approved.
Iron Sand: Threading Spikes - How strong are these spikes? I see a situation where you use this technique, and a shinobi is surrounded by this sand, can they uses Taijutsu and Bukijutsu to snap the needles with strong blows to the sides of the needles?
That's the max number of animals that I imagined using, It'd be too difficult to maintain many more than two anyway ^_^
With the spikes, that's how I imagined they'd be countered. In the post I said something along the lines of; the longer the spikes, the thinner and more fragile they are. So they're sharp, but easily broken because they're very thin. Like I said, they're being formed from a base ball of Iron sand that's about the size of a baseball, so if they're ten feet long, they can reach further, but they can also be broken more easily because they'll be very very thin. I can add something along the lines of; "the longer the spikes are, the less sturdy they become, thus being broken by a blunt force of B-rank or higher. However if the spikes exceed 5 feet in length, they can be broken by a blunt force of C-rank or higher."
Edit :: If you're a little worried about how the technique may be used, feel free to deny it, I don't really care about that technique as much as the other two anyway ^_^
Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 5:13 am
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Communicate with species Rank: N/A Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Link from class "For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character." The ability to communicate with Ryoku's hawk by understanding what the hawk says. Also allowing the hawk to speak basic English only when transformed into a human temporary form.
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Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 5:38 am
Kazuraii
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Communicate with species Rank: N/A Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Link from class "For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character." The ability to communicate with Ryoku's hawk by understanding what the hawk says. Also allowing the hawk to speak basic English only when transformed into a human temporary form.
approved
Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 8:34 am
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Oil Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu Element: Kageton Description: Allows the user to cast any of his Nara clan techniques for an additional 15 chakra cost per use. In doing so laces them with a dark flammable substance that is easily masked in the shadows. Once this is done the path of the shadows it had taken and is currently can now be caught fire. Although the fire will dispel the shadow jutsu due to the light it will emit. Any form of fire can catch the shadow or path on fire streaming to wherever the shadow has reached even on a person. Once done the fire burns in that locations or locations for the duration of one post after being caught.
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Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 10:57 am
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Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Oil Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu Element: Kageton Description: Allows the user to cast any of his Nara clan techniques for an additional 15 chakra cost per use. In doing so laces them with a dark flammable substance that is easily masked in the shadows. Once this is done the path of the shadows it had taken and is currently can now be caught fire. Although the fire will dispel the shadow jutsu due to the light it will emit. Any form of fire can catch the shadow or path on fire streaming to wherever the shadow has reached even on a person. Once done the fire burns in that locations or locations for the duration of one post after being caught.
increase cost by 20 chakra, and your golden. approved
Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 1:57 pm
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Deep Shadow Evasion Rank: B Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: The Nara clan user can enter his own shadow as a means to quickly escape or advance on a target near a local shadow in the immediate area (Half mile range, within thread) This is an alternative to the elemental or non elemental body flicker technique. The reason for the higher chakra rank is the user is able to stay hidden in the local shadows for one additional post after entering before having to emerge in one of the local shadows. This is also to prevent being auto killed if all shadows are expelled in the area. The user has the ability to use some clan ability while hidden in the shadows.
Restrictions Follows all rules explained by the body flicker explanation. Limit to one use of nara clan jutsu while hidden inside this jutsu per battle.
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Leviathan Rank: s or s+ (which ever is more fitting.) Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. Not only does the jutsu create a water version of this but also the giant Leviathan is at first secretly a shadow version of the same thing. Two creatures of each element working together. Once the shadow Leviathan is discovered as a beast of its own they separate striking individually against whatever is deemed a foe in their eyes. (What the user targets) They are able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower.
Restrictions and weaknesses: The water Leviathan can be destroyed by a jutsu of equal rank, suitons weakness element 1 rank lower, suitons strength element 1 rank higher. The shadow Leviathan can be destroyed by a brilliant source of light, Light from an S rank fire jutsu or something that creates a blinding flash. Both Leviathans disolve after a five post duration. The jutsu can only be used once per battle This jutsu takes 2 posts to execute.
(Extra, If the Leviathans both could have their own single move that can cause A rank damage but only used once per summoning) Water Leviathan - Water Beam: The water Leviathan shoots a jet of extremely sharp water capable of blowing holes through trees and things of the sort. Shadow Leviathan - shadow Lunge: The Shadow Leviathan launches out of its own shadow at the target trying to land a blunt hard hit. Much like shadow sewing technique but much more blunt and fast. Would typically sent a target flying out of breath or possibly causing broken bones.
Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi Type: Tamer Trait from Familiar (Chunin - Jounin) Description: Hearing of a cat, can hear at least a thread away. Also because of the hearing of a cat: A cats sound sensitivity might be one of the reasons some people think they have supernatural powers. This may be why the Egyptians treated them as Gods they believed the cats had powers. This is probably in relation to how a cat can sense something coming because of their extremely sensitive hearing. For example they can hear ultrasonic sounds before a noisy event happens like an earthquake. This is due to their hearing being amplified four times greater than a humans.
Their inner ear is responsible for their remarkable sense of balance. The tiny chambers and canals of the interior of the ear are lined with millions of sensitive hairs that contain fluid and floating crystals. When a cat changes its physical position, these hairs detect the slightest movement of the fluid and crystals and rapidly send signals to the cats brain. This gives the cats brain accurate readings on the cats body position so their muscles can compensate helping the cat keep his perfect sense of balance. Which explains why cats almost always land on their feet.
(meaning that with the hearing my balance is better then usual. and that the hearing is almost a knowing when something is supposed to happen before it does by sounds that are not usually picked up by others without this hearing. on large scales. (aka huge tailed beast coming in etc.....) hope it helps)
Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2014 9:35 am
Kazuraii
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Deep Shadow Evasion Rank: B Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: The Nara clan user can enter his own shadow as a means to quickly escape or advance on a target near a local shadow in the immediate area (Half mile range, within thread) This is an alternative to the elemental or non elemental body flicker technique. The reason for the higher chakra rank is the user is able to stay hidden in the local shadows for one additional post after entering before having to emerge in one of the local shadows. This is also to prevent being auto killed if all shadows are expelled in the area. The user has the ability to use some clan ability while hidden in the shadows.
Restrictions Follows all rules explained by the body flicker explanation. Limit to one use of nara clan jutsu while hidden inside this jutsu per battle.
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Leviathan Rank: s or s+ (which ever is more fitting.) Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. Not only does the jutsu create a water version of this but also the giant Leviathan is at first secretly a shadow version of the same thing. Two creatures of each element working together. Once the shadow Leviathan is discovered as a beast of its own they separate striking individually against whatever is deemed a foe in their eyes. (What the user targets) They are able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower.
Restrictions and weaknesses: The water Leviathan can be destroyed by a jutsu of equal rank, suitons weakness element 1 rank lower, suitons strength element 1 rank higher. The shadow Leviathan can be destroyed by a brilliant source of light, Light from an S rank fire jutsu or something that creates a blinding flash. Both Leviathans disolve after a five post duration. The jutsu can only be used once per battle This jutsu takes 2 posts to execute.
(Extra, If the Leviathans both could have their own single move that can cause A rank damage but only used once per summoning) Water Leviathan - Water Beam: The water Leviathan shoots a jet of extremely sharp water capable of blowing holes through trees and things of the sort. Shadow Leviathan - shadow Lunge: The Shadow Leviathan launches out of its own shadow at the target trying to land a blunt hard hit. Much like shadow sewing technique but much more blunt and fast. Would typically sent a target flying out of breath or possibly causing broken bones.
Shadow evasion: only one kageton tech, c rank and lower, may be used while hidden in the shadow.
Leviathan is still a little confusing. How many shapes does this tech make?
Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi Type: Tamer Trait from Familiar (Chunin - Jounin) Description: Hearing of a cat, can hear at least a thread away. Also because of the hearing of a cat: A cats sound sensitivity might be one of the reasons some people think they have supernatural powers. This may be why the Egyptians treated them as Gods they believed the cats had powers. This is probably in relation to how a cat can sense something coming because of their extremely sensitive hearing. For example they can hear ultrasonic sounds before a noisy event happens like an earthquake. This is due to their hearing being amplified four times greater than a humans.
Their inner ear is responsible for their remarkable sense of balance. The tiny chambers and canals of the interior of the ear are lined with millions of sensitive hairs that contain fluid and floating crystals. When a cat changes its physical position, these hairs detect the slightest movement of the fluid and crystals and rapidly send signals to the cats brain. This gives the cats brain accurate readings on the cats body position so their muscles can compensate helping the cat keep his perfect sense of balance. Which explains why cats almost always land on their feet.
(meaning that with the hearing my balance is better then usual. and that the hearing is almost a knowing when something is supposed to happen before it does by sounds that are not usually picked up by others without this hearing. on large scales. (aka huge tailed beast coming in etc.....) hope it helps)
Pick which natural weapon you want, you don't get all of them.
Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi Type: Tamer Trait from Familiar (Chunin - Jounin) Description: Hearing of a cat, can hear at least a thread away. Also because of the hearing of a cat: A cats sound sensitivity might be one of the reasons some people think they have supernatural powers. This may be why the Egyptians treated them as Gods they believed the cats had powers. This is probably in relation to how a cat can sense something coming because of their extremely sensitive hearing. For example they can hear ultrasonic sounds before a noisy event happens like an earthquake. This is due to their hearing being amplified four times greater than a humans.
Their inner ear is responsible for their remarkable sense of balance. The tiny chambers and canals of the interior of the ear are lined with millions of sensitive hairs that contain fluid and floating crystals. When a cat changes its physical position, these hairs detect the slightest movement of the fluid and crystals and rapidly send signals to the cats brain. This gives the cats brain accurate readings on the cats body position so their muscles can compensate helping the cat keep his perfect sense of balance. Which explains why cats almost always land on their feet.
(meaning that with the hearing my balance is better then usual. and that the hearing is almost a knowing when something is supposed to happen before it does by sounds that are not usually picked up by others without this hearing. on large scales. (aka huge tailed beast coming in etc.....) hope it helps)
Pick which natural weapon you want, you don't get all of them.
What im after is the actual hearing of a cat, but what the actual information states is the cats hearing is actually what gives them such amazing balance due to the cat ears plus the hearing, both of which my character would have. I just wanted the hearing package that natural feline information explains. Or would I have to ignore the fact it works that way and choose one?
Also just wanted to point this out as well for as to why i chose natural weaponry (meaning all)
Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
that part i highlighted there doesnt specify i must choose 1 of the natural weapons, or sences that I should be able to have all... but if that is not the way its supposed to happen then i would say it needed to maybe be added so as to not have this issue again....
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Deep Shadow Evasion Rank: B Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: The Nara clan user can enter his own shadow as a means to quickly escape or advance on a target near a local shadow in the immediate area (Half mile range, within thread) This is an alternative to the elemental or non elemental body flicker technique. The reason for the higher chakra rank is the user is able to stay hidden in the local shadows for one additional post after entering before having to emerge in one of the local shadows. This is also to prevent being auto killed if all shadows are expelled in the area. The user has the ability to use some clan ability while hidden in the shadows.
Restrictions Follows all rules explained by the body flicker explanation. Limit to one use of nara clan jutsu while hidden inside this jutsu per battle.
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Leviathan Rank: s or s+ (which ever is more fitting.) Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton/Suiton Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. Not only does the jutsu create a water version of this but also the giant Leviathan is at first secretly a shadow version of the same thing. Two creatures of each element working together. Once the shadow Leviathan is discovered as a beast of its own they separate striking individually against whatever is deemed a foe in their eyes. (What the user targets) They are able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu same rank or its weakness element one rank lower.
Restrictions and weaknesses: The water Leviathan can be destroyed by a jutsu of equal rank, suitons weakness element 1 rank lower, suitons strength element 1 rank higher. The shadow Leviathan can be destroyed by a brilliant source of light, Light from an S rank fire jutsu or something that creates a blinding flash. Both Leviathans disolve after a five post duration. The jutsu can only be used once per battle This jutsu takes 2 posts to execute.
(Extra, If the Leviathans both could have their own single move that can cause A rank damage but only used once per summoning) Water Leviathan - Water Beam: The water Leviathan shoots a jet of extremely sharp water capable of blowing holes through trees and things of the sort. Shadow Leviathan - shadow Lunge: The Shadow Leviathan launches out of its own shadow at the target trying to land a blunt hard hit. Much like shadow sewing technique but much more blunt and fast. Would typically sent a target flying out of breath or possibly causing broken bones.
Shadow evasion: only one kageton tech, c rank and lower, may be used while hidden in the shadow.
Leviathan is still a little confusing. How many shapes does this tech make?
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Deep Shadow Evasion Rank: B Type: Bloodline Element: Kageton Description: The Nara clan user can enter his own shadow as a means to quickly escape or advance on a target near a local shadow in the immediate area (Half mile range, within thread) This is an alternative to the elemental or non elemental body flicker technique. The reason for the higher chakra rank is the user is able to stay hidden in the local shadows for one additional post after entering before having to emerge in one of the local shadows. This is also to prevent being auto killed if all shadows are expelled in the area. The user has the ability to use some clan ability while hidden in the shadows.
Restrictions 1) Follows all rules explained by the body flicker explanation. 2) Limit to one use of Nara clan jutsu while hidden inside this jutsu per battle. 3) Only a rank C bloodline technique can be used while being hidden in the shadow.
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As for the Oily Shadow, I added 20 chakra
Character: Ryoku Nara Technique Name: Shadow Oil Rank: X Type: Ninjutsu Element: Kageton Description: Allows the user to cast any of his Nara clan techniques for an additional 35 chakra cost per use. In doing so laces them with a dark flammable substance that is easily masked in the shadows. Once this is done the path of the shadows it had taken and is currently can now be caught fire. Although the fire will dispel the shadow jutsu due to the light it will emit. Any form of fire can catch the shadow or path on fire streaming to wherever the shadow has reached even on a person. Once done the fire burns in that locations or locations for the duration of one post after being caught.
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The Shadow Leviathan, everything stated above but as for shapes it forms One single Leviathan formed of Water and its shadow is another single Leviathan formed of shadow, They both are their own beasts and attack the target of the users choice. For a better discription of the Leviathan.
Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi Type: Tamer Trait from Familiar (Chunin - Jounin) Description: Hearing of a cat, can hear at least a thread away. Also because of the hearing of a cat: A cats sound sensitivity might be one of the reasons some people think they have supernatural powers. This may be why the Egyptians treated them as Gods they believed the cats had powers. This is probably in relation to how a cat can sense something coming because of their extremely sensitive hearing. For example they can hear ultrasonic sounds before a noisy event happens like an earthquake. This is due to their hearing being amplified four times greater than a humans.
Their inner ear is responsible for their remarkable sense of balance. The tiny chambers and canals of the interior of the ear are lined with millions of sensitive hairs that contain fluid and floating crystals. When a cat changes its physical position, these hairs detect the slightest movement of the fluid and crystals and rapidly send signals to the cats brain. This gives the cats brain accurate readings on the cats body position so their muscles can compensate helping the cat keep his perfect sense of balance. Which explains why cats almost always land on their feet.
(meaning that with the hearing my balance is better then usual. and that the hearing is almost a knowing when something is supposed to happen before it does by sounds that are not usually picked up by others without this hearing. on large scales. (aka huge tailed beast coming in etc.....) hope it helps)
Pick which natural weapon you want, you don't get all of them.
What im after is the actual hearing of a cat, but what the actual information states is the cats hearing is actually what gives them such amazing balance due to the cat ears plus the hearing, both of which my character would have. I just wanted the hearing package that natural feline information explains. Or would I have to ignore the fact it works that way and choose one?
Also just wanted to point this out as well for as to why i chose natural weaponry (meaning all)
Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
that part i highlighted there doesnt specify i must choose 1 of the natural weapons, or sences that I should be able to have all... but if that is not the way its supposed to happen then i would say it needed to maybe be added so as to not have this issue again....
hearing: so long as it stays within the thread, your good. If you wish to gain balance, you will need another attribute. As far as weaponry, they don't specify because you choose additional weaponry per attribute.
Character: Igarashi Nobu Yutakata-Oshi Type: Tamer Trait from Familiar (Chunin - Jounin) Description: Hearing of a cat, can hear at least a thread away. Also because of the hearing of a cat: A cats sound sensitivity might be one of the reasons some people think they have supernatural powers. This may be why the Egyptians treated them as Gods they believed the cats had powers. This is probably in relation to how a cat can sense something coming because of their extremely sensitive hearing. For example they can hear ultrasonic sounds before a noisy event happens like an earthquake. This is due to their hearing being amplified four times greater than a humans.
Their inner ear is responsible for their remarkable sense of balance. The tiny chambers and canals of the interior of the ear are lined with millions of sensitive hairs that contain fluid and floating crystals. When a cat changes its physical position, these hairs detect the slightest movement of the fluid and crystals and rapidly send signals to the cats brain. This gives the cats brain accurate readings on the cats body position so their muscles can compensate helping the cat keep his perfect sense of balance. Which explains why cats almost always land on their feet.
(meaning that with the hearing my balance is better then usual. and that the hearing is almost a knowing when something is supposed to happen before it does by sounds that are not usually picked up by others without this hearing. on large scales. (aka huge tailed beast coming in etc.....) hope it helps)
Pick which natural weapon you want, you don't get all of them.
What im after is the actual hearing of a cat, but what the actual information states is the cats hearing is actually what gives them such amazing balance due to the cat ears plus the hearing, both of which my character would have. I just wanted the hearing package that natural feline information explains. Or would I have to ignore the fact it works that way and choose one?
Also just wanted to point this out as well for as to why i chose natural weaponry (meaning all)
Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
that part i highlighted there doesnt specify i must choose 1 of the natural weapons, or sences that I should be able to have all... but if that is not the way its supposed to happen then i would say it needed to maybe be added so as to not have this issue again....
hearing: so long as it stays within the thread, your good. If you wish to gain balance, you will need another attribute. As far as weaponry, they don't specify because you choose additional weaponry per attribute.
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