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 Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:02 pm
I'm a little hesitant, since it interferes with the plot. If we have the Queen fall on our deck, we'd have to make it a big deal, and it'd derail what's going on. It wouldn't be a terrible thing, if we can make it not so... Intrusive, is that the right word? I don't want to sound harsh or anything. Cross overs could be a lot of fun!
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:02 pm
And sorry about the meeting! I was at callbacks for the play, and I thought it was going to be on Wednesday, but he pushed it back and I forgot to tell you and POOP. O_o
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:10 pm
OH SHOOT! D:
Daylight saving time...Missed a clock.
Got the wrong time..
I'm on now...Dx
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:08 am
That's fine guys~
But seriously, tell me when you're not available for next weekend ASAP please. ♥
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Princess Angelishia Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 6:24 pm
I am neutral but have opinions on both sides..
Yes!
It will make much more adventures and things to do, perhaps more interesting.
Nuu!
It might turn out too complicated..
So in overall I guess I am more to the 'no' side.
And I am so sorry for not turning up on that day. I have mistaken the date..T^T
I'll try to be on time.
Friday 9pm/Saturday 8pm
On these times I will be definitively on c:
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 7:04 pm
I have a question.
So My character is like the entertainer of the ship.
Her job is to be The Seer, Musician, and Entertainer.
And tell hilarious future.
She's a bit hyper,friendly,gullible and is naturally warm to others.
Anything more to tell me to change or add before the meeting?
So I can finish revising my character before the next meeting c:
Thank you!
P.S.I am done with the tektek.
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Princess Angelishia Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 7:45 pm
Rose Kittens I have a question. So My character is like the entertainer of the ship. Her job is to be The Seer, Musician, and Entertainer. And tell hilarious future. She's a bit hyper,friendly,gullible and is naturally warm to others. Anything more to tell me to change or add before the meeting? So I can finish revising my character before the next meeting c: Thank you! P.S.I am done with the tektek. It's alright. I'll just give you what I need revised here instead.
1. Could she not have almost the same name as my character please? I have a feeling that's going to get confusing... and you were using a different name before.
2. Just to keep it clean and consistent, please change Position to "Fortune Teller" instead of "The Fortune Teller," and Favorite Color to "Black" instead of "black."
3. Your tektek needs to be added to the top still.
4. Please just give everything another check for grammar. There are a few parts where sentence structure gets a little awkward.
5. In your backstory you say between age 0 and 0. I'm guessing it's just a typo. c:
6. I would take out the "Do not enter zone" part. You can say she's sensitive, but that wording doesn't fit with the rest of your tone.
7. I'd love to see something in the other, since everyone else is going to have one. Just something quirky to make her stand out.
Overall I think she's going to be a great character. c:
Let me know when you've revised and I'll give her another check!
Thanks for editing! ♥
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 8:02 pm
Princess Angelishia Rose Kittens I have a question. So My character is like the entertainer of the ship. Her job is to be The Seer, Musician, and Entertainer. And tell hilarious future. She's a bit hyper,friendly,gullible and is naturally warm to others. Anything more to tell me to change or add before the meeting? So I can finish revising my character before the next meeting c: Thank you! P.S.I am done with the tektek. It's alright. I'll just give you what I need revised here instead.
1. Could she not have almost the same name as my character please? I have a feeling that's going to get confusing... and you were using a different name before.
2. Just to keep it clean and consistent, please change Position to "Fortune Teller" instead of "The Fortune Teller," and Favorite Color to "Black" instead of "black."
3. Your tektek needs to be added to the top still.
4. Please just give everything another check for grammar. There are a few parts where sentence structure gets a little awkward.
5. In your backstory you say between age 0 and 0. I'm guessing it's just a typo. c:
6. I would take out the "Do not enter zone" part. You can say she's sensitive, but that wording doesn't fit with the rest of your tone.
7. I'd love to see something in the other, since everyone else is going to have one. Just something quirky to make her stand out.
Overall I think she's going to be a great character. c:
Let me know when you've revised and I'll give her another check!
Thanks for editing! ♥ I was going to name her Vangie which means the bringer of good news.. but I guess I made a typo. T^T I have edited.
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Princess Angelishia Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 8:10 pm
Rose Kittens Princess Angelishia Rose Kittens I have a question. So My character is like the entertainer of the ship. Her job is to be The Seer, Musician, and Entertainer. And tell hilarious future. She's a bit hyper,friendly,gullible and is naturally warm to others. Anything more to tell me to change or add before the meeting? So I can finish revising my character before the next meeting c: Thank you! P.S.I am done with the tektek. It's alright. I'll just give you what I need revised here instead.
1. Could she not have almost the same name as my character please? I have a feeling that's going to get confusing... and you were using a different name before.
2. Just to keep it clean and consistent, please change Position to "Fortune Teller" instead of "The Fortune Teller," and Favorite Color to "Black" instead of "black."
3. Your tektek needs to be added to the top still.
4. Please just give everything another check for grammar. There are a few parts where sentence structure gets a little awkward.
5. In your backstory you say between age 0 and 0. I'm guessing it's just a typo. c:
6. I would take out the "Do not enter zone" part. You can say she's sensitive, but that wording doesn't fit with the rest of your tone.
7. I'd love to see something in the other, since everyone else is going to have one. Just something quirky to make her stand out.
Overall I think she's going to be a great character. c:
Let me know when you've revised and I'll give her another check!
Thanks for editing! ♥ I was going to name her Vangie which means the bringer of good news.. but I guess I made a typo. T^T I have edited. Much better. c:
However, a few things:
1. You need to add a space after a lot of periods.
2. Why was she on the ship at age 1? D: ♥
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2012 7:42 am
When's our meeting time this week? c: Today night?
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Princess Angelishia Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:04 am
I'd like to apologize for being inactive this week.
I've been dealing with an infestation of clover mites that has made my room uninhabitable.
And then tonight a home invasion.
No one was hurt, and what they stole is replaceable.
But everyone is a little shaken.
Let's schedule another meeting.
Shall we say this coming Friday at 11pm EST? ♥
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:16 am
Princess Angelishia I'd like to apologize for being inactive this week.
I've been dealing with an infestation of clover mites that has made my room uninhabitable.
And then tonight a home invasion.
No one was hurt, and what they stole is replaceable.
But everyone is a little shaken.
Let's schedule another meeting.
Shall we say this coming Friday at 11pm EST? ♥ I can't do that, I have a half yearly test during that time what about Thursday same time?
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Princess Angelishia Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:17 am
Would Thursday at 11pm EST work for everyone instead? c: ♥
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:34 am
Princess Angelishia Would Thursday at 11pm EST work for everyone instead? c: ♥ yessss XD yes it would razz <3
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:04 am
Princess Angelishia Would Thursday at 11pm EST work for everyone instead? c: ♥ not for me T^T I have to go to school at that time..
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