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 Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:13 pm
my b***h has left the building so i must move on
i think va trey ngh is next inline to get pawned
acting all rough when he soft like tampon cushion
except this b***h hops right in u dont need no pushing
they say you can see ones intent by what they say
va trey virgin boy still using his hands as his only foreplay
I can tell by ur avi u wanna be a lil wayne
Is vetyp ur dad to u gonna kiss for bird gang?
***** trying to rep bloods but the only soowoot ive seenwas his period
think the rap game depends on bums? ***** are you delarious?
haha I love when gaia people act up shyt is mad hilarious
say he wanna be chris brown but Errianna already beat u imperious
ccrrrrratttt thats for ricky
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:14 pm
hoe... go head n suck ma d**k
u redy no I rep red... cuz da blood is so thick
not only red... I rep VA n da 757
im like navigation if u tryna find heaven
I ckould use da AK or da Mac 11
Ima giv u a couple hours 2 get urself back 2gether
I beat u in a battle anyday any weather
... tryna bake me... go away heather
weezy... nah he fake n he kissed a baby in da mouth
When you smile... all I see is a d**k in ur mouth
... I rep fa da East... but VA kinda in da South
but Ima beast... so u no wat ima bout
... If I dont take a piss... there will be a drought
u ma hoe... u my girl scout
u think of da 757 u think me spittin day in n day out
... once you come in... haha deres no way out
... how old r u btw baby?
lolololol just messin wit
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 10:41 pm
Siete cinco Siete, damn *****, you're banned (not actually banned, just dissallowed to post responses like the one above, same with vtep) from the Diss The Rapper Above You sticky too until you respond with a diss that actually insults your opponent more directly. Either respond with more effort and an actual diss or don't post at all if you're planning a response like the one above. No offense.
Suggestions, talk less about yourself and focus more on dissing on your opponent. Get a variety of disses, spread them apart, like a new subject every verse, so the effect of your insults spread more deeply. Stay consistant in flow, lenghth and disses, try not to have verses all over the place, make it more neater. Don't talk about what you're going to do to someone, just insult people. Try avoiding guns, sex or homo lines. Be more creative, word play, metaphors, funny arse punchlines. This is to help you improve. Try not biting (taking someone elses' raps and using it as your own) or feeding (Taking someone elses' verse and using it against them).
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 5:58 pm
... wateva I go hard dats how I do... lol dis aint my thing
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:01 pm
Siete cinco Siete ... wateva I go hard dats how I do... lol dis aint my thing I can see that, but you can get better if you want. =P
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:02 pm
... ight im open for change n gettin better
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:03 pm
Femmunition Siete cinco Siete, damn *****, you're banned (not actually banned, just dissallowed to post responses like the one above, same with vtep) from the Diss The Rapper Above You sticky too until you respond with a diss that actually insults your opponent more directly. Either respond with more effort and an actual diss or don't post at all if you're planning a response like the one above. No offense. Suggestions, talk less about yourself and focus more on dissing on your opponent. Get a variety of disses, spread them apart, like a new subject every verse, so the effect of your insults spread more deeply. Stay consistant in flow, lenghth and disses, try not to have verses all over the place, make it more neater. Don't talk about what you're going to do to someone, just insult people. Try avoiding guns, sex or homo lines. Be more creative, word play, metaphors, funny arse punchlines. This is to help you improve. Try not biting (taking someone elses' raps and using it as your own) or feeding (Taking someone elses' verse and using it against them). im not spanish btw... just puttin 757 in ma name
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:06 pm
Other than my previous suggestions, I suggest looking at the battles around here to get a feel on what and how you can improve.
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 3:02 pm
ow ur in the same category as v
that automatically puts u out of the run with me
You said you ready for change well I am ******** dissing u p***y a** reds ima chill with blues
ur games wacks yet you said u go hard and this aint ur thing
FEM said u can get better but she forgot u aint got my swing
ur numbers 757 thats all you'll grab a year
not the mac 11 but maybe a c**k to ur rear
you'd never beat in a rap so give it all a rest
wanna talk big but you aint even got ur set on ur chest
ill be here rapping it up and youll be like vetyp
trying to get to where I am while im becoming the best
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 4:21 pm
I'm not merciful enough to spare ya Anna.
One Mortal Kombat uppercut, we name you Airianna.
Shadow Kick ya in front of your peers to show prominence.
Then rip ya heart out like Kano to establish my dominance.
And moreso, I'm more armed than Goro.
I'm so forceful. Me lose to a whore?--No!
Annihilation's my goal. I deliver humiliation.
Slice ya thoroughly like Baraka for mutilation.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:26 pm
u bein da best... dat like me bein in da KKK
u think u good... just cuz u walk my way
u B sayin all dis s**t... u can talk all day
n Ima keep spittin till ma last day
While yo dumbass forgettin wat u gon say
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 3:05 am
bullshit...i cant take this no more...ban me if you want...
lil Red Robin Hoodz thinks he can rap, thinks he's all good
but there's no way this clown could mess with the best, he's in the wrong hood
he's even in the wrong game, if you ask me
there's no way in hell this fool even beats "Air" E
see I dont need no "boys" I dont need no "protection"
all I need is for you kids to get to ******** steppin
only one of us can walk up the stairway to heaven
and believe me, it's no one from the 757
you might as well say 747 coz you jet pretty fast
this is the first rap I spit against you and hope it wont be the last
bow the ******** out now, you're slow, a good game is fast
you need to step your game up and quit living in the past
more bars for me, the more I do the less I have
to listen to this bullshit about "757 only repped by man"
in hopes you get this through your skull i'll even spit my plan
in small monosyllabic words just so YOU can understand
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 2:25 pm
... Im clearin out yall niggas out like proactive
... U neva mention where u from... so u obviosly not as active
I am da best... da sexiest... and da most attractive
dis ***** remind me of a voice recordin
all talk no action... n u expect a sum rewardin
I rap till my satasfaction... ***** yo a** borin
if u listen carefully... u can hear me snoring
my swag out da sky... it used 2 flyin... now its soarin
Im original like a custom liscence plate
tell me yo last date... ontop my head I can think of 8
***** dont tell me sum s**t u just create
deres nutin 2 relate... I am da best... no debate
craka dont hate... I come ova dere n crack yo face
I get stand still money yo whack a** paper chace
u suck gorrila d**k... just realize and embrace
for all da white ppl... u just a disgrace
if u want sum beef come to 4421 Ridgemont Court
p***y I no u... come wit no support
I break yo face n pop dat nasty a** wart
dere is no other way... dis yo only resort
Ima just meet u ... n beat yo a** on da interstate
infact ima wait at my gate
whats urs... VA is my estate
... u whack a** p***y... wats yo conjugate
u no what I rep... u no my city and state
u shud join a commitee to help get urself strate
I am da next Biggie... u gon see me... just wait
cmon... u no where my place... no excuse
... hope I dont get charges for child abuse
I dont need my ak or mac 11
... u gon get killed soon as u step in da 757
I hope u chrisitan so I ckould beat ya a** in heaven
(no offence 2 God) but I wan get 2 steppin
U redy no what Im reppin
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Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 3:43 pm
***** ur shyts ******** up like please insert cartridge
you aint runnin shyt except 4 when your heads on the market
you never fought a battle u the snitch watchin from ur apartment
Never want beef when u see a ***** open up the glove compartment
You like to talk bigger crap than me repping your 757
but what the ******** are words to semi automatic weapon
You rep that red and I'm ******** reppin all that bull s**t
you can keep going i realized that crap is for the useless
I can support my own and I dont need fake friends
you gettin ******** in the a** sayin, "My friends love me in the end" (rear end)
Men get blood in but you get ******** in the a**s
realize u aint with gang bangers but butt ******** child rapist
You have ur street grad. picture with u runin the streets like a trans
the pic. takers version showin u runnin on the trip from the pimp hand
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